finish什么意思discussion and views (雅思考官Simon最新九分范文)

2021年1月19日发(作者：above)
题目：
Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other,
while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
现代人是否更为独立。


范文：

People have different views about whether we are more or less dependent on others nowadays. In
my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past.

There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other
now. Firstly, life is more complex and difficult, especially because the cost of living has increased
so dramatically. For example, young adults tend to rely on their parents for help when buying a
house. Property prices are higher than ever, and without help it would be impossible for many
people to pay a deposit and a mortgage. Secondly, people seem to be more ambitious nowadays,
and they want a better quality of life for their families. This means that both parents usually need to
work full- time, and they depend on support from grandparents and babysitters for child care.

However, I would agree with those who believe that people are more independent these days. In
most countries, families are becoming smaller and more dispersed, which means that people
cannot count on relatives as much as they used to. We also have more freedom to travel and live
far away from our home towns. For example, many students choose to study abroad instead of
going to their local university, and this experience makes them more independent as they learn to
live alone. Another factor in this growing independence is technology, which allows us to work
alone and from any part of the world.

In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now depend on each other
more, my own view is that we are more independent than ever.


题目是
Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test
the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned
because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them
because of their benefits to s both views and give your own opinion.
动物实
验对动物残忍，动物实验对人类有益。


范文：

It is true that medicines and other products are routinely tested on animals before they are cleared
for human use. While I tend towards the viewpoint that animal testing is morally wrong, I would
have to support a limited amount of animal experimentation for the development of medicines.

On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal experimentation. To use a
common example of this practice, laboratory mice may be given an illness so that the effectiveness
of a new drug can be measured. Opponents of such research argue that humans have no right to
subject animals to this kind of trauma, and that the lives of all creatures should be respected. They
believe that the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused, and that scientists should
use alternative methods of research.

On the other hand, reliable alternatives to animal experimentation may not always be available.
Supporters of the use of animals in medical research believe that a certain amount of suffering on
the part of mice or rats can be justified if human lives are saved. They argue that opponents of
such research might feel differently if a member of their own families needed a medical treatment
that had been developed through the use of animal experimentation. Personally, I agree with the
banning of animal testing for non-medical products, but I feel that it may be a necessary evil where
new drugs and medical procedures are concerned.

In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on animals for vital medical
research until equally effective alternatives have been developed.

(270 words, band 9)





题目是
Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists
such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by
alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
艺 术家应该得到政府资
助，艺术家应该靠其它方式的资助。讨论并给出你的观点。


范文：

People have different views about the funding of creative artists. While some people disagree with
the idea of government support for artists, I believe that money for art projects should come from
both governments and other sources.

Some art projects definitely require help from the state. In the UK, there are many works of art in
public spaces, such as streets or squares in city centres. In Liverpool, for example, there are
several new statues and sculptures in the docks area of the city, which has been redeveloped
recently. These artworks represent culture, heritage and history. They serve to educate people
about the city, and act as landmarks or talking points for visitors and tourists. Governments and
local councils should pay creative artists to produce this kind of art, because without their funding
our cities would be much less interesting and attractive.

On the other hand, I can understand the arguments against government funding for art. The main
reason for this view is that governments have more important concerns. For example, state
budgets need to be spent on education, healthcare, infrastructure and security, among other areas.
These public services are vital for a country to function properly, whereas the work of creative
artists, even in public places, is a luxury. Another reason for this opinion is that artists do a job like
any other professional, and they should therefore earn their own money by selling their work.

In conclusion, there are good reasons why artists should rely on alternative sources of financial
support, but in my opinion government help is sometimes necessary.


题目是
Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational
tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people
who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits ?
电
脑游戏是无害的娱乐，也是有益的教育工具；电脑游戏有不良的影响。讨论并给出你的观点
?

范文：

Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I accept that these
games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have
a harmful impact.

On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users, or gamers, are
transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes.
From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as
concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming
context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users
’

motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a plane.

However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Gaming can be
highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to
keep them playing. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels
of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects
ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more
hours on the computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part
to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.

In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than
the possible benefits.

(258 words, band 9)







题目是
In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality
and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in
egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible
only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual is
your view of the relationship between equality and personal success?
平等社会个人成就大；
放任自由发展的社会个人成就大。 你的观点
?

范文：

In my opinion, an egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same rights and the same
opportunities. I completely agree that people can achieve more in this kind of society.

Education is an important factor with regard to personal success in life. I believe that all children
should have access to free schooling, and higher education should be either free or affordable for
all those who chose to pursue a university degree. In a society without free schooling or affordable
higher education, only children and young adults from wealthier families would have access to the
best learning opportunities, and they would therefore be better prepared for the job market. This
kind of inequality would ensure the success of some but harm the prospects of others.

I would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflict with people
’
s freedom to
succeed or fail. In other words, equality does not mean that people lose their motivation to
succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail. On the contrary, I believe that most people would feel
more motivated to work hard and reach their potential if they thought that they lived in a fair
society. Those who did not make the same effort would know that they had wasted their
opportunity. Inequality, on the other hand, would be more likely to demotivate people because they
would know that the odds of success were stacked in favour of those from privileged backgrounds.

In conclusion, it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between equality and personal
success.

(260 words)


题目是
Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people,
while others believe that the purpose of museums is to s both views and
give you own opinion.
博物馆的功能是娱乐人；博物馆的功能是教育人。讨论并给出你的观点。

范文：

People have different views about the role and function of museums. In my opinion, museums can
and should be both entertaining and educational.

On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to entertain. Museums are
tourist attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a collection of interesting objects that many people will
want to see. The average visitor may become bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much
educational content, so museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than
learning. This type of museum is designed to be visually spectacular, and may have interactive
activities or even games as part of its exhibitions.

On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education. The aim of any
exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not previously know. Usually this
means that the history behind the museum
’
s exhibits needs to be explained, and this can be done
in various ways. Some museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors, while other
museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed commentary about the exhibition. In
this way, museums can play an important role in teaching people about history, culture, science
and many other aspects of life.

In conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer an interesting, enjoyable
and educational experience so that people can have fun and learn something at the same time.

(253 words, band 9)