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托福口语模板及参考范文汇总之成为艺术家需要天赋
托福口语题目:
Do you agree or disagree with
the following statement? A
person needs talent
to be an artist.
托福口语参考范文:
Well, I
believe one can never be a real artist without
some
talents.
The first one is the
talent to be creative because artists cannot
just copy others works but have to create
their own ones. And this
kind of ability
cannot be taught by any teacher or be acquired
through practicing.
The second one is
the talent to realize the mission of being an
artist cause artists are not just interested
in arts, but determined to
devote themselves
to this career. For example, a 4-year-old artist,
Aelita, said she’s going to
paint for 24 hours. This is not something
her
parents told her, but an innate desire.
托福口语参考答案:
Well, I believe one can never be a
real artist without some
talents.
【观点】缺少某些天赋,一个人就不能成为一位真正的艺术
家。
The first
one is the talent to be creative because artists
cannot
just copy others works but have to
create their own ones. And this
kind of
ability cannot be taught by any teacher or be
acquired
through practicing.
【理由1】第一种天赋是
创造力。这是任何老师都无法教给
我们的,是通过无论多少次练习都无法习得的。
The
second one is the talent to realize the mission of
being an
artist cause artists are not just
interested in arts, but determined to
devote
themselves to this career. For example, a 4-year-
old artist,
Aelita, said she’s going to paint
for 24 hours. This is not something
her
parents told her, but an innate desire.
【理由2】第二种天赋是意识到一名艺术家的使命,一种能
够为
了艺术奉献一生的精神——这是一种与生俱来的渴望,而不
是谁教给他们的。
托福口语模板分析:
托福考试,没指望大家说得、写得多么Native,但求你能让
人
家听懂、看懂,就只要做到ClearAccurate就够了!但是!还是有
一批又一批的同学在说着
和写着一些逻辑十分混乱的答案,这让
人家要如何跟上你魔鬼的步伐?!如何给你高分?!
具体结合今天的题目:请大家务必看清今天的statement: A
person needs
talent to be an artist. 一个人需要天赋来成为一名
艺术家。
要如何论证?要紧紧围绕:talent 和 to be an artist之间的关
系来论证!
(1)如果你Agree,请说明,talent是如何让一个人变成artist
的;
(2)如果你Disagree,请论证一个人为什么【没有talent】也
能成为ar
tist。请注意:是论证:没有talent的人也能成为artist!
可是我们看到同学们的回答是什么?
Personally
speaking, I disagree with the statement cause
first, I
think +being hard-working is an key
factor to the success of an artist.
(我不同意这种说法—
—我不认为一个人需要天赋才能成为一名
艺术家。因为努力是艺术家们获得成功的关键因素。)If
people
dont work hard, even though they have
talent, they still have no
way to prove it.
如果不努力,即使有天赋,也没有机会展示。For
instance, one of the
most genius pianist, Langlang, has to practice
10 hours every day, which helps him to show
his talents. 比如,最
天才的钢琴家之一,郎朗,每天都不得不练习10个小时,这才<
br>让他得以展示自己的天赋。
同志们,这是严重跑题 + 打脸啊!
跑题:题目问你:“做艺术家,需不需要天赋?”你回答:“做
艺术家,必须要努力。” 额……亲呐,
请正面回答问题好吗?你这
就好像:老婆问老公:你爱我吗?老公回答:我不爱林志玲。【那
你
爱我吗?谁管你不爱谁啊?!同理:做艺术家,必须要努力。那
天赋需不需要呢?谁管你需不需要努力呀
?】
打脸:紧接着,这位同学举了郎朗(后边还举了昨天推送的
Aelita的例子),来证明自己:I
disagree with the statement 的观
点,亲呐!你还记得自己大明湖畔的
观点吗?还记得自己disagree
的是个什么statement? Statement说:A
person needs talent to be
an artist.
一个人需要天赋来成为一名艺术家。然后你举的例子里
全都是【有天赋】的艺术家——这不正好说明艺术家都需要有天
赋吗?
好,那么要怎么修改呢?我先来改一下中文:
我不同意这种说法——我不认为一个人需要天赋才能
成为
一名艺术家。因为【没有天赋的人,只是依靠后天的努力就能成
为艺术家】
对比原话:【努力是艺术家们获得成功的关键因素】
你get到这个区别了吗?对的!就是是否提
及【没有天赋】这
个变量。这个太重要了!这就是实验中讲的:控制变量法。
理由句:【通过努力,即使是没有任何艺术天赋的人,也能
成功】
对比原话:【如果不努力,即使有天赋,也没有机会展示。】
修改的重点:决不能说:“即使有天
赋”,都有天赋了,你还
说啥!你不认同的观点是:非得有天赋,才能成为艺术家。所以,
你得
说“即使没有天赋,也能成为艺术家”——这才是反驳好吗?!
修改英文:
Personally speaking, I disagree with the statement
cause
people who have no talent can also be
artists simply through
working hard. Just as a
saying goes, nurture wins nature. Through
years of training and thousands of
practicing, even a person with no
innate gift
can still be an excellent artist. 【这个时候,你举例子当
然
不能举什么郎朗、小Aelita这种天才啦!倒是可以举一些先天条
件不足的人。比如,可以编个故事
,有个人从小就是五音不全——
先天条件极差,经历了多年的培训和反复的练习,最后居然成了
一名歌唱家。】
如上所示,大家不难看出,这确实是一道难题。很多同学都
掉入了跑题的陷阱。
接下来,Pt来介绍一些值得积累的表达:
1. 【artists cannot just
copy others
works】“work”这个词当“作
品”讲时,是一个可数名词哦!当“工作”讲的时候不可数
2. 【be interested in
sth.】对某事感兴趣。如果是怀有极大
的兴趣,你可以说:have passion for
sth.
3. 【devote oneself to sth.】 致力于献身于…… =
give all your
attention and effort to one
particular thing, 你还可以说dedicate
oneself ones
life to sth.
4. 【an innate
desire】一种与生俱来的渴望(还有一个叫“内
心的渴望” = inner desire)