英语人物最新中考英语书面表达-知识点归纳与练习经典

2021年1月6日发(作者：阮玉芬)
最新中考英语书面表达-知识点归纳与练习经典

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）
1
．假如你是班长李华，今天你们班对即 将到来的暑假计划进行了讨论。你们班的外教
David
对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息，给
David
写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况及
你自己本人的计划及原因。

比例

50%

30%

20%

你的计划

计划


去国内外旅游


多读一些书


参加社会实践

?
（至少一个）

原因

1.
放松
;2.
欣赏美景

1.
增长知识；
2.
培养兴趣

1.
锻炼自己
;2.
结识朋友

？（请你补充）



注意：

（
1
）邮件应包含所有要点

（
2
）词数
80
个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；

（
3
）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分

注：社会实践
social practice activities

Dear David

I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.

____ __________________________________________________ _________________________
_____________________ __________________________________________________ ________
______________________________________ _________________________________________
_____ __________________________________________________ ________________________

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【答案】
Dear David

I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion today.

The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of
the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful
scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can
increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them
plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new
friends.

I'm going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get
good experience from these activities.

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如
how to do
，
spend a
meaningful summer vacation
，
half of
，
plan to do
，
travel at home and abroad
，
enjoy the
beautiful scenery
，
take part in
，
social practice activities
，
make new friends
等。而非谓语动
词结构
The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./
Reading books can make people smart and develop interests.
和宾语从句
They believe that
reading can increase knowledge.
的运用，丰富了短文内容 ，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。
在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用， 使文章表达更有逻
辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既 不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
后展开思维，考查运用所学英 语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可 能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得
到较高的分数。


2
．书面表达

在本周班会课上，同学们对
“
初中生什么时 候放学比较合适？
”
这一问题进行了热烈的讨
论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在
5
点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一
篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点 。

Time to leave school

·at 5 o’clock

·at 4:45

·at 5 o’clock

·...

Activities to do after school

·exercise to keep healthy and read books

·do what we want, such as listening to music

·take a part-time job

·...


注意：（
1
）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；

（
2
）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

（
3
）词数：
80-100
；

（
4
）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。

短文开头：
“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have
held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.

________________ __________________________________________________ _____________
____________

____________ __________________________________________________ _________________
____________

【答案】
“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a
class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.

Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to
keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.

Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do
what they want to do, such as listening to music.

A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs,
such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.

I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw
some pictures I like.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如
hold a class meeting
，
talk
about
，
the result of
，
keep healthy
，
after school
，
have more time to do
，
want to do
，
such
as
，
listen to music
，
in favor of
，
clean the room
，
play tennis
等。而复杂并列结构
They can
exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.
和
Most students think
that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leave
school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to
music.
等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时
Most students
think…/ Some think…/ A few think…
使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总
结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当 引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有
条理。

【点睛】

书面表 达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
后展开思维，考查运用 所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式 ，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得
到较高的分数。


3
．书面表达

某英文报举办
“
家乡的变化
”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示，以
“The Changes in My
Homet own”
为题，用英语写一篇
100
词左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻译。

生活条件差，道路狭窄，房屋破旧。

过去

污染严重，垃圾遍地。

......
（适当发挥一至两点）

环境：政府采取措施来改善污染，城市变得越来越整洁。

生活：住房宽敞明亮；许多人搬进了新公寓。越来越多的人
现在

有自己的汽车；生活舒适。

交通：新的飞机场已投入使用多年。
be in use
（投入使用）；

旅游：每年有成千上万来自各地的游客。

将来

希望
……
（两点）


要求：
1.
短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2.
短文必须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；

3.
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Changes my hometown

My hometown has changed a lot over the years.

In the past, ______ __________________________________________________ _______

__________________________________ _____________________________________________
_

_________________________________________ ______________________________________
________ __________________________________________________ _____________________
_________________________ __________________________________________________ ____
_____________________

【答案】
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.

In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small
and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the
government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner.
The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more
people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two
years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown
is becoming more and more beautiful.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以
The Changes in My Hometown
为题， 介绍一下自己的家乡这些年来发
生的变化。题目中用表格的形式，给我们对比的家乡的过去和现在，我们 应用正确的英语
将这些内容表达出来，并对将来提出两点希望。审题可知，作文的基本框架和大概内容都
有了，需要注意的是在描写过去的时候，需要适当发挥一到两点；还有对将来的希望也需
要学生 自己发挥。这两个地方需要学生们展开想象，合理发挥，注意要与文章的其他部分
能够很好的结合起来， 内容也要统一，符合题目要求，合情合理。表达时，需要注意英语
表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻 译表格中的语句，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰
当的词汇、短语和句型来表达。注意句式的多变，长短 句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句
穿插使用，提升文章的档次。语句之间注意使用适当的连接成分，使文 意连贯。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者按照题目要求，介绍了 自己的家乡这些年来的变化。文章
是按照时间的顺序，先介绍了家乡过去的面貌，这一部分使用了过去时 态，谓语动词都变
成了过去式，形式准确。然后是家乡现在的样子，这里主要以一般现在时态为主。最后 对
家乡的未来表达了自己的愿望。整篇文章内容充实、完整，叙述清晰、条理，结构合理。
文章 中语言得体，语句通顺，句式表达符合英语的习惯，语法规范、准确。短文里还使用
了一些较好的短语和 句型，如
In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were
very narrow.
、
Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city
becomes cleaner and cleaner
、
More and more people have their own cars and live a
comfortable life
、
There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.
等等。


4
．书面表达

每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物 品吧！请以
“A
（
n
）
_____ I
have”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意
义。

要求：
1.
请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字；

2.
文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称
;

3.
语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，
80
词左右。

A
（
n
）
_________ I have

__________________________________________________ _____________________________

____________ __________________________________________________ _________________

________________________ __________________________________________________ _____

____________________________________ ___________________________________________
________________________________________________ _______________________________

__________ __________________________________________________ ___________________

【答案】
A
（
n
）
toy gun I have

Everyone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.

In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some
small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun.
They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.

When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun.
One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then
and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A
week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it,
father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.

Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will
remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank
you, my dear father!

【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行 描述，并谈
谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表
达。

写作亮点：

这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如
a toy gun
wrapped by yellow cloth
（用黄布包着的玩具枪），这里用 到了过去分词作定语，作者还描
述了玩具枪的功能（
small plastic pills
），顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用
了时态。在描述得到的经历的时候不落俗套 ，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通
过努力工作为我赚钱买枪的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这 段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一
定的意义。最后玩具的意义得到了升华，表达了作者的期望（
I hope I can be a soldier
），
上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇 作文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的
范文。


5
．题目
②

“
持之以恒，方得始。
”
坚 持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持
之以恒的精神。

某英 文网站正在开展以
“
坚持
”
为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一 篇短文投
稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯
……
），你是怎样做的， 以及你的感
受。

提示词语：
keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud

提示问题：
1. What did you do?

2. How do you feel?

It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.

【答案】
It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept
running for three years.

When I was in Grade 7
，
I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often
failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates
，
I began to practice running
every day after mes
，
I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling
myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced
，
I tried my best to keep
I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and
I'm ready for any challenges in the future.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在 初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎
么做的并谈谈自己的感受。

【详解】

1.
本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做 的一件事，根据提示，描
写
“What did you do?
用一般过去时，描写
How do you feel?
用一般现在时。书写时要紧扣主
题，文句通顺。

2.
本 例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是
“
跑步
”
，正文部分详细地描写了自己 起初跑步
总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件
事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。

3.
本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的 短语和重点句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型
It's +adj+
for us +to do sth
、
love doing sth
、
keep doing
、
be good at
、
catch up with
、
be proud of
；不
定式
in order to
；
try my best to
；状语从句
so…that …
；比较级
do much better in …
、
feel
more confident
等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。