评论英文考研英语二(作文)-试卷16

2021年1月9日发(作者：蓝嘉琳)
考研英语二（作文）-试卷16
(总分：12.00，做题时间：90分钟)
一、 Writing(总题数：6，分数：12.00)
n III Writing（分数：2.00）
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解析：
BDirections: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following information.（分
数：2.00）
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解析：
an essay based on the chart In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2)
give your comments. You should write about 150 words.
（分数：2.00）
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正确答案：(正确答案： As is shown in the chart, the incidence of obesity or overweight is of
different propensity across different ages and gender groups. To be exact, on average, 37% of
the women are obese or overweight, compared to 47% of the men. When age is factored in, the peak
percentage of obesity is found in the 40-year- old men, with over 55% being obese, while obese
women peak at the 60-year-old age group, taking up 50% of the group. This chart seems to demonstrate
that men are hit by obesity problem at a much younger age than women (e.g. 40 vs. 60) and that
men are more likely to suffer from overweight problems (47% vs. 37%). To solve and prevent obesity
issue, we are advised to follow a regular exercising scheme and pursue a healthy diet. This is
especially true for men, because they are usually so absorbed in making a living while ignoring
their health condition.)
解析：解析：该图表显示了男女各年龄组别超重和肥胖的比率。从图表可见。肥胖比率受性别及年龄两个
因素的影响。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第一段描述图表。第二段指出男性与
女性肥胖情况的差别。第三段提出建议：预防肥胖，要规律运动、健康饮食。
an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) describe the diagram, and
2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words.
（分数：2.00）
__________________________ __________________________________________________ ______________
正确答案：(正确答案： The chart displays the projected trend of the aging population in China,
As it shows, between the years 2010 and 2050, people above the age of 60 may experience the sharpest
increase (19%), followed by the age groups above 65 and 80 years old (15% and 5% respectively).
In the year of 2050, about 33% of the Chinese population would be 60 years old or above, while
24% and 7% of them would be 65 and 80 years old or above. The magnitude of the aging population
in China is explicitly presented in the chart, which may bring lots of trouble to our society.
The fact that aged people are dependants of their children means many couples have to provide
for 4 seniors, adding to their already mounting pressure of life. The shortage of workforce in
China will be another problem. To ease the burden brought by the aging population, the family
planning policy needs reforming. Fortunately, our government has begun to do so already.)
解析：解析：该图表显示了2010—2050年中国人口老 龄化的趋势。从图表可见，老龄化在三个组别均呈上
升趋势，而60岁以上这一组别的上升最为迅猛。根 据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：第