陆雨萱高考英语专题检测卷(三十四) 短文改错

2021年1月19日发(作者：勉强的反义词)

专题检测卷(三十四)
短文改错
(建议用时: 40分钟)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文, 文中共有10处语言错
误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
1
(2013·吉林模拟)
Dear Dad,
You are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health. I was worried about your health
all the time. I’d like to give you some advices. I hear that walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far away
from home, is it? Why not to walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at most once a week. You can play a
basketball in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice, too. Trying not to stay up too lately. Having enough sleep
can help your brain work better. Of course, this is very important to have healthy food.
Dad, please receive my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving daughter,
Mary
2
(2013·大庆模拟)
Once a man asked a painter to painting a picture for him. He told the artist he didn’t want to any shadows in the
picture, just sunshine, but the artist did so. When the man saw the finished picture, he was disappointing. Without
shadows, everything in the picture looks flat and unreal. The point of the story is that we need both shadows and
sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have living world. People, too, needs
both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try
to stop and think about that we might learn from the experience.
3
(2013·玉溪模拟)
As students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoon. Therefore, take a ten-minute break between
class is definitely important, even necessary. Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. During the
ten-minute break we did something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have real rest, instead of getting
even tired. So don’t do anything that will make you too excited. My ten-minute break is always pleased. I usually
take some exercise. Sometime I have a free chat with my classmates. When the new class begins, I feel freshly
again.
4
(2013·天水模拟)
It’s reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of
the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians.
In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the
pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for
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themselves and others.
In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a
small matter.


答案解析
1. 答案：
Dear Dad,
You are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health.
so
I was worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some advices. I hear
am advice
that walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far away from home, is it? Why not
to walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at most once a week. You can play a
least

basketball in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice, too. Trying not to stay up too
Try
lately. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Of course, this is very
late it
important to have healthy food.
Dad, please receive my advice. I really wish you healthy!
accept
Your loving daughter,
Mary
1. 【解析】将第一句中的very改为so。so. . . that引导结果状语从句。
2. 【解析】将第二句中的was改为am。此处是一般现在时。
3. 【解析】将第三句中的advices改为advice。advice不可数名词。
4. 【解析】将第六句中的第一个to去掉。why not+动词原形，表示建议。
5. 【解析】将第七句中的most改为least。at least至少。
6. 【解析】将第八句中的a去掉。球类前面不加冠词。
7. 【解析】将第十句中的Trying改为Try。此处为祈使句，动词原形开头。
8. 【解析】将第十句中的lately改为late。late表示时间晚。
9. 【解析】将第十二句中的this改为it。it是形式主语。
10. 【解析】将第十三句中的receive改为accept。接受意见用accept。
2. 答案：
Once a man asked a painter to painting a picture for him. He told the artist he
paint

didn’t want to any shadows in the picture, just sunshine, but the artist did so. When
and
the man saw the finished picture, he was disappointing. Without shadows, everything
disappointed
in the picture looks flat and unreal. The point of the story is that we need both
looked
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