如何快速提高英语写作水平

2021年1月16日发(作者：乐舜日)

如何快速提高英语写作水平


学生写作能力较差的第 一个层面表现在词汇贫乏、句子结构错
误、中式表达等。因此首先要在句式的基础训练上下功夫，做到句 子
结构准确，表达无误，并培养自己一句多译的能力，进行不同句式结
构表达训练。

同学们可以在表达多样化上有所提升， 突破单一句式，使文章
生动活泼、结构紧凑。比如可以学会运用以下表达方式：

1. 使用非谓语动词形式

用非谓语动词可以使句子简洁。例如：

We were surrounded by a variety of buildings. We found ourselves
deeply absorbed in the sight. After the visit, we left the park and we felt
joyful.

Surrounded by a variety of buildings, we found ourselves deeply
absorbed in the sight. After the visit, we left the park feeling joyful.



2. 使用with的复合结构

with的复合结构, 也就是独立主格结构,常作伴随状语以增加被
描绘内容的生动性，使文章读起来更简洁明了。

例如：

I could not go on studying because there was so much noise
troubling me.

I could not go on studying with so much noise troubling me.（2004
广东卷）

3. 使用复合句

复合句可以把结构松散的句子连接起来，从而使表达显得高级。
例如：

① Occasions are quite rare when I have the time to spend a day
with my kids. （2008山东卷）

② It is our belief that improvements in environment will contribute


to the development of our society.

③ Additionally, as the data shows, there are roughly 350 million
smokers in China, 75% of which are males while 25% are females. What
amazes us is that around 540 million people are affected by second hand
smoke. （2010广东高考考场作文）

4. 使用倒装句， 强调句， 虚拟语气等

使用这些句式可使文章化平淡为生动，加强语气，使评卷老师感
受到作者的强烈情感。

He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in
the newspaper.

It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew
what had happened. （强调句）

Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what
had happened. （倒装句）

综合使用以上句式， 长短句结合，可以增强句子的连贯性和表


现力。

要 写出好的文章，词句的积累非常重要。恰当地运用一些常用的
习惯表达和典型句式既能有效地减少文章中 的病句，又能给文章添
彩。

对课文中出现的佳句，同学们可以进行摘录。 笔者创编了下面的
几个句子，同学们可以先口头后书面练习：

① 帮助他学习数学， 对我来说也是一个显摆自己的机会。

Here was a chance for me to distinguish myself by helping him learn
maths.

（练习表达distinguish oneself ）

② 虽然做好了失败的准备，我仍然感到伤心并决定抓住每一分
钟更加努力提高我的英语。

Prepared for the failure， I still felt upset and decided to work even
harder to seize every minute to improve my English.



（练习过去分词作状语；表达seize every minute to do sth. ）

③ 被她的耐心所感动，我对自己的粗鲁行为感到尴尬并决定学
做有耐 心的人，这有助于我与同学、朋友和父母很好地相处。

Moved by her patience, I felt embarrassed for my rude behavior and
decided to learn to be a patient person, which helps me get along well
with my classmates, my friends and my parents.

（练习过去分词作状语；定语从句的用法）

④ 只有把竞争和合作相联合，才能有助于我们达到目标并满足
自身需求。

Only when competition combines with cooperation can it help in
obtaining our goals and satisfying our needs.

（练习倒装句；表达obtain one?蒺s goal, satisfy one?蒺s needs）

这样 ，一些好词、好的表达、好的句式，经过反复的语言实践后，
已经内化成自己的东西，用时自然轻车熟路 。