心里难受浙江杭州市2016高考英语短文改错二轮基础演练(3)及答案分析

2021年1月7日发(作者：江嘉良)

浙江杭州市2016高考英语短文改错二轮基础演练（3）及答案

此题 要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾
(√ )；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Many people go to school education. School education is 1. ______
important and useful, but no one learn from everything 2. ______
at school. No matter how many you learn at school, it is 3. ______
limited. So much more is to be learned outside school by 4. ______
students themselves all their lives. It is always important to 5. ______
to know to learn something that to get a good exam result. 6. ______
many great scientists and statesmen didn’t get anything 7. ______
from school. For examples, Edison and Lincoln didn’t even 8. ______
made primary school. But they were so success that they 9. ______
made great contributions to mankind. They read a lot of 10. ______
and did thousands of experiments to test their ideas.
【参考答案】1.
1. to → for 2. 去掉from 3 many → much
4. √ 5. important → more important
6. to learn → how to learn 7. anything → everything
8. examples → example 9. success → successful 10. 去掉 of


短文改错 （共10 小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线（_），并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Alice,
I was delighted to receive your letter. Thank you on the English dictionary you bought it for me. I received it
this morning. There is no doubt which it is of great help to me. I’m deep grateful for your advice that I should pay
more attentions to practising my spoken English. I’ve made up my mind to speak English both in and out of class.
Next month I’ll take trip to Australia, which is organizing by my school. I hope I can practise my spoken English
there as many as possible. By the way, I am sending you a set of stamps with this letter, but I’ll send you more if I
got any. I do hope you will have a good holiday.
Yours
Li Hua
【参考答案】1.
【小题1】on改成 for
【小题2】去掉it
【小题3】which改成 that
【小题4】deep改成 deeply
【小题5】attentions改成 attention
【小题6】take后面加a
【小题7】organizing 改成organized
【小题8】many改成 much
【小题9】but改成 and
【小题10】got 改成get
试题 分析：这是李华写给爱丽丝的感谢信，感谢她送给她的英语字典和学习英语的建议，并决定努力提高
英语 。
【小题1】谢谢你给我买的英语字典。Thank you for…，因为…而感谢某人：on改成 for

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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师 要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错
误，要求你在错误的地 方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
A visitor visits an island where two tribes live. One tribe always tells the truth and an other always lies. The
truth tellers live on the western side of the island, and those which lie live on the eastern side. The visitor wants
determine whether the native beside he is a truth teller or not by ask only one question. He asks the native, “Go
or ask the native in the distance which side of the island he lives to.” When the messenger returned, he says, “He
said he lives on the western side of the island.”
Is the messenger a truth teller or not one? How can the visitor be surely?
【参考答案】2.
An- the; which- who; wants + to;
he - him; ask - asking; or- and; to- on;
returned- returns; one; surely- sure

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短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处语言
错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
My brother Donald didn’t do well in math. When the day of the exam comes, Donald sat next to Brian,
which was always good at math. Donald careful copied Brian’s answers. At end of the exam, the teacher collected
the papers and graded it. Then she decided to give a prize to the student who got the high grade. But it was a bit
of difficult for her to make a decision, because Donald and Brian got the same grade. The teacher thought about
that and made on her mind to give the prize to Brian. Donald said it was unfair. “That’s true,” the teacher said.
“Therefore, Brian’s answer to Question 18 was ‘I don’t know’. Your was ‘Neither do I’.”
【参考答案】3.
My brother Donald didn’t do well in math. When the day of the exam comes, Donald sat next to
came
Brian, which was always good at math. Donald careful copied Brian’s answers. At∧ end of the exam,
who carefully the
the teacher collected the papers and graded it. Then she decided to give a prize to the student who got the
them
high grade. But it was a bit of difficult for her to make a decision, because Donald and Brian got the same
highest
grade. The teacher thought about that and made on her mind to give the prize to Brian. Donald said it was
up
unfair. “That’s true,” the teacher said. “Therefore, Brian’s answer to Question 18 was ‘I don’t know’.

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However
Your was ‘Neither do I’.”
Yours 或Your answer


短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分） 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改
Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66.
Morning and was always late with work.. His boss wanted to 67.
fire him if he didn’t start coming on time,but he went to 68.
the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some 69.
medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70.
The man did is told and will,wake up before 71.
the alam had even gone had time for a properly 72.
breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.”Boss,”he 73.
said ,”that medicine really works!””I’m pleasing to hear 74.
it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday?”

【参考答案】
66、改troubles为trouble 67、改with 为for 68、改but 为so
69、去a 70、改them 为it 71、改wake为waking
72、改properly为proper 73、reach前加to 74、改pleasing为pleased
75、√


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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily
I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around
8 p.m. in Friday evening.
on

Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found

a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she can’t find her mother. We decided to help her. I try my

best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked

after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother

came. That made me feel very happily. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with

each other, the world will become more beautiful.

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【答案】
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
66. there was 改成there are
67. cry改成crying， find sb. doing sth.意思是“看见某人正在做某事”
68. can’t改为couldn’t. 短文上下文都是一般过去时
69. try改为tried
70. find前加 to。try one’s best to do sth.
71. on the same time改成at the same time.
72. careful改成carefully，副词修饰动词looked after.
73. his mother 改成her mother.
74. happily改成happy,是系表结构。
75. with划掉。help each other意思是“互相帮助”







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