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2020-12-15 17:57
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2020年12月15日发(作者:柯以柔)
gre作文3分


【篇一:gre写作满分作文】

gre写作满分作文赏析

gre作文是中国考生复习的难点,为了帮助广大gre考生提高 写作
成绩,新通小编跟大家分享了一篇gre满分范文,希望大家能从中
得到启示,提高自己的 gre写作水平。

题目:

the following appeared in a memo from the vice president of a
company that builds shopping malls throughout the country:

the surface of a section of route 101, paved two years ago by
good intentions roadways, is now badly cracked and marred
by dangerous potholes. in another part of the state, a section
of route 40, paved by appian roadways more than four years
ago, is still in good condition. appian roadways has recently
purchased state-of-the-art paving machinery, and it has hired a
new quality- control manager. because of its superior work and
commitment to quality, we should contract with appian
roadways rather than good intentions roadways to construct
the access roads for all our new shopping malls.

满分范文:

the vice president of a company that builds shopping malls
argues here that the company should hire appian rather than
good intentions to build access roads for the company. to
support this argument the vice president points out that a
certain area of route 101 that good intentions repaved two
years ago has deteriorated significantly, while a certain stretch
of route 40 that appian repaved four years ago remains in good
condition. the vice president also points out that appian
recently acquired new state-of-the-art paving equipment and
hired a new quality-control manager. the argument seems very
convincing at first but does, in fact, require a closer look.

first of all, it is unfair to conclude, based solely on the c

omparison between the two stretches of highway, that appian
does better work than good intentions. the conclusion relies
on the assumption that the comparative quality of two
contractors work, rather than some other phenomenon, was
responsible for the comparative condition of the two stretches
of pavement. perhaps the stretch that good intentions repaved
is located in an area whose extremes in climate or high traffic
volume serve to erode and damage pavement very quickly. for
that matter, perhaps soil or other geological conditions in that
area were primarily responsible for deterioration of the
pavement along that stretch. in short, without showing that all
other conditions in the

two areas have been essentially the same, the vice president
should not make a determination about the quality of work.

secondly, it is unfair to conclude based on appians recent
equipment acquisition and personnel decision that appian will
do a better job than good intentions. perhaps good intentions
has also acquired the same type of equipment. moreover,
perhaps good intentions’ quality-control manager is far more
experienced than appians new manager, and as a result good
intentions’ product is likely to be better than appians. besides,
equipment and on-site management are only two of many
factors affecting the quality of work. there are more factors to
consider: the experience and competence of other workers,
paving material used and so on. without showing that the two
firms are similar in these and other respects, the vice president
cannot justify his recommendation of appian over good
intentions.

finally, the vice presidents recommendation rests on the
unlikely assumption that the company has only two
alternatives—good intentions and appian. in all likelihood
there are many more competitors, some of whom might be
able to offer more competitively priced products of equal or
greater quality. so, in this argument, the recommendation isn’t
just over good intentions but over all other companies.

in sum, the vice president has not convincingly argued that
the company should hire appian. to strengthen the argument
the vice president must provide clear evidence linking quality
of work to each company. the vice president must also provide
better evidence that appians new equipment and new manager
will enhance, or at least maintain, the quality of appians overall
work at a higher level than good intentions’ overall work.
finally, to better assess the argument an audience would need
to know what other paving contractors the company could hire,
the quality of those contractors work and the overall cost in
comparison to the two companies mentioned above.

【篇二:新gre作文常见模板整理】


新gre作文常见模板整理

要想在短期内快速提高gre作文成绩, 记一些作文模板无疑是最快
捷,高效的一种方法,下面是gre作文中开头,正文,结尾的一些
经典句型模板。希望对考生备考有所帮助。

新gre argument作文句型

开头

in this analysis, the arguer claims that …should …to
substantiate the conclusion, the arguer cites the example
of …where …in addition, the arguer assumes that …this
argument is unconvincing for several critical flaws.

正文:

for instance …since …what’s more …etc.

and how well it represented the public opinions..

the sample of the survey is not representative.

(样本太小)

the sample is too small to...

(光数字没比例)

the ratio of four to six

there is only figures but no proportion of the survey 还是ratio?

insufficient sample

if the [respondents] only stand for a tiny proportion of the
whole [group], we should not be so sure about the conclusion
that [the whole group…]

the arguer commits a fallacy of hasty generalization.

it was only carried out in sun city, but the arguer applies its
result to all the company’s markets while doesn’t show us
whether sun city is a representative market of the whole
markets.有的病人会对抗生素过敏

the arguer commits a fallacy of hasty generalization. even if
the maintenance of the airline has been improved as a result of
sending its mechanics to the seminar, which is, of course, an
unwarranted assumption, it does not follow that就算怎样,也不
怎样

the survey is based on two isolated examples. the arguer
should survey more hospitals of both types.

循环假设

the arguer commits a fallacy of begging the question in
assuming that …

结尾:

other possible causes of the …

to conclude, this argument is not persuasive as it stands.

【篇三:新gre作文 argument 自创模版】


gre argument 模版

gre argument 作文大概可分为三个部分:开头、正文、结尾。对于
不同的写作 要求,只需要在开头和结尾适当呼应即可。

argument中常用词可用同义词代替,避免重复。下面是高频词的
叙词表:


claimviewassumptionassertionconclusionargument resultc
onjecturepredictionverdictrecommendatio n


datademonstrationtestimonyevidencep roofinformationconf
irmationcorroboration applicantspeakerxxxarguerauthor
possibilityexplanation scenarioreason

开头

a, e, q对应三种写作要求——assumptionevidenceque stion,可
参见张雷东讲义或者《gre写作思路剖析》

说明:黄色高亮是根据材料补充的内容,绿色高亮表示上一句可以用
下一句同等替换。 a

带concession结构

by citing that [evidence], this argument concludes that
[conclusion]. though [concession]or though this argument
might seem reasonable at first glance, it relies on a series of
assumptionsconjectures that [evidence]. since these
assumptions are not well supported, the conclusion reached is
unpersuasive as it stands.

e

in the argument, xxx asserts that [conclusion]. to support his
her argument, the speakerapplicant points out that [evidence].
however, close scrutiny of the evidences reveals that it
accomplishes little toward supporting the xxx’s view. beyond
this datademonstrationtestimony, more specific evidence
would, however, be still in great need in solidifying the
projected result.

q

this argument is intended to point out that [conclusion]. this
predictionassertion seems strengthened by [evidence]. he or
she also sites evidence demonstration testimony that

[evidence]. these supporting evidences, however, lends little
credible support to the arguer’s claim, for answers to several
questions should be further clarified.

正文

推理错误flaws in the reasoning line

通用格式 列举他因、错误类比、草率推广

even if [concession], the argument rests on further
assumption that [fallacy]. yet this need not be the case for a
variety of possible reasons. or however this will not
necessarily be the case. perhaps [example]. or perhaps
[example]. unless the author can rule out such
possibilitiesexplanationsscenariosreasons, orin short,
without ruling out other alternative reasons, the author cannot
justifiably conclude thatrely on [conclusion].

finally, even if granted that the author can substantiate the
foregoing assumptions, it is too hasty to conclude that
[fallacy]. in relying on the lack of solidrobust evidence, the
speaker overlooks the possibility that [example]. it is
entirelyequally possible that [example]. if so, the author must
solidify the prediction accordingly. 充分性、因果关系、列举他因
the author’s position taken from the assumed prediction that
[fallacy] preclude the possibility that [example]. yet the author
fails to provide assurances that no other means to achieve the
predicteddesired result. nor does the author provide clear
evidence that [example]. or useful would be any information
about the likelihood that [example]. lacking such evidence the
author cannot reasonable conclude [conclusion].

错误类比、列举他因

yet another problem with the argument involves xxx’s implicit
claim that [conclusion]. or the implication the author hints here
is that [conclusion]. this claim relies on the unlikely
assumption that [fallacy]. or in order to reasonably conclude
that [conclusion], xxx must assume that [fallacy]. nevertheless,
there is no guarantee that it is necessarily the case. ([evidence]
are not the only factor affecting [conclusion].列举他因时使用)
other (such) factors might include [example]. furthermore, the
author does not provide any information about [example]. thus
regardless of such evidence or with no consideration about
such evidence, the speaker cannot justify the conclusion that
[conclusion].

此段是conclusion + fallacy双结构

这种结构不仅提供了concession,还可用于“为了得出某某结论
(conclusion),作者必须假设xx (fallacy)”的逻辑论述

逻辑顺序是:结论 + fallacy + 原因 + 例子

时效性、参数恒定

the final questions with the argument involve the experimental
process. the experiment’s results are reliable only if all other
factor that might affect [conclusion] remained constant during
[time], and if the results of experimental subjects is
statistically significant. yet the author fails to provide
assurances that no other factors that would influence the
conclusion. without evidence of the experiment’s
methodological and statistical reliability, the speaker’s
conclusion is unjustifiable. for additional support the author
points out that [fallacy]. however, historical changes

should not be abbreviated in this judgment. [example]. only if
all other factors affecting the assertion were essentially the
same for [time] could the article rely on this assumption to
support its claim.

样本问题flaws in sample

样本数量、样本质量

additionally, the reliability of the author’s study rests on its
statistical integrity. the argument fails to indicate that [example]
(what portion the [example] is), the smaller this portion, the
less reliable the results).moreover, it is equally likely that
[example]. since (the amount of样本数量时加上) applicants has
not adequately responded to this concern, the claim that
[conclusion] is untenable.

样本质量

to begin with, the author provides no assurances that the
survey on which the argument depends is statistically reliable.
unless the survey’s respondents are representative of the
overall xxx, the author cannot rely on it to predict [conclusion].
for all we know a significant percentage of the respondents
was [example]. for this matter, the assumption that
respondents are typical of xxx is unjustified.

conclusion + fallacy双结构

特殊格式

三段带example的conclusion短文,,适用于短小论证片段 in
short, with no data [example], the speaker cannot confidently
identify what caused the subjects to [conclusion]. it is
impossible to conclude with any confidence that
[conclusion]without comparingconsidering [example]. with no
consideration about [example], the speaker cannot justify the
conclusion that

[conclusion].

定义攻击 a threshold problem involves the definition of a
critical term: [wrong definition]. if by xxx, the author simply
means: [correct definition], then the claim would have merit,
otherwise, it would not. absent either a clear definition of the
term or clear evidence that [assumption], it is impossible to
assess the strength of the argument.

结尾

in summary,the recommendation relies on certain doubtful
assumptions that render it unconvincing as it stands. to
bolster the recommendation, xxx must provide clear evidence
that [suggestion].the speaker must rule out the possibility that
[suggestion]. if the arguer could substantiate the critical
assumptionquestion that [suggestion], the conclusion would
be better supported.

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