大学英语专业四级写作总结

2011年英语专业四级考试写作预测范文10
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英语专业四级、英语专业八级考试写作预测作文
Every now and then we hear news about poisonous food， such as tainted milk powder， illegal food
additives， and illegal cooking oil， which pose great danger to people‘s health. Give your ideas of
cracking down on poisonous food.
Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic：
My Ideas of Cracking down on Poisonous Food
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part， state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part， provide one or two reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea.
In the last part， bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content， organization， grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow
the instructions may result in a loss of marks.
范文
My Ideas of Cracking down on Poisonous Food
Recently there are a lot of news about poisonous food， such as tainted milk powder， illegal food
additives， and illegal cooking oil， which do great harm to people’s health. The news has aroused
much panic among people， and it‘s high time that we took measures to crack down on poisonous
food.
To crack down on poisonous food， I have some ideas to offer. First， the government should make
laws to forbid the making of poisonous food. Manufacturers who are caught making these kinds of
food should be punished severely， and factories in which these kinds of food are produced should
be closed down. Second， food manufacturers must be well informed that they should produce safe
food as food safety is their first priority in business. Third， people should be more cautious. When
you are shopping food， please remember that natural food is usually safer， better and cheaper
than artificial food. And if you think that some brands of food may be poisonous， complain to the
related department without hesitation.
In one word， only when both the government and citizens take some measures can poisonous
food be cracked down on.
大学英语专业四级考试写作范文预测（二）
专四专八 辅导课程 2011-10-30 【字体：大 中 小】 我要
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Helping strangers used to be considered as a virtue. But nowadays
people tend to be very cautious of strangers. They are afraid that helping
others can sometimes bring them trouble. What‘s your opinion？
Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the
following topic：

Should We Help Strangers？
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part， state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part， support your opinion with appropriate details.
In the last part， bring what you have written to a natural conclusion
or a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content， organization， grammar and
appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss
of marks.
范文
Should We Help Strangers？
We used to appreciate those who like to help strangers. But nowadays
people tend to be very cautious of strangers， because they are afraid
that helping others can sometimes bring them trouble. In my opinion， we
should try our best to help others in a reasonable way.
We should try to help others， no matter they are strangers or not.
First， helping others is a virtue， and it will make our society more
harmonious. Just imagine what a terrible world it would be if everyone
was coldhearted！ Second， to some extent， helping others is helping
oneself. We may come across some trouble and need others’ help some day.
If everyone turns a blind eye to our trouble and turns a deaf ear to our
appeal for aid just because we are strangers to them， what shall we do
at that time？ Therefore， we should be glad to help others.
However， helping others may sometimes bring us trouble or even put
us in danger. So when we are helping others， we should also protect
ourselves and offer our help in an appropriate way. For example， to help
someone who was robbed， calling the police is a much wiser way than chasing
the robbers alone.
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先说说专四作文第一篇作文的结构：
1. 第一部分引出话题，摆明立场。个人观点一定要鲜明，不可模棱两可，也不要中立。是
就 是，不是就不是。赞成就赞成，反对就反对。
2. 第二部分陈述你的观点，用两个或三个例子来支撑 你的论点，要解释为什么，并简要提
出解决办法。段首要有中心句。主题和重点要突出。有些同学写作时 比较容易跑题，引
用例子和陈述观点时要注意扣题。注意One topic, one paragraph. 中间陈述观点的两个方
面可以分开两个段来写，也可合为一段写。建议大家在考 试时分两段，这是Aden 的批
改习惯。
3. 第三部分回应你在第一部分的观点，对话题做一个小小的总结。回应第一段时句子不要
单纯复制第一段陈述观点的句子，应用另一种语言来restate your two topic sentences.

国家专四写作考试要求第一篇作文字数为200左右，但Aden 平时布置作业习惯是150字左
右的，所以大家在考试时写150字左右就可以了，若写不出那么多东西 ，也要起码120字。
期末考试时间为一个小时，有足够的时间给大家写作文，所以请大家写作文时细心 点、耐心

点，认真点写，想清楚了再写，尽量避免低级语法错误和 避免表达不清。考试的形式就和我
们考专四作文的形式一样，给出一个话题你，然后写作文。考试不难的 ，且Aden挺好人的，
他也不想大家挂科，大家不用太担心考试的难度。考试时你若提早写完作文可以 提早离开，
但不要太早，最好起码过了40分钟再走吧。到时考试时若你很想那么早走就自己跟Aden 说
吧。

以下我为大家总结的写作常犯错误不仅仅是为了考试的，大家以后写英文作 文时若犯了较多
错误可以看看。当然，大家看了以下常犯错误后也不用太紧张，在写作时若有太多顾虑， 太
束缚自己又不好了，总结常犯错误我只是想提醒下大家。
其次，简要总结下同学在写作中常犯的错误：
一、句子：
1. … the reason why … is because…
Reason 和because 在同一个句子中出现，意义重复了，应删掉because
2. Then …
Also…
Besides…
So…
以上四个词英语中是不把它们放在句首的，而是把它们放在句中的：
…, then...
…, also...
…, besides...
…, so...
3. 流水句，不经意间将两个相互独立的分句直接用逗号连接，而不使用平行连词或其他适
当的连接手段。
如：San Francisco is a very cosmopolitan city, there are people from many cultures and ethnic
groups living there.
改正这类错误，最直接的最简单的改法就是增加连接词，通常为and 或but，但有时
硬硬地加and 和but会使语意不是很连贯。使用连接手段应该根据语意、两个分 句之间的
联系等情况使用句号、分号或平行连词（and, but等）、主从连词（although, because等）。
4. It is …
这一句型表达的意思通常是很模糊的，因为it 可以指很多东西，所以在英文写作中要
尽量避免使用It is …句型，除非你写it is …这一句前面有非常清楚的指代，让人不用思考就
知道it 指的是什么。
5. Such as … and so on…
在英文中such as 和and so on 是不可用在同一句中的，因为这两个词组用在同一句中
的会造成语义重复。
6. 中国式英语
这是一个令我们许多人纠结的问题，我们要写的专四作文要求不是很高，大家在表达时尽量
不要 弄得太复杂，简单明了就行了，许多我们中国人特有的语言如“提高了国际形象”等应
尽量避免。
7. 句子成分不完整
如：For example, the increase in the cost of renting an apartment.
Many people who get married before they are mature enough.
这个句子细看一下，大家可以发现这两个个句子没有谓语。for example 后面引出的例子是

完整的一个例子，要用完整的句子来表述。还有，for example 在作文中用一次就够了，不
宜用太多次。第一句要重新加上谓语，如：For example, the increase in the cost of renting an
apartment has increased。Who后面的是定语从句，修饰many people, 是一个从属分句，在这
句中把who 去掉就可以了。
8. There is are …
这个句型也可造成表达不清，大家应尽量避免。还有，大家用这个句型比较经常犯一 个错误：
There are many students read books in the library. 这个句子有两个谓语了，所以为避免这种错
误这个句型应尽量避免。

二、词组
culture atmosphere (x)?cultural atmosphere
economy’s development (x)? economic development
develop economy (x)? develop the economy
do harm to environment (x)? do harm to the environment
spend something to something (x)? spend something on something in (doing) something
protect nature (x)? protect the nature
the society (x)?society
in our life (x)?in everyday life
concern sthsb (x)?be concerned about sth (常用) show concern about sth concern oneself with
sth
not only like sth but also (x)?like not only sth but also
China government China’s government the China government (x)?Chinese government
the standard of living has been improved (x)? the standard of living has improved
a lot apples(x)? a lot of apples lots of apples 注意：在英语中a lot 通常是用于修饰程度等的
副词词组，如 Thanks a lot. 非常感谢。a lot of 和lots of 才是修饰名词的，可数和不可数的
均可。
living standard-? standard of living (better)
our societyschoollibrarystudyimagination?societythe school the library the student’s study
the student’s imagination
注意：our 在英语中是指something shared, 在英文作文中用our 范围太笼统了、太广了，应
尽量避免在写英文作文时用它。
除了个别习惯搭配外，为了使英文文章简单、清晰，写作文时应尽量避免用过多介词，如说
th e development of the economy，不如说economic development 好。
with the development of society ? as society develops (better)
表达：
景点：a scenic spot scenic spots
小结：
1． because 指直接、明了的、有根据的原因，可放在句首或句中；for 表推测的原因，不一
定成立，语气最弱，常放在句中；since 指几乎大家都知道的原因，意为“既然”，可放
在句首或句中。在使用这三个词时切勿乱用。
2． 写作时要尽量避免用人称代词，因为它们太口语化，显得考试的作文不够正式，且在作
文 中容易导致指代不明。
3． 不要用many 修饰不可数名词，不要用much 修饰可数名词
4． 尽量避免用it 指代事物，因为it 可以指代很多东西，虽然你知道it 是指什么，但改卷

老师和读者并不清楚，他们要看it 前面的甚至全文的内容才可能知道it 指代什么，所
以要避免。
5． 尽量不要把介词或介词词组放在句首。
6． 尽量避免用our。
7． 关于作文中用得太多让人看了无聊的词组(请见PDF文件Transition Phrases（过渡短语）)：
at the same time?meanwhile simultaneouslyfollowed by
nowadays?recentlypresently currently(better)
first, second, third?first, next,finally
right away?immediately
in conclusion?therefore thusconsequentlyin summaryin brief
in addition?furthermore moreoveradditionally
however?whereasnevertheless

在此给大家一个网址看看中国学生写英文作文方面存在的问题。
http:
我们专四那本书的108页至123页有不少例文，并且例文里有评价和指出我们中国学生
写英文作 文常犯的一些错误，建议大家看看，充分利用下我们手上有的资源。

附： 7篇专四写作例文
1. It Pays to be Honest
As the society is becoming more commercialized, it seems that profit and interest are the
vital important factors of life. In order to get success, some people cheat others. However, it
pays to be honest if you want to get a good relationship with other and win a permanent
reputation.
First and foremost, honesty is a virtue that can help you acquire good interpersonal
relationships. Since people live in a large community, when dealing with people, you have to
be honest. It will leave people a bad impression if you cheat them. Gradually, you will be
isolated. On the contrary, if you communicate with them honestly, people will be willing to
strengthen relations with you. Therefore, you will gain good interpersonal relationships.
Furthermore, dishonesty can’t be everlasting. Even though you enjoy an honored reputation
through cheating, the trust will come out sooner or later. “You can cheat once, but you can’t
cheat for a whole life,” as the Chinese proverb goes. In the long run, it’s worthwhile to be
honest.
Honesty is still important in modern life, because it entitles you to not only good
interpersonal relationships but also an everlasting reputation. What people need to do is
treasure it and apply it to daily life.
2．It Pays to be Honest (Jeffson)
Honesty, which is regarded as a virtue, can bring people or nations much praise; while
dishonesty, as sin, can bring people or nations much trouble. Therefore, it pays to be honest.
More often than not, honest people or nations are well treated by their counterparts, while
dishonest ones are usually looked down upon; the results for them are poles apart. Honest

people win good reputations, for what they say counts, and people can turn to them for help.
In order to show gratitude and respect, people are glad to make friends with them and treat
them as well as possible. So is the case with nations. Nations who always keep to what they
say will win credit. Therefore, other nations are willing to trade or cooperate with them,
which may help these nations flourish. By contrast, dishonest people or nations are often
met with distrust. For example, a nation notorious for pirating products will not share other
nation’s markets, and its economy will be severely affected.
To summarize, honesty can bring fame to people or flourish countries; while dishonesty can
ruin them. So to be honest is not merely an expression of good virtue but also a clever
choice.
3. It Pays to be Honest (Lillian)
With the development of the society, more and more people have become dishonest. The
consequences can be in everything from personal relationships to the death rate. Therefore,
honesty is a basic characteristic that human beings must have and it is very important to the
world.
For one thing, being honest will produce better relationships directly. There will be fewer
misunderstandings among people. For instance, if a couple is honest with each other all the
time, they will have a good relationship in their family. If they are dishonest, everything will
be the opposite.
For another thing, honesty will reduce the death rate. An honest doctor can save a lot of
people, but a dishonest doctor can kill a great number of people with hisher dishonest
words because some wrong medicines may cause patients to lose their lives.
To sum up, the world needs honest people, so all of us should be honest. Better
relationships, less misunderstandings, and reducing the death rate depend on honest hearts.
Therefore, honesty and dishonesty are closely related to our lives, societies, and even the
whole world.
4. It Pays to be Honest (Helen)
In recent years, people have become more individualistic. Some people have even become
more selfish. They have forgotten the value that has long served as a foundation of Chinese
character: honesty.
The traditional value of honesty can enhance relationships because it is a foundational
aspect of our character. First of all, honesty is one of the wonderful traditions in China.
Because it has influenced many generations, we should keep honesty firmly in our minds.
Moreover, honesty is a good way to enhance the relationships among people. If you treat
your friends or relatives honestly, they will treat you honestly in return. In other words,
people will get on well with each other with the help of honesty. Finally, honesty is one of
the elementary aspects of our whole character. Because of honesty, we can trust others, and
also others can trust us. It provides a chance for people to communicate with each other
equally and fairly.

To summarize, honesty is one of the wonderful traditions in China; it can enhance people’s
relationships, and it is one of the elementary aspects of our character. We should treat
everyone honestly in our daily lives.
5. Reduce Waste on Campus (Rachel)
If every student on campus wastes a gram of rice and throws away a piece of paper every
day, the total waste would be beyond people’s imagination. Even small resources, when
used well, can help meet needs and aid development. Students can reduce waste on campus
by saving food and paper.
In order to avoid wasting food, students and cafeteria workers must make an effort to
ensure the balance of supply and demand for food. Students can buy a certain amount of
food everyday which is just enough for their needs. Cafeteria workers can provide students
with different amounts of food to cater for different needs.
Making the most of a piece of writing paper is another way to reduce waste on campus.
Students often throw away pieces of paper, that are just partly used. Once students become
aware that wasting paper is an ill habit especially while doing calculations, they can write
smaller and make full use of margins. Also, both sides of paper can be used.
College students should try their utmost to reduce waste on campus by saving food and
paper. Students should take these little responsibilities seriously, because for a country to
develop, the problem of waste should never be ignored.
6. Reduce Waste on Campus (Leroy)
Reducing waste on campus is necessary and important because waste makes the campus
dirty and unattractive. Increasing the cleaners’ dutifulness and the students’ responsibility
are the two most effective ways to reduce waste.
To begin with, the cleaners on campus should do their work dutifully. Each campus has many
cleaners whose work is to clean the campus everyday. If they do it heart and soul, there will
be less waste on campus. However, there are many cleaners who are not dutiful enough,
which results in a dirty school. Therefore, the cleaners’ dutifulness is very important.
In addition, students on campus are responsible for cleaning their school. Many students
have bad behavior, such as throwing out waste everywhere. If they pay more attention to
their bad behavior, the school will become cleaner. However, if they do not care about their
bad behavior, then it is not hard to imagine what the school will be like.
In conclusion, both cleaners and students play an important role in reducing waste on
campus. Every cleaner and every student should realize their importance and set a good
example to others, so that the campus will become more beautiful and attractive.
7. Reduce Waste on Campus (Daniel)
Due to the improvement of the living standard, wasting water and food have become
habitual among many students on campus. It is even worse that some of them consider
wasting acceptable.

Wasting water is common on campus. First, without the help of their parents, lots of
students have to do washing by themselves. Therefore, many of them use a large amount of
water only to wash a pair of socks. They are not aware of the importance of water. Second,
there are always some careless people, who forget to turn off the tap and leave the water
running.
In addition, it is quite normal to see that students throw away their food when too much is
left. For example, they spend plenty of money on drinks for a party, but when they are no
longer thirsty, they leave them without hesitation. Everyone is used to it.
Wasting water and food seem quite little but actually they are to some extent huge
problems. They indicate that students are not thrifty and not responsible. Therefore, if
students really learn to consider wasting as a bad habit and take action to reduce it from
now on, then campus is not only a place for study, but also a place to develop healthy habits
that will improve society.