话题 5 如何用英语描写学校生活(同名21372)

话题 5 如何用英语描写学校生活 School life

必走三步
假如你校与美国某中学是姊妹学校，美方中学的校刊来信要了解你校学生课 外活动的情
况。下而是根据美方的要求经问卷调查后所列的表格。请你以 Out-of-Class Activities in Our
school 为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍有关情况。
课外活动时间
每天一节
4:00 ～ 4:50 p.m．
活动项目
体育、阅读、歌舞、
兴趣小组
最受欢迎的项目 希望与建议
体育比赛、歌咏比赛、增加课外活动时间，
演讲比赛、计算机 减少作业量，多组织
参观，以了解社会
第一步：认真审题，提炼要点
一审格式：根据这一写作要求应用记叙文体。
二审结构：日常情况介绍要用一般现在时。
三审要点：用英语思维，理出写作要点。
one period of Out-of-Class Activities the best popular activities
sports，reading，singing，dancing，drawing and interest groups
organize to visit know more about society
第二步：紧扣主题，扩点成句
There is one period of Out-of-Class Activities in our school every day．
It is held from 4:00 ～ 4:50 p.m．
The activities include sports，reading，singing，dancing，drawing and interest groups．
Among them the best popular activities are sports matches，singing，speech contests and
computer．
We hope that we'll have more time for our Out-of-Class Activities and less homework．
第三步：补充修改，连句成篇
Out-of-Class Activities in Our School
There is one period of Out-of- Class Activities in our school every day．It is held from
4:00 ～ 4:50 p.m．The activities include sports，reading，singing，dancing，drawing and interest
groups．Among them the best popular activities are sports matches，singing，speech contests and
computer．We hope that we'll have more time for Out-of-Class Activities and less homework．We
also hope that our school Will organize us more visits in order that we can know more about our
society．

满分作文——满分议论文一
目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊的现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标
题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。
内容要点如下：
注意：1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2．短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3．词数：100 左右；
4．参考词汇：作弊 cheat (v．)。

考试偏多、偏难
主要原因 不用功、懒惰
取悦父母、老师
作弊不对，违反校规
个人看法 要诚实，努力学习
其他看法
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to all that some students cheat in examinations at school．_____________
_____________________ _________________________________________________
范文：
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school．
As students，we often take examinations at school，but sometimes we have too many
examinations which are too difficult for us．On the other hand，some of us are lazy and don't work
hard at their lessons．So when taking examinations，they sometimes cheat in order to get better
results to please their parents and teachers．
In my opinion，it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools．We
students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in
examinations．What's more，we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for
examinations．
点评
层次分明，说理透彻。时态把握得很好，连接词语运用得恰到好处，“on the other hand”，
“in my opinion”．“What's more”等，使文章朗朗上口。

必做练习
假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情况，
主要内容如下：
1．描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情；
2．介绍你处理该事的方式；
3．谈谈你的感想。
注意：1．词数不少于 120 个；
2．可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不得现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。
(2009 年高考湖南卷)
答案：
Dear Zhang Hua，
Here，I have not received any mail from you for a long while since we departed in the
Normal School．How are you getting along with your work? September the first was very
remarkable to me and it will be surely be unforgettable in my life．As the first lecture of my
teaching career，I was really a little nervous although I prepared the lesson for several days．When
I turned around to the chalkboard to write something，a bird suddenly flew into my classroom．All
the pupils were shouting and a tall boy was so smart as to catch the bird．The boy gave the bird to
me and asked me what the bird is．I told them it was a sparrow and it was very common
here．Some pupils suggested killing the bird for food，but others were against it and they thought