中国未成网2010-全国卷英语短文改错(含答案)

2021年1月17日发(作者：苗振宇)
2010-2015
年全国卷英语短文改错

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误 。文中共有
10
处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单
词的增加、删 除或修改。







增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（∧）
，并在其下面写出该加的词。







删除：把多余的词用斜线（

）划掉。








修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。






注意：
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．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；








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．只允许修改
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处，多者（从第
11
处起）不计分。

2010
年（全国卷
I
）

It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do was to write a story
or present it. My teachers have been telling me how great my writing was. So if they had said was true, I would have a
chance of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living near my
house, who was a very much famous writer. He agreed to reading my story and give me some advices on how to write
like a real writer.

2010
年（全国卷
II
）

Christie was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together. Thank to her help,
I made great progress in my study. Last year, she decided to study to abroad. In other words, we would be separated
long time. Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show
my best wishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has
ever had. From then on,
we’ve
kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near
future.

2011
年（全国卷
I
）

One of my unforgettable memory of my school in Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. I hold
my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunch bell finally
rang, my friends and me met under a tall tree and had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang
with me. Nang is a specially kind of cake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. Now Aigulie and I study at different
colleges or we can only see each other during the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I miss the food and the
good time we had together.

2011
年（全国卷
II
）

Dear George,
It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. Thank you very much for showing them
around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington
D.C. ,that we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to
staying another couple of day. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday
afternoon. It was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than happy to
be your guide.

Yours, Mike
2011
年全国新课标卷

My summer travel started terribly. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I
was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my
ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had
stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It
felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend, he lent to me lots

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of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

2012
年（全国卷
I
）

Every one of us can make a great efforts to cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all of us can
start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need. That won't

easy, I know
，
but we have to
start anywhere. What's more, we can go to work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy smaller cars that
burn less oil. Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home. For example, how many times
have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there?

2012
年（全国卷
II
）

Dear Editor,
I’
m writing to tell you opinion about water saving. Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live without
water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. Many
countries in the world find we don
’
t have enough water. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all out to
plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no drinking water should left running. Third, we should find ways
to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.

Sincerely, Li Hua
【
2012
全国新课标】

I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was abou
t six, I destroyed each of my toy. I
was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me
new toys. But before long they began
to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said,
ou.
itude changed from then on

2013
年新课标
1
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four
when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall,
with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black



toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set
himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away
during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.



2013
年新课标
2
The book I
’
m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain
．
It is said to have started in the early 1800
’
s
．
Have
tea
in
the
late
afternoon
provides
a
bridge
between
lunch
and
dinner,
that
might
not
be
served
until
8
o
’
clock
at
night
．
This custom soon becomes another meal of day
．
Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain
（瓷器）
industry
．
Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles
．
When tea got popular in Britain, there was
a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits
．
This made for the grow in the porcelain industry
．

2013
年

(
全国一卷）

My
father
and
I
stayed
at
the
South
Lake
Hotel
for
a
week
when
we
visit
Beijing
last
month.
It
is
in
the
downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

We
lived
in
a
comfortably
double-room
with
a
big
bath.
What
I
liked
best
were
the
free
high-speed
Internet
connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in
Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
2013
年

(
全国二卷）

Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car,

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