英语四级作文14.12

英语四级作文14.12

大学英语四级考试在2 014年12月20日上午已
经结束了，小编第一时间为大家提供英语四级作
文的解析，供大家 参考。
由于考试是以花卷的形式来考查的，今年主要有
三个话题: 分别是①A course that has
impressed you most in college (大学中给你
印象最深的一门课）；②A campus activity that
has benefited most (使你受益最深的一项校园
活动) ③A classmate of yours who has
influenced you most in college (大学中对你
影响最深的一位同学)。
这三个话题均为我们所熟悉的 话题性作文，写作
手法可以采用叙议结合的方式，完成难度相对较
低。考生可以很灵活的套用考 前文都老师给大家
准备的相关模板句。对于下面的功能句，如果能
收放自如的灵活应用，考取高 分绝对是轻而易举
的事情。
一、开头句：
主题词has been playing an increasingly
important role in individual’s growth. It has

brought a lot of benefits.
(...已在个人的成长中，扮演着越来越重要的角
色.它给我们带来了许多好处。)
这里的主题词可以换成我们这次的“有意义的课
程活动”（the meaningful courseactivity）、
“深厚的友谊”(the deep friendship)直接替换
即可。
二、中间段：
在具体展开原因时，可以从主次的角度来展开：
mainly owing to the fact that ...and partly
due to the fact that ...（主要原因是...次要原因
是...）
例如，这次题目二就可以直接套用：
The activity organized by the campus is the
most meaningful for me mainly owing to the
fact that it can strengthen our body and
partly due to the fact that it makes me
realize the spirit of teamwork.（由学校组织的
体育比赛 对我来讲是非常有意义的，主要原因是

由于它有助于增强我们的身体素质，次要原因是
由于它让我们意识到了团队精神。）
作文中能写出这样的句子，无疑属于高分亮点
句。
三、结尾段：
至于结尾部分可以直接套用下列句型，简洁收
尾。
Taking all these factors into consideration, I
naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我自然会得出结论…
Taking into account all these factors, I may
reasonably come to the conclusion that …
考虑所有这些因素, 我可能会得出合理的结
论…
HenceTherefore, I ’d better come to the
conclusion that…
因此,我最好得出这样的结论…
There is no doubt that... 毫无疑问的是...
对你影响最大的同学

A classmate of yours who has influenced
you most in college

Rose is my roommate, classmate and my
best friend in my college. She has a round
face and a little plump. One can always find
a nice smile on her face, which reflects her
amiable and pleasant character. Our
friendship attributes to her great influence
on me.
In terms of study, she is good at English,
while English is not my cup of tea. When I
am confused about teacher’s explanation of
texts, she always interprets them to me in
an explicit way. I really appreciate her help.
Besides, she also imparts me a few
language learning tips and
recommendations which arouse my
learning interest.
In addition, in the leisure time, she helps
me a lot as well. Because I am not the local

student and my hometown is far away from
here, sometimes I feel homesick. However, I
always have Rose on my side. Her
accompany gives me great comfort.
I feel so lucky that I could have such a good
friend, who teaches me and help me in my
study and leisure life, so she is the
classmate that has influenced me most in
college.
Two
I have met so many friends in my college
life. They have exerted enormous influence
on my life. However, one of my most
impressive friends is my roommate, Li
Ming.
In the class meeting on the first day of
school, Li Ming did not impress us at all.
We started to notice him because he was
always late for classes. We were thus
impressed by his laziness. I came to know

him and his situation because we were
roommates and spent much time together:
his mother was seriously ill and sick abed
in long-term, his father left him and his
mother mercilessly. Hence, it was him that
shouldered the heavy burden of taking care
of his sick mother supporting the whole
family. Finally, under great pressures, he
balanced his life and study perfectly: he
was no longer always late, took good care
of his mother and even won the scholarship
many years in a row.
The experience of Li Ming can be one of the
most convincing cases of the power of
persistence and will. He left a deep
impression and imposed a durable
influence on me. Indeed, friend such as him
can be regarded as asset and property in
our life. We have rights to choose our own
friends，but we should also be prudent and
sensible enough to choose friends who can
bring us “positive energy”. (228 words)

【参考译文】

在我的大学生活中，遇到 了很多朋友。他们对我
的人生产生了重大的影响。然而，我印象最深的
朋友是我的室友李明。
在开学第一天的入学班会上，他没有给全班同学
留下任何印象。李明让我们开始认识他，是因为
他总是上课迟到，同学们都以为是个懒惰的人。
因为我们是室友，平时的交往比较多，后来我才
慢慢了解到他的情况：原来他的母亲罹患重病，
长期卧床，父亲残忍地离开他们而去，照顾生病
的母亲和养家重任只能由他来承担了。令人惊讶
的是，在重压之下，他将自己的生活和学业平衡
地很好：他不再总是迟到，将妈妈照顾的很好并
且连续几年获得奖学金。
李明的经历 是坚持和意志的作用的最有说服力
的例子之一。他给我留下的印象无法磨灭，他对
我造成的影响 持续深远。的确，这样的朋友被视
为我们生活中的财富和资产。我们有权利选择自
己的朋友，然 而交友的过程中，我都应该足够理

智和谨慎，选择那些能够给我们带来正能量的真
正的朋友。
最深刻的一门课
A course that has impressed you most in
college

There are many courses in each college
year. But the course which impressed me
most in college is Advanced English
Audio-Visual & Speaking. The reasons why
I like this course are as follows.
The first reason is that I have learnt a lot
from this course. My listening ability,
speaking ability as well as translation
ability has improved greatly after taking
this course. The second reason is that I like
the teacher of this course, Mr. Qin, very
much. He is a charming gentleman with
great patience. His oral English is perfect,
sounding like American speakers. He

treated us very strict but we still like him
extremely.
Just as the proverb goes, “A strict teacher
produces outstanding students.” Thanks to
Mr. Qin’s guidance and teachings in this
course, all my classmates have made great
progress in English learning.
【参考译文】
大学中给你印象最深的一门课
大学阶段各个年级都有很多课程，但给我印象最
深的一 门课是“高级视听说”。之所以喜欢这门
课，有很多原因，现将原因列举如下。
喜欢这门课的 第一个原因是我在这门课上学到
了很多东西。我的英语听力水平、口语水平和翻
译水平都得到了 很大提升。喜欢这个课程的第二
个原因是我很喜欢教我们这门课的老师——秦
老师。他是一个既 有魅力又有耐心的人。他的英
语口语很棒。乍一听，完全就是美国本土人在讲
英语。他对我们要 求很严格，但我们依然很喜欢
他。

正如谚语所说：“严师出高徒” 。多亏秦老师在这
门课上的悉心指导和教诲，我们班同学的英语水
平都得到了空前的提升。
【写作知识点】 形容“记忆很深刻”，英语怎
么说？
简单句的类型：
（1）肯定陈述句：Somebody remember
something forever.
（2）否定陈述句：Somebody never forget
something.
（3）隐否定陈述句：Something be
unforgettable.
（4）改述陈述句：Something give somebody
deep impression.
Better choice:
某事深深植根于某人的记忆当中。

Something be deeply rooted
in one’s memorymind.
主语 系语 状
语 表语 主语补足语
例如：童年时代，我有过一次永生难忘的痛

苦经历。
The horrible experience in my childhood
is deeply rooted in my memory.
万能“亮点”句：
我敢说这段美好的经历我永生难忘。
I am sure that this great experience+
非谓语动词作后置定语+ will be deeply rooted
in myyour memory.
【2014年12月真题】
【题目一】A course that has impressed you
most in college. （大学中给你印象最深的一
门课）
例子：I am sure that this great
experience taking this course will be deeply
rooted in myyour memory.
【题目二】A classmate of yours who has
influenced you most in college.（大学中对
你影响最深的一位同学）
例子：I am sure that this great
experience making friends with himher will
be deeply rooted in myyour memory.

【题目三】A campus activity that has
benefited most.（使你受益最深的一项校园活
动）
例子：I am sure that this great
experience participating this activity will
be deeply rooted in myyour memory.
运用技巧：
（1）欢迎信—— 欢迎留学生
题目要 求以学生会的名义给即将到来的外
国留学生写一封欢迎信，并为他们的校园生活提
出一些建议。
【例句】I would like to extend my warmest
welcome to all of you. I am sure that this
great experience visiting our university
will be deeply rooted in your memory.
（2）推荐信——推荐电影
题目要求给好友推荐一部自己喜欢的电影。
【例句】I would like to recommend an
American movie, Titanic, to you. I am sure
that this great experience seeing this film
will be deeply rooted in your memory.
（3）告示 招募志愿者

题目要求要为一个全球化国际会议招募志
愿者。
【例句】We would like to extend the
information that we will recruit 100
volunteers for the coming international
conference on globalization on March
20,2010 in our college. I am sure that this
great experience participating this
activity will be deeply rooted in your
memory.
（4）申请信 资助希望工程
题目要求希望参与希望工程，表达资助欲望
及捐赠计划。
【例句】I would like to request your
assistance to find a child in a remote area
as the beneficiary of my financial aid. I am
sure that this great experience supporting
a child in poverty will be deeply rooted in
my memory.
（5）辞职信
题目要求告诉老板辞职的决定，对公司提供
的机会，领导的认可和同事的帮助表示感谢，对

给公司造成的不便表示歉意。
【例句】I do appreciate the opportunity
to work here. I am sure that this great
experience working in this company will be
deeply rooted in my memory.
形容“记不住”，英语怎么说？
Forget ?
升级1：否定反义
加否定前缀：Dis- + remember
→Disremember
【例句】我忘记了来时的路。
I disremembered the way we came.
升级2：熟词生意
Escape 及物动词
【例句】一些女孩子喜欢通过购物来忘记悲
伤。
Some girls are willing to go shopping to
escape their sadness.
升级3：高级词汇
Neglect——Neglect to do something
【例句】我们经常忘记了应该合理使用自己
的身体。

We often neglect to make proper use of
our bodies.
Better Choice
Fade 褪色；凋谢；枯萎
Something be fading from one’s memory.
万能“亮点”句：
我敢说这段美好的经历我永生难忘。
I am sure that this great experience
would be never fading from myyour memory.
双剑合璧：
我敢说这段美好的经历将深深的植根于我
的记忆当中，永远不会褪去。
I am sure that this great experience +
非谓语动词作后置定语+will be deeply rooted
in myyour memory and never fading from
myyour mind.