凤翔租房英语四级作文练习

2021年1月17日发(作者：任廷桂)


















英语四级作文练习

一．
统计图表作文描写常用句型及词汇：



we can see from the chart/graph/table/diagram
…

chart/graph/table/diagram shows that
…

As is shown in
…
;

According to
…
;

As can be seen in
…


chart/
graph/
table/
diagram
shows
a
great/
sharp/
sudden/
slow/
rapid
…
increase/ drop...
4. To make a generalization;

on the whole;

in short;

in a word;

in
summary;


To
sum
up;
As
a
result;
As
a
consequence;


in
general/
generally speaking
5.
表示增长、上升的词汇

动词：
increase, rise, climb, go up, soar, skyrocket
，

副词：
sharply, remarkably, obviously, significantly, gradually, slowly
6.
表示下降、减少的词汇
decrease, drop, fall, go down, decline
7.
表示持续不变的词汇
level off;remain steady/unchanged
8.
表示倍数的词汇




double; triple the number of / the percentage of; four / five times
9.
表示多少的词汇：
a little/

much/

a lot more/ less than
…
, over
…


二．英语四级作文类型

(
一
)
统计图表型



Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write
a composition based on the chart given below. You should write at least
150 words but no more than 200 words.




参考范文



The past years have witnessed a mounting number of Chinese scholars
returning from overseas. As is lively illustrated by the column chart,
the
number
of
returnees
climbed
from
a
mere
69.3
thousand
in
2008
to
over
272.9 thousand in 2012, at an annual increase rate of around 50%.


A multitude of factors may have led to the tendency revealed by the
chart,
but
the
following
are
the
critical
ones
from
my
perspective.
First
and
foremost,
along
with
the
development
of
Chinese
economy
and
society,
the
number
of
Chinese
studying
abroad
has
been
soaring
in
the
past
years,
which has provided an
expanding base for
the number of
returnees. In the
second
place,
the
government
has
enacted
a
series
of
preferential
policies
to attract overseas Chinese scholars back home. Last but not least, the
booming economy, science and technology in this country have generated
more attractive job opportunities for scholars returning from overseas.


The waves of returnee
s will definitely contribute to this nation’s
development, since they have brought back not only advanced science and
technology
but
also
pioneering
concepts
of
education
and
management.
With
more scholars coming back from overseas, and with the concerted efforts
of the whole nation, we have reasons to expect a faster rejuvenation of
this country.

（二）

图片评论式作文（图画作文）


对于图画 作文，
基本可以认为是我们小学时练习的
“看图说话”
。
虽然题目不会给出提
纲，但是一般基本的写作思路是固定的：
描述图片、阐明观点、给出建议。



第一段，
重点描述图画内容。
这点在题干中也有强调
(with
a
brief
description
of
the
picture)
。对图画内容的描述可以饮用图画中人物的对话。
简要描述即可，不用发散 或挖
掘。也就意味着，事实上你若看不懂图画中的“核废物”之，其实没关系，也可以照抄。



第二段，
阐明观点。
而观点在题干中事实上给得很清楚：
the
importance
of
doing
small
things before undertaking something big.
这 进一步说明仔细审清题干比看懂图画中的
对话更重要。
阐明观点之后的思路与一般的六级英语作 文提纲型写作一致，
如我们一般在课
上所提的，
可以先举例说明现象、
然后再 探讨导致现象的原因以及该现象可能导致的影响等；
还可结合数字、研究、名言等进行论证。



末段，除了总结观点外，一般还可以提出建议。
这段的写法无论是图画、 图表还是提
纲写作、甚至格言谚语型写作，都差别不大。



这说 明四、六级的出题思路不再拘泥于传统的提纲写作，开始进行多种变化。我们也要
对相应的考法做好准备 。



但无论哪种考法，最核心的仍然是：仔细审题、清晰思路、不要犯错 。四级一贯会在写
作题干中包含重要信息甚至观点，
因此审题必不可少；
各种考法的文 章展开方式、
各段写法
有类似之处，
我们要学会融会贯通，
以及文章只要没有 犯语言错误，
即便遣词造句不那么漂
亮，分数也不会低。

比起图表作文来， 图画作文要更灵活，更富于变化。我们一定要多练习，以达到一看
到图画（含图中和图边文字）和提纲（ 有时有文章标题）就能有效地审题解题，构造出合
理的具体段落的目的。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short
essay. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture.
You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.






This is a satiric but true-to-life drawing. As we can see in it, a
man is drowning, with
only one arm
above water gesturing
for help.
Those
standing on the bank,
however, instead of lending a helping hand, are busy photographing with
their
mobile
phones,
most
possibly
taking
the
scene
as
another
eyeball-attractor on the Internet.


Exaggerating as it might be, the phenomenon mirrored by the cartoon
is
not
uncommon
in
modern
society.
Actually,
both
the
picture
and
instances
in
real
life
point
to
the
fact
that
many
people
nowadays
ignore
what they should do due to the use of mobile phones and the Internet. It
never too rare to
see some people
taking pictures
of newly served
dishes
in a restaurant and upload them to their friend circle in We Chat. Nor
is
it
to
find
people
busy
taking
photos
and
update
their
micro
blogs
when
touring.
Some
even
fail
to
take
proper
actions
in
case
of
emergency,
just
as the crowd in the picture do. Their only goal seems to be attracting
as much attention online as possible.


Such
being
the
case,
it
is
high
time
that
we
pondered
over
the
problem
and figured out a solution. Among all measures, I believe, the central
one should be resisting the temptation of vanity brought along by such
modern self-media as micro blog, and coming more back to life itself.

（三）

提纲式作文




1
．对立观点式



A
．有人认为
X
是好事，赞成
X
，

为什么？



B
．有人认为
X
是坏事，

反对
X
，为什么？



C
．我的看法。



Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that
支持
X
的第一个原因。
They also argue that
支持
X
的另一个原因。



However,
other
people
stand
on
a
different
ground.
They
consider
it
harmful
to
do
X.
They
firmly
point
out
that
反对
X
的第一个理由。
An
example
can
give
the
details
of this argument:
一个例子。



There
is
some
truth
in
both
arguments.
But
I
think
the
advantages
of
X
overweigh
the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might
bring about, X also may X
的有一个坏处。

2.
批驳观点式



A
．一个错误观点。



B
．

我不同意。



Many people argue that
错误观点。
By saying that, they mean
对这个观点的进一
步解释。
An example they have presented is that
一个例子。
（
According to a survey
performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them
赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个
错误观点的影响）
。



There
might
be
some
element
of
truth
in
these
peop
le’s
belief.
But
if
we
consider
it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that
与错误观点相反的观点。
There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (
以下参照辩论文的议论文写法
)
。

3.
社会问题（现象）式



A
．一个社会问题或者现象。



B
．

产生的原因



C
．对社会和我们生活的影响



D
．

如何杜绝。
（如果是问题的话）



E
．

前景的预测。



Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental
problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to
a survey,
调查内容说明这种现象的情况（或者是一个例子）
。



There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.
下面参照辩论
式议论文的写法。



X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has
been articulated
（表达）
in the following aspects.
参照辩论式议论文的写法。



A
dozen
of
measures
are
supposed
to
take
to
prevent
X
from
bringing
us
more
harm.
参照辩论式议论文的写法。



Based
on
the
above
discussions,
I
can
easily
forecast
that
more
and
more
people
will ……..


(
四
)
对立观点型



Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
composition of at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according
to the following information:


Currently,
a
number
of
schools
allow
students
to
grade
their
teachers
and even decide if the teachers can teach on or not. This has given rise
to
a
heated
debate,
with
some
approving
of
the
pratice
and
others
strongly
opposed to it. Now discuss both views and give your own opinion.
(
五
)
观点认同型



Directions:
For
this
part
you
are
allowed
30
minutes
to
write
a
short
essay
entitled
My
View
on
Plastic
Surgery.
In
your
essay
you
should
clearly
state
your
view
and
support
your
view
with
appropriate
reasons
or
examples.
You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
(
六
)
解决问题型

Directions:
For
this
part,
you
are
allowed
30
minutes
to
write
a
short
essay
entitled
College
Students
Playing
Truant.
In
your
essay
your
should
probe
into
the
causes
of
and
the
solution
to
the
problem.
You
should
write
at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
(
七
)
名言警句型

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
composition
on
the
topic
A
Curse
Can
Be
a
Blessing
in
Disguise.
You
should
write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
(
八
)
书信型



Directions:
For
this
part,
you
are
allowed
30
minutes
to
write
a
letter
of complaint according to the following situation: You bought an air
conditioner in Sun Appliance
and had it
installed the
other day, but
you
found that the fan made too much noise when the machine operated. You
demand the store to send a representative to check it up.


You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Do
not
sign
your
own
name
at
the
end
of
the
letter;
use
Li
Ming
instead.
You
do not need to write the address.
(
九
)
读后感型



Directions:
Read
the
story
in
Chinese
below,
and
then
write
a
composition under the
title
of “The
Goal of Life”. You should
write at
least
150
words
but
no
more
than
200

composition
should
be
based
on the story and the following outline.
1) What have you learned from the story?
2) What is the goal of your life? If you have achieved the goal of your
life, what would you do?


目

标



在英国有一位残疾青年，
他双腿走起路来很困难，
却凭着坚强的信念和毅力
创造了一次又一次的壮举：他
19
岁时登上了世界最 高峰珠穆朗玛峰
;21
岁时登上
了阿尔卑斯山
;22
岁时登上了乞力 马扎罗山，
28
岁前他登上了世界上所有著名的
高山。然而，就在
28
岁这一年他自杀了。原来在他
11
岁时，他父母在攀登乞力马
扎罗山时不幸遭遇雪崩 双双遇难。
他的父母临行前给他留下了遗嘱，
希望他能象
父母一样，
登上世界 上所有著名的高山。
这位残疾青年把父母的遗嘱作为他人生
奋斗的目标，
当实现全部目 标的时候，
他感到前所未有的无奈和绝望。
他留下遗
言：“如今，功成名就的我感到无 事可做了，我没有了新的目标……”

(
十
)
给主题句型



Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write