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大学英语四级写作要求
1. 大纲要求
大学英语四级考试的第五部分是Guided Writing,共一题,考试时间30分钟,要求考生
写出一篇100~120词的短文。试卷上可能给出题目,或规定情景,或给出段首句要求续写,
或要求看图作文,或给出关键词,要求写出短文,或给出题目。要求能够正确表达思想,意
义连贯,无
重大语法错误。写作的内容包括日常生活和一般见识。
2. 评分原则
1) CET-4作
文题采用总体评分的方法,阅卷老师就总的印象给出奖励分,而不是按语
言点的错误数目扣分。
2) 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评估。内容和语言是一个统一体。内容要求
思想表
达正确,主题突出。内容是通过语言来表达,要考虑作文是否切题,是否充
分表达思想,也要考虑是否用
英语清楚而确切地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的
错误是否造成理解上的障碍,用词和造句是否清楚而
确切地表达思想。
3. 评分标准
1) 本题满分为15分。
2)
阅卷标准共分五等:2分,5分,8分,11分,14分。各有标准样卷一份。
3) 阅卷者根据阅卷
标准,对照样卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为
该分(即8分);若认为稍优或稍差于
该分数,则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即
7分)。但不得加或减0.5分。
4)
评分标准:
2分——条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,多数为严重错误。
5分——基本切题。思想表达不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多的严重语法错误。
8分——基本切
题。思想表达比较清楚,文字连贯,但有语言错误较多,其中有少量的
严重错误。
11分——切题。思想表达清楚,文字连贯,但有少量的语言错误。
14分——切题。思想表达清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误
(注)白卷,作
文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而思想无法表达,则给0分。
特别优秀的作文也可评15分。
5) 字数不足者应酌情扣分:
累积字数在81~89之间,扣1分;累积字数在71~79
之间,扣2分;累积字数在
61~69之间,扣3分;累积字数在51~59之间,扣4分;累积字数在
50以下,最
多给5分。
6) 只写一段者:0~4分;只写两段者:0~9分。
4. 评分样卷及说明
[样卷1]
题目:Is Failure a Bad
Thing?
要求:
I. 失败是常有的事。
II.
人们对失败有各种不同的态度。
III. 我对失败的态度。
1) 14分:切题。思想表
达清楚,内容比较充实,文字通顺,句子结构多样,连贯性较好。
基本上无语言错误,但个别地方不够贴
切。
Failure is a common thing in our daily
life. As a student, we sometimes fail to get high
scores in our examinations. When we play games
we can’t avoid being beaten by the others.
2)
3)
4)
5)
And there
are times when we fail o do more satisfactory
work. All these failures happen
naturally and
almost everyone of us has such experience.
However there are different attitudes towards
failure. Some people lose heart in failure,
they think the world is at its end. Some
people don’t take failure seriously, they just let
it be,
while some others learn much from
failure and therefore see the light of hope
through failure.
In my opinion, what really
counts is not failure itself. But what we think of
failure and
do after failure. As long as we
don’t give up and believe in ourselves and in the
meantime
learn something from failure, we’ll
certainly make our marks in the end. So I’m never
afraid
of failure, for I believe that failure
is not a bad thing, “failure is the mother of
success.”
11分:切题。思想表达清楚,文字连贯,但有少量的语言错误和用词不妥之处。
Failure is a thing that often happens. It is
impossible to have no obstacles when people
do
something. Of they don’t prepare well or make some
mistakes, people will fail. So
everyone
involved famous persons have experience of
failure.
However people have some different
kinds of attitudes to failure. Some feel
disappointed and won’t go on. But others
regard failure as a good thing, they find out the
reason why they have failed and do their best
to get over the obstacles. So they success
finally. Many Scientists stories can prove it.
To tell the truth, I don’t like failure. But
when I fail, I will not feel disappointed and stop
working. Because failure isn’t a bad thing. I
will learn something from failure and gain
success.
8分:基本切题。思想表达比较清楚,文字比较连贯,但句子较单调,有一
些语言错误,
其中有几处的严重错误。
Failure is the thing
which is always happen. Not passing an examination
during one’s
study is a failure. Not winning
in a sports-meeting to a sportman is a failure.
Not successing
to finish an science experiment
to a scientist is a failure.
People have
different views of the failure. Some people think
that failure means to a
mew begin. Some people
will give up his plan because of the failure. Some
people will
get something new from the failure
and do it again.
I will regard it as a new
start and do it again. Because failure is the
thing which is
always happen. If I give up
every time I will never do anything. I believe
that failure is
not a bad thing.
5分——基本切题。但连贯性差,语言错误较多,且许多是严重错误,影响思想的表达。
All of us are often failure. When we do
something, we can’t be sure about it. And we
don’t know whether it will be failure or
success.
People have all kinds of thinking of
failure. Somebody is angry, somebody is
disappointed, somebody keeps silence and
others try do it again. And so on, it is
different from everyone.
I’m often failure
else. As soon as I am failure. I think over it in
order to find the
mistakes. “Failure is the
mother of success.” So I do my best to do it
again. “is failure a
bad thing?” “no.” the
answer is.
2分——条理不清,思路紊乱,不知所云。语言支离破碎,基本上找不到一个完
整的句
子,标点符号及拼写错误比比皆是。
Is failure a bad
thing, if we have it, to fact with it, or not? To
us, failure is often thing, let
us surposed,
if someone who has never failed and do everything
very easy, then, you see,
he isn’t a
happy man. Everyone had failure, you can not image
what kind of failure has
touched to a success
man.
To the failure, someone facts with it and
try to make the failure into a encouragement
thing and find why they falled and make up his
mind to resolve the problume while,
someone is
give up what he had very done, ever
dissapointment, he isn’t the great man.
I
know, live is include of failure and success, a
really man will not run away from the
failure,
failure isn’t a bad think, failure is necessary if
will fact with it for ever. I will
success.
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