交朋友新东方英语四级写作笔记2(非常完整版)

2021年1月14日发(作者：陈昌浩)
少年易学老难成，一寸光阴不可轻 - 百度文库
实例二 99年6月真题
Reading Selectively Or Extensively?
Outline: 1.有人认为读书要有选择
2.有人认为应当博览群书
3.我的想法
①11分
When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way,
but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is
better.
Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books
are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while
those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should
only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.
But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind
of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains
one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know
more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.
To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as
possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.

②5分
I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are
not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world.
However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be
useful to ours, read those books which we like. But those books which we choose must
be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make
ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our
time which it is limited. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read.
On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They
are all useful to ours.
失分原因：分段太少，语法错误太多
③2分
Most people thought that read books should have been selective. But others believed
reading extensively was correction.
Selective books or reading extensively?
Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,
on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we
interested, and it would be helpful for us.
On another hand. Someone’s interesting was wide. Each book could bring you specific
contain we couldn’t reading at only one level.
I confirmed all of these ideas were good but weren’t wise.
As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to
held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Don’t treat these books with reckless
abandon.
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少年易学老难成，一寸光阴不可轻 - 百度文库
The best technology of reading is connect.
失分原因：分段太多，语法错误太多
④14分
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own
view.
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development
of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is
impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that
are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the
books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.
But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If
one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man
knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we
must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.
Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read
extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one
field.
⑤8分
Some people think reading shall be chosen. Because some books are good to human
beings and some books are harmful to people.
Some people think that men should read books widely. Because wide reading can help
man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.
It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man.
Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be
seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books
and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. We must give up
those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and
money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.
失分原因：结构失调，表述方式单一
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：
（启）Paragraph I：（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点；
（2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
（承）Paragraph II：（1）提出一种观点或优点；
（2）本段的支持性分论点；
（3）本段总结（可以省略）。
（转）Paragraph III：（1）承上启下的过渡句；
（2）提出另一种观点或缺点；
（3）本段的支持性分论点
（4）本段总（可以省略）。
（合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡两种看法；
（2）给出自己的观点。
④14分
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own
view.（启）
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