四六级满分作文

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（一）Fire Prevention on Campus
1.前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失
2.分析火灾发生的原因
3.作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生
●审题概述● < br>这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章，撰写时重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火
灾频发 情形及造成的生命和财产损失，然后说明火灾原因，最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。
第一段，主要概述； 第二段，说明原因；第三段，详细论述措施。
【范文】
Fire Prevention on Campus
People are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents,
heavy casualties were reported – houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and
properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking, “What on earth
results in these repeated tragedies?”
A brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading causes. For
example, three of these fires were caused by the students’ use of electric water-heaters. As
students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle
boil dry while no one is around to turn off the power. In other cases, fires were also caused by
stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc.
Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken,

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students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire control. The following
three reminders are of particular importance for us students: First, learn how to use a fire
extinguisher. Second, double-check candles, heaters, stoves and other electric appliances, and
make sure there are no open flames before leaving rooms. Lastly, do not smoke in the dorm.
◇第一段思路点评：概述并引入下文
◇语言点提示：
（1）此句What on earth results in these repeated tragedies? 常可作为过渡句，引
出下文
（2）注意描述有关火灾客观事实，多使用被动语态，如are alarmed by，were reported，
were burned down，were damaged，Faced with。
◇第二段思路点评：论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器，还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用
电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂◇语言点提示：electric water-heaters电热水器
◇第三段思路点评：详述预防火灾的三点措施，注意使用连接词语first, second, lastly。
◇语言点提示：
take precautions采取预防措施
fire extinguisher灭火器
（二）Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生
2. 物品被盗的原因
3. 学生如何加强防盗意识

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●审题概述●
这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段，主要陈述校园盗 窃案件发生的
情况。第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。
【范文】
Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
“If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d
better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus
thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before.
And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging
widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and
even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.
What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But
I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important.
For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open
during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave
their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal
stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly
have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.
In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the
first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be

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more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm.
Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended.
Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood
watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.
◇第一段思路点评：陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况
◇语言点提示：it seems that此句型表示一种可能性
◇第二段思路点评：说明被盗原因
◇语言点提示：
（1）What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文
（2）anti-theft alertness防盗意识
（3）lack of alertness缺乏警惕
（4）light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的
◇第三段思路点评：阐述如何加强防盗意识
◇语言点提示：注意关联词语in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行
文更富逻辑性。
（三）How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活
2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行
3. 你对网络依赖症的看法
● 审题概述●

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本文是 一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。第一段，侧重简述网络给人们生活的多彩、
便利。第二段，详 述网络与人们生活的紧密度。第三段，论述对网络依赖的观点。
【范文一】
How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century,
my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized
countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many
conveniences and a brilliant life.
Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet.
Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide
recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support.
Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities
and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the
Internet if they’d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like
us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment,
banking and shopping.
True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects
are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own
fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to
online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view

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of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe
distance and never lose yourself.
◇第一段思路点评 ：综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个长句足矣。第一句用if
引导的条件句引出“网络”话题 ，第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。
◇语言点提示：
has drawn…, realized, and provided此为谓语连动式的运用。
◇第二段思路点评：详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系，先总述，后分述。
◇语言点提示：
resort to借助、诉诸、求助于
◇第三段思路点评：先陈述人们对网络的依赖，再谈对此的看法。
◇语言点提示：
（1）negative effects副作用、反面作用
（2）addicts成瘾者、依恋者
（3）fantasy world虚拟世界、虚幻世界
（4）pornography色情表演、色情作品
（5）fraud欺骗、诈骗
【范文二】
As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of
communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by
clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved

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ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs,
downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our
opinions.
For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and
some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without
it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are
obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters.
As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although
the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this
information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely
doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative
effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: “Self- control can make or break
your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”
（四）Craze for Civil Service Examinations
1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员
2. 引起此现象的原因
3. 你的看法
● 审题概述●
本文是一篇主要论述大学生报 考公务员增多的原因和对此看法的文章。第一段，主要综述大
学生报考公务员增多的现象。第二段，侧重 分析引起此现象的原因。第三段，重点谈你对此
的观点。

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【范文】
Craze for Civil Service Examinations
Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service
exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among
them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze
for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining
popularity among science and engineering students.
In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly
attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts. On the one hand, many
ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social
status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On
the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable
healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other comforts of life, it’s quite
an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world
economy.
Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach,
as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service
sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision,
and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.
◇第一段思路点评：第一句总述人们蜂拥参加公务员招考，第二 句点明大学生是其中的主力
军，第三句再述热衷于公务员报考的大学生不仅有文科的，还有理工科的。

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◇语言点提示：
liberal arts majors文科专业学生
◇第二段思路点评：先总述引起大学生热衷报考公务员的两点因素，再详细分述。
◇语言点提示：
（1）On the one hand…On the other起到衔接上文作用
（2）is attributable to归因于
（3）sluggish world economy衰退的世界经济
◇第三段思路点评：重点谈对大学生热衷报考公务员的观点。
◇语言点提示：beyond reproach无可厚非
（五）Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?
1. 现在社会上有各种各样的培训班
2. 有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班，有些人则认为没有必要
3. 你的观点
● 审题概述●
这是一篇主要论述人们和你对社会上各类培训班看法的文章。第一段，概述各种各样培训班
的状 况。第二段，论述人们对参加课外培训班的不同看法。第三段，重点阐述你对此的看法。
【范文】
Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?

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All across the country a great diversity of custom-made classes are
mushrooming, in which special training is provided concerning computer skills, arts,
sports, and other extracurricular specialties like maths and writing. Among them
language crash courses for various tests, such as CET, BEC, TOFEL, IELTS, GRE and
so forth, are especially noticeable for its wide range and high attendance rate.
Some consider it advisable to attend such classes while others believe it
unnecessary. The former argues that it’s far more effective to command these special
skills with the help of an experienced trainer than to work at them on their own.
They are convinced that these training classes can make up for what is not taught
in school, hence, more competitive edge over their peers. The latter group of people,
nonetheless, criticize it as a sheer waste of resources. They warn that the quality
of most training courses is questionable, as they are marketed to get money out of
our pocket rather than get knowledge into our head.
As far as I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does us no
harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-productive. Anyhow, the deprived
free time can be better invested in recreation at weekends, talking to an old friend,
or simply enjoying a long-overdue vacation.
◇第一段思路点评：第一句综述社会上提供知识、技能服务的各类培训班雨后春笋 般兴起，
第二句例举语言速成课程特别火爆。
◇语言点提示：
（1）a great diversity of各种各样的

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（2）mushrooming迅速扩散、增加
（3）language crash courses语言速成课程
◇第二段思路点评：先用一句对比式地摆出两种不同的观点，再分别详述他们的看法。
◇语言点提示：注意连接词语while，The former，They，The latter group of people
等的使用，强化了上下文之间的连贯性。
◇第三段思路点评：辩证地论述你对参加各类培训班的看法。
◇语言点提示：
（1）as far as I am concerned我认为，就我而言
（2）counter-productive适得其反的、事与愿违的
（六）University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands
1. 现在很多大学生都追求穿名牌，用名牌
2. 你对这种现象的看法
● 审题概述●
这是一篇论述对大学生追求和使用名牌看法的文章。第一段，详述大学生热衷 追求、使用名
牌的情形以及人们的看法。第二段，重点谈你对此的看法。
【范文】
University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands
“What perfumes are you wearing?” “Aren’t your shoes Nike’s latest
release?” “I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday.” “I hear the Jack & Jones

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store is on sale this week. Do you wanna come along?” Don’t feel surprised if you
hear them coming out of the mouth of college students. It’s quite common to hear
and see college students swapping information about the brands they like and the
products they use. In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the
college students’ favourite pastimes. They learn about the latest fashion from each
other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest
convenience. “Keeping up with the Joneses” is their conviction – “If the Joneses
have it, how could I have not?”
About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten
to show their disapproval. They’ll probably take it to be a reflection of the
students’ vanity and superficiality. And they may lecture them on the virtue of
being thrifty.
However, I beg to differ. For one thing, name-brand products are usually
quality products. As such, they are something beautiful, endurable, and reliable.
“The love of beauty is common to all,” goes the proverb; therefore, there’s
nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands. For the other, college students
are old enough to make their own decisions. Likewise, they must abide by the
consequences if they make an ill-advised one. If they let their pursuit of brands
eat into their budget for other more important issues, they should be able to correct
their mistakes and keep everything in moderation. So this becomes no other than a
good chance to learn management, isn’t it?

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◇第一 段思路点评：本段分为两个部分，即详细陈述大学生追求和使用名牌的情况，以及人
们对此的看法。
◇语言点提示：
（1）keeping up with the Joneses要在地位和物质上比得上周围的人
（2）conviction坚定的信仰、看法
（3）vanity and superficiality虚荣心和面子观（肤浅、表面、浅薄）
◇第二段思路点评：本段应辩证地分析大学生追求、使用名牌的现象，既有对此肯定的看法，
也 有否定的看法，即大学生在追求和使用名牌中汲取经验教训并学会管理。
◇语言点提示：
（1）abide by the consequences自食其果
（2）ill- advised考虑不周的、不明智的
（3）in moderation适度、不过分
（七）Knowledge and Diploma
1. 目前社会上存在这样一种说法：文凭越高越吃香
2. 而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识
3. 你的观点
● 审题概述●
这是一篇论述高文凭与知识关系的文章。第一段，概述社会上文凭 越高越吃香的看法。第二
段，主要论述有些人文凭不等于知识的观点。第三段，重点阐述你对此的看法。
【范文】

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Knowledge and Diploma
It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future.
Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional
competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job
candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality – the higher diplomas
one gets, the more popular he becomes.
On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t
automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the
acknowledgment of one’s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s
ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade
of one’s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t have a high diploma.
Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that
he is one of the world’s most learned men.
So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because
a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs
one’s lifelong devotion.
◇第一段思路点评：先陈述人们对高文凭高能力的看法，再点出这是一种社会现实。
◇语言点提示：
job candidate求职者、应聘者

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◇第二段思路点评：详细论述文凭并不等于能力。
◇语言点提示：
Acknowledgment承认、致谢、感谢、答谢
◇第三段思路点评：使用一个长句阐述了你对文凭与知识辩证关系的认识。
◇语言点提示：
（1）equate a diploma with knowledge 把文凭与知识划等号
（2）nothing but a proof of a short-term study只是短期学习的证明
（八）The Rise of Shanzhai Culture
1. 最近兴起了一股“山寨热”
2. 你如何看待山寨现象
● 审题概述● < br>本文是一篇论述山寨现象以及人们和你对此看法的文章。第一段，概述方兴未艾的山寨热。
第二段 ，阐述山寨产品的优势以及给人们带来的好处。第三段，论述人们和你对山寨现象的
反对立场和观点，即 山寨产品的非法性。
【范文】
The Rise of Shanzhai Culture
The vast array of knockoff name- brand products, such as cell phones, DVDs,
MP3 players, have made “shanzhai” the hottest word of the year. Now we wear shanzhai
watches, talk through shanzhai cell phones, play shanzhai video games, use shanzhai

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computers, even watch shanzhai TV shows. Once a term used before some electronic
products to suggest a copycat version of inferior quality, shanzhai now suggests
to many Chinese creativity and trendiness. With the media all over the rise of
shanzhai culture, public opinions are clearly divided.
Advocates invariably associate it with innovation, stylishness, the DIY
spirit, open-mindedness and practicality, as shanzhai products often mix imitation
with innovation – a similar skin but a different heart. The end products are usually
more functional and much cheaper than the original. Besides, they respond to the
market more swiftly and they are more considerate in design. Thanks to them, more
people at the grassroots level can enjoy the benefit of modern technology.
However, other people, including myself, hold more reserved attitudes
towards the shanzhai fever. For all the popularity it has won, a copycat is a copycat.
The mockery of the prestige products not only steals their profits but also upsets
market competition. Moreover, shanzhai products thrive on the current legal
loopholes. Under the disguise of anti- dominance slogans, they make illegal profits
by violating intellectual property rights and evading taxes. And to top it off, the
so- called innovation is only senseless talk as true innovation always faces huge
costs and potential failures, while plagiarism simply builds success on other
people’s risks.
◇第一段思路点评：综述山寨热现象。
◇语言点提示：
…public opinions are clearly divided此句起承上启下的作用

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◇第二段思路点评：主要阐述山寨产品的优势。
◇语言点提示：
（1）mix imitation with innovation混淆模仿与创新
（2）respond to the market对市场做出反应
◇第三段思路点评：主要阐述对山寨产品侵权、扰乱市场等方面的看法。
◇语言点提示：
（1）The mockery of the prestige products拙劣地模仿名牌
（2）thrive on茁壮成长、蓬勃发展、繁荣
（3）legal loopholes法律漏洞（空子）
（4）Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans在反垄断口号的伪装下
（5）violating intellectual property rights违反知识产权
（6）evading taxes逃税
（7）plagiarism剽窃、抄袭
（九）It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy
1. 盗版软件比比皆是
2. 盗版软件猖獗的原因
3. 如何打击盗版软件
● 审题概述●

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这是一 篇主要论述盗版软件猖獗原因和打击盗版软件的措施的文章。第一段，概述中国盗版
软件泛滥的情况。第 二段，重点分析盗版软件猖獗的主要原因。第三段，侧重阐述打击盗版
软件的措施。
【范文】
It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy
China has often been criticized for the rampant practice of software piracy.
Take a look around. We operate on pirated Windows systems, defend PC security with
pirated Kaspersky anti-virus programmes, process files with pirated Microsoft
Office, draft 3D designs with pirated AutoCAD, refine pictures with pirated Adobe
Photoshop, and study English with pirated Kingsoft’s electronic dictionaries and
translators. It’s no exaggeration that pirated software is everywhere.
The logic behind the phenomenon is simple and clear: if a pirated copy is
available for just a tiny fraction of the normal price, not to speak of many of the
free downloads online, who would pay for an authentic copy? Cheaper prices aside,
easy access is another important factor. With such a large gathering of pirated
upgrades around, who would bother to spend time and money searching the stores for
an authorized yet outdated version?
Despite these apparent benefits, the practice of software piracy should
be banned, because it represents unfair competition and by nature it’s a no-win
situation. But how? Two approaches are to be taken at the same time: Technically,
software developers should enhance their antipiracy engineering, so that cracking

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the software should be virtually impossible. ?害?綿驶鈔???版权所有沪江网??
鈔驶綿?害?And legally, the government should also tighten its antipiracy laws and
toughen up the penalties, so that violations should be costly.
◇第一段思路点评：概述中国盗版软件泛滥的现状。
◇语言点提示：
the rampant practice of software piracy猖獗的盗版软件
◇第二段思路点评：论述盗版软件猖獗的原因。
◇语言点提示：
（1）downloads online 在线下载
（2）authentic copy正版
◇第三段思路点评：阐述打击盗版软件的具体做法，包括软件商和政府采取的应对措施。
◇语言点提示：
tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties加强反盗版立法和盗版惩
罚
（十）Effects of Financial Crisis on College Students
1. 金融危机给各行各业都造成了一定影响
2. 金融危机对大学生造成何种影响
3. 作为大学生，应怎样应对这种影响
● 审题概述●

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这是一 篇主要论述金融危机与大学生关系的文章。第一段，概述金融危机给世界造成的影响。
第二段，论述金融 危机给大学生带来的就业、经济等影响。第三段，阐述大学生面对金融危
机带来的影响应提高专业技能等 。
【范文】
Effects of Financial Crisis on College Students
Since the financial crisis swept the world, the global economy has sunk into
a severe recession. It’s hard to get through a day without hearing or reading news
about the devastating effects of the crisis: A world of companies go bankrupt,
millions of employees are laid off, high-return investment bubbles burst, and huge
sums of loans can never be retrieved. Its impact on our daily life can be felt in
all walks of life.
College students inevitably fall victim to this pervasive slump as well. On
top of that, internships and job vacancies are reduced to the minimum as companies
keep shrinking. New graduates find themselves hard to get a job, not to speak of
a satisfactory one. What comes next? Poor students will be hard-pressed if they find
student loans unavailable any more. As a result, some even cannot afford to continue
their studies. Lastly, more students are probably out there anxiously looking for
part- time jobs now that they have to help cover their expenses in this gloomy economy.
Their innocence and eagerness might be taken advantage of by some malicious
businesspeople, or even criminal gang.
In response to these threats, we students must act promptly and wisely. Since

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we definitely will be facing a competitive job market, it’s crucial that we submit
high quality resumes. Therefore, we must commit more to our professional studies.
Even do better, master more relevant job skills as a double security. Furthermore,
apply for scholarships and grants, as these are still available and we don’t have
to pay them back. As for the safety issues, trust our instinct – there’s no free
lunch in this world. Anything that promises quick returns without much work is a
sure trap. Stay alert and protect ourselves.
◇第一段思路点评：概述金融危机给各行各业造成的影响。
◇语言点提示：
（1）severe recession严重衰退
（2）devastating effects毁灭性的后果
（3）go bankrupt破产
（4）high- return investment bubbles高回报投资泡沫
（5）retrieved追回、挽回
◇第二段思路点评：主要论述金融危机给大学生带来影响。
◇语言点提示：
（1）slump 经济萧条、不景气、经济衰退
（2）internships 实习
（3）fall victim to 被降服、屈服于
（4）malicious恶毒的、恶意的

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◇第三段思路点评：
阐述大学生如何应对金融危机的影响。
◇语言点提示：
注意since, therefore, furthermore等关联词的使用，使句间关系更加紧密。
议论型作文
1. Should College Students Live on Campus
a. 有些人喜欢住在学校的宿舍，因为……
b. 有些人喜欢住在校外，因为……
c. 我的看法
There are an increasing number of students who choose to live off campus.
Parents and university administrations understandably reacted differently. They
voiced concerns about security and the threat of off-campus lifestyles getting out
of control. However, college students have their own reasons for their choices.
Some students prefer to live on campus for the following reasons. First,
campus residents are closer to classes, the library, and other resources, so they
are more likely to succeed in college and complete their bachelor’s degree in four
years. Furthermore, Living in a dorm is a great opportunity to meet all kinds of
new people and develop relationships with them, so students living on campus are
more sociable. Last but not the least, living on campus is cheaper and more convenient.
Often times, off- campus housing is more expensive than on-campus housing and while
living on campus, you don’t have to worry about monthly rent payments and utility

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bills.
Some others choose to live off campus because they believe living off campus
they are more independent, with more privacy and a lot more quiet time. Living off
campus gives them freedom from those dorm rules and allow them to set their own.
The extra space also means that one can probably find a quiet place to study in the
convenience of his own home.
As for me, I’m a faithful supporter of the former group because I, living
on campus myself, have witnessed and enjoyed all the convenience and happiness of
doing so. To me, living on campus undoubtedly adds an important element to the
complete college experience.
Directions: Suppose you are Wei Qiang and you will graduate from university. Write
a letter of inquiry to the Department of Physics, University of Wisconsin, asking
for admission as a graduate student.
July, 2007
Dear Sirs,
I am very interested in undertaking graduate work in your university. I
have read research papers by two of your professors Dr. Thomas Bay and Mr. Sherry
Haily. I’d like to study under their guidance.
In September of 2003 I was enrolled in the Computer School of the XYZ
University as a computer major. Throughout the four years of study, I take this field
as one of great potentials for my country. I feel the need to study further in order

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to develop well in this area.
I would appreciate receiving your materials such as departmental brochure
or pamphlet, and a university catalog or bulletin.
Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.
Respectfully yours,
Wei Qiang
3. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled
Selfishness in Dormitory Life. You should write at least 120 words following the
outline given below in Chinese:
1. 大学寝室里自私自利的现象比较普遍
2. 分析出现这种现象的原因
3. 呼吁大学生改变这种不智之举
Selfishness is a bit prevailing in university dormitories. Some never care
about others’ needs or offer help to their roommates. Some even interrupt others’
normal daily life by speaking loudly, turning on the loudspeakers and telephoning
at midnight.
As the only children in their families, most of them are the apples of their
parents’ eye. They have been spoiled and are used to being satisfied. Therefore,
they hardly pay any attention to others’ feelings initiatively. What they care about
is how to meet their own demands and how to get what they need from others. Moreover,

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selfish people do not know mutual respect and mutual help are keys to harmonious
dormitory life.
Selfishness erodes youngsters’ mind and may well undermine their
all-round development. Only when we become respectful and helpful to each other,
can we create a healthy atmosphere for dormitory life.
4. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled
Say “Thank You” to Parents. You should write at least 150 words following the
outline given below in Chinese:
1. 很多的大学生从未跟父母道过谢
2. 请说明原因
3. 你的建议
According to a recent survey involving over 3000 undergraduates, 35% of
university students have never said “Thank you” to their parents. Their parents
have done all they could to bring them up in the past score of years, but have never
been rewarded with gratitude.
The subjects claim such reasons as follows. First and foremost, a quarter
of the interviewed students regard it as parents’ duty to support them spiritually
and financially. And it is not necessary to express appreciation to their parents.
However, the majority of youngsters are aware of their parents’ tender love but
are not accustomed to saying “Thank you”. Some even find a generation gap between
themselves and their parents, thus feeling reluctant to express their affection for

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their parents.
In my opinion, extending thankfulness to our parents is a way of respecting
them and their love. We should express our feelings directly and bravely, but what’s
more important is, we should do all that we can to reward them.
My First Day on the Campus
I still remember the day when I first came to the college. Being a boy of
17, I was longing for a new life as a college student; but, at the same time, I had
no idea what college life would be like.
That morning when the bus carried me to the gate of the college. I was so
excited that my heart was beating very fast as if it would leap out of my mouth.
From now on, I would be a student of this college. After registration, we were led
by an instructor to the dormitory, where, for the first time, we were going to live
without parents but roommates. I was so clumsy that I did not know how to make the
bed and fix the mosquito net.
In the afternoon, I took a walk around the campus together with my roommates.
To think of studying in such a beautiful place made me feel quite proud of myself.
As we were walking along, talking and laughing, a voice came into our ears, “Oh,
look at these freshmen!” It was our middle-school-students’ looking that gave us
away. We continued our tour of the college, inspecting every building and every
garden until the sun began to set.

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In the evening, we sat together, talking about the past and the future. We
were so excited that no one wanted to go to bed.
Studying Abroad
Attending schools abroad has many advantages. In the first place, by
looking at our own country from outside, we can best see the strong points and weak
points of our nation and therefore widen our vision and broaden our minds. Second,
while studying in a foreign country, we can travel widely, visiting famous scenic
spots and making friends with the local people. Thirdly we can use the foreign
language in our daily life so that our ability in the second language may be improved
quickly. But the most important thing in attending a foreign university is to get
acquainted with the latest knowledge in science and technology and make use of the
first-rate facilities available. For all these advantages, it is really worthwhile
to go abroad for education.
However, as everything has two sides, there are also some disadvantages
in attending a foreign university. The most serious problem is the language barrier.
Most of the students who are ready to go abroad do not adequate knowledge of the
language spoken there. As a result, on arriving there, they will find it difficult
to understand what the instructors are saying. Besides, for lack of knowledge of
the customs and way of life of the local people, they may run into trouble in dealing
with various situations. Therefore, misunderstandings often arise. Furthermore, the
cost of living is much higher than that in our country, so most students have to

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find part-tine jobs in order to help support themselves. Faced with these
difficulties, many students find themselves unable to pay full attention to their
studies and some students may even fail in their courses and learn little.
Therefore, given an opportunity to attend a school abroad, one must
consider both sides of the factors carefully before making up his mind. On the whole,
it is a good thing to go and study abroad particularly when the subject is very weak
or not available in our country. But on the other hand, one must not lose sight of
the disadvantages.
Is the Expansion of Enrollment a Good Thing?
Many colleges and universities have expanded their enrollment since 1998.
The reasons for the expansion are as follows. Firstly, they want to keep up with
the need of the job market to produce more qualified people to take up the jobs.
Secondly, the expansion has entitled many high school graduates to the right of
receiving higher education. Last but not least, it can raise the intellectual
standards of our nation.
However, studies show that the trend to expand has brought about many
problems. For instance, the teaching facilities and accommodation capacities of many
colleges and universities are limited and are unable to meet the demand of an
ever- increasing number of the newly enrolled students. On the other hand, the average
quality of the freshmen is declining. In the long run, hunting for a job will be
a tough thing for the graduates and that will inevitably exert much pressure on the

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prospects of employment.
In spite of all this, I am still confident that the expansion of enrollment
is of great benefit to our society and is a good thing. With the development of our
national economy, the problem as mentioned above will be solved if proper measures
are taken.
假冒伪劣产品
1．目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品（fake commodities）。为什么会有这种现象？
2．举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费个人、社会等的危害。
Harmfulness of Fake Commodities
Nowadays in the society, there are enormous fake commodities. When you go
to the supermarket, you may buy some fake food commodities. When you go to the
pharmacist’s, you may buy some fake medicine.
The deep root of this phenomenon lies in someone’s greed for money. In
order to get a large amount of money in a short time, they try every means to produce
fake commodities, without any regard for other people’s benefit and health.
Fake commodities can do great harm to both consumers and society. For
example, when a person bought fake medicine, it was useless in curing his disease
and really a waste of money. Sometimes fake medicine can even cause death. Fake
commodities are usually sold in a lower price. It causes unfair competition in the
market economy and puts the whole society in disorder.

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Don’t Hesitate to Say “No”
1．别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说“不”
2．为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
3．该说“不”时不说“不”的坏处
To help those who are in need is always regarded as a traditional Chinese
moral. However people have to know well what the need is before the help is offered.
When the need is just for some minority’s benefit and against most people’s
interests, or when it is immoral or unlawful, people should not hesitate to say No.
Otherwise they will put themselves into trouble.
Unfortunately, there are so many such examples around us that people end
up their leadership in jail or bury their glory in shame simply because they don’t’
say “No” while they should. Some people are reluctant to say “No” in front of
all kinds of briberies as they want to swamp their power for money. They can’t resist
the temptations of accumulating wealth in a fast but illegal way. For their own good
and their friend’s favor, these people would sacrifice millions of RMB Yuan for
an unproportional commission and therefore stake there future on scales of law. Other
people don’t say No because of misinterpreted friendship and lack of sense of law.
They never hesitate to do whatever their friends ask them to do. They believe they
are helping their friends even when they are actually violating the law or local
regulations. Such people will also be punished according to the degree of their
misbehavior.

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Therefore, to help is not always doing good. People should learn to say
a No when the help might hurt other people’s interests.
A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus
假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应 设计食堂的饭菜质量、价格、
环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。
January 12. 2002
Dear Mr. President,
My name is Li Ming. I am a sophomore of the law school. As the school year
is drawing to a close, I venture to write a letter to you about the canteen service
on campus which has given rise to much complaint among students.
The focus of the complaint is the poor quality of the food. The rice is
just like bullets and the buns are like hand grenades. They are too hard for us to
chew. And the vegetables are so overcooked as to lose their nutrients. The fish and
meat are not given full measure. The only thing we are satisfied with is the free
soup. However, the price of the food is surprisingly high. If we have 3 meals all
in the canteen, at least twelve yuan is gone to keep our body and soul together.
As a result, many of us go out to have meals.
Honestly speaking, the dining environment has been improved, with the wall
painted and some Chinese calligraphy works posted up. But there are only two canteens
on the campus. As the number of students is ever increasing, there is not enough
space and seats to allow us to have our meals there. The attitude of the service

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staff to the students is not hospitable at all.
All in all, there is still much room for improvement as far as the canteen service
is concerned. I hope we will not suffer for another two years.
Best regards.
Sincerely Yours
Li Ming
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic:
Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words, and base your
composition on the chart and the outline given below:
1．上图所示为1990年、1995年、2000年某大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化；
2．请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）；
3．你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。

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Student Use of Computer
Since 1990, there has been tremendous growth in the use of computers by
students. While in 1990, the average number of hours a student spent on the computer
was about one hour per week, this number grew to nearly four hours per week by 1995,
and to approximately 20 hours per week by the year 2000.
This significant growth in the use of computers by students in the 1990’s
can be attributed to several factors, including widespread usage, lower prices, and
technological and social developments. Nowadays, computers are widely used by
students for word processing, book keeping, multimedia presentations, and access
to the Internet for both research and communications. Additionally, since 1990, due
to competition and technological advances, computer hardware and software prices,
as well as Internet usage charges have dropped significantly. Finally, technological
developments and changes in social habits in the 1990’s have played a major role
in this tremendous growth in the use of computers. Today’s society relies heavily
on computers for immediate access to the news and for entertainment, including,
listening to music, watching movies and sport events, and playing computer games.
While computers are of great assistance to the students, and therefore,
are indispensable tools, they also pose some challenges. The biggest challenge that
many students face is discipline in the use of this powerful device. That is, students
need to have the discipline of not allowing themselves to be lured by the entertaining
aspects of this wonderful tool—aspects that can result in addiction to computer

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games or viewing of undesirable material on the Internet. That is to say, students
need to use this powerful tool with great wisdom!