朝思暮想2013年7月27日雅思写作分析与范文参考

2021年1月14日发(作者：元季川)

2013年7月27日雅思写作分析与范文参考


小作文：两个线图，第一个the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009. 第二个percentage
of running train on time and target from 2000 to 2009.

答题要点：动态图重点写趋势；结论写两个图的联系。

大作文：

The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world spends numerous government
expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?


写作提纲：

restoration


New housing & road

worthy expenditure

1 local history & culture

2 old lifestyle, living museum


1 function well

2 urbanization requirement


参考范文：
During the process of urbanization, governments in different countries show different attitudes
towards their historic buildings. In China, a large quantity of old fashioned houses and sites such
as siheyuan (courtyard houses) and the ancient rampart (City Wall) have been demolished to give
way to modern high rises. （被动句）



The new modern buildings of course look much more glamorous and function better than old ones.