xom2011年成人高考专升本-英语作文写作要点分析

2021年1月13日发(作者：谢毓晋)
短文写作总分25分。短文写作部分要求考生写出一篇100-120字左右的短文。题材以记叙
文为主，试卷可能给出题目或规定情景或段首句。

短文写作的要求为：能够正确表达思想，意义连贯，无重大语言错误。

写作内容涉及生活，一般常识和私人信件。

短文写作中的题目我们也可以称作命题写作。

情景写作也就是便条写作。

段首句式的写作可以称为主题句式的写作。

一、英语写作训练的要点

英语写作最重要的一点是用英语思维进行写作。

通病：习惯于先把作文翻译成汉语，然后逐字翻译成英语。

在理解和使用英语词汇时，要注意英语和汉语在意义上的不同。

所以我们在从事英语写作训练的时候：

1.要明确英语写作的意义。

2.要学习和掌握必要的写作理论。

3.要通过大量的阅读，新概念第二册比较适合。

写提纲的好处：

1. 可以扩大思路

2. 可以按次序排好素材

3. 将文章分成段

4. 明确写作的中心思想



“The Advantages of Travel (旅行的益处。)”

根据这一题目，在构思时可能会想到以下内容：

strange and different things (看到各种奇异的东西)

g people with different interests (遇到有各种不同兴趣的人)

g us fit and healthy (有助于身体健康)

ng beautiful scenery (欣赏各地美景)

tanding how people live (了解人们怎样生活)

ng famous cities and scenic spots (浏览名城和名胜)

g different foods and local flavors (品尝各地风味)

8. getting ideas of the conditions and customs of other people

（了解各地风土人情)

ng the fervent love for our motherland (激起对祖国的热爱)

g knowledge of geography and history (获得地理历史知识)

one less narrow minded (使人心胸开阔)

g other knowledge (获得其他方面知识)

places read of in books (目睹曾在书上读到过的地方)

The Advantages of Travel

Travel is beneficial to us in at least three ways.

First， by traveling we can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places. We will see with our
own eyes many places

read of in books， and visit some famous cities and scenic spots.

Second， we will meet people with different interests and see strange and different things when
we travel. We can get

ideas of the conditions and customs of other people， taste different foods and local flavors if we
like. In this way， we

can understand how differently other people live.

Third， travel will not only help us to gain knowledge of geography and history and other
knowledge， which arouses the

fervent love for our motherland， but will also help us keep healthy and make us less
narrow-minded. Travel does benefit

us both mentally and physically.

With all these advantages of travel， it is no wonder that travel has now become more popular
than ever in China.

在写100字左右的 作文，我们也强调三段论。第一句话或第一段我们强调我们要写的内容，
第二段找一些例子阐述一下。第 三段再次把我们

强调的内容引申的说一下。

二． 文章的三个部分

引言 introduction

正文 body

结束语 conclusion

专升本英语作文考试中，语法一定要简明扼要，而且要正确。

写好主题句的三条原则

1. 要能说明段落中心思想的内容。

2. 要有能体现中心思想的关键词。

3. 尽量使用简洁明了的句子。

以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生< br>可根据自己的情况选择其中的1－2个，做到能够

熟练正确地仿写或套用。

1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．

2）The reasons for this are as follows．

3）The reason for this is obvious．

4）The reason for this is not far to seek．

5）The reason for this is that．．．

6）We have good reason to believe that．．．

例如：

There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living
standard has been

greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or
like．Last but not least，

more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．

如写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our
life． There are three reasons for

this．这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。

2．表示好处
1）It has the following advantages．

2）It does us a lot of good．

3）It benefits us quite a lot．

4）It is beneficial to us．

5）It is of great benefit to us．

例如：

Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and
widen our horizons．

Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．

3．表示坏处

1）It has more disadvantages than advantages．

2）It does us much harm．

3）It is harmful to us．

例如：

However，everything divides into two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our
health and make us lazy

if we spend too much time watching television．

4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能

1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb．to do sth．

2）We think it necessary to do sth．

3）It plays an important role in our life．

例如：

Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in
business．Soon， computers will be

found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly
important role in our life

and we have stepped into the Computer Age．

5．表示措施

1）We should take some effective measures．

2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties．

3）We should do our utmost in doing sth．

4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with．

例如：

The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious．Therefore，
we must take some effective

measures to solve it.

6．表示变化

1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years．

2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications．

3）The computer has brought about many changes in education．

例如：

Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years．The major reasons for these
changes are not far to

seek．Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from
fruit and vegetable to milk

for vitamins．

7．表示事实、现状
1）We cannot ignore the fact that．．．

2）No one can deny the fact that．．．

3）There is no denying the fact that．．．

4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in．

5）However，that’s not the case．

例如：

We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution．To solve
these problems， we

can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution．The government on its part should
also design stricter

laws to promote a cleaner environment．

8．表示比较

1）Compared with A，B．．．

2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV．

3）There is a striking contrast between them．
例如：

Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable．Firstly，they do
not consume natural

resources of petroleum．Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem．Last but not least，
they contribute to people’

s health by giving them due physical exercise．

9．表示数量

1）It has increased（decreased）from．．．to．．．

2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，000．

3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15％ compared with that of January．

例如：

With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of people’s income spent on food has
decreased while that

spent on education has increased．

再如：

From the graph listed above，it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an
average of less than two

hours per week in 2008 to 20 hours in 2009.

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Practical Writing Samples 英语应用文写作范文

1. A Letter of Apology 道歉信
由于未能及时赴约，给老师写一封道歉信，解释原因请求原谅同时提出希望下一次约会。
You have made an appointment with your teacher, but failed to keep it. Write a letter to your
teacher to
1) Apologize for your failure to keep the appointment,
2) Explain your reason to your teacher, and
3) Express your wish to make another appointment.

Dear Prof. Wang,
I’m writing to ask you to excuse me for not being able to keep our appointment. I do know
that this is very impolite

and must have caused you much trouble.
I do reckon that at present any explanation is pale and futile. However I do not want you to
misunderstand me. On my

way to your office, an old lady suddenly fainted due to heart attack on the bus. I stopped a taxi and
sent her into a

nearby hospital. I stayed there until her son came, which spoiled our appointment.
I am aware that our appointment is of importance. I do hope that you would be kind enough
to spare your valuable to

meet me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely Yours
Li Ming
2. A Letter of Thanks 感谢信
生病住院两周，老师和同学过来看望你，为此你给他们写一封感谢信，表达你的感激之情。
You have been ill and hospitalized for two weeks. Your teachers and classmates went to see you.
Write a letter to them to
1) Thank them for their coming to see you,
2) Describe your feeling, and
3) State your present condition.

Dear Teachers and Classmates,
First of all, please allow me to say “Thank you” to all of you. It is very kind of you to spare
your valuable time

during the period of final examinations and come to see me.
Your visit has given me much confidence and power to overcome the illness. When I first
came to the hospital, I really

felt lonely and did not have enough courage and confidence to overcome the illness. Your visit has
made me feel that I am

not poor and lonely in the world and in fact I am living in a world of love, which has brought me
much confidence and

power to overcome the illness.
These days, my condition has been obviously improved due to the careful treatment offered
by doctors and nurses.

Doctors have told me that I will completely recover from illness in two weeks. I hope that I can
see you earlier.
Again, special thanks go to all of you.
Sincerely Yours
Li Ming
3. A Letter of Invitation邀请信
春节即将来临，你写信邀请外国朋友来中国过春节。
The Spring Festival is coming shortly. You intend to invite your foreign friend to come to China
and spend the traditional

Chinese Festival together. Write a letter to him/her to
1) Express your warm invitation to him/her,
2) Introduce the Spring Festival, and
3) Mention the places you will accompany him/her to visit.

Dear Beckham,
First of all, please allow me to express my heartfelt invitation to you. Since the Spring Festival is
coming shortly, I

sincerely invite you to come to China and spend the holiday with me.
Spring Festival is of much importance to Chinese people. It has a long history and Chinese have
attached much importance

to the holiday. To be exact, the Spring Festival has been the most significant holiday. The Spring
Festival is to Chinese

what Christmas is to the Westerners.
If you come, I am going to accompany you to fairgrounds (庙会), where you can have a close look
at some of the Chinese

traditions.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely Yours
Li Min
4．A Letter of Suggestion 建议信