小鱼的理想读后续写细节练

2021年1月4日发(作者：尤渤)
“感到害怕”的细节描述
例子一：当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很
害怕。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思
表达清楚。

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2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描
述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
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参考答案：

the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt very
scared.

2. 1）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt so
scared that my throat tightened and my knees
felt weak. (嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)

2）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I froze
with terror, too scared to move an inch.(吓呆
了，不敢动弹)

3）At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was
seized by a strong sense of horror and my
palms were sweating. (被深深地恐惧感所控
制，手心出汗)





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“感到兴奋”的细节描述
当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思
表达清楚。
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2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描
述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。

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参考答案：

the host announced that she won the
prize, she felt thrilled.

2. 1) When the host announced that she won
the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.
（激动得两眼放光）

2) When the host announced that she won
the prize, her heart was thumping with
excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳)

3) When the host announced that she won
the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her.
(兴奋不能自已)






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“感到悲伤”的细节描述
一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思
表达清楚。

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2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描
述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
1____________________________________
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3____________ ________________________











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参考答案：

1. Upon hearing the bad news, she felt
extremely sad.

2. 1）Upon hearing the bad news, her heart
ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (心
痛，眼泪直流)

2）Upon hearing the bad news, she, numb
with grief, had trouble speaking. (悲伤到失去
知觉，不能开口说话)

3）Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized
by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying
bitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣)






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“感到开心”的细节描述
当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思
表达清楚。
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2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描
述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
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参考答案：

his mother kissed him on the cheek,
the baby was happydelightedfull of joy.



2.1) When his mother kissed him on the cheek,
it seemed as if the baby were on top of the
world. (非常开心)

2) When the mother kissed the baby on the
cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit
up the room. (眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)

3) When the mother kissed the baby on the
cheek, his eyes danced with joy and
sweetness. (欢欣雀跃)




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感到羞愧的细节描述
她感到非常羞愧。

1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思
表达清楚。
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2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描
述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
1_ ___________________________________
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2__________________ __________________
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3___________________________________ _
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参考答案：
Key 1: She felt ashamed.
Key 2:

1) She felt so ashamed that she could feel her
face burning.(脸上滚烫)

2) So ashamed was she that she could feel the
blood rush to her face. (血液涌上脸颊)

3) So ashamed did she feel that she was close
to tears. (快哭了)










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“感到生气”的细节描述
Sheldon感到非常生气。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思
表达清楚。
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2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描
述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。
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参考答案：

Key 1: Sheldon felt very angry.
Key 2:

1) Sheldon felt so angry that he stormed out
of the room, slamming the door furiously
behind him. (冲出房间；狠狠摔门)

2) Boiling with rage, Sheldon shook his fist at
me.(怒火中烧；挥舞拳头)

3) Filled with fury, Sheldon was unable to
utter a single word. (充满愤怒；说不出话)







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“感到绝望”的细节描述
Tony感到很绝望。
1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思
表达清楚。
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2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描
述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。

1____________________________________
2___ _________________________________
3____________ ________________________










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参考答案：

Key 1: Tony felt hopelessdesperate.
Key 2:

1) As the result of an accident, Tony was
suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and
sank into hopelessness. (被投入黑暗之中；陷
入绝望)
2) Tony felt left out and was getting desperate
with loneliness. (感觉被遗忘、忽视)
3) Tony's beliefs in looking forward and seeing
the positive in everything deserted him.









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“人的行走之态”细节描述


1、踉踉跄跄
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2、悄悄地走
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3、猛冲
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Keys:

1. The player lost his balance, staggered back
and toppled over. 这个运动员失去了平衡，
向后趔趄摔倒了。

2. She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the
window. 她溜下床，踮起脚尖走向窗户。3.
The minion made a rush for the door and
escaped from the scene. 小黄人向门冲去，
逃离了现场。


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说话的方式多种多样 ，如果都用talk就显得
索然无味，也不够准确，所以要多积累各种
各样的表达。
1、说长道短；八卦
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2、小声咕哝
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3、嚎叫
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Keys:

1. The whole company is gossiping about the
reason for his dismissal. 整个公司都在谈论
他被免职的原因。

2. He murmured against the strict rules of the
reality show. 他私下低声抱怨真人秀的严苛
规则。

3. Treated so unfairly, she howled in pain and
anger. 被如此不公正地对待，她痛苦而又愤
怒的嚎叫。
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细节描述之“思考” 如何表达一个人暗自思索时的样子对学生
来说是很困难的，大多数情况下，学生往往
会选择 避开，但是，人无时无刻不在思考，
强行避开会使得故事内容上有些不衔接。所
以，今天我们就 一起来学习一下如何表达一
个人的思考神态。
1. 得知问题所在之后，他的大脑开始急速运
转，想要想出一个好的解决方案。
2. 独自一人时，他总是会想到那可怕的经
历。
3. 在他洗澡时，突然想到了一个好主意。



(答案见底部)






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Keys:

1. After he knew what the problem was, his
mind began to race, trying to think of a good
solution. (大脑飞速运转)
2. When left alone, he would always be
haunted by that horrible experience. ([不好的
回忆]萦绕心头挥之不去)
3. When he was taking a shower, a brilliant
idea suddenly crossed his mind. (突然闪过某
人的脑海)










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细节描述之“describe a peaceful scene”
1. 享受阳光

2. 山间有小屋和田地

3. 入暮时分，芦苇随风飘扬

(答案见底部)
Keys:

1. When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt
like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every
inch of my skin. (沐浴在阳光下；琥珀色的阳
光亲吻着全身的肌肤)
2. Mist- covered mountains were dotted with
small farms and villages. (点缀着)
3. The sound of my footsteps was
accompanied only by the gracefully waving
reeds. (优雅地随风飘扬的芦苇)


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细节描述之“describe stormy weather”
今天，我们来看看该如何描述风雨交加的天
气。
1. 乌云密布

2. 劲风恶浪肆虐

3. 暴雨疾风
(答案见底部)
Keys:

1. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy
clouds.(乌云密布；黑云压顶)

2. On that dark and stormy night, the waves
were crashing and the winds were howling.
(海浪肆意拍打；劲风咆哮)

3. The rain came pouring down, the streams
rose, and the winds blew and beat against the
house. (暴风骤雨)
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