问道捉迷藏人教新目标八年级英语上册书面表达写作范文

2021年1月17日发(作者：蒋医民)
人教新目标八年级英语上册书面表达写作范文

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、写在前面的话

期末考试对书面表达的要求






能在所学词汇，
句型和语法范围内，
根据不
同的情景造句，能根据提示，仿照学过的话 题或
题材写简单的文段。

考试说明中对书面表达提出了两个不同层面的要
求 。一个为句子层面要求，即：检查语句顺序，将
所给短语组成正确的语句，另一个为语篇层面要
求，
即：
将所给提示组成正确的语句，
并按照逻辑
关系将句子组成段落和语篇 。第一个要求比较低，
第二个要求比较高。
在语篇层面的要求中，
考试说
明中 对书面表达题，
给出了范围。
即，
仿照学过的
话题或是题材，
所以在 备考时，
同学们一定要注意
课本中学习过的话题，不能漫无边际地练习。

影响书面表达的因素





词汇量，常用句型，语法知识的正确运用，
中文的负干扰。

对于考试说明中 表一的音讯要熟练掌握，能够
运用。同学们复习时不能只是记忆它的用法和拼
写形式，而应当将 词构成短语来记忆，才能保证
时有足够的语言来表述自己的思想。如：
Sunday
→ on Sunday → on Sunday morning
等。

中文的负干扰

许多同学在表达英文时，根据母语进行翻译，
也就是我们所说 的对号入座，这种错误在书面表
达中非常普遍，其实两种语言是不可能完全一样
的，如：

我花了
10
元钱买了这本书。

I spent ten yuan on the book.
I spent the yuan in buying the book.
The book cost me ten yuan.
I paid ten yuan for the book.
以上这些表达方式都可以表达同一个意思 ，所
以同学们在学习中一定要注意积累这样的句型，
以备书面表达时使用。

在复习阶段我们还可以多做改写句子的练习，
以便我们能灵活运用所学的知识，将它们融会贯
通 。

要注意连接词的运用，因为写文章并不是把句
子简单的堆砌在一起，要理清句子与 句子之间的
关系，
然后用连接词，
把简单句合并成为复合句，
使文章通顺。< br>
II
、八年级上册各单元范文
。供各位同学参考，
经典范文要背诵下 来，希望对你期末考试有所帮
助！
Go for it,and you will get great success!


Unit 1 How often do you o exercise?

写作要求：
写你熟悉的一位名人的生活方式。< br>（分
析：从三个方面写，分别是
exercise,
diet,
s leep,
每个方面
2
句话，加上开头与结尾各一句，正好
8
句话， 大概是
60
左右的单词）

Jay
Chou
is
a
famous
pop
singer.
He’s
pretty
healthy. He exercises every day. He plays basketball
ten
times a week. He tries to eat lots of vegetables
and fruit. He also loves junk food but he eats it once
or twice a week .He sleeps eight hours every night.
He often says
：
“Good food and exercise help me to
sing better.”

Unit 2 what's the matter?
标题
the way to keep healthy or how to keep healthy
（分析：
从三个方面写，
分别是
exercise, diet, sleep,
每个方面
2
句话，加上开头与结尾各一句，正好
8
句话，大概是
60
左右的单词）

All of us want to be healthy. First I think sleep is
important. Usually we need about eight hours’ sleep
every
night.
A
healthy
diet
is
also
important.
We
should eat lots of vegetables and fruit. We shouldn’t
eat too much junk food. Everyone needs to exercise
such as running and playing ball games.
Of course there are other ways to keep healthy. I
think having a good state of mind is very important.

Unit 3 What are you doing for vacation?
假
期
计
划
（< br>分
析
写
作
思
路
：
where→when→w ho→how
long→what,
分
别
是
假
期去了哪里 ，什么时间去的
,
和谁一起去的，呆了
多长时间，在那里做了什么）






Summer
vacation
is
coming.
I
plan
to
go
to
Beijing
with
my
parents.
We’re
leaving
the
first
week
in
August
and
staying
for
five
days.
We
are
thinking about visiting the Great Wall because it’s a
good place to go sightseeing. We are going to Tian
Anmen Square and visiting the Summer palace and
Forbidden
City.
I
think
we’ll
have
a
good
time
in
Beijing. I can’t wait!





















Unit
4
How
do
you
get
to
school?
标题
My best way of going to school (
分析：< br>开头点
题，直接给出最喜欢的交通方式是什么，然后从
三个方面阐述原因
fir st
,second,
third,
最后总结，
与开头呼应
)
I like to go to school on foot best. First, my home
is not far away from my school. Second, on my way
to
school,
the
traffic
is
heavy.
There
are
too
many
bikes,
buses
and
cars
on
the
street.
Third,
I
also
think
walking
is
a
kind
of
sport.
It’s
good
for
my
health. So it’s the best way for me to go to school.


Unit 5 Can you come to my party?
写一封回信拒绝邀请

Hi Henry
Thank you for your invitation. I’m sorry, but I can’t
come
next
week.
On
Monday,
I
have
to
go
to
the
doctor. On Tuesday, I’m shopping
with my friends.
On
Wednesday,
I
have
to
go
to
see
my
dad.
On
Thursday, I’m studying for my English test. And on
Friday, I’m going to the movies with some friends.
Please call me after the vacation.
Tony
Unit 6 I’m more outgoing than my sister.

以
My best friend
为题，
写一篇记述文。
（运用比
较级）






My best friend is Wang Lei. He is a smart boy
and
his
lessons
are
very
great.
We
both
like
doing
the
game
things,
though
in
some
ways,
I’m
very
different
from
him.
He
is
taller
and
more
outgoing
than me. We both like sports, but Wang Lei is more
athletic than me. Also, I’m quieter than he is.


do you make a banana milk shake?
请你写一篇制作玉米花
(popcorn)
的小短文。注意
使用
fi rst, next, then, finally
等表示过程的词。
不少