correct是什么意思2018年浙江英语高考作文

2021年1月7日发(作者：狄鲁曾)
第一篇 Cherie 老师
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order
to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into
another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told.
Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.
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We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to
our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we
should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to
be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling
but memorable experience it was!




第二篇：Katie 老师
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. I immediately grew fond of the furry rabbit and called out
excitedly, “Dad! Look!” Alarmed, the rabbit ran away in a flash. I followed it eagerly, hoping to catch it as my trophy for
the trip. My dad just followed me, knowing it was impossible to stop me. We tracked the rabbit for about ten minutes until
it got completely out of sight. Depressed and tired, I suggested going back. But apparently, we had diverged from
the track Uncle Paul warned us to keep. (86 words)
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The thought that we might have got lost in such darkness sent
shivers down my spine. Tears of fear and regret filled my eyes. Fortunately, Dad was not so panicked as I was. He kept
silent and listened very carefully as he took my horse rein and led the way. We had wandered for what seemed like ages
when suddenly a river came into sight. Hopefully, we could find our way back to the farm house if we followed the river.
Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper, but what an experience! It turns out there’s always a way out of any
plight as long as we stay calm. (114 words)




第三篇： Oz老师
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It was so quick that my horse was scared. The horse started to
neigh, shiver and gradually lose control. It suddenly ran to another direction away from the initial track Uncle Paul has
warned us to keep. My dad held the rope tightly in order to calm the horse down. However, it didn’t work. Our cowboy
hats were even lost while the horse was running wild and finally we fell down from the horse and the horse just ran away
leaving me and my dad lying on the ground.
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We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. My legs were hurt so that my dad had to carry me on the
back. “We get lost, right?” I asked my dad,“Yes. But don’t worry, we’ll find the way back home.” We slowly walked
towards the luminous direction. “I guess we’re late for supper.” Sensing my fear and concerns, my dad tried to make me
laugh. At that time, we saw the river in front of us. “Dad, this is the river next to our farm house. We can follow the river to
find our way home.” “Exactly! How clever you are!” Then we followed the river bank and finally our house came into
our sight. Reflecting on this memory, I regarded this experience as my special adventure with my dad.