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2021年1月17日发(作者:蓝廷芳)
八年级上册书面表达训练

作文指导加范例点评与练习
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Unit1 Where did you go on vacation ?
写作指南

本单元的写作任务是写关于假期活动的文章。写这样的文章时,
要从以下几
个方面入手:

1
.你在哪儿度的假期?

2
.在假期期间你做什么了?

3
.那儿的天气怎么样?

4
.你认为那儿的人怎么样?

5
.你喜欢那儿的食物吗?为什么?

由于写的活动已经过去,故时态用一般过去时。

常用句型:

1

I went to...on vacation.
2

The food there was...
3

The people there were...
佳作欣赏

去年的暑假你是怎样度过的?去了什么地方?那里的食物怎么样?那里的< br>人怎么样?有哪些有趣的或难忘的事情发生?和大家分享一下吧。
请运用本单元
所学知识 ,写一篇关于假期活动的短文。

I still remembered my last
summer vacation. My
family
and
I
went
to
see my
grandparents in the countryside. The weather there was nice. Sometimes I went to the
mountains
with
my
grandfather.
Sometimes
I
went
swimming
by
myself.
My
grandmother
cooked
delicious
food
for
us
every
day.
In
the
evening

we
all
sat
together and watched TV
.
What a great time we had!
点评:
作者用
I still remembered my last summer vacation
引入正题,
介绍了在
暑假期间和家 人去乡下看望祖父母的经历。
重点介绍了在乡下的活动,
讲述得条
理有序。
其 中
sometimes
的使用,
使文中内容更为丰富。
最后以
Wha t a great time
we had
!结尾,既写出了自己的感受,又对全文进行了总结。


写作练习





Unit1


假设你是张杰。
你父母去过世界上许多地方旅游。
然而,
给你印象 最深的是巴黎
之旅。请根据下面表格提示,以
The trip to Paris
为 题写一篇
70
字左右的文章。
开头已给出,不计入总词数。












Paris

France
Time
Hong you stay there
What you did
Last summer vacation
For four days
visited
the
Eiffel
Tower
,tasted
delicious
wine
and
bought
something nice
tired but excited
Feeling


参考范文:








































The trip Paris

My name is Zhang Jie. My parent and I visited many big city around the
the
trip
to
Pais,France
was
the
most
exciting

went
to
Pais
last
summer

got
there
by
plane
and
stayed
there
for
five

we
were
in
Paris,we visited the Eiffel Tower and many other places of interest of us had
a
great

is
famous
for
its
delicious

we
tasted
,we
bought
something nice and went to gh the trip seemed to be short and we were
tired,we felt excited.


Unit 2

How often do you exercise?
写作指南

本单元是写关于介绍某人进行某活动的文章。
通常以记叙文的形式 体现。

此文章时,应注意:

一、可以开篇点题,在文章的开始交代人物, 然后再进一步详细叙述情况。
如做了什么事,多久做一次等,使文章内容具体、充实。

二、合理选用人称,记叙文可以用第一人称,也可以用第三人称来写。人称
不同,其利弊不同。用第一 人称行文,文章比较生动、形象,它给读者身临其境
的感觉,
但其叙述的范围受到一定的限制。
因为它无法同时叙述发生在不同地方
的事件。用第三人称行文,没有这种局限性,但是,用第三 人称很难把不同地点
的不同人物发生的事件排列恰当。
具体用哪种人称,
需要根据作文 的要求来处理。

三、在结束时,可以用一两句话点明所叙述事情的作用。

佳作欣赏

下表列出了你的四个朋友喜欢的活动和他们做这些活动的频率,
请 根据表格
内容写一篇文章描述一下。



Name
Activity
How often
John
Playing basketball
Almost every day
David
Surfing the Internet
Once two weeks
Han Mei
Shopping
Three times a week
Li Ping
Reading in the library
Once a week
_________________________________________ ____________________________
__________________ __________________________________________________ _
_____________________________________________ ________________________
______________________ _______________________________________________
_________________________________________________ ____________________
There are fifty students in our

David

Han Mei and Li Ping are my
best me tell you what they like doing best.
John
likes
playing
basketball

plays
it
almost
every

says
basketball is very exciting

but he doesn't care about the results of the
likes surfing the Internet

but his parents don't want him to play with the computer too
he surfs the Internet once two Mei likes shopping does
shopping three times a Ping likes reading in the goes there once a
about you

What do you like doing best

How often do you do it?
点评:开篇点题,说明作者的好朋友喜欢的活动,从而为下文做好铺垫。按
照表格,< br>运用恰当的短语和句子描述了他们的具体活动,
并写出了从事这些活动
的频率,同时加进 了对这些活动的评价,显得丰满不空洞。最后两句紧扣上文,
起到了与上文相呼应的作用。


习作练习:





Unit

2

某报社学生习作栏目正在向广大学生征文。请以
Let

s do exercise together
为题,
根据以下提示,写一


60-80
词的短文,向该栏目投稿。开头已给出,不计入总次数。


运动的重要性



上学时步行或骑自行车


保持健康

体育课做各种锻炼
(跑步、
打篮球
......




保持良好心态

周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等
......

..........



参考范文:






















Let

s do exercise together.
It

s very important for us to do exercise can make us healthy and
help us keep

s more,taking exercise is good for our study.
We can do many kinds of exercise whenever we is good for us to go to
school on foot or by PE class,we can do exercise such as running
jumping playing basketball and so weekends,we can climb mountains or go
swimming with our ,we can go hiking during the vacations.
Let

s do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!

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