素珠-闫凤姣
1
、下面短文中有
10
处语言错误。请在有错误
的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.
只允许修改
10
处，多者（从第
11
处起）不计分。
When I was a very young children, my father
created a regular practice I remember well
years late. Every time he arrived home at end
of the day, we’d greet her at the door. He would
ask
who we was and pretend not to knowing us,
Then he and my mother would have had a drink while
she prepared dinner and they would talk about
his day and hers. While they chat, my father would
lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of
the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to
be up
there
！
My sister and I
thought he was so cool for putting us there.
2
、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10处语言错
误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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About how to keep healthy, I’d
like to offer my advices. As we know, we teenagers
are
going through a rapid growth which needs
to be support by a healthy and balanced diet.
Thus, we
need a variety of food but cut out
the food rich in sugar or fat. However, we should
take physical
exercise regular. For example,
we can play basketball or take walk after school.
What’s more,
have enough sleep is of great
importance. Therefore, you should have at least
eight hours of sleep
every day and not stayed
up too late. Only in this way that can we keep
fit.
3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文.文中共
有
10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Today we had a
chemistry test.I found the test difficulty,but I
tried hardly to do ly
Mary,my best
friend,asking me to let her to copy my think for
some time,I let her c
opy my after the
test,all of us were called to the teacher's
teacher was angr
y because we had same answers
in the were warned not to cheat again so she
would need
to see our parents.I was very
upset.I didn't cheat.I was just helping a does
she punish
me?
4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改
你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、
删除或修改。
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Two years
before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a
car. Unfortunate, I had an accident
and hit
another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital
for at least two week. I called my parents, so
I did not tell them what had happened. I knew
that they will be worried about myself because I
was so farther away, and that my mother would
not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them
interested stories and how I was enjoying
Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still
think that it
was the right thing to do.
5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语
言错误,每
句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
In my childhood, my parent sent me to learn
Chinese calligraphy, believed that it could
benefit me a lot. Therefore, things were quite
contrary to their expectations. Not only do I get
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bored with
hours of practice but also I doubted the value of
it. Nevertheless, when I entered into
high
school, it became a fantasy way for me to relax.
Judging from my own experience, I want to say
a little words to those who have the same
trouble like I did. Do not refuse learn a
skill when they are young, as in the long run you
will find
it helpful.
6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改
作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二
个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I learned an basic life
skill—cooking. At first, I just watch what my mum
did,
and then I tried. However, cooking were
not so easy. Sometimes when I cooked eggs. I even
burned it. Fortunately, whenever I did
something wrong, Mum would be encourage me.
Now I can cook simple dishes, but help my Mum
with other housework as well. I needn’t
depend
at my parents as much as before. I am proudly that
I can do something to thank my parent
for
their love. I've got to know how be a good child
at home.
7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共
有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was very
young, I stayed at my hometown with my grandma.
She was a diligent
woman. She likes to grow
vegetables or takes care of all the houseworks.
Though my parents
often ask her to quit the
work, my grandma never listen. She takes that she
does as her great joy. I
understand her
because I see her smile and satisfied with life.
Several months before, my father
bought for
her a new smartphone. And during the Spring
Festival, I instructed her on how email
and
use the Internet. Aside from emailing, she thinks
it feels greatly to talk to their grandchildren
on WeChat.
8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的
以下作文。文中共有10
处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Two weeks ago, my best friend John got an
expensive smart phone as his birthday present.
He showed to everyone in my class proud. I
really envied him and every day I ask my mum to
buy
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me an
expensive present. However, to my disappointment,
I only got a second-hand bike at that
special
day. So one day while I was riding my “dear” bike
back home from school, I passed the
shop that
my mum worked. I saw a familiar figure kneeling
down in the front of it cleaned the
outside
steps of the shop. It was my mum! She worked so
harder to raise me! Tear in my eyes, I
got off
the bike and worked together with her.
答案以及解析
1答案及解析：
答案：
children
, my father created a
regular practice I remember well
child
late?her
years . Every time he
arrived home at end of the day, we’d greet at the
door.
laterthehim
wasknowing
He would
ask who we and pretend not to us, Then he and my
mother would
wereknow
When I was a very
young
have
had
a drink while she
prepared dinner and they would talk about his day
and hers. While
they
both
chatin
,
my father would lift my sister and me up to sit
the top of the fridge. It was
chattedon
excited
and frightening to be
up there
！
My sister and I thought he was so
cool for putting
exciting
us there.
解析：
第一处
:
因为前面有不定冠词
a,
所以这里用单数。故
childr
en
改成
child
。
第二处
:late
是形容词
“迟的”，或副词“迟地”，但表示“
……时间以后”要用
later
。故
late
改成
later
。
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第三处
:at the end of
为固定搭配，意为“在……结束的时候”。故在
at
后面加
the
。
第四处
:
根据上文可知我们每天在门口迎接爸爸。用
him
指代
my father
，作
greet
的宾语。
故her
改成
him
。
第五处
:
这句话的主语
是
we
，谓语要用复数，而且这篇文章是作者回忆小时候的事情，用一
般过去时。故<
br>was
改成
were
。
第六处
:pretend
后面接不定式作宾语，这里是否定式
pretend
not to do
。故
knowing
改成
know
。
第
七处
:
句意
:
他和我妈妈会喝些东西。这里不是虚拟语气，不能用
w
ould have done
，用
would
do
表示“过去常常做”。故去掉
had
。
第八处
:
根据主句内容
my father would lift my
sister
可知
while
引导的时间状语从句应用一般
过去时。故
chat
改成
chatted
。
第九处
:on the
top of
…为固定搭配，意为“在……顶部”。故
in
改成
on
。
第十处
:
以一
ed
结尾的形容词通常用于说明人，不用
于说明事物
;
以一
ing
结尾的形容词主要
用于说明事物的性质或特
征，本句的主语是形式主语
it
，真正的主语是
to be up
there
，故
excited
改成
exciting
。
2答案及解析：
答案：
About how to
keep healthy, I’d like to offer my
going
through a rapid growth which needs to be
Thus,
we need a variety of food but cut
we should
take physical exercise
advices
. As we
know, we teenagers are
advice
support
by a healthy and balanced diet.
supported
outHowever
the food rich in
sugar or fat. ,
downBesidesMoreover
regular
$$
walk .
For example, we can play basketball or take
a
regularly
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after school. What’s more,
you
have
enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore,
we
having
should have at least eight
hours of sleep every day and not stayed up too
late. Only in this way that
can we keep fit.
解析：第一处:考查名词。advice是不可数名词。
第二处:考查动词的语态。完整的被
动语态,由be和过去分词构成,此处需使用被动语态,因此
填入supported。
第三处:考查介词。减少用cut down,而cut out表示切断、中止,不符合文意。 第四处:考查逻辑意义的副词。此处后文因和前文形成并列关系,因此用Besides,或者是
M
oreover。
第五处:考查形容词到副词的转换。经常做练习,需用副词修饰动词take,故用
regularly。
第六处:考查固定短语。take a walk表示散步。
第七处:考查非谓语动词。非谓语动词做主语,因此将have改成having。
第八处:考查代词。本篇的主人翁都是第一人称,因此将you改成we。
第九处:考查动词
时态。stay一词所在的信息句因与and前面部分并列,统一接在should之后,
因此是用动词
原形。
第十处:考查句式结构。Only引导的倒装不需要用关联词that,因此删去that。
3答案及解析：
答案：
Today we had a
chemistry test.I found the test
Suddenly Mary,
my best friend,
hardly
difficulty
,but I
tried to do it.
hard
difficult
asking
me to let her
to copy my answers.
asked
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After
think
for some time,
I let her copy my answers.
thinking
all
of us were called to the teacher's teacher was
angry because we
both
?
same answers in
the
tests
.We were warned not to cheat
again
so
she would need to had
the
testor
does
see our parents. I
was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping
a friend. Why she punish
did
But after the
test,
me?
解析：
1
．
difficulty
改
成
difficult
．考查派生词．
find sth
．
adj<
br>．发现某物具备某种性质或特
点，故
改为
2
．
hardly
改成
hard
．考查单词辨析．
hardly
意为
几乎不
，而
本身就有副词的性质，
故
改为
3
．
asking
改成
asked
．考查
谓语动词和非谓语动词的区别．第三句话中没有谓语动词，故
改为谓语动词的过去式
<
br>4
．去掉
to
．考查动词不定式．
let'sb
．
d
o sth
．故
改为
5
．
think
改成
thinking
．考查非谓语动词．
after
为介词，后面应接动词的
动名词形式作宾语，
故
改为
6
．
all
改
成
both
．考查代词辨析．我和
Mary
是两个人，表示两者都应该用both
，故
改
为
7
．在
same<
br>前加
the
．考查冠词．
same
在使用时通常和定冠词
the
搭配，如
the same
as
，
I'm
in the same class with you
．
故
改为
8
．
tests
改成
test．
test
应用单数形式，考查名词．他们只参加了一次考试，故
改为
9
．
so
改成
or
．考查连词．此句意为
我们被警告不能再次作弊，否则她将通知我们的家长
，
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故
改为
10
．does
改成
did
．考查时态．文章描述的是过去发生的一件事，全文时态均为
一般过去时，
故
改为
4答案及解析：
答案： Two years
before
Unfortunate
,
I traveled to Brazil and I rented
for
a
car. , I had an
ago
Unfortunately
accident and hit
another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital
for at least two
parents,
week
. I
called my
weeks
sowill
I did not tell
them what had happened. I knew that they be
worried about
butwould
myself
farther
because I was
so away, and that my mother would not sleep if
she knew.
far
me
Therefore, I told them
interested
stories and how I was enjoying
Brazil. As a result, nobody
interesting
?
truth. I still think that
it was the right thing to do. knew
the
解析：1．before改为ago 考查副词．ago表示从现在起的若干时间以前，
意思是距今…
以前，需和过去时或过去进行时连用．before泛指从过去起的若干时间以前，意思是
距
过去某时…以前与其…（毋宁），常和完成时连用，尤其在间接引语中．
2．去掉for
考查词语用法．rent 及物动词，后面直接接宾语，for是多余的，要去掉．
3．Unfortunate改为Unfortunately 考查副词．修饰句子要用副词．
4．week改为weeks 考查名词复数．week
是可数名词，可数名词前有数词two修饰，要用
复数．
5．so改为but
考查连词．前后两个分句之间是转折关系而非因果关系，用连词but．
6．will改为would
考查动词时态．根据主句的谓语knew可知，该句为一般过去时，that
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后的宾语从句也应为过去的某种时态，故把will改为would．
7．myself改为me
考查代词．该处是说他们会为我担心，而不是为我自己担心，不用反身
代词．
8．farther改为far 考查形容词．此处缺少比较对象，要用形容词原级．
9．interested改为interesting
考查现在分词．现在分词转换的形容词常常修饰事物．
10．加the
考查冠词．该处的真相（truth）是指上文所说的事情，为特指，要用定冠词the．
5答案及解析：
答案：
In my childhood, my
benefit me a lot.
believed
parent
sent me to learn Chinese calligraphy, that it
could
believing
parents
Thereforedo
,
things were quite contrary to their expectations.
Not only I get
Howeverdid
fantasy
way
for me to relax.
fantastic
little
words
to those who have the same
few
bored with
hours of practice but also I doubted the value of
it. Nevertheless, when I entered
into
high school, it became a
Judging from my
own experience, I want to say a
trouble
like
?
learn a skill when
they
are young, as in the long run you I did. Do not
refuse
to
as
you
will find it helpful.
解析：﹣﹣﹣parents.考查名词. 表示父母双方应该用名词复数parents.
ed﹣﹣﹣believing.考查非谓语动词.做my parents sent me to
learn Chinese
calligraphy
的伴随状语,用现在分词believing,表示和主语my
parents 的主动关系.
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ore﹣﹣﹣However.考查连词.things were quite contrary
to their expectations表示事情
和他们的期望是完全相反的和上句是转折关系,
所以用However连接两句.
﹣﹣﹣did.考查时态.根据上文可知本句讨论的是过去的事,所以助动词用过去式did.
5.去掉into.考查介词.entered本身就表示所以不需要into.
y﹣﹣﹣f
antastic.考查派生词.做定语,修饰名词way,用形容词fantastic,表示极好的
﹣﹣﹣few.考查单词辨析.修饰可数名词words,用few.
﹣﹣﹣as.考查单词辨析.和the same连用, 引导从句I did用as.
后加
to.考查动词不定式.做refuse的宾语,用动词不定式,表示拒绝做某事所以refuse
后加
to.
10. they﹣﹣﹣you.考查代词一致.根据后句 as in the long
run you will find it helpful.可知本句
的主语应该是you.
6答案及解析：
答案：
anwatch
basic life skill—cooking. At first, I just what
my
awatched
were
mum did, and then I
tried. However, cooking not so easy. Sometimes
when I cooked eggs.
was
it
I even
burned. Fortunately, whenever I did something
wrong, Mum would be encourage
them
Last
summer, I learned
me.
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Now I can cook simple dishes,
depend
but
help my Mum with other
housework as well. I needn’t
and
atproudly
my parents as much as
before. I am that I can do something to
onuponproud
parent
?
be a good child
at home. for their love. I've got to know
how
to
parents
thank my
解析：
1.第一句an→a考査冠词。basic第一个音素为辅音音素,故应为不定冠词a。
2.
第二句watch→watched考査动词的时态。此处回忆去年夏天发生的事情,故应为一般过去
时
。
3.
第三句were→was考査主谓一致。主语为cooking,动词应为第三人称单数形式。
4.
第四句it→them考查代词。此处指代eggs,故应用them代替。
5. 第五句去掉be
Mum是encourage动作的执行者,故此处be多余。
6.
第六句but→and考査连词。此处两个谓语动词为并列而非转折关系。
7.
第七句at→onupon考査介词。depend onupon依靠。
8.
第八句proudly→proud 考査形容词。此处作表语,应用形容词形式?
9.
第八句parent→parents考査名词的单复数。此处指父母,故应为复数形式。
10.
第九句how后加to考査非谓语动词。此处为“疑问词+动词不定式”结构。
7答案及解析：
答案：
When I was very young, I
stayed at my hometown with my grandma. She
She
likes to grow vegetables
was
a diligent
woman.
is
orhouseworks
takes care of
all the . Though my parents often
andhousework
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ask her to quit the work, my grandma never
listin
. She takes that she does as her
great joy. I
listins
understand her because
I see her smile and satisfied with life. Several
months
before
, my father
ago
bought
for her a new smartphone. And during the Spring
Festival, I instructed her on how
email and
use the Internet. Aside from emailing, she thinks
it feels
grandchildren on WeChat.
?
to
greatly
their
to talk to
grea
t
her
解析：本文为记叙文。文中介绍了作者的奶奶辛勤操劳,笑对生活,她还学会了使用智
能手机
上网发邮件和使用微信跟孙辈们聊天。
第1处,考查时态。根据上下文语境可知,本文用一般现在时。故将was改为is。
第2处,考查并列连词。根据上下文可知,此处为并列关系,故将or改为and。
第3处,
考查不可数名词。housework为不可数名词,故将houseworks改为housework。 <
br>第4处,考查主谓一致。主语为第三人称单数,谓语用一般现在时态,故将listen改为listen
s。
第5处,考查宾语从句。分析句子结构可知,宾语从句中she
doos缺少宾语成分,而that引导名
词性从句时无此功能,故将that改为what。
第6处,考查时间副词用法。表示·“从现在起若干时间以前”,常与动词一般过去式连用,用ago,
故将before改为ago。
第7处,考查动词短语搭配。buy’sb,sth.为固定说法,
“为某人买…”,buy后跟双宾语结构,故介词
for多余,应去掉。
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第8处,考查非谓语动词。此处应用“疑问词·十不定式”结构作宾语,故在how后加to。
第9处,考查形容词作表语。根据其前动词feel可知,此句为“主系表”结构,故应用形容词形式
作表语,将greatly改为great。
第10处,考查形容词性物主代词。根据上下文语义可知
,此处是指“奶奶的孙子们”,故将their
改为her。
8答案及解析：
答案： Two weeks ago, my best
friend John got an expensive smart phone as his
birthday
$$
to everyone in my class
proud
. I really envied him and every day I
present. He showed
it
proudly
ask
my
mum to buy me an expensive present. However, to my
disappointment, I only got a
asked
atSo
second-hand bike that
special day.
one day while I was riding my
“dear” bike back
onBut
that
home from
school, I passed the shop my mum worked. I saw a
familiar figure kneeling
where
down in the
front of it
cleaned
the outside steps of
the shop. It was my mum! She worked so
cleaning
harder
Tear
to raise me! in
my eyes, I got off the bike and worked together
with her.
Tears
hard
解析：
①
考查代词动词show是及物动词,后应接宾语.此处为了避免重复, 用it代替上文中提到的
an
expensive watch.
②
考查副词副词修饰动同,故将proud改为proudly.
③
考查动词的时态文章讲述的是上个月发生的事情,故应使用一般过去时,将ask改为asked.
④
考査介词:在某一天,用介词on
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⑤ 考查连词上下句之间存在转折关系,故应将So改为But。
⑥
考查定语从句先行词为the shop.定语从句中缺地点状语,故应用关系副词where引导定语
从句.where在从句中作地点状语。
⑦ 考查冠词此处指在商店外面的前面.故将the去掉
⑧ 考查非谓语动词:a familiar figure与clean之间为逻辑上的主动关系,
故应将cleaned改为
现在分词cleaning作伴随状语。
⑨ 考查副词意:为了抚
养我,妈妈那么辛苦地工作着。此处没有比较的含义,故应将harder改
为hard。
⑩
考查名词名词“眼泪”常用复数形式。
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