sandy写作：怎样写好英语段落(一)

2021年1月16日发(作者：倪观海)
怎样写好英语段落（一）
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英文写作翻译
段落是文章的 缩影。写好了段落，就能比较成功地写出较好的文章。经过中学英语基础阶段的学
习之后，大学英语的写 作重点就从选词造句转移到了联句成段和联段成篇上。进行段落层次上的
写作训练，是写好英语文章的关 键一环。下面介绍的是段落结构。英文写作翻译
段落（ paragraph ）是由表达单一中心思想（controlling idea or central idea ）的一组句子（包
括主题句 topic sentence,推展句supporting sentences及结论句concluding sentence）构成，是文
章结构的基本独立 单位。本讲我们将就主题句和中心思想这两个方面展开讨论。，
主题句与推展句 ，
1． 主题句英文写作翻译
51Test主题句（topic sentence）是表达段落主题的句子。 它用以概括段落大意，要求全段其
他文字都围绕它展开。请看下例：英文写作翻译
51TestMy mother has passed along to me certain rules for getting along with others. Don't
argue with parents; they will think you don't love them. Don't argue with children; they will
think themselves victimized. Don't argue with spouses; they will think you are a tiresome
mate. Don't argue with strangers; they will think you are not friendly. My mother's rules, in
fact, can be summed up in two words: Don't argue.英文写作翻译
51Test主题句中提出的 指的是什么？展开句中通过四个
逐一加以交代。从结构来看，这是一个比较典型的段落，它包括了主题句，推展句和结论句
（即本段中的 末句）。51Test英文写作翻译
1．1 主题句的位置英文写作翻译
51Test主题 句通常放在段落的开端，其特点是开门见山地摆出问题，然后加以详细说明。其
作用是使文章的结构更清 晰，更具说服力，便于读者迅速地把握主题和想象全段的内容。主
题句可以放在段中起到承上启下的作用 ，或放在段尾起概括全段的作用。但初学者比较难于
掌握，因而在四级考试中，考生应尽量采用将主题句 放在段落开头的写作手法。，
51Test例1: Our life today depends very much on energy. In towns and in villages,
on farms and in factories, machines have made life easier than it used to be. The
machines use energy, and energy is needed for heating, lighting, communications,
carrying goods -- everything. Factories and industrial plants use a great deal of
energy to make the things that we use and buy and sell.，
51Test这段文字所讲的主要是能源问题 。第一句就概括性地提出“我们目前的生活
很大程度上依赖于能源”。而随后出现的三句都是具体事例， 对第一句进行说明和
论述。我们可以断定第一句为该段的主题句（斜体部分）。 ，
51Test例2: （主题句）No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements. （推展句1）
Much as we may pride ourselves on our good taste, we are no longer free to choose the
things we want, for advertising exerts a subtle influence on us. （推展句2）In their efforts to
persuade us to buy this or that product, advertisers have made a close study of human
nature and have classified all our little weakness.英文写作翻译
51Te st以上这段由三句话组成。第一句是主题句，直截了当指出无人不受广告影响这个主
题，接着列举两个 推展句对其补充和支持，指出我们已无法自由选择所需的商品，理由是
广告商已仔细研究了我们的心理， 并完全掌握了我们的弱点。句子衔接自然，步步紧扣主
题。英文写作翻译
1．2 如何写好主题句中的关键词英文写作翻译
51Test段落的主题句对主题的限定主要是通过句中的关 键词来表现的。关键词要尽量写得
具体些。对“具体”的要求包括两个方面：一是要具体到能控制和限制 段落的发展；二是要
具体到能说明段落发展的方法。准确地把握关键词是清楚地表达段落主题、写好段落 主题
句的重要前提之一。在上面的例1，例2中，主题句的关键词分别为：depends very much
on energy; no one can avoid being influenced. 我们再看下列例句：英文写作翻译
51Test原句1: He can fix a bicycle himself.英文写作翻译
51Test斜体部分应为主题句中的 关键词。但它只是限制了段落发展的部分内容，并没有告
诉读者该用哪种方法展开，是用因果关系法还是 用分类法？英文写作翻译
51Test修正：He can fix a bicycle himself in several simple steps. 的英文写作翻译
51Test修正：There are several reasons why he can fix a bicycle himself.英文写作翻译
51Test原句2: She tries to improve her looks.英文写作翻译
51Test斜体部分应为 主题句中的关键词。她试着改变她面容的理由是什么？或者她采取什
么方法来改善呢？我们无法从关键词 中清楚得知。英文写作翻译
51Test修正：She tries many ways to improve her looks. 的英文写作翻译
51Test修正：There are some reasons why she tries to improve her looks。英文写作翻译
1.3 如何写好主题句的中心思想英文写作翻译
51Test主题句由两部分组成，即主题(topic)和中心思想（controlling id ea）。中心思想的
作用是导向(control)和制约(limit)。我们前面谈到的关键词就反 映了中心思想。所谓导向
就是规定段落的发展脉络，所谓制约就是限制主题的覆盖范围，两者不可分割。 没有导向，
内容就会离题或偏题；没有制约，内容就可能超出一个段落所能容纳的范围。英文写作翻译
51Test对于初学写作的人来说，“导向”的重要性容易理解，但如果由他们自己来构思一 个
主题句，就可能忽视“制约”这一面。例如：英文写作翻译
51TestThere are two ways in which one can own a book. The first is the property right you
establish by paying for it, just as you have made it a part of yourself and the best way to
make yourself a part of it is by writing in it.英文写作翻译
51Test本段的主题句如果没有in which 引出的定语从句，那么two ways 不仅不能起制约
作用，而且也不能起导向作用，句子本身读起来也就使人觉得欠缺点什么。英文写作翻译
51TestExercise is beneficial to your heart. A 22-year study was conducted by doctors in
California. They found that people who work at physical jobs experience fewer heart
attacks than other people. These active people work all the time at moderate speeds, their
daily routine gives them an adequate amount of exercise and helps them stay in shape.英文
写作翻译
51Test这是毫无疑义的。但主题句中如不加上来加
以 control 和 limit，那就流于空泛。英文写作翻译
51Test因此，紧紧把握主题句中controlling idea的导向和制约作用，是短文写作成功关键
之一。英文写作翻译
2．推展句英文写作翻译
2.1 主要推展句英文写作翻译
51Test主要推展句(major supporting statement)的主要特点是： 围绕段落主题句展开的每
一个推展句本身都不要求作进一步的说明或证明，句与句之间的关系是相互独立 又是互相
连接的。英文写作翻译
51Test例1：(主题句) There are several factors affecting climate. (推展句1)One factor is the
mount of sunlight received. (推展句2)Altitude, or the height above sea level, also
determines climate. (推展句3)The oceans have an effect on the climate of adjacent land. (推
展句4)In addition, climate is influenced by the general circulation of the atmosphere.英文
写作翻译
51Test主题句指出影响气候的几个因素。然后用 四个扩展句说明四种因素。第一种是太阳
光的接收量，第二种是海拔高度，第三句和第四句分别是海洋和 大气环流因素。英文写作
翻译
2.2 次要推展句英文写作翻译
51Test次要推展句(minor supporting statement)是指对主要推展 句作进一步的事实分析和
举例说明。它从属于某一个或某几个推展句。英文写作翻译
51Test例2：(主题句)I don't teach because teaching is easy for me. (主要推展句1)Teaching
is the most difficult of the various ways I have attempted to earn my living: mechanic,
carpenter, writer. (主要推展句2)For me, teaching is a red-eye, sweaty- palm,
sinking-stomach profession. (次要推展句1)Red- eye, because I never feel ready to teach no
matter how late I stay up preparing. (次要推展句2)Sweaty-palm, because I'm always
nervous before I enter the classroom, sure that I will be found out for the fool that I am. (次
要推展句3)Sinking-stomach, because I leave the classroom an hour later convinced that I
was even more boring than usual.英文写作翻译
51Test从属于主要推展句2的三个次要推展句起着解释说明作用，分别解释red-eye,
sweaty-palm, sinking-stomach的含义，这就更加形象生动地证明了
这个主题。英文写作翻译
2．3 主要推展句与次要推展句的关系英文写作翻译
5 1Test主要推展句与次要推展句的关系(relation)基本可以遵循下面的“三部分”(three- part)
规则。英文写作翻译
51Test1〕每个主要推展句都应该是对主题句中表示主 要思想的关键词的直接、明确的说明。
英文写作翻译
51Test2〕每个次要推展句都应该说明它的主要推展句。英文写作翻译
51Test3 〕含有讨论说明或分析的问题通常既要有主要推展素材，又要有次要推展素材。英
文写作翻译
2．4 写好推展句的方法英文写作翻译
51Test主题句及关键词确定后，开始选择和主 题有关的信息和素材。实质上，针对关键词
测试每一个所选择的素材就是一个分类的过程。有一种常用的 方法就是句子展开前加以设
问，然后解答，即设问－解答(why- because)的方法。下面我们通过举例来看一看这种分类
过程是如何完成的。例3：英文写作翻译
51Test假设 (suppose) Topic sentence: English is an international language?英文写作翻译
51Test设问(why) Why can we say English is an international language?英文写作翻译
51Test解答(because)英文写作翻译
51TestBecause: English is spoken by pilots and airport control operators on all the airways
of the world.英文写作翻译
51TestBecause: Over 70 percent of the world's mail is written in English.英文写作翻译
51TestBecause: More than 60 percent of the world's radio programs are in English.英文写
作翻译
51TestBecause: Pakistan was once one of the British colonies.英文写作翻译
51TestBecause: Many members of the International Language Society are selected from
English-spoken countries.英文写作翻译
51Test从上面可以看出，最初的三个推展句是和关键词an international language一致的。
第四句和主题句不统一，尽管第四句会成为另一主题句(Many Pakistanis speak English)很
好的推展句。第五句说服力不强。英文写作翻译
51Test当然，在写成段落时，没有必要在每个句子开头写上 ，但是，在动笔展
开句子时 ，头脑里要想着这个词，这种检验方法能帮助你把注意力集中在某个重心，围绕
主题思想层层展开。英文 写作翻译
51Test上面我们讨论了主要推展句的一种展开方法。而展开次要推展句的方法与主要推 展
句类似，这里我们就不再复述了。
怎样写好英语段落（二）
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段落发展的手段及结尾段的写法英文写作翻译
51Test在上一讲我们讲了主题句，推展句 的写法；这一讲我们要进一步来谈一谈段落发展的几种
手段以及结尾段的写法。英文写作翻译
51Test段落发展的几种手段，
1． 列举法(details)英文写作翻译
51Test作者运用列举法，是通过列举一系列的论据对topic sentence中摆出的论点
进行广泛、全面地陈述或解释，列举的顺序可以按照所列各点内容的相对重要性、
时间、空间等 进行。，
51TestYesterday was one of those awful days for me when everything I did went
wrong. First, I didn't hear my alarm clock and arrived late for work. Then, I didn't
read my diary properly and forgot to get to an important meeting with my boss.
During the coffee break, I dropped my coffee cup and spoilt my new skirt. At lunch
time, I left my purse on a bus and lost all the money that was in it. After lunch, my
boss was angry because I hadn't gone to the meeting. Then I didn't notice a sign on
a door that said
couldn't get into my flat because I had left my key in my office. So I broke a window
to get in and cut my hand.英文写作翻译
51Test根据本段主题句中的关键词组everything I did went wrong，作者列举了8
点内容，分别由first, then, during the coffee break, after lunch time等连接词语引
出，使得该文条理清楚、脉络分明、内容连贯。英文写作翻译
51Test常用于列举法的过渡连接词有：for one thing , for another, finally, besides,
moreover, one another , still another, first, second, also等。，
2. 举例法(example)英文写作翻译
51Test作者通过举出具体事例来阐述、 说明主题句的内容，严格地讲，举例法也是
列举法的一种，它们的区别在于：列举法侧重罗列事实，所列 事实力求全面；而举
例法侧重通过举出典型事例来解释作者观点，且事例可多可少。英文写作翻译
51Test我们来看下面这个用举例法展开的段落。，