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托福写作28分的模板
托福独立写作竟然可以使用500词左右
的模板,而自己只需要填写近100
字的转述题,就可以拿到这么高的成绩,写作经常拿不到高分的童鞋
,快快来看
看吧!
模版总共475个词,加上填充部分后全文占词586。填写的内容以用词
质
朴为原则,并没有使用高大上的表达。对于语言基础一般,备考时间短的同学来
说,非常实用
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Some people think that older children should
be required to take
care of the younger
children. Others think that this should be done by
parents or other adults. Which do you prefer?
第一段
In most cases, some people think that
it is parents’ responsibility to
take care of
the whole family (1) out of various reasons and
factors in
situations, while others do not
think so, which sound reasonable but
ironical
based on the fickle situations in society and
history. As for me,
despite the adventure of
being entitled as “absolutist”, I will
consistently
support that older children
should share the burden and be required to
take care of their younger siblings (2).
填充内容:
(1) 转述题目,或反对的观点
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这道题是个选择类的题目,问及:究竟
是完全由父母来担起照顾家庭的责任,
还是应该要求年长一点的孩子来照顾弟弟妹妹。这边填充的部分就
只需要选择一
个与自己立场相反的观点来写即可。譬如说,我的立场是:长兄长姐应该照顾弟
弟
妹妹,那么空格(1)只需要填充对立的观点:父母来承担全部责任。
(2) 自己的立场态度
第二段
Maybe a lot of people stress the
suspect of the authenticity of my
point of
view, but what I want to demonstrate is, this idea
has been
certified by our predecessor hundreds
of years ago. Abraham Lincoln, for
instance,
is known as a great man respected by all of the
American
people, not merely because of his
remarkable feat of leading the Union
in Civil
War and of emancipating the slaves in the South
but because of
the records and the anecdotes
popular in politicians and socialists,
telling
the story of his family, education background and
policies he
made to seek his dream. And the
reason why he can achieve such a
howling
success is closely related to the opinion I am
holding now.
However, despite the seeming
irrelevance of the example, try to imagine,
if
this idea is not accepted doubtlessly, that means
Lincoln refused to
take the responsibility to
take care of his little brothers (3).
Consecutively,
Lincoln would, in no ways
become the man in our memory with integrity
and love, as a result of which, he would never
be supported by his
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senators and his people, let alone
the fact that he can lead all the
northern
people to win such a historical battle.
填充内容:
(3) 结合例子引入反对的观点
注意,这边不是直白地表达自己反对的观点!而是,结合林
肯的例子,假设
林肯他拒绝照顾弟弟妹妹,拒绝分担家庭责任,那么他也不会成为我们记忆中那
个正直有爱的伟人了,那么他也无法获得人们的支持和信赖,更不用说最后在美
国自由史上书下光辉的一
笔了。这样写,在保证例子完整性的同时,又突出了观
点。
第三段
Admittedly there are still some people who
probably think that the
time and space makes
Lincoln a rare example, which cannot be cited as a
ground support to the idea mentioned above. In
our daily life, another
example, the
experience of my friend Jane can help to
substantiate what I
have held. Jane is a
single mother in our lab who always wants to get
success in her field. However, the efforts she
has made never yield any
return. The factor
leading to this is thatshe wants to fully control
both her
work and children while her elder son
has repeatedly expressed his
willing to share
the burden and look after his little brother (3).
Although
we cannot attribute the unpromising
end to the assumption she takes
granted, it is
a fact that she never thought about other
alternative
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options and just go straight in
her own way. So the influence originated,
developed and stimulated by the insane
hypothesis should be
considered a critical
element.
填充内容:
(3) 结合例子引入反对的观点
结合朋友Jan
e的例子,分析她为什么无法在工作上取得成功的原因。因为
她既想全力扑在工作上,又不想放弃对孩子
的照顾。然而,鱼和熊掌不可兼得,
尽管她的大儿子反复表达了他愿意分担家庭重担,照顾弟弟的态度,
但她仍然不
放心,全权控制。尽管我们不能把这个作为她失败的唯一因素,但她无法平衡家
庭和
工作的事实,也是不可忽略的。
第四段
There also exists the
fact that some other people still think that
parents would be a better mentor for
children’s growth (1), but it is
obvious that
it just helps in some specific situations, which
pales in
comparison to its opposite claim to
such a huge extent that it is
unnecessary to
approve or disprove it.
填充内容:
(1) 反对的观点 第四段是个小的让步段。点明:还是有一些人支持对立的观点,认为家长是
更合适的导师来引导孩子
的成长。但这是要在特定环境下才成立的。权衡左右,
其实我们也无须过于纠结于此。注意,这段的重点
在于让步的态度,逻辑方面体
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现作者的批判性思维,语言方面体现作者运用的娴熟。所以只需简单带到反对的
态度即可。
第五段
So, judging from the reasoning and
examples as well as the sub
points I presented
as above, we can easily draw the conclusion that
older
children of the family should be
required to look after the younger
children
(2). Just as everybody knows, coins has their
sides, but this fact
cannot weaken the
argument that there is always a side can be
considered more by some people, and cannot
weaken the argument that
older children also
play an indispensable role in a family(2).
填充内容:
(2) 自己的立场态度
结尾部分要重申自己的立场,再一次强调:哥
哥姐姐有责任应该要照顾自己
的弟弟妹妹,他们在家庭中有着不可取代的地位。
托福独立写作
竟然可以使用500词左右的模板,而自己只需要填写近100
字的转述题,就可以拿到这么高的成绩,
写作经常拿不到高分的童鞋,快快来看
看吧!
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