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作文讲评
下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母 的沟
通。请你根据对该漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。该文应包含以下要点：
1．该漫画告诉了我们什么；
2．你对此现象的看法；
3．我们该如何主动和父母亲沟通。
注意：1．表达时要适当发挥想象，不要仅做简单描述。
2．词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3．文中不得提及本人的相关信息。
参考词汇：漫画caricature。
参考文章：
Modern technology has many advantages. While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the
Internet, we also experience some new problems. This caricature describes one of them. It shows
that the teenage boy is enjoying chatting online so much that he refuses to talk to his parent. I
think it might be common, but it is totally unacceptable. Nothing can replace face- to-face
communication no matter how easy or interesting it is for us to chat with people from across the
world on the Internet.
In most Chinese families, there is only one child. Obviously, we are the centre of our parents’
attention. Many parents are willing to do anything to make sure that we live a good life. It is
understandable that they want to know what’s happening to us, what kind of friends we make
and how we are getting on with our studies.
I think we should let them know us well. For example, we can tell them what’s going on in
school when we have dinner or turn to them for advice when we have problems. In that way, I’m
sure the relationship between us and our parents will become better and better.
学生作文存在的主要问题---
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跑题
：不是写如何与父母交流而如何正确使用电脑 ；
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内容太泛
: 文章最后一部分没有具体交代与父母相处的方法
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