四级作文评分标准

评分标准
2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支
离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严
重错误。
5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，
连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
8 分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想
不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，
其中有一些是 严重错误。
11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字
连贯，但有少量语言错误。?
14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字
通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有
个别小错。(注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关,
或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给

0分。)
2011年6月英语四级作文万能模板：
提纲式作文
1．对立观点式
A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？
B． 有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什
么？
C．我的看法。

Some people are in favor of the idea of doing
X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第
一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的
另一个原因。

However, other people stand on a different
ground. They consider it harmful to do X.

They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个
理由。 An example can give the details of
this argument: 一个例子。

There is some truth in both arguments. But I
think the advantages of X overweigh the
disadvantages. In addition to the
above- mentioned negative effects it might
bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。

2．批驳观点式
A．一个错误观点。
B． 我不同意。

Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying
that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。
An example they have presented is that 一个

例子。（According to a survey performed by X
on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这
个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影
响）。

There might be some element of truth in these
people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth,
we will feel no reservation to conclude that
与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number
of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论
文的议论文写法)。

3．社会问题（现象）式
A．一个社会问题或者现象。
B． 产生的原因
C．对社会和我们生活的影响

D． 如何杜绝。（如果是问题的话）
E． 前景的预测。

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly
serious socialeconomicenvironmental
problem. (X has increasingly become a
common concern of the public). According to
a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。
（或者是一个例子）。

There are a couple of reasons booming this
problemphenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论
文的写法。

X has caused substantial impact on the
society and our daily life, which has been
articulated（表达） in the following aspects.
参照辩论式议论文的写法。

A dozen of measures are supposed to take to
prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照
辩论式议论文的写法。

Based on the above discussions, I can easily
forecast that more and more people
will ……..

2011年6月新东方英语四级作文万能模板：
图表式作文
It is obvious in the graphtable that the
ratenumberamount of Y has undergone
dramatic changes. It has gone
upgrownfallendropped considerably in
recent years (as X varies). At the point of （接
近）X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).

What is the reason for this change? Mainly

there are … (多少) reasons behind the
situation reflected in the graphictable. First
of all, …(第一个原因). More
importantly, …(第二个原因). Most
important of all, …(第三个原因).

From the above discussions, we have enough
reason to predict what will happen in the near
future. The trend described in the graphtable
will continue for quite a long time (if
necessary measures are not taken括号里的使
用于那些不太好的变化趋势).

辩论式议论文
模版1

Some people believe (argue, recognize, think)
that 观点1. But other people take an

opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点
2. As for me, I agree to the formerlatter idea.

There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.
First of all, 论据1.

More importantly, 论据2.
R>Most important of all, 论据3.

In summary, 总结观点. As a college student,
I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.



模版2

People hold different views about X. Some
people are of the opinion that 观点1, while
others point out that 观点2. As far as I am
concerned, the formerlatter opinion holds
more weight.

For one thing, 论据1.

For another, 论据2.

Last but not the least, 论据3.

To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student,
I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

模版3

There is no consensus [k?n'sens?s] 一致of
opinions among people about X（争论的焦
点）。Some people are of the view that 观点
1，while others take an opposite side, firmly
believing that 观点2。As far as I am
concerned, the formerlatter notion（观念） is
preferable in many senses. The reasons are
obvious.

First of all, 论据1。

Furthermore, 论据2。

Among all of the supporting evidences, one is

the strongest. That is, 论据3。

A natural conclusion from the above
discussion is that总结观点。

As a college student, I am supposed to 表决
心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测
2010作文分析
第一段：背景和危害
第二段：解决
第三段：展望
这样第二段就是重点
还可以：
第一段：背景

第二段：危害
第三段：解决和展望
这样第三段就是重点了。
这样的写法都可以。以前我们习惯了第一种
写法，我给同学们写一个第二种写法。

第一句引入论题：
Recently the issue of how should
parents help children to be
independent has been in the limelight
and has aroused wide concern in the
public.
第二第三句背景介绍。
The only child policy has brought a lot

of pressure for both parents and
children during the past decades.
Quite a lot of parents have done
almost everything for their children
for the sake of love.
第一段结束：
Recently the issue of how should
parents help children to be
independent has been in the limelight
and has aroused wide concern in the
public. The only child policy has
brought a lot of pressure for both
parents and children during the past
decades. Quite a lot of parents have

done almost everything for their
children for the sake of love.
第二段说后果：
It is difficult for these kids to develop
and cultivate their character and to
be independent with their parent’s
so- called love.
再加一句：
They can not survive the future fierce
competition owing to the lack of
independence.
第二段结束：
It is difficult for these kids to develop
and cultivate their character and to

be independent with their parent’s
so-called love. They can not survive
the future fierce competition owing to
the lack of independence.
第三段说如何做：
A number of solutions can be found
for parents to help children to be
independent, with the following ones
being foremost. Firstly , parents
should offer their children more
opportunities to come into frequent
contact with the society and form
their own picture about this world.
Secondly, playing and

communicating with their peers
should be favored by their parents
because these activities can develop
children’s interpersonal skills, which
may put them in a favorable position
in the future job markets. What’s
more, financial burden, psychological
burden and even moderate anxiety
can make children more fortitude and
mature when confronting the
difficulties .
完整的文章可以是这样的：
Recently the issue of how should
parents help children to be

independent has been in the limelight
and has aroused wide concern in the
public. The only child policy has
brought a lot of pressure for both
parents and children during the past
decades. Quite a lot of parents have
done almost everything for their
children for the sake of love.
It is difficult for these kids to develop
and cultivate their character and to
be independent with their parent’s
so-called love. They can not survive
the future fierce competition owing to
the lack of independence.

A number of solutions can be found
for parents to help children to be
independent, with the following ones
being foremost. Firstly , parents
should offer their children more
opportunities to come into frequent
contact with the society and form
their own picture about this world.
Secondly, playing and
communicating with their peers
should be favored by their parents
because these activities can develop
children’s interpersonal skills, which
may put them in a favorable position
in the future job markets. What’s

more, financial burden, psychological
burden and even moderate anxiety
can make children more fortitude and
mature when confronting the
difficulties . Only in this way can our
future generation shoulder their
responsibility.