ukraine刘晓艳英语万能满分大作文模板-考研英语高分作文模板

2021年1月10日发(作者：谭自烈)

刘晓艳大作文：
（1）正面（正确、积极的）：01、02、03、08、10
反面（不正确的做法、消极）：04、05、06、07、09、11
（2）一幅图还是两幅图（04、06）
（3）作文有无规定题目（仅02）
（4）1：描述图画，2:解释图画要表达的含义，3：严重性及采取的举措。
例如：2011环境污染；2010：一个火锅——多种文化
＊2015重点预测正面
2015考研大作文万能模板---英语一
第一段 3句话
①In the picture above,...... .第一句话（句型要用do+ingwith短语+非限定性定语从句）要将整个漫画内容描述完整。 要考验大家的语法
功底，首句很重要哦！
②There has been a heated discussion about them in the newspaper. 第二句就是套话，大家也可以自己换其他自己喜欢的句子。
③The picture , at the first glimpse , seem to be simple ,but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning. 同第二句
解释的一样。

第二段 6句话
记住：写作重点就在此段，因为大多数考研者都 会把首尾段写得出色，但仅此这打动不了阅卷老师，比的就是谁的第二段写得漂亮，
谁就获得高分的机会 大。
当时漫画反映坏/好的方面的主题时，大家相应地进行替换。纵观2001-2011年的漫画都 是如此，大家不用太怀疑。
②In no country other than China ,it has been said ,is this phenomenon more obvious （好的主题用此句）. / is the problem of (有关主题词) more
serious （坏的主题用此句）.
③What's more,nobody dare fail to / the public fail to attach due attention to the ( 主题词 ) . 进一步强调主题的好/坏 。
④By doing so ,....... . 给出反映主题的相应的理由，这句话也要各位写得好，才有打动阅卷的老师给高分的心 ，我只能作为指
引。
⑤It will cultivate an optimistic /pessimistic view toward the world and extends people's life expectancy . 给出自己的结论，好写，套话 。
⑥Were the situation to continue as it is, we would pay the higher price .
最后一句，虚拟语气结尾，增添文章句型多变的色彩 。

第三段
这段可以完全是套话了，大家可以自己选择喜欢的，把握一点就行：3句话，做到句型复杂多变，反映主题。
①In summary,while some people may remain unconvinced by my discussion,but the analysis I have offered so far should at least make them
aware of the significance of this phenomenon .
②Therefore , the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness that ( cultural exchange 2010年主题词), to a great degree , plays an
importance role in our lives .
③Only in a reasonable ,prosperous and healthy atmosphere ,can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people will enjoy ( their life ) to the
uttermost .

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①The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the (漫画主题词 ) / nothing is more harmful or damaging than the ( 主题词) .


刘晓艳考研作文模板
As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above (开始描述图画）， 加上which is both upsetting and most thought-provoding (第一端）描述图画
The aim of the painter of the drawing above can be briefly stated as follow (陈述观点 ） 可以把这些话加到作文中去 结合作文内容
perhapers no other things could gain more public attention than...in china for the time being
.
It is generally believed that...is a hot topic which is most talked about ,not only by the city residents but also by famers. (任选一个）
As the society becomes more and more advanced and complicated . ...plays a more and more important role in the life of individual members of
the society and in the development of the society itself
According to recent investigation, there is an increasing numbers of people who share the concern about the issue of ... which is a problem that
deserves public,professional and political attention
Different people have different opinions. Everything has its advantages and disadvantages .It is assciated with your experience ,life style and
emotional concern .It is really true for this case
Advantage and disadvantage are the basic dual concepts of nearly everthing in our life ,It goes without saying that for every advantage,there is
always a disadvantage .An advantageous for one group might to prove disdvantages to others .It is really true for this case(作比较）
句中最好使用一个倒装句 only + 状语 + 小倒装 如
only when we develop ourselves in a well- rounded way ,can we become prodctive memebers of society （正文）
counter-measures must be taken immediately so as to ...
First of all law and regulations must be set up In addition ,a long-term and nation -wide campaign must be launched to popularize...among the
general public. Only in this way can we keep...(结尾）

你先看看，不懂得再问我！主要是先熟悉在吧历年考题套一
遍，发现问题再及时解决！
1 万用作文
（1） When it comes to XX, there is no agreement among people as to the issue of
XX: some people hold a positive attitude towards it while others are against it. In such
an environment where XX is playing an increasingly important role in XX, almost
XX come to believe that XX talks. There are numerous reasons(methods/approaches)
to account for the phenomenon ( 或者 to contribute to this issue), I would explore the
most conspicuous ones below.
第二段：One of the primary reason（方法：method, to my mind, is that such a
phenomenon as revealed in the picture （topic/ problem）has aroused wide-spread
social concern ,Nowhere in history has the issue been talked about so much as in our
society today. Apart from that, the painting（topic/ problem） reveals an upsetting

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story and similar events happened and happening are hared or reported in nearly all
aspects of our life .What is also worth noticing (considering) fact is that Enhancing people’s
awareness of such practices and setting up relevant rules and regulations ought to be
top priorities of the agenda.

第三段：In conclusion, taking into account of the above(或 In brief, we may safety
(safely) arrive at the conclusion that), we may reach the conclusion that it is high time that
such stories were (should be) terminated or at least reduced. Only when such
happenings come to an end can we maintain a happy and harmonious society as we all
wish, vice and verse.


第一段参考：
What the drawing is trying to express is symbolic and philosophic ! （并列押韵，
可以说是有用的废话）Featured in the above image are two men who , each of them
having only one leg , are running forward together. （妙在 featured 和 who，插入的
独立主格结构。这句话是得分重点，需要自己组织一个简单的切题的句子。）
However ridiculous and humorous（押韵） it may seem at first glimpse ,this cartoon
does carry rather significant implications . （可以认为是有用的废话.）

1． 基础 -- 核心句写作
重要性说明：核心 句写作是考研小作文和大作文的核心部分，也是临场发挥成分最大的部分，所以一定要花时间好好练习。
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小作文一般是应用文，包括各种书信（道歉，投诉，咨询 ，申请，辞职，感谢，安慰，推荐），通知和工作备忘录。不过考
的是上述的哪一种，写作的重点都是要 把事由用一句话写清楚，这句话就是我们现在要训练的核心句写作。
大作文近几年考的都是看图说话， 所以2006靠的很可能也是图画文章。这就要求我们文章第一段学会用一句话描述清楚图
画的内容，这 句话也就是我们现在要训练的核心句写作。
即便大作文不考图画作文，也一定是议论文。者也要求我们 在第一段能用一句话就说清楚要评论的事物或现象，这句话也是
我们现在要训练的核心句写作。
____________, 主语，_____________, 谓语 （及物动词后加宾语），_________.
具体步骤
步骤1：看清图画的主要含义，并因此确定S + V .（或者S + Vt + n）迅速写出句子。每幅图一句。
（此步重点：确定主语，也就是抓住图画中最主要的事物是关键，一 般这一事物居于图画正中间）

例如
A lamp is flickering.


步骤2.围绕图片主语列出所有的细节并添加到句子当中，包括：
1.找出可以修饰主语的形容词（单个的放在主语前边）A small oil lamp is flickering.
2.找出主语的同位语后加定语从句 （主语后）A small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light , is flickering.
3.找出可以修饰主语的介词短语 （主语后边）A small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering.
4.找出主语发出的其它动作，做成伴随状语，放在主语前做导入Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object
that gives off light in the picture, is flickering.

步骤3 围绕谓语展开细节并添加到句子当中，包括：
1.找出可修饰动作的副词，放在谓语后Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the
picture, is flickering quietly.
2.看看动作发生的时间和地点可不可以用介词短语来做， 放谓语及副词的后边，地点在前，时间在后Standing lonely but full of

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confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time.
3.看看句子谓语动作造成什么结果或意义没有，如果有，做成后置的伴随状语Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the
only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time，bringing brightness to everything around it.

4.如果谓语动作没有造成什么结果或意义，看看有没有其它的主谓结构可以做成 独立主或伴随状语，来把谓语动作细节化。

步骤4 如果谓语后有宾语，再按主语扩展模式略作处理（加前后定语，尽量短）

最终版本：Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the
darkness all the time，bringing brightness to everything around it. （37字）
大家再看一个例子，进一步熟悉一下以上四个步骤
中外文化的融合图片描述
1. An American girl appears pleasant.
2. A beautiful young American girl appears pleasant.
3. A beautiful young American girl, an international student, appears pleasant.
4. A beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears pleasant.
5. Standing under a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears pleasant.
6. Standing under a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears
obviously pleasant.
总结：通过以上四个步骤，从定主谓入手，通过添 加细节，迅速制造出一个30-40字左右的好句子作为大作文开头。
在小作文当中，也是利用同样的 方法，迅速的说明事由，细节的添加主要以回答下列几个问题为主：谁（who）在什么时候（when）在什< br>么地方（where）出于何种原因（why）通过何种方式(how)作了什么事情（what）
例如：投诉信：---对两条狗进行投诉
1. These dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble.
2. These vicious dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble.
3. These vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought, were abandoned and have been causing trouble.
4. These vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have been
causing trouble.
5. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have
been causing trouble.
6. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have
been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since.
7. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have
been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since, barking day and night, leaving waste everywhere, and even attacking both
residents and passers- by. (44字)

下面，请大家按照刚才讲述的步骤练习写下面的句子，这是作文成功的 关键，最后冲刺的几天，请一定多练
1． 起点就是终点 （提示：主语是男孩，谓语是跑向终点）
2． 温室的花朵第一幅 （提示：主语是花朵，谓语是挺立）
3． 温室的花朵第二幅 （提示：主语还是花朵，谓语是变得虚弱）
4． 把上两句话用 -------------， while ----------- 的模式连成一句
5． 商业捕鱼 （提示：前半句：主语是鱼，谓语是游泳 后半句：主语还是鱼，谓语是存活。两句中间用while连接）
6． 母鸡承诺 （提示：主语是母鸡，谓语是举着，宾语是牌子）
7． 道歉 （提示：主语是我，谓语是我当时做的事）
8． 咨询 （提示：主语是我，谓语是想知道，宾语是要了解的问题）
9． 辞职 （提示：主语是我，谓语是辞职）

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