万家铭2021届高考英语二轮复习写作必做题——短文改错+书面表达(四)

2021年1月18日发(作者：绯雨倾城结局)

2021届高考英语二轮复习
短文改错+书面表达
（四）
题组一：
1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写
的以 下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误
仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Once during a flight, I sit next to an old man named Cliff, which was a
fan of China. He had been studying Chinese for years, and he tried his
best to learning a few new words every day. My friendly neighbor shared
some of his life story with me, too. He had owned several businesses and
had been failed in a number of them. However, Cliff thought his life was
quite successfully. He spoke of his failure with same interest as he talked
about his success. His life was wonderful but his experiences were
meaningful. I never spoke ill of the people in his life and was thankful
with all of them.
2.寒假即将来临。你班同学讨论了假期计划,提出了不同看法,请根据


提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文,并谈谈你的看法。
呆在家中: 花费少、舒适方便,但不能亲身了解外界。
外出旅游: 增长知识、开阔眼界,但花费多、旅途不便。
注意:
1.短文写在答题卡上的指定区域,词数80-120(不含已写好部分)。
2.短文必须包括表中所列要点,可根据内容分段表述。
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
4.参考词汇:眼界―horizon(或view)
The winter holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about
what to do during the holiday.
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题组二：
1.假定英语课上老师要 求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写
的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处 。每处错误
仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。


修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am a student from No. 1 Middle School, informing that you are
looking for a student to serve as a spokesman for pandas, I am very
exciting. I hope that I can get the opportunity to do something else for
pandas. I have been the panda lover since my childhood. Pandas are too
lovely that they bring us comfort and pleasure. They were referred to as
a symbol of our country. Unfortunate, such a lovely species is now faced
with the danger of becoming extinct. What I am eager to do are to raise
people’s aware of protecting pandas. I would appreciate if I could be
chosen as a spokesman.
2.假定你是李华,注意到你校学生很少进行英语文学阅读。请给全校同
学用英语写一封倡议书,倡导大家多阅读英语文学作品。内容包括:
1、介绍现状;
2、你对英语文学阅读的看法;
3、发出倡议。
注意:
1、词数100左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:文学作品 literary works
My fellow students,

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答案以及解析
题组一：
1.答案：
Once during a flight, I
sit
sat
next to an old man named Cliff,
which
was a
who
fan of China. He had been studying Chinese for years, and he tried his
best to
learning
learn
a few new words every day. My friendly neighbor shared
story
stories
some of his life with me, too. He had owned several businesses
and had been failed in a number of them. However, Cliff thought his life
was quite
successfully
. He spoke of his failure with
successful
the
same interest as he
talked about his success. His life was wonderful
meaningful.
I
He
but
and
his experiences were
never spoke ill of the people in his life and was thankful
with
all of them.
to
解析：
1【答案】第一句sit改为sat【解析】该句时间状语Once during a flight
（曾经在一个航班上），可知讲的是过去的事情，故句子是一般过去< br>时，谓语动词应为过去式，sit（坐）的过去式是sat，故改为sat。