姓刘2012年高考英语短文改错练习题及答案25

2021年1月7日发(作者：卫逢祺)
全国通用2012年英语短文改错25篇及答案

1短文改错：【·河南省示范性高中联考】

Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while
suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child
struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any
hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to
reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
2【·平顶山7校三联】

Behind my apartment, there was used to be a dirty and messy corner．Bits of plastic bags hanged on the
trees．Broken bottles were left laying here and there．There was a damaging car in the center．The whole corner gave
away an unpleasant smell．One year ago, we decided to turn it in a beautiful park．Since then, great changes have
been taken place in that corner．All the rubbish have been cleared away．Flowers and young trees have planted all
over．Now birds come here to sing, children come here to play, and adults come here to enjoy our peaceful life．It has
taken on a new look．
3 【·海口六校三联】
Dear friends,
It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the
English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of times, we have made a great progress. That is
because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign
teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all
of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!
4短文改错【杭州一检】
I have noticed that much of the fiction and nonfiction works publishing in Teen Magazine have a happy ending.
While these are pleasantly to read, one has to ask how it is possible that there is so much optimism. I'm all for
positive thinking, and readers should also be exposed by the darker side of life. Why publish a story about someone
whose experiences a tragedy and gets nothing in return? After all, that’s life.
Not every story have a happy ending. I think this would benefit from Teen Magazine’s readers to see both
kinds: happy and real.
5 【郑州一中月考】
Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people
must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused
by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more
accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.
In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient and
comfortable. Besides, we should use public transport as much as possibly.
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6【许昌期末】短文改错
One day Mark was walking in a valley with his pet dog, Zorro. All of sudden, Mark slipped and fall to the
valley. He was so serious hurt that he lay in the stream, lost consciousness. Zorro hurried down and pulled him out
the water. As Mark was wet and cold, the dog lay on top of him, trying to keep it warm. Unluckily, Mark was saved.
This shows clearly that animals are our good friend and we should be friendly to them. Instead of killing or eat
wild animals, we should do our best to protect them, especially these dying out.
7【锦州期末】短文改错
Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next
term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night, made much
noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this
problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own,
one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me
the favor.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,

8【2011·宁波八校联考】
When Mr. and Mrs. Smith went to theatre, they left their German dog to guard his home. When two burglars broke
into and the burglar alarm rang, the dog was waiting for them. Unfortunately, one of the burglars was dog-lover, and
he quickly made friends with it. While the alarm was ringing, but the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry, worth
over $$10,000, from a safe, the dog laid down in his basket and went to sleep. When the police arrived at twenty
minutes later, the burglars had gone. The dog was proud guarding the empty safe. When the first policeman entered
into the room, it immediately attacked him, tearing his trousers and bit him in the leg.

9【·宁波期末】
I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with
a bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. I use my bike almost in summer when the weather is
warm and dry. It can be very pleasant in winter when it is cold and rain is pour down. It can also be very dangerous.
Of course I will be very carefully on my bike. In fact, accidents are not the only problem. Once I went to bookstore
on my mother’s bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missing. Now I have two strong lock.

10【山西考前训练】
Several weeks ago, my parents were away for business, and I had to be all by me for
two days. My parents start early that morning, and I got up soon after they left. The first one
night I was scared, so I turned on all the light and kept them on the whole night. For fear of
get up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near bed and set the alarms at 6:00, 6:10,
and 6:15. In order to prove I could take care myself, I washed my own clothes, though I can
wait for my mother to do it. I really felt proud of myself but thought I was a big girl.
11【太原调研】
After supper Liu Wei came and ask me to go and see a film with him. In our way to the cinema, we saw the
little girl sitting by the roadside crying. We bought her a cake to stop her cry. When we asked she lived, she said she
did not know. So we took him to the police station and asked the polices to take care of her. After that we went to the
cinema. And when we got there, the movie was almost over. Although we missed the movie, but we felt very happy
because we did a well deed.

12【温州十校期末联考】
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On Children's Day last year, our city held an interested activity, in which children and their parents play the rich and
the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious food, but the poor could only have breads. Parents both
hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. They hoped that their children could be taught the lesson
from the dinner. Now many people on the earth don't have enough food and clothes. Every day only one half the
world could enjoy enough food. The activity was held make the families understand the differences from the poor
and the rich and also to make the parents know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.
13【豫南九校四联】
My family and I have suffered a great many recently for the noise made by my neighbor’s friends. Let me take
what happened last Saturday night for an example. When leave the house, they laughed and shouted good-bye to
each other. Then they got into the cars and closed the car door loudly. To make things bad, someone must have been
drunk and it take him a long while to get the car on the move. All the time we heard his engine made big noises. By
the time when the guests disappeared and the road became quietly, my family had all been woken up and it’s hard to
go to bed again.

14【2011·金华十校期末】
Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An Road. We all like shape of the
refrigerator. And yesterday something went wrongly. It made a noise when turning on. At first it waslow but
gradually it become louder and louder. To make matter worse，it even stopped working. Weall felt disappointing. I
am writing to ask for help. Would you please find someone to repair it? Iwould be at home this weekend. Please call
me before you come to here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thank you very much. Li Ming


15（河南省方城县月考）
Dear Mary,
I receive your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to
my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it
recently and you have lost interests. I’m afraid I couldn’t agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English,
and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is
becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that
where there is a will, there is a way. I’ m looking forward to hearing good news from you.

16、 浙江省余姚中学
I have just got some good news to tell to you. I win a national prize for painting last week. My father was so
pleasing that he suggested I went to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying there for half a month, visiting place of
interest or practicing my English as well. We’ve been often writing to each for a year and a half now. I have often
dreamed of talk face to face with you. I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that time.
Perhaps we could go out to do some sightseeing together.
17、 浙江省温州市任岩松中学
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May I have your attentions, please? In Saturday, July 27th, there will have a few visits to different places.
Everyone is welcomed. All the visitors will be divided into four groups. Each group of visitors can visit one of the
place – a factory, a farm, a school or a hospital. Please you sign your name at the Service Desk before 9: 00 a.m. and
say what place you wish to visit. We’ll set out after the breakfast at 8 and we will return in the afternoon. We will
have lunch at place of visit.
We hope you a pleasant journey. That’ s you.
18、 浙江省嘉兴一中
In the past I was real interested in all kinds of food. In summer day I liked to buy ice cream and cold drinks, while
in winter I like to buy sweets and some another food. Whenever I went for a walk with my parents I would ask
them buy me something. However, after I went to high school, I found I was putting on weight. So, I gave up habit
of eating and began to spend money on all kinds of the books, and my parents are all always complaining that I am a
money spender!
19、 辽宁省沈阳二中
I often dream of being a teacher. I dream of standing in the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys
and girls. I teach them, play with them, watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I
know there is not easy to be a teacher. Without eno ugh knowledges, you can never teach good. Besides, you have to
make friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Though I am a student now, but I will work very hard to
make my dream comes true.
20、 辽宁省大连市二十三中学
Jim arrived at home and discovered that he has forgotten his door key. He rang the bell, but nobody came to open the
door. He rang again and waiting, but still there was not reply. He walked round the house to see if he could find a
open window, but they were all locked. It was beginning to rain, he did not know how to do. Kate, his wife, had
obvious gone out. He didn’t know where she had been or when she’d return. Finally, he picked up a stone and threw
them at the kitchen window. Just then, his wife came back.
21（浙江省菱湖中学二模）
When I was 5, my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved. Every day I
practised playing it though my father demanded. But before long, I transferred my interest in the
piano to some other thing so began to avoid practice it. When my after realized this, he encouraged me, but was strict
whit me than before. With her help, I went the hardest time and made a great progress. Here I sincere express my
gratitude to my father. On the journey of life, our parents have lit the light of hope for us. What they have done
broaden our horizon.
22（ 黑龙江省哈九中三模）
Bill enjoyed shoot very much, but he was never good at it．One day his friend was named
Jack visited his house and saw a new target Bill had put several days ago in his garden．Jack
went nearer but saw a hole in the middle of the target．When jack asked who had shot at it,
Bill said he had．“How far away are you? Two feet?” But Bill said he was 50 yards away．
Then Bill’s wife explained Jack the hole．He said, “Bill went to a shop and bought a piece of wood．He put it in the
garden and shot at it from 50 yard away, only to shoot a hole．Then he
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drew a target round a hole．”
23（ 吉林省实验中学三模最后冲刺）

A few years ago, some tourists pay no attention to environmental protection．They threw waste things about, like
plastic bags, fruit skins and waste papers．Sometimes they broke trees, picked up flowers and killed birds; some even
made fires in the woods to cook for picnics．What dangerous it was ! Fortunate, great changes have been taken
places here．All the tourists have got used to put their rubbish into dustbins．But they are making great efforts to
protect birds and plants as well .They bring our own meals prevent any accidental fire．All these should be
appreciated

24 【·宁夏一模】
I'm a senior three student．I often do bad in my exams，so I have been trying to catch up the others．But I'm such
concerned about my marks that sometimes l cannot eat and sleep well at a night．I’m afraid that I may get low marks
in the tests again even if l work hard than before． I have no courage to face low marks．I cannot fix my mind to my
study，whenever I think of this. It is obvious that the worry had a bad effect on my school works．I’m feeling very
sad．Would you
please telling me how I should deal with my worry?

25【·黄冈河南学校调研】
l used to going to the countryside to draw animals and plants．One day l was walking across a field looking
rabbits to draw．Lost in thought，I hadn’t noticed the bull running towards myself．About l 00 meters ahead was a tree
under that l would sit and draw．Sudden，I heard the noise behind me．I turned and saw a bull．Knowing a bull could
run much more faster than a man，I quickly reached the tree and climb up．From there I saw the bull kicking my food
bag by its feet．It kept doing this for l 5 minute and moved away．But l was quite nervous in the tree
全国通用2012短文改错答案
1【答案】
短文改错
【答案】
1. usually-uaual；2. while- when；3. hear-heard；4. shocking-shocked
5. peoples-people 6. had -and -my ▲ 10. wish- hope

2【答案】 1. hanged- hung 2. 去掉was 3 Lying 4. damaged 5 give away- off out 6 in – into 7去掉 been 8 have- has 9 have
been planted 10 our - their
3【答案】
76. real改为 really 77. weekend 改为weekends 78. times改为time
79.去掉 a 80. 去掉 much 81. and 改为 but
82. his 改为 their 83. interested 改为 interesting 后加 have
85. see 改为 seeing
4【答案】
1 much- many 2 published 3 pleasant 4 and – but 5 by – to 6 why not 7 whose- who that 8 have- has 9 this- it 10 去 from
5【答案】
5
Traffic jam is ∧ very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First,
a
cities
people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is
their
caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to
is
more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.
easily
waiting
In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient
So
and comfortable. Besides, we should use public transport as much as possibly. It’s better to share cars during rush
hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.
possible
causes
6【答案】
第1处.sudden前加a 第2处.fall改为fell 第3处.serious改为seriously 第4处.lost改为losing 第5处.out后加of 第6处.it改为him 第7
处.Unluckily改为Luckily 第8处.friend改为friends 第9处.eat改为eating 第10处.these改为those
7【答案】

Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into
an
a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate
去掉in
often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that
holds making which
disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I
attention
am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is ∧ get a room of my own, one not in the
you to
same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do
but grateful
me the favor.

8【答案】1. to the –their 3 into- in 4 was a 5 but – and 6 laid – lay 7 去 at 8 proudly 9 去 into 10 bit- biting
9【答案】
I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find∧ very
it
convenient to go anywhere with a bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. I
exercise
use my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can be very pleasant in
mostly can’t ( 或unpleasant)
winter when it is cold and rain is pour down. It can also be very dangerous. Of course I will be
pouring
very carefully on my bike. In fact, accidents are not the only problem. Once I went to ∧
careful a
bookstore on my mother’s bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missing. Now I
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came
have two strong lock.
locks
10【答案】
1 for – on 2 me- myself 3 start –started 4 去 one 5 lights 6 getting 7 near the my 8 care of 9 can- could 10 but –
and

11【答案】
1asked – on 3 the- a 4 crying 5 asked where 6 him – her 7police 8 and – but 9 去but 10 well - good
12【答案】
sting→interested 2. play→played 3.去掉more →bread 5. both→all →a →or 8.
half∧→of 9. held∧to 10. from→between
13【答案】
deal from
My family and I have suffered a great many recently for the noise made by my
去掉an或者把for变成as
neighbor’s friends. Let me take what happened last Saturday night for an example. When
leaving
leave the house, they laughed and shouted good-bye to each other. Then they got into the
doors worse
cars and closed the car door loudly. To make things bad, someone must have been drunk
took
and it take him a long while to get the car on the move. All the time we heard his engine
making
made big noises. By the time when all the guests disappeared and the road became quiet,
sleep
my family had all been woken up and it’s hard to go to bed again. And this is repeated almost every Saturday night. It seems that
the only way out is to get out of this area.
14【答案】
第一行：buy 改为 bought; shape 前加 the
第二 行：And 改为 But; wrongly 改为 wrong; turning 改为 turned
第 三行:become 改为 became; matter 改为 matters
第四 行: disappointing 改为 disappointed
第五行：would改为will;删掉to
15【答案】
ed 2 great 3 giving up 4 because – that 5 and – so 6 interet 7 difficult 8 an important 9 besides 10 be去掉
16【答案】：改错I have just got some good news to tell to （去掉to）you. I win(won) a national prize for painting last week. My
father was so pleasing(pleased) that he suggested I went(go) to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying(stay) there for half a
month, visiting place(places) of interest or(and) practicing my English as well. We’ve been often writing to each (加other) for a
year and a half now. I have often dreamed of talk(talking) face to face with you. I imagine you’ll be at(on) vacation yourself by
that time.
Perhaps we could go out to do some sightseeing together.

17 【答案】
7

1Attentions改为 attention 2 In 改为 On3Have 改为be 4 welcomed改为 welcome
5 place改为 places6 Please you改为Please 7 what place 改为 which place
8 the breakfast 改为breakfast 9 at place 改为 at one place10 hope改为 wish

18 【答案】
1instead∧--of 2real--really 3day--days 4like—liked
5 another--other 6∧buy--to 7∧habit--the 8and--but 9去the 10 all--both
19 【答案】
I often dream of being a teacher. I dream o f standing in(改成on) the platform in the classroom and give(改成giving) lessons
to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, play with them, (此处添加and) watch them growing up. I am always young when I
was (改成am)staying with them. I know there(改成it) is not easy to be a teacher. Without enough knowledges(改成
knowledge), you can never teach good(改成well). Besides, you have to make friends with your pupils and take good care of
him(改为them). Though I am a student now, but (but去掉)I will work very hard to make my dream comes (改为come) true.
20 【答案】1 去at 2 had 3 waited 4 not – no 5 a – an 6 and he 7 how – what 8 obviously 9them–it 10at - into
21【答案】
1 the -a 2 though- as 3 things 4 practising 5 stricter 6 her – his 7 went through 8去a; 9 sincerely 10 broadens
22 【答案】 1. shoot → shooting 2. friend和house中间的was去掉，或者在was前加上whothat 3. ago → before 4.
but → and 5. shot at it 去掉at 6. are → were
7. explained 和Jack中间加to 8. He → She 9. yard → yards 10. a → the
23【答案】
1．pay—paid 2．papers—paper 3．up去掉 4．What—How
5．Fortunate—Fortunately 去掉 7．put—putting
8 But-And 9．our—their 10．to prevent
24【答案】(略)
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【答案】
第一句：going---go
第二句looking后加for；the---a
第三句myself—me；that---which
第四句Sudden--- Suddenly
第五句去掉more;climb---climbed
第六句by ---with
第七句minute---minutes



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