mistake的用法通讯 科技发展带来的利弊及影响 英语情景作文

2020年11月25日发(作者：姚月华)

关于科技，通讯发展，及带来的影响，利弊分析
With the science and technology highly developing , many aspects ,especially in the way of
communication, have changed beyond our imagination., we people nowadays prefer to choose
more convenient and popular way to contact with others. some changes can be obviously seen
around us that people use mobile phone instead of writing letters and public telephone, besides,
computers, as we all know, play an important role ,without which we may still impatiently wait
the letters coming to us. When searching for something, we would like to use computer owing to
it’s entirety and speediness. what’s more,3G mobile phone known to us has came into our daily
life with it’s various and popular functions, making it possible that people can enjoy movie,
sending and receiving email as well as reading and listening in the mobile phone. Those all
allow us to enjoy more entertainment and save much time .Furthermore , if we each spare on effort
to learn more knowledge and improve our practical skills, our society would be in a higher level.
However, high tech as it is , some problems also appear in succession other than it’s advantages.,
people may depend too much on computer and other new technology ,which creates a common
phenomemon that people spent less time talking with their friends face to face, this in the long run
is bad for their friendship, worse still, it can result in obesity as people mostly sit on a chair or lie
in bed. Meanwhile, the high tech such as mobile phone can bring much radiation that is also bad
for our health. Due to above condition, we should make full use of the tech ,but remember you
health!




作文句式及结构解析
With the science and technology highly developing , （with 伴随结构，独立主格用法，develop
与science为主动关系，因此用ing 形式。）many aspects ,especially in the way of
communication,插入结构 have changed beyond our imagination., we people （people做we的
同位语），nowadays prefer to choose more convenient and popular way to contact with others.
some changes can be obviously seen around us that people use mobile phone instead of writing
letters and public telephone, （该句为同位语从句修饰名词change, can be seen为被动语态用
法） besides, computers, as we all know, （as引导的定于从句做插入语）play an important
role ,without which we may still impatiently wait the letters coming to us.（ 介词without加关系
代词which引导定语从句，其中做现在 分词作定语修饰letters,为主动关系。）When searching
for something , （英语语法中省略现象，在时间状语从句中，如果从句主语和主句一致，且
从 句中有be动词,可以省去从句的主语和be 动词）.we would like to use computer owing to it’s
entirety and speediness. what’s more,3G mobile phone known to us has (known 过去分词作定语
修饰phone)came into our daily life with it’s various and popular functions, making it possible that