三眼中考形容词、副词比较级练习题及答案

2021年1月12日发(作者：元慧)
中考形容词、副词比较级练习题及答案

Exercise (比较级和副词)

一. A. 写出下列形容词或副词的比较级和最高级

1. near ____________ ____________ high___________
blue __________
___________

__________

2. warm ___________ ____________ clever__________ ___________

3. white ___________ ____________
4. nice ____________ ____________ gentle___________ ___________

5. safe ____________ _____________ wide____________ ___________

6. close ___________ _____________ long____________ ___________

7. heavy __________ _____________ sunny___________ ____________

8. early ___________ ______________ dry ____________ ___________

9. busy ___________ _____________ happy ___________ ___________

10. easy ___________ _____________ angry ___________ ____________

11. windy _________ ______________ little __________ ____________

12. thin ___________ ______________ `
13. hot ___________ _______________
15. bad ___________ ______________
fat ______________ ___________

big ______________ ___________

well __________ _____________

14. wet ___________ ______________ ` good____________ ___________

16. badly _________ ______________ many____________ ___________

17. much _________ ______________ far ______________ ___________

18. important ___________________ _______________________

19. dangerous ___________________ _______________________

20 beautiful ____________________ _______________________

21. difficult _____________________ _______________________

22. brightly _____________________ _______________________

23. strongly _____________________ _______________________

24. expensive ___________________ ________________________

25. quietly _____________________ ________________________

B. 写出下列形容词的副词形式

1. bad ___________
2. clever _________
3. heavy _________
4. gentle _________
5. close __________
7. fast ___________
nice ___________



angry __________
beautiful___________

busy _______________

safe ________________

early________________

near ________________

easy ___________
wide ___________
late ____________

happy ______________

6. deep ___________ high ___________
good ___________

二、用括号内词语的正确形式填空

1、The flowers are very _____________________. (beautiful)

2、The girls are sitting there ______________________ .(quiet)

3、They’re talking very _________________ . (loud)

4、We can get there _________________ . (easy)

5、They’re getting ready for the sports meeting __________________ . (busy)

6、They’re living a _________________ life. (happy)

7、The wind is blowing __________________ . (strong)

8、He plays the piano ______________ .(bad)

9、The river runs _________________ down the hill. (gentle)

10、The sun is shining _______________ . (bright)

11、The man is riding his horse along the road __________________ . (slow)

12、The girl sings ____________________________ than the boy. (beautiful)

13、Jack plays football _________________ than Dick. (bad)

14、He is speaking __________________ . (angry)

15、The children are running __________________ along the road. (happy)

16、She runs __________________ of all. (fast)

17、The sun is shining _____________________this afternoon than this morning. (bright)

18、Jim works ___________________ than Tom. (hard)

19、He walks ___________________ of the three. (far)

20、Little Tom is sitting there ___________________ of all. (quiet)

三、选择填空

white shirt is as ________ as the yellow one.

A. cheap B. cheaper C. cheapest D. the cheapest

2、You know ________ about it than Tom does.

A. even little B. even less C. more little D. more less

3、This garden is ________ that one.

times as long as B. ten times longer as C. ten times longer as
ten times

4、The earth is getting ________ .

and warmer
and warm

5、Which one is ________ , football or basketball?

A. more popular B. popular C. popularer D. much popular

6、The fifth orange is ________ of all . Give it to that small child.

A. big B. bigger C. the bigger D. the biggest

7、Allan is one of ________ popular teachers in the school.

A. more B. the more C. most D. the most

8、Which city is ________ , Beijing, Shanghai or Fuzhou?

A .beautiful B. more beautiful C. much more beautiful D. the most beautiful

9. He runs __________ of the four boys.

A. fast B. faster C. the fastest D. fastest

10、________ all the students in his class, Xiao Ming writes ________.

A. Of, most carefully
carefully

B. In, the most careful C. Of, very carefully D. In, much more
B. warmer and warm C. warmer and warmer D. warm,
D. as long as
11、I think P.E. is ________ any other subject.

A. the more important B. the most important C. as important than
12、I don’t feel very ________ today.

A. good B. better C. nice D. well

13、The more you study during the term, ________you have to study the week before exams.

A. the less B. the lesser C. less D. the little

14、The old man was too tired to walk any __________.

A. far B. farther C. the farthest D. farer

15、The children are laughing ________. They look very ________.

A. happy, happy B. happily, happily C. happily, happy D. happy, happily

16. I think maths is _____ of all the subjects.

A. the most interesting B. more interesting C. so interesting D. the best interesting

17. The girl doesn’t run _____ the boy.

A. much faster as B. as fastest as C. more careful than D. so fast as

18. The young man drives _____ than he did three months ago.

A. much carefully B. much more careful C. much careful D. much more carefully

19. Don’t worry too much．I am sure everything is going on _____ with you．

A. good B. fine C. well D. nice

20．---Do they like him?

---Yes．He is ____ a kind man．

A. very B. so C. much D. such

21．---Mary won’t go shopping this afternoon．

---I won’t go _____ ．

A．either B．yet C．also D．too

22. ---What should I do if I don’t understand the word?

---Look it ____ in a dictionary．

A．at B．on C．up D．out

23．The car is running ______ ．It seems to be flying．

A．more and faster B．more and fast C．fast and fast D．faster and faster

24．---I have three English dictionaries．

---I have nine．I have three times ______ you．

A．as much as B．as many as C．as little as D．1ess than

25. We love to go to the country in spring as the flowers smell so ____．

A. well B．nice C．wonderfully D．nicely

26. The boy doesn’t speak ____ his sister，but his written work is very good．

A．as well as B．so good as C．more better than D．more worse than

27．---Does Liu Hua ever guess the meanings of English words?

---He ____ guesses the meanings of new words．He uses his dictionary all the time．

A．usually B．always C．never D．sometimes

28．The meeting will be held in half an hour，but they haven’t got everything ready __．

D. as important as

A．ever B．already C．yet D．still

29．Now the air in our hometown is ___ than it was before．Something must be done．

A．much better B．more worse C．more better D．much worse

30．Johnny doesn’t sing quite _____ the other boys and girls in his class．

A．so well as B．as good like C．as well like D．so good as

31. I don’t believe the young man could run ____ fast ___ 20 kilometres an hour．

A．as；as B．as；like C．much；as D．so；like

32．Harry Potter is an ___ book for children, but my cousin doesn’t seem at all__ in it．

A．interesting；interesting B，interested；interested

C．interesting；interested D．interested；interesting

33. ---Do you like western food?

---No．The food of our country is ____ that of western countries．

A．rather good than B．much better than C．more better than D．not so good as

34．Mr Watson won’t be here next week，and _____．

A．neither his wife will B．neither his wife won’t

C．his wife won’t neither D．his wife won’t either







形容词和副词的比较级和最高级练习答案

热身练习

一、口语练习

2、根据实际情况回答问题。

1. Is China the biggest country in the world?

2. Both Russia and Canada are bigger than China, are they?

3. Which mountain is the highest in the world?

4. Do you know what ocean is the deepest in the world?

5. Which river is longer, the Changjiang River or the Yellow River?

Exercise (比较级和副词)

一. A. 写出下列形容词或副词的比较级和最高级

1. nearer
2. warmer
4. nicer
5. safer
6. closer
nearest




higher highest





cleverer cleverest

gentler
wider
longer
gentlest

widest

longest

warmest
nicest
safest
closest
3. whiter whitest bluer bluest

7. heavier
8. earlier
9. busier
10. easier
11. windier
12. thinner
13. hotter
14. wetter
15. worse
16. worse
17. more











heaviest
earliest




sunnier
drier









sunniest

driest

happiest

angriest

busiest
easiest
less

happier
angrier
least

fattest

windiest
thinnest





fatter
hottest
wettest
worst
worst
most
bigger
better
better
more
farther

biggest

best

best

most

farthest

most difficult

most
18. more important most important 19. more dangerous most dangerous

20. more beautiful
22. more brightly
strongly

24. more expensive most expensive 25. more quietly most quietly

二、用括号内词语的正确形式填空

1. beautiful 2. quietly 3. loudly 4. easily 5. busily

6. happy 7. strongly 8. badly 9. gently 10. brightly

12. more beautiful 14. angrily 15. happily

16. fastest 17. more brightly 18. harder 19. farthest 20. most quietly

三、选择填空

1-5 ABACA 6-10 DDDCA 11-15 DDABC

四、链接中考

(1998) 1-2AD (1999) D (2000) 1-5CDACD (2001)B (2002) 1-2BA

(2003) 1-4CCDA (2004) 1-2AC (2005) 1-2 BD

开心一刻 1. T 2. T 3. F 4.F 5. T

most beautiful 21. more difficult
most brightly 23. more strongly

二、英语书面表达专项训练
2
．
“
持之以恒，方得始。
”
坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需
要持之以恒的精神。

某英文网站正在开展以
“
坚持
”
为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华， 请用英语写一篇短文投
稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯
……
），你 是怎样做的，以及你的感
受。

提示词语：
keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud

提示问题：
1. What did you do?

2. How do you feel?

It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.

【答案】
It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept
running for three years.

When I was in Grade 7
，
I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often
failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates
，
I began to practice running
every day after mes
，
I was so tired that I really wanted to give I kept telling
myself that I could make matter what kind of difficulties I faced
，
I tried my best to keep
I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and
I'm ready for any challenges in the future.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在 初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎
么做的并谈谈自己的感受。

【详解】

1.
本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做 的一件事，根据提示，描
写
“What did you do?
用一般过去时，描写
How do you feel?
用一般现在时。书写时要紧扣主
题，文句通顺。

2.
本 例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是
“
跑步
”
，正文部分详细地描写了自己 起初跑步
总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件
事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。

3.
本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的 短语和重点句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型
It's +adj+
for us +to do sth
、
love doing sth
、
keep doing
、
be good at
、
catch up with
、
be proud of
；不
定式
in order to
；
try my best to
；状语从句
so…that …
；比较级
do much better in …
、
feel
more confident
等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。




3
．

假如你是李华
,
你的美国笔友
Bill
给你发了一封电子邮件
,
想了解你的梦想职业。请认
真阅读下面的邮件
,
根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。

To: lihua@ china. com

From: bill006@ america. com

Subject: Your dream job

Dear Li Hua,

Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.

Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?

◆What is your dream job?

◆ Why do you like the job?

◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?

◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?

Drop a few lines if you have time.

Best wishes,

Bill



要求
:1.
参考提示语
,
可适当发挥；

2.
语句通顺
,
意思连贯
,
书写工整；

3.
文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；

4.
词数
:
不少于
70
词（开头已给出
,
但不计入总词数）。

Dear Bill,

Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. ____________________

__________ __________________________________________________ ___________________
___________________________ __________________________________________________ __
____________________________________________ ___________________________________
___________ __________________________________________________ __________________
____________________________ __________________________________________________ _

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文
Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my
dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve
problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's
environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To
realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and
enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?

Tell me about your ideal job!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。

【详解】

首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识 分享给孩子
们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向
Bil l
提出问
题，结束全文。

【点睛】

本文首先开篇功能句
Thank you for your letter.
然后开 始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如
because
，
Besides
，To realize my dream,
等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上
口，不失为一篇佳作。


4
．

朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候 陪伴我们。你最好的
朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以
“My Best Friend ”
为题，根据以下提示写一篇
英语短文。

1.
简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格
;

2.
介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事；

3.
你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的

要求：

1.
语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密

2.
词数
80-100

3.
文中不得出现真实校名及姓名

Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.

_____________________________ __________________________________________________
______________________________________________ _________________________________
_____________ __________________________________________________ ________________
______________________________ _________________________________________________< br>_______________________________________________ ________________________________

【答案】
My best friend

Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs
friends to talk with and get confidence from.

My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with
long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.

I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying.
Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an
A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.

I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.

【解析】

【详解】

试题分析：这是一个提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目要求 可知，人称以
第三人称为主。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。我们要做的就是用正确的英语句子来组< br>织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表结构，注意主谓一致关系。介绍发生的一
件难忘的 事情，要用到一般过去时态。另外在写作时可以适当使用一些连词，使之上下连
贯，合乎逻辑。

【点睛】

人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型。内容可以是介绍自己也可以介绍 他人，包括姓
名、年龄、外貌特征、兴趣爱好，有时也可以包括日常活动。时态为一般现在时态。在介< br>绍长相时用
“be+
形容词
”
来描述人物的身高、体重、身材等；用< br>“havehas + (straightcurly)
hair (bigsmall) eyesnosemouth”
来描述头发或五官。用
“wear +
某种衣服
”
来介绍某人的穿
戴。用
be good at doing sth.
来介绍特长，用
like
或
“MyHisher favorite +
名词
+ is …”
来介绍某人的最爱。当主语是第三人称单数时，注意主谓一致关系。


5
．书面表达

初中就要毕业了，校报
“
英语角
”
栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根
据要点

写一封信，说说你的计划。

活动

毕业晚会

时间

地点

参与者

活动内容

6
月
28
日晚上七点

学校礼堂
school hall

全体初三学生和老师

1.

邀请校长作演讲；

2.

互赠礼物送祝福；

3.

各班表演精彩节目

4.










要求：
1.
要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯
; 2.
正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整
洁。
3.80
词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数
; 4.
文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。

Dear editor,

I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.

___________ __________________________________________________ __________________
____________________________ __________________________________________________ _
_____________________________________________ __________________________________
____________ ___________________________

Best wishes,

Yours Lihua

【答案】
Dear editor,

I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony
will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First
of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a
bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will
give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time
we have had together.

This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li hua

【解析】

【分析】

这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。

【详解】

这是一 篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现
在时和一般将来时，人 称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构
和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用 写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写
作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。


6
．书面表达

根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。


生活中常常 会发生一些意外的事，但每个人处理事情的方式不同。有些人冷静温和地处
理，有些人简单粗暴地对待。 当你与人发生冲突时，你会如何处理呢？请你写一篇英语短
文，谈谈你的经历与看法。内容包括：

1.
请你简单叙述一次与别人发生冲突的经历；

2.
你认为该如何正确处理日常生活中发生的冲突（至少两点建议）；

3.
呼吁大家友好相处。

作文要求：

1.
不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2.
语句连贯，词数
80
左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Life is full of the unexpected, ___________________________________________
________________________________________________ _______________________________
_______________ __________________________________________________ ______________
________________________________ _______________________________________________
_________________________________________________ ______________________________
________________ __________________________________________________ _____________
_________________________________ _________________________________________

【答案】
Life is full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a
schoolmate and I hit into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it
turned into a terrible quarrel. To be honest, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate’s, only
because we both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful.

In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendly to each
other. Secondly, we should communicate more and put ourselves in other’s place. Don’t be a
selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.

It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society
together and make our life better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如
full of
，
during the basketball
game
，
each other
，
try to do
，
turn into
，
to be honest
，
neither…nor
，
care about
，
too
much
，
deal with
等。而固定句型
It’s very important to get on well with each other.
和
Don’t be
a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.
的运用，丰富了短文内容，使
表达多样化，是本文的亮 点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以
适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更 富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文 。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考 生不能遗漏要点，要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以 便得
到较高的分数。


7
．紧张而又忙碌的初中生活即将结束，在 装载你收获的行囊
----
成长记录袋中还应增添一
份你自己满意的答案。


根据上述提示，请以
“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”
为题写一篇文章，记录你难忘
的校园生活。首句已给出。

注意：
. 1.
语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

2.
短文中不得出现任何人名、校名或能够透露你个人身份的相关信息。

3.
词数
80
左右，信件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My Unforgettable Junior High School Life

How time flies!





【答案】
How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think
of about myself.

In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my
classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball football volleyball. But now I am
interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books,
playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.

In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and
more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文要求我们以
My Unforgettable Junior High School Life
为题，回想一下自己即将过去
的初中，讲述难忘的初中生活。题目中用 思维导图，列出了一些文章中会用到的关键词，
供学生们参考使用。审题可知，这篇短文应以一般过去时 、第一人称为主来叙述。题目中
并没有给出具体的写作内容，学生们应发挥自己的想象力，可以从自己的 学习、爱好、与
同学的交往、与老师的相处以及自己的感受等方面进行详细阐述。写作时应注意：首先要
展开合理想象，补充文章细节内容，注意各部分内容之间的层次，内容要完整、充实，结
构要清 晰。其次应注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译。句子的结构要完
整，可以简单句结构为 主，如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列
句、复合句及其他复杂句式。语句之间使 用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文， 短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并描述了自己的
感受。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章 内容充实、完整，符合题目要求。短文中作者从自
己的学习情况、与同学的交往、爱好、特长等方面进行 了总结，在最后提出了对未来的希
望。层次清晰，结构合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章 第一段引出主题，
使用了一般现在时；第二段回忆过去的生活，主要使用了一般过去时；最后对未来提出 希
望，用到了一般将来时。语法规范，用词准确，注意了名词、动词、形容词等的正确形
式。句 式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句句
型，调整了文章节奏，提 升了作文档次。短文中较好的句型有：
In the past, I was busy
learning my subjects and worked hard at them
、
But now I am interested in history, because it is
very interesting
、
In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.
、
I’ll make it more
and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success
等等。


8
．书面表达

校园安 全问题越来越受到重视，为了确保学生的安全，学校制订了一些规章制度。请根据
提示内容，以
“School safety”
为题写一篇
100
词左右的英语短文。

提示：

1.
遵守校规，按时到校、离校；

2.
不接受陌生人的物品；

3.
结伴同行，天黑前到家；

4.
遇到麻烦及时告知家长和老师。

School safety

___________________________________ ____________________________________________
__ __________________________________________________ ___________________________
___________________ __________________________________________________ __________
____________________________________ ___________________________________________
___ __________________________________________________ __________________________
____________________ __________________________________________________ _________
_____________________________________ __________________________________________
____ __________________________________________________ _________________________
_____________________ ________________

【答案】
School safety

More and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules
to keep us safe.

First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving
school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from
strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must
get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as
soon as possible.

I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下校园安全。所提供的材 料中列举了为
了确保学生的安全，学校制订了一些规章制度。主要从
1.
遵守校规，按时到校、离校；
2.
不接受陌生人的物品；
3.
结伴同行，天黑前到家；
4.
遇到麻烦及时告知家长和老师。这四
个方面去 介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。本文是提建议，因此用
shouldn’t
或should
来写。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意
时态、时间 状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符
合逻辑关系，表达具有条理 性。

【高分句型一】

Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers.
第二，我
们不应该和陌生人一起去，也不应该接受陌生人的东西。

本句话是由
and
连接的并列句。

【高分句型二】

I think these rules are good for us.
我认为这些规则对我们有好处。

句子
these rules are good for us.
是一个宾语从句。


9
．
“< br>苔花如米小
,
也学牡丹开。
”
我们大多数人虽然微不足道
,< br>但也能有所作为。请以
One
thing I felt very proud of
为题用英语写以写一篇短文
,
描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。

要求
:1.
文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称
;2.
词数
8 0
左右。



【答案】
One thing I felt very proud of

I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.

To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried
many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control
the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I
succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.

I felt proud of cooking on my own.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以
One thing I felt very proud of
为题，介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感
到自豪的事情。作文是开放式的，题目中只给了主题，具体的 写作内容，需要学生们自己
发挥想象力去补充。审题可知，体裁是记叙文，记叙一件自己做过的事情，且 是能让自己
感到自豪的，故文章应使用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成，开头引出话题；第二部分为中心，具体描述事情的过程；最后一部分简要
描写一下自 己的感受。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐
词翻译，写汉语式的英语， 应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结
构，如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档 次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、
状语从句等。或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句 式结构。语句之间使用恰当的
连接成分，以使文意连贯。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。短
文有如下几个 特点：首先短文内容完整、充实，叙述具体，详细，作者描写了自己做饭给
妈妈庆祝生日这件事，符合题 目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句话引出话题；第二段详
细描写了事情的过程；最后一段写了自己的感 受。结构清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用
了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述，注 意了谓语动词过去式的变
化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。语言得体，语法规范，句式结构以简单句为主 ，也使用
了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式结构。短文中较好的句型和短语有：
I
will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.
、
To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday
、
Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs
burned
、
Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears
等。