英语小短文(多篇)

2020年12月4日发(作者：温附山)
同学们，你一定有很多的爱好，请你写一个你的爱好，字数不少于60个单
词。
My hobby
My hobby is collecting stamps(集邮). There are many stamps in my room. I
like stamps very much. There are many things on the stamps. They are colorful and
beautiful. After school I usually go to the post office and there are many people there.
I learn a lot from collecting stamps. I like collecting stamps very much.


My Favourite Food
Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It
looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is?
Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small
lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum.
Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
How about you? What’s your favourite food?
【要领点评】
My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己
最喜欢的每一种 食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、
没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一 些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。


请写一个你最喜爱的季节，要写出你喜欢的原因。
My favorite season
My favorite season is summer. It’s hot in summer. There is a summer vacation
in summer. I don’t go to school. I think many children like this season, because they
can eat ice-cream and go swimming. I can go swimming. Sometimes I go to the beach
with my parents. Sometimes I go to the swimming pool with my friends. I usually
visit many places in summer vacation.

描写一种你最喜爱的动物，要对它进行外形描写。
My Favorite Animal
My favorite animal is rabbit. Its name is Sweet. Sweet has long ears. It’s very
small. It’s white. It has a short tail. It has red eyes. It likes eating carrots. It likes
jumping. It goes jumping three times a day. I like it very much. It’s lovely. It’s my
best friend. I like the rabbit.


My Seasons
We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season.
In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when it’s wind. And I can go
hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the
north of China, but it’s not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy
and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I
can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, it’s
often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can
play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite
season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇短 文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更
替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征， 之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有
代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最 喜欢的季节。在实
际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去
讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：
秋天的田地里一片金 黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。
时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯 常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用
一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何， 我们可以
做什么。
注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所 以要
写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要
正确，在写 作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者
不可以同时出现。词量要控制在 80个词以内。

【要领点评】
写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上， 是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更
替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或 比较有
代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实
际的写作 的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去
讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一 下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：
秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的 四季更贴近实际。
时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用< br>一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以
做什么。
注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所以要
写明季节，季节天气， 季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要
正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了 “因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者
不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。


Li Ying ’s Hobby
Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every
morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV
only on Saturday evening.
Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her
parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her
hobbies make her happy.
【要领点评】
这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体 写到刘
莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗
线条地 勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。
小朋友们写这种“叙事写人” 作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；
二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长 ，另处在行文中使用一些
问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如
上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her
happy.”就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。


My hobby


I am Cindy. I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I am in
Class 9, Grade 6. I am tall and thin. I live in Dali. I have many good
friends. I often play with them.

I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading
books. But I like to read books the best. Because of reading books is good
for my study. I also like riding bikes. Because of it does a lot of good to
my body.

What’s your hobby? Can you tell me?


I often go to Zhongshan Park. In the park you can see many trees and
flowers. Some flowers are red, and some are purple. The trees are big and
tall. You can see a hill in the park, too. At the foot of the hill, there are
several paths.
A lot of people in my city like going to the park. Some young
people like taking a walk there. Some old people like singing there. Some
children like dancing or playing games there.
Zhongshan park is really a good place for relaxation
.

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生单词：
1. several:几个
2. relaxation:放松
中
点评：陈祖新小朋友 的这篇作文简单明了。首先，作者向大家简单地
描绘出了公园的风景：有山有水有花。然后，作者写了人 们在公园里
的活动：青年人在公园里散步，老年人在公园里唱歌，小孩子在公园
里玩游戏，多么 快乐的一组画面啊！最后，作者作出总结：中山公园
真的是一个放松心情的好地方！


短文写作。根据给出的提示和要求，写一篇65个单词左右的英语短文。
要求：A写一封介绍你一家的电子邮件给Jay
Hello, Jay,
I am very happy to be your net friend. There are four people in my family.
They are my parents, my sister and I. My father is the oldest and the tallest. He can
drive a car. He is a doctor. My mother is a factory worker. She works hard. My sister
is a student. She is the best in her class. My hobby is playing basketball. My sister and
I go to school on foot. I have a happy family. What about you?
Bye- bye，
Benson

Shopping in Xia Jiu Road

Saturday，March 4th Sunny

“What a beautiful day! The sky is blue and the clouds are white.” Said
my mother. “Yes. Let’s go to Xia Jiu Road.” Said my father. I was really
happy and I jumped very high.

Xia Jiu Road is more famous than the other shopping centers, because
everyone says “Xia Jiu Road is the shopping world.” I saw a clothes shop
over there, and I said to my parents, “Mum, Dad, let’s go in!” Mum and
Dad looked me and said, “You are really a child.” I was really perky(神气
的) and said “OK. Let’s just go in !” I bought a lot of beautiful clothes.
My parents were unhappy. I pat on their shoulders and said, “Don’t be
angry, because everyone says ‘Fine clothes make the man’, isn’t it?” My
parents said together, “No, it isn’t. But we all love you. ” We laughed
together and my parents were happy again.

Today I was very happy, because I bought a lot of clothes and had a good
time. I don’t think “You can’t eat the cake and have it”is right.


A letter to my mother

Dec. 7th
Dear mother,

I have been good at school. I often think of you when I go to bed because
we always go for a walk before go to bed at home. So I miss you
everyday. Do you miss me? Why don’t you call me? I’ve got a lot of
things to tell you. One of the things is about foreign teacher’s daughter.
Her name’s Skyler. She lives in Canada. She comes to our class to learn
Chinese and English with me in my class. This afternoon, when it was art
and craft class, our class were cleaning the gymnasium. And she did it
with us too. So I usually talk to her when she doesn’t know what to do?
But when the class is over, I always haven’t got enough time to talk to her.
And I usually can’t find her. So we don’t have time to introduce to each
other. But it is the first time that I have a foreign student. So I’m very
happy! Mum, you often tell me, “If you are happy, I’ll be happy, too.” So
you have to be happy, because I’m happy! I like you when you are happy!

In the end I wish you everything is just fine!


A Post Card from John
Dear Sarah,
This post card shows you a picture from my holiday. We got Kunming on
Wednesday. On the first day we visited Stone Forest. It’s very beautiful. I love it very
much. On Thursday Kathy and I got lost in the city. We asked a policeman for help.
He helped us find the hotel. On Friday we went to a small village. We saw folk
dances and ate some fresh vegetables from the farm. We enjoyed ourselves. Last day
we went shopping ane bought some presents for friends. Tomorrow we will be back
home.

John

【要领点评】
写法：这是一封明信片，按照时间顺序记叙了 约翰假期去昆明度假这几天的活动。
分别记叙了游览石林，迷路，看民族舞，购物，买礼物等活动。
时态：这篇文章由于是记叙已经发过的事，所以大部分可以采用一般过去时来写。
句型：主语+动词过去式+其他。
注意：描述已经发生过的事要用一般过去时，在写这篇文章 的时候要注意动词的
过去式的变化，尤其是动词过去式的不规则变化。没发生过的事要用一般将来时。