财务负责人英文高考英语写作范文篇

2021年1月19日发(作者：批评)

高考英语作文范文

50
篇

2009
年全国各省市高考英语书面表达题

范文集锦完整

18
套（附解析及专家简评）

一、（

2009
全国卷

I
、海南、宁夏卷）

假定你是李华，

正在英国接受英语培训，

住在一户英国人家里。

今天你的房东

Mrs Wilson
不在
家，你准备外出，请给

Mrs Wilson
写一留言条，内容包括：

1
．外出购物

2
．替房东还书

3
．

Tracy
来电话留言：

1
）咖啡屋（

Bolton Coffee
）见面取消

2
）此事已告知

Susan
3
）

尽快回电

注意：

1.
词数

100
左右；

2
．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

Mrs Wilson,
I
'
m going out shopping, and won
'
t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken
'

with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o
clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn
'
t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow
morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you
could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.
She has already told Susan about this change.
Li Hua
【解析】

作文题仍然同去年一样，属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条，是

学
生比较熟悉的题材，

体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，

生活型的原则。

应注意下面几点：

1
）

注意人
称，应该用第一人称的形式给房东（第二人称）写便条；

换，会用到一般过去时，现在时和将来时。

2
）注意时态的正确使用：从

试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点

1
和

2
时应用将来时；而要点

3
中的几个方面则需要注意

时态的替
3
）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，是各个要点

间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理
< br>的组成比较
通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简

洁明了，开头要开门见
山。

【专家简评】

依然保持全国卷

I
短文写作的老套路：人物李华（自

1999
年以来，中间除了

02
年，统

统都是李
华同学在写信，

历时十年，

众多效尤者）

，话题为简单的外语外事活动，

形式为写信

（邮件或留
言）

，实则依然是短文写作，控制程度较高，体裁以陈述说明为主。

二、（

2009.
全国卷

II
）

假定你是李华，

你的美国朋友

sarah
打算暑期来北京旅游，

来信询问
改建后前门大街的

情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：

1.
简况：长

800
余米、

600
多年历史、

300
余家商铺；

2.
位置：天安门广场南面；

3.
交通：公共汽车

17
、
69
、
59
等路，地铁

2
号线；



4.
特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。

参考词汇：步行街

pedestrian street
当当车

trolley car
地铁

subway
1.
词数

100
左右；

2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.
开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。

【参考范文】

Dear Sarah,
Thank you for your letter for asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.
Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-meter street, there are more
than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian
'
anmen Square, it
'
s very convenient to get there by bus.
You may take Buses No. 17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a
pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and
teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. I
'
m sure you
‘
ll like it.
【解析】

本文是书信格式，给出四个要点，属于常规文体，学生只要把四个要点写全，注意上下

文，句与句之间的合理过渡即可。

【专家简评】

人物李华，简单的外事活动。
体裁属于陈述说明性质。
话题是介绍前门大街改建情况。

但这个话题对全国卷

II
考区的考生多少有些歧视。这种歧视可以理解为城乡歧视和信息歧

视。因为该考区学生对前门并不熟悉，所幸试题控制很严，只当是翻译了。另外，试题所提

供的名词类词汇缺乏考试
的实际意义，只是照抄而已，对考生并无挑战。

三、（

2009.
北京卷）

第一节，情景作文（

20
分）

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为
响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊

区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全
过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行
动”专栏写一篇以“
Green Action in Our Class
”为题的英文稿件。

注意：词数不少于

60
提示词：郊区

suburbs
第二节

开放作文（

15
分）

请根据下面提示，写一
篇短文，词数不少于

50
第一节

情景作文（

20
分）

一、内容要点：

1
2
3
4
、骑车去植树

、植树

、安插提示牌

、照相

、说明：

内容要点可用不同方式表达

【参考范文】

Green Action in Our Class
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning,
we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to
work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others
were watering them. After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the
trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all
had a sense of achievement. We feel it
environment.
【解析】

本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。题材贴近学生实际，学生

只要注意理清思路按照活动的内容和时间来写即可。


'
s our duty to protect and beautify our

【专家简评】

在全国卷和地方卷中，

08
年只有北京卷是记叙文，

09
年又是记叙文。

有趣的是，

都是“红

星
中学高三一班的学生李华” 。场景设置几无二致，

形式更是何其相似乃尔。

如果追索源头的

话，全
国卷
NMET
时代的连环画看图说故事便是始作俑者了。

学。就话题而言，

NMET1998
年书面表达题跟北京

卷有得一比。四格或六格连环画的形式，多少让人回到了九十年代。一个是红星农场，一个

却是红星中
08
北京是春游活动，
09
北京是植树主题，而

NMET1998W
是参

观活动主题，话题显然高度相关。

第二节

开放作文（

15
分）

【参考范文】

What an interesting picture! A Western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of
noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to
pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it
'
s a bit funny, for we Chinese
take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy
us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we
don
'
t need to copy others
'
ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better
way.
【解析】

本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷

发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。

【专家简评】

北京卷每年的第二篇作文（开放作文）一直都比较新颖，也能引人思考，问题是往往
那

个思考的关键点

（文眼），学生未必能抓住或说未必能清楚地表达出来，

尤其是要达到一语破

的
之妙，在高考那种氛围中，似乎不易。

In my opinion,we don
'
t need to copy others
'
这

ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.
样的灵智多么需要现场的急智啊！如何让自己的思想收缩在几个简单的句子结构里面，这本

身就是智
慧。

北京卷的短文写作基本形成了自己的风格。

近几年一直比较稳定。

而

2010
年的北京随着

课改的
深入，高考应该会发生一些变化。

四、（
2009.
天津卷）

61.
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。

学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，

本年

度的主题
为“
The English Novel I Like Best
请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。

1.
2.
3.
1.
2.
3.
说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；

说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过

5
分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；

预祝比赛圆满成功。

词数：不少于

100
词；

可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；

发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。

一、评分原则

1
．本题总分为

25
分，按

5
个档次给分

2
．评分时，

先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，

然后以该档次的要求来衡量，

确定或调整档次，最后综合给分。

3
．词数少于

100
的，从总分中减去

2
分。

4
．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上

下文的连
贯性及语言的得体性。


”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，


5
．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。每错误书写

3
个单词从总分中减去

1
分，

原则上
不超过

3
分，重复的不计。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。标点符号错误，将视其

对交际的影响程度
酌情减分。

6
．如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

二、内容要点

1.
2.
3.
说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；

说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过

5
分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；

预祝比赛圆满成功。

【参考范文】

Good afternoon. Ladies and gentlemen.
Welcome to this year
'
s English speech competition. Taking part in English speech competition is a
helpful way to learn English. While we fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities of
listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English. In the process of the competition,
you should pay special attention to the following rules. First, you should finish your speech in five
minutes. Second, you try your best to express yourself in English fluently.
Finally, you should have a good English pronunciation.
I hope that the English speech competition wil be a great success!
Thank you!
【解析】

本题属于提纲式作文，体裁为应用文中的演讲稿，题材内容贴近学生生活，给出要点表

述较全，题的难度较小，考生注意一下几点即可：

1
、学生在写作时对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要逐条翻译，语言不要太书面化。

2
、正确运用关联词，使上下文联系更加密切，逻辑性强。

3
、注意要使所写内容和原文所给出的开头、结尾处衔接自然，浑然一体。

【专家简评】

天津卷的一贯风格接近全国卷

I
。前五年主要涉及与中学生生活学习相关（

04
，
07
，
08
）

话题和与外事活动相关话题（

05
，
06
）。

09
年则是与外语学习相关的话题。本题属于标题作

文，天
津共出现三次标题作文

（

04
：中学生应该如何使用家长给的零花钱。

07
：
Howto Protect Our
Eyesight
）。体裁属于陈说性质，连续多年都使用陈说性质或陈说

叙事

+
议论，这说明天津比较偏好陈说性质和议论性质这两类写作文体。

五、（

2009.
四川卷）

假设你是李华。你的外国笔友

Jane
打算于七月来中国，特来信了解中国人的社交习俗。

请你用英
语回一封信，从以下几个方面作具体介绍。

1.
2.
3.
4.
1.
2.
页面时的问候方式；

对毛病伯回答方式；

接收礼物时的回应方式；

餐宴礼节。

词数

100
左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）

。

可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

Dear Jane,
Glad to hear from you and you
some Chinese customs.
Firstly, we greet each other by saying
“
Hello
”
or asking such questions as
“
Where are you

+
议论性质，

08
年则是

'
re welcome to China in July. The following are

going?
”
or
“
Are you busy?
”
to express our care. Secondly, when praised, we reply with
“
Oh,
no!
”
or
“
I
'
m over-praised
”
to show good manners. Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say

drinking to someone
“
It
'
s unnecessary
”
besides
“
Thanks
”
to show
'
s health or success to show that we
'
re warm.
politeness and then put it away. Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses when
Anyhow, different cultures, different customs. If you
“
Do as the Romansdo when in Rome
”
, you
'
ll enjoy more of your stay here.
I hope what
'
s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】

本文是一种常规的书信体提纲式作文，要点有四，学生只要把四个要点用恰当的语言，

条理的句子，合适的句式，表达完整，注意过渡和复杂句使用即可。

【专家简评】

我一直认为语言学习的过程中应该双向度渗透文化，

而不是单纯地从目的语国舶来文化，

而且，
更应该在学习目的语的过程中就 开始将母语文化做对等的交流。惟其如此，才能充分

使学生在语言学习
中体会文化比 较的快感，这个快感也是双向的：一方面来自对异族语言文

化的吸纳与接受，一方面来自对母语文化的更深层次的认同感和自豪感。如果仅仅是单向度

的获取甚至是“掠取”异族 文化或母语文
化，而对其中之一进行贬损、排斥，这必然将语言

学习引向反面，也必 然会使生动有趣的语言学习变得
枯燥乏味，同时也必然会使两种语言的

学习都产生障 碍，由学习观念的障碍演变成为学习行为的障碍。
可喜的是，目前国人已有一

种共识 ：要想学好外语，母语必须学好。双语相长，汉英互补，这样就可以
大大的提高中国

学生学习语言的效率。

六、（
2009.
安徽卷）

假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包

这一现象，
写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。

演讲稿的主要内容应包括：

认为同学们不必为此苦恼；

希望能够体谅父母的苦衷；

建议与父母进
行交流和沟通。注意：

1.
2.
3.
词数

100
左右；

可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

【参考范文】

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our
diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there
'
s no need to feel too sad.
Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to makesure we
'
re not getting into any trouble. They have
probably heard somehorrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps
they just want to connect with us but are dong it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to
trust us as much as we
'
d like to trust them. If you don
'
t think you can
—

thy are bound to read
talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around
it.
Thank you!
【解析】

本文属于提纲类作文，体裁为应用文中的演讲稿，题材的现实性强，考生的话语较多，

显见这种作文，难度不大，考生应注意基本语言和句式的运用，以及上下文的过渡。



【专家简评】

五年来，安徽基本上都是走的陈说（

05
）和陈说

+
议论（

06
，

07
，
08
）的文体路线。

09
年则
来了一个典型的议论性质文体，这是一个很了不起的进步。和天津卷一样， 话题场景设

置为英语演讲比
赛一类的活动。话题非常好，贴近中学生的实际生活。也 是中学生十分困惑

又十分敏感的一个问题。对
于这样的问题，中学生一般都有话可说 ，也有话能说。往往有这

样的情况，有话可说是满肚子的汉语在
心中翻滚，可是无法 转成英语。而这个话题的最大好

处就在于有话能说。不过，本题的控制程度较高，
三 个观点已经用汉语给出，考生只需将其

翻译或形成比较好的适合书面形态的英语即可。有几个 问题值
得师生们探讨。在这样的控制

下，如何使语言表达更加贴切？如何用较高级语 汇来表达？如何过渡？如
何画龙点睛？如何

使文气贯通等等？

七、（

2009.
山东卷）

第二节

写作（满分

30
分）

假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老
师

Mr. Smith,
但没

有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学

Tom
写一封信：

1
?感谢
Tom
对你英语学习的帮助；

2
．

询问

Mr, smith
的近况并索要其联系方式；

3
?邀请
Tom
在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。

注意：

1.
词数

120-150
；

2
．可适当增加细节。

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,
I am now back China and sound. In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you
for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York. Additionally, your generous
help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a
unforgettable memory.
I have been missing our English professor, Mr. Smith whose unusual cast of mind, wide and varied
knowledge, together with a singular personal charm, combined to exert a strong influence on me. What
about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability.
However, his email address is not available. So would you mind delivering it to me via the online
mailbox?
I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival -Chinese Lunar New
Year so that I can repay your friendship. You can partner with me to have a try in lion dances ,which is
extremely exciting. And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you. I assure you that
you would enjoy visiting here as I did at you home.
With my best regards! Yours cordially, Li Hua
【解析】

本文仍属于半开放性体裁，与书写体结合给考生发挥的空间，考生按照三个要点的提

示，用合适的句式，句型表达出来即可。

【专家简评】

李华，

写信，海外学习背景，

回国后的联系。

和全国卷

I
短文写作的基本命题路数一致，

是一
种小心翼翼的翻版。所给话题第三条“邀请

Tom
在春节期间来中国感受中国文化”不失

为很好的思路。语言的学习离不开文化，语言的交流更离不开母语文化的输出，学习别国语
< br>言并不代表
别国的语言优于母语，更不等于别国的文化优于母语文化，只不过各自文化的发

展路径不一样，文化的
优势结构也不一样，等等。其实，文化的多元性和多样性只能说明我

们这个世界丰富多彩，而不能由此
得出自家文化不如别国文化的观点。所以，学习语 言的目

的不外乎两个，

一是要

“师夷之长技” ，
也就是要将别国的器物文化、

制度文化到思想文化化

为己用，

使自己的文化更为先进和发达；

另一


个则是

“自立于世界民族之林” ，也就是要将自

己 的独特的灿烂的文化推介出去。所以，分省命题六
年来，大家都接受了这样一个观点，那
就是不仅要掌握目的语背后的东西，更要关怀母语背后的东西。
不仅要关注异族语言与文化

的输入，更要关注母语及自家文化的输出。

八、（
2009.
陕西卷）

假定你是李华。

在一个英文网络论坛上

,
你看到一个名叫

Grown-up
的中学生发帖（

post
）

寻
求帮助

,
请根据帖子内容

,
写作要点和要求回贴。

写作要点：

1.
2.
告诉

Grown- up
要理解母亲；

给

Grown-up
提出解决问题的具体建议。

要求：

1.
2.
3.
4.
短文需写在答题卡的指定区域。

短文词数不少于

80
（不含已写好的部分）

。

内容充实

,
结构完整

,
语意连贯。

书写须清晰、工整。

Ks5

【参考范文】

Hi, Grown-up,
As a student of your age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing is common among
our teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings. Here are a few
suggestions.
First, it
'
s advisable to talk more with your mom. Heart to heart talks help you understand each
other better. They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things.
Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proving to your mom that you are already
a
“
Grown-up
”
. It
'
s even better if you could share more of the housework, such as cleaning,
washing and cooking.
【解析】

考生在写作中应该注意如下几点：

1.
2.
3.
4.
文体：应用文（电子邮件）

。

主体时态：一般现在时。

主体人称：第二人称。

内容要点：① 问题介绍；②建议一；③建议二；④我的愿望。

亮点句式：

problem you are facing is common among our teenagers.
are a few suggestions.
'
s advisable to talk more with your mom.
are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes towards
many things.
, you should learn to do your own things well.
【专家简评】

李华，英文网络论坛，这是高考英语写作中第一次出现回帖的形式，尽管回帖和回
信、

回电子邮件没有本质的差别，但是场景设置显然更加贴近时代了，也更没有写信的形式限制

了。

因此，

质而言之，

这种回帖仍然属于短文写作范畴。

这个话题是关于成长的困惑和烦恼，
< br>即自己认
为自己已经成人，但在父母眼中仍然是孩子。这个当然是老话题，无甚新意，但由

于这个话题是开放式


的，即题中所提供的材料只是起到了引发话题的作用，不像其他卷种那

样由于材料丰 富使得考生作文只
是做一做翻译或接近翻译的工作，而陕西卷却要求考生提出

个人思考：“理解母亲”和“解决问题的具
体建议” 。“理解母亲”起码可以有两个思路：一是

可以写出年轻人应该主动接近母亲，

积极理解母
亲。

二是可以写出如何理解母亲的具体方式，

比如，开诚布公的谈话，多关心母亲等等。而“解决问
题的具体建议”却要求考生放开思维，

自己找话说。可能因为众多考生都会有话可说，甚至可能出现千
差万别的思路和千差万别的
作文，这样可能对有效和公平阅卷会产生一定的不利影响。

但是，
09
陕西
卷不仅有个好话题，

而且还有个好形式，因为这个展开性话题留给考生的思维空间相对较大。

九、（

2009.
江西卷）

学校即将举行以“
Turning a bad mood
（心情）

into a good one
”为题目的英语作文

比赛，请
按下列要求定一篇

100
词左右的记叙文或议论文。

1.
2.
3.
好心情的重要性。

产生坏心情的原因。

应该如何调整心情。

记叙文

议论文

1.
2.
3.
发生的具体事件。

对你的心情有何影响？

你如何应对？

【参考范文】议论文

Turning a Bad Mood into A Good One
It is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. If you have a good mood, you will be
happy with everything in the world. Most importantly, you will have a optimistic effect on the people
around you. Weall will live a harmonious and happy life. It is also good for your health.
However
，

sometimes when you meet some difficulties,
when you quarrel with others
or when you fail in doing something. You may have a bad mood. If so, you should get rid of it as soon
as possible.
As we all know, every thing has its two sides. So you
should think more about its bright side. We are sure that everything will be better with time passing by.
Remember: Only you can make yourself happy.
I hope that everyone has a good mood every day!
【解析】

今年依然是开放式的作文，只提出了一个话题“
Turning a bad moodinto a good one
”
, < br>并给出了
体裁上的选择和内容上的简要提示。话题非常切合学生实际生活，考生只要按照要

点去写，注意过渡即
可。

【专家简评】

这是第一次在地方卷种中对写作形式（体裁）作出的可选性规定，并分别给出了具体
写

作内容及写作说明。此举为创新。这个标题作文的命制具备双重可选特征，即既可以通过一
< br>个故事
的叙述来完成，也可以通过对同主题的议论（重要性、原因与方法）来完成。这是一

个典型的标题作
文，江西

05
年获得自主命题权，五年来，基本上为标题作文形式（除

05
年

外），此次尤为特别。

可
以预见，

在今后的全国卷地方卷试题改革中，

这种形式将会成为各卷

种效仿的对象，甚至可能走得更
远。

不过也要指出的是，

在本题记叙文要求下的第三条

“你如何应对” ，笔者认为这样的表述

说明
文的口气过重，

容易误导考生的写作。

最好表述为

“你是如何应对的” 。这样的表述才是

叙事性的< br>而不是说明性的了。第二条稍微好一点，不过建议改为“对你的心情产生了什么影

响”。总之，那种
“如何”，“有何” 之类具有说明文性质的表述容易让考生写作时发生体裁

“跑

偏”现象。



十、（

2009.
江苏卷）

鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。

它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。

但是，

过分依
赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。

请你以鼠标为切入点，

根据下表所提示的信息，

用英语写一篇
短文。

鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……

鼠标的便捷性

点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……编辑文本，搜索信息……

收发邮件，选购商品……

点播音乐，下载电影……

如果过分依赖鼠标…… （请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点）

1
．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2
．词数

150
左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。

3
．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

【参考范文】

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer
．

For most
people, it
'
s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A
well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions
of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download
what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can
be done with a cute mouse.
A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn
'
t always help in a positive way.
Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many
ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us
lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.
（

153 words
）

【解析】

本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，

适度发挥，
不要逐条翻译即可。

【专家简评】

对于江苏的考生而言，

自

08
年改革以来，

整卷分值虽然下降为

120
分，但短文写作的分

值仍
然是

25
分，和绝大多数卷种同题赋分一样。

但是，从写作词数要求、

写作话题和写作形

式（体裁）

几个维度来看，

江苏卷的写作可以归为比较难的一类。

左右的卷种，目前只有广东和江苏两地，

第一，

写作词数要达到

150

09
年江苏范文词数为

153
词。第二，六年来，江苏

的话题选择有一个明显的特点：

时代性比较强。

从“江城介绍”（
04
）、“建设和谐社会” （
05
），

“奥运志愿者的宜与忌” （
06
），“阳光体育活动” （
07
），到

09
年的“鼠标的利弊”等，这个
话
题选择的路径鲜明地反映出江苏卷对时代的敏感性，问题是这些特色话题又给考生带来了

表达上的困
难。对于优秀的考生，这种话题可能如鱼得水，而对于中等偏下的考生，这种话
题显然有点“尴
尬” ：想说点什么，但要嘛说不出，要嘛说不好。第三，这个“难”还表现在

写作形式上，几年来，
江苏卷主要采用的是混合形式的写作：陈说

+
议论。我分析了一下

09

年江苏卷给的范文，尽管鼠标的好处部分汉语提示很充分，控制很严，但要想精确表达，也
< br>不容易。尤
其是题中未列出“不利影响”的部分，考生要想用寥寥三、四句话把这个“不利

影响”说明白显然需要
功力，这个功力首先是要分析什么才是不利影响，列出个一二三，其

次是如何转换成英语，最后才是如
何集中而简洁地优化句子结构，使之达意而且有条 理。由

此看来，江苏卷今年的难度不低，如果再在阅
读上加大阅读量，那整卷难度就 可想而知了。

另外，江苏有命制标题作文的习惯（

05
，
06
，

08
），
09
年卷虽然没有直接给出标题，也没有



要求考生写出标题，但主体性标题已十分明晰。

十一、（
2009.
湖南卷）

假设你是某中学新老师李红，

请给你的朋友张华写一封信，

告诉他你第一天上课的情况，

主要内
容如下：

1.
2.
3.
1.
2.
描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情；

介绍你处理该事的方式；

谈谈你的感想。

词数不少于

120
个；

可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.
文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。

【参考范文】

Dear Zhang Hua,
It
'
s three months since I heard from you last time. Now I want to tell you an impressive story
happened on my first lesson.
On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can. But a boy, Li Ming,
whose father died a month ago, was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom, silently. I smiled
to him and let him came in. After a while, he cried on his desk. Then I walked to him and asked what
had happened .He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her. At the
same time, he apologized to me for his lateness. Moved by his words, I praised him for his deeds and
decided to sing a song named
“
Mother
”
for the students. Howtime flies! Class was over before I
realized it.
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them. Do you think so? I

Yours truly,
Li Hong
【解析】

本文属于半开放性提纲式书信体，要点有三，选材学生熟悉，也是发生在他们身边的故

事，学生只要把握准情景和要求，使表达的内容不走题即可。

【专家简评】

湖南卷这是第二次在短文写作中涉及老师（

06Mr Moore
，
09
李红）。第一次出现考生假

设人是教师——

“假设你是某中学新老师李红” 。这个假设在历年的高考英语各卷种中都没有

出现
过，可以理解为考生毕业后的可能，但这个可能只能是大学毕业后的事情了，看来这个

未来生活起码还
得四年时间。

可以划归到第三主题

“与考生未来生活相关” 。但由于考查的主

题仍然是有关学习和
课堂之间 的事情，总的说来，有话可说，也有话能说，起码可以杜撰一

点熟悉的东西。

十二、（

2009.
湖北卷）

:
假设你是华华，与英国网友汤姆约定用对方的母语通信，以提高各自的
外语水平。最近

你收到汤姆的电子邮件

（附后），发现有一个成语使用不当。

请根据下列要点，

用
英文回一封

电子邮件。

要点

:

1
2
3
．不应使用

“无所不为” ，应使用

“无所事事”
;

．说明这两个成语的用法

;

．给予鼓励。

注意

: 1.
词数为

1
叨左右

;

2.
参考释义

:
无所不为一

do all kinds of bad things
无所事事一

have nothing to do

'
m looking forward to your reply.

3.
除以上两个成语外，邮件中不得使用其它汉字或拼音

;

4.
电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计人你所写词数）

，但不得抄人答题卡。

附（汤姆的邮
件）

:
华华，你好

!

近几天在忙什么事

?
有什么有意思的事吗

?
我们的学校放假了，

所以这几天在家无所不为，

饱食
终日，只好上网发伊妹儿。没意思。我决定找份工作，做个自食其力的人。祝好

!

汤姆

（以下所给内容不得抄入答题卡）

【参考范文】

Hi! Tom
Nice to read your e-mail today. I noticed you
and used most of them correctly.
However, I
'
m afraid there is one mistake I
所不为”
. This idiom means
'
d like to point out. It is
”
. Are you doing all kinds
'
ve
“无

'
ve begun to use Chinese idioms
“
do all kinds of bad things
of bad things at home? I guess what you were really trying to say is that you
got nothing to do these days. In that case, you should use
“无所事事”
. Weusually use
“无所不为”
to express the idea that people dare to do anything bad, and
myself clear?
Anyway, I
'
m amazed at the progress you
Hop you
'
ll find a good job soon.
Huahua
【解析】

本文题材现实性强，

属于较为保守的提纲式作文，

考生只要审好题按照要点去表达即可。

【专家简评】

六年来，湖北卷的写信人物比较多样而且有趣：

05
年是明华给建华写信，

07
年是李华（也

是学
生会主席，跟

09
天津卷一样）写信，

08
年则改成了一个十分怪异人名——卜曼宜，其

谐音极似“不
满意”或“
not very easy
”
.
而

09
年摇身一变又改成了华华，看来湖北卷是离

不开李华同学的影子
了。不过好歹总比卜曼宜好些。

本题和

04
年全国卷

I
的写作题类似（外国人学中文，中文歌曲比赛）

，另外，

07
年高考

语文
湖北卷作文题也是以母语为话题的，这三者之间似 乎有某种联系。不过，本题对语言本

身要求更具体，
甚至讨论到了成语的用法。应该 说，能讨论这么细致的汉语问题对于中学生

学英语而言是一个很大的刺
激或促进。而 且，毫不夸张地说，跨语言、跨文化的启示意义深

蕴其间，对其他各卷种的命题思路不无
裨益。

十三、（
2009.
福建卷）

某英语报社拟成立

“微笑俱乐部” ，现向癸未征募会员。

要求申请者提交一篇题为

“
I want to
Smile
”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。

1.
2.
根据思路图适当展开，以使行文连贯；

词数：

120
左右

'
ve made.
“无

所事事”
to describe the situation in which people have got nothing meaningful to do. Have I made
There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also
please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and
wherever possible,
First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to


bring meup. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I
would like to say
“
Thank you
”
to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in
this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.
In a word, let
'
s greet every day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day.
【解析】

本文为图画式作文，做题的关键是审题，考生要把握如下几点：

1.
2.
3.
4.
其微笑的人物（父母）

自己微笑的理由；⑤总结。

【专家简评】

本题是一个好的标题作文（

05
福建卷：

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
六年来，福建卷基本上使用的是议论性质的写作文体（

）。

04
陈说，

05
、
06
议论，

07
、
08
陈说
+

文体：说明文。

主体时态：一般现在时。

主体人称：第一人称。

内容要点：①微笑的优点；②想对
：③对父母微笑的理由；④对

议论），
09
年是一个典型的议论性质的文体。话题也非常好，和安徽卷一样，非常适合中学

生表 达。但
从命题的角度看，写作难度较高，因为本题的控制方法不是采用汉语提纲形式，

而是采用图文形式，在
语言转换上较安徽卷难。从所给范文看，语言难度不高，但思维难度

不低。考生得分不易。

十四、（

2009.
广东卷）

第一节

基础写作（共

1
小题，满分

15
分）

你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次
采访的情况

:
时间

:
上周末

对象

:
眼科医生（

eye-doctor
）王教授

主题

:
我国中小学生近视（

short- sightedness
）问题

基本信息

:
（

1
）发生率

:
略高于

50
％

（

2
）人数

:
世界第一

专家解读

:
（

1
）原因

:
很复杂

（

2
）治疗

:
没有哪一种药物能治愈近视

（

3
）建议

:
不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动

（

4
）特别提示

:
如何握笔也和近视有关

[
写作内容

]

根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容

:

1.
2.
3.
采访的时间、对象和主题；

中小学生近视的发生率及人数；

专家解读。

只能使用

5
个句子表达全部内容。

[
评分标准

]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

【参考范文】

Last weekend, I had an interview with eye- doctor Professor Wangabout our country primary and
middle students
'
short-sightedness. It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks the
No. 1
in the world, are short-sighted.
Professor Wang
said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and three is still no cure for short-sightedness. He
suggested that we should not overuse our eyes and do more outdoor exercises. What
'
s more, since
the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using
the pen.

[
写作要求

]


【解析】

本文题材贴近学生实际生活，

这个话题真正的做到

“话题来源于学生实际生活” 。近
视眼

是每个校园所必不可少的现象，是学生校园生活得隐形热点。因此今年的基础写作题目让每

个学
生都有话可说。考生要注意三大要点和表格内容，恰当表达即可。

【专家简评】

本题话题为近视问题，天津卷曾涉及过（

07
天津卷：

How to Protect Our Eyesight
）。

但角度
有不同。广东卷侧重的是问题本身的描述，而天津则是强调的如 何保护视力。不过，

能有做天津卷的经
验，对广东卷也就不会有难的感觉。更何况广 东卷所给信息非常充分，对

于考生而言，剩下的主要是组
织句子了。需要特别指出的 是，陈说性质的文体其核心在于陈

述和说明（包括介绍）

，即讲清楚一桩
事情。

第二节

读写任务（共

1
小题，满分

25
分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇

150
词左右
的英语短文。

Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala
（考拉）

at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in
southern Australia. All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. You would be too if you were
used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off.
That
'
s right
—

sleep it off. The average
koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy.
Thereason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can
be hugged and photographed by tourists
，
who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing
number of other national parks for just that special experience. Whatever department in the Aussie
government in charge of such things is now moving to makethe practice illegal
，
which is
understandable. Howwould you react
，
my friend
，

if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and
some round
，

furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you?
*
考拉即树袋熊

[
写作内容

]

1.
2.
以约

30
个词概括这段短文的内容；

然后以约

120
个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括

:

（
1
）人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照；

（
2
）假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应；

（
3
）你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。

[
写作要求

]

1.
2.
在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，

也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得

直接引
作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

用原文中的句子；

[
评分标准

]

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

【参考范文】

The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy
and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.
The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to
people. Somethink it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider
it just sort of fun to have. But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals.
If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly
against being photographed. No having peaceful surroundings to


sleep, don
'
t you suffer restless and fidgets. No doubt we do and so do the animals.
I think it necessary to ban tourists
'
taking pictures with animals, making a
comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to found harmonious
relations with animals.
【解析】

今年的读写任务让学生就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”展开议论。议论文的写作有助

于培养学生正确的价值观，纠正不正确的价值观。今年的读写任务暗中旨在培养学生保护野

生动物的观
念、把多一点的空间还给动物的观念、与动物和谐共存的观念。

如果考生从“应该禁止游客和动物拍照”这一观点入手的话就迎合了阅读材料，同时也

能够受到改
卷老师的青睐。

【专家简评】

自

2007
年广东卷改革以来，

写作部分的两个试题在写作要求上均过于详细，

控制程度很

高。 尤
其是后者，尽管是阅读后的写作，但要领已经被列出，实际上难度已经大大下降。当

然，广东卷这么做
的主要目的无外乎便于教师阅卷，

收缩考生的思维，

不给考生跑题的机会。

但是若往深的追问，本 题
给学生的思维空间并不多，这个值得考量。三年来，广东卷已经在

短文写作上逐渐形成定势。

十五、（
2009.
辽宁卷）

假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一
封电子邮件，

将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。

下周
要
点

六上午

8
：
00
至

11
：
00

采摘
时
间

苹果

办
内
容

公室，下周四下午

5
：
00
前

带帽子、手套

报
名

提示

1.
词数

100
左右，开头已为你写好。

、
1.
2.
3.
4.
性。

5.
I ?

2.
可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

注意

3.
参考词汇：社区

community
第二节：

一、

评分原则

本题总分为

25
分，

按

5
个档次给分。

评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，

然后以该档次的要求来衡量，

确定或
词数少于

80
和多余

120
的，从总分中减去

2
分。

评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上

下文的连贯
拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考

虑。英、美
调整档次，最后给分。

拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

6.
如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。

二、内容要点

1.
2.
3.
4.
时间：下周六上午

8
：
00
至

11
：
00
内容：采摘苹果

报名：办公室，下周四下午

5
：

00
前

提示：带帽子、手套

【参考范文】

Dear neighbors,
We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the
community members. Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our
town, and all are welcome. We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting. Our
outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we
'
ll be back at about 11 o
'
clock.

5.
欢迎踊跃参加


If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make
necessary arrangements.
We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.
We are looking forward to your joining us.
Community Office
【解析】

本题命制稳健，是中学教学中最为常见的提纲式作文。给出要点学生有话可说。

第一步：审题

1
、看要求：

本题要求以短文的形式写一封电子邮件，

将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给

住户。

开头已经写好，

这样格式应该已经给出，

审题的重点放在要点和要求上：

要点有五项，

注意有三
项，但注意的第一项是重要的一项。

2
、理思路：

调整要点，

讲清本次活动的安排。

可以先将活动的时间，

活动的内容，

要求、

第二步：写作

可以先在草纸上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、单词、短语去表达，要尝试最简单的
复

杂句，如用定语从句、宾语从句等，但句式不易过于复杂，要用一些恰当的连词，使句与句

之间、
段与段之间过渡自然。

第三步：检查

作文写完后，最后要进行检查。重点放在要点写全了吗？时态、语态、动词的数、单
词

拼写对了吗？标点符号、大小写用对了吗？检查完后再抄写在试卷上，注意卷面的整洁。

【专家简评】

主题与考生学习生活或学校活动无关，但由于是以涉外小区为背景所开展的社区活
动，

主题空间更为开阔，因此该主题大体符合高考英语写作话题的一般思路，可以归类为外事活
< br>动。
通常，命题以要点形式给出和以汉语题干形式给出，对考生而言，前者的难度要大于后

者。因为要点内
容的呈现一般看不出英语的句式结构，而如果是完整或半完整句式的汉语题

干却能让考生比较容易辨别
出英语句式结构。这本身就是一种便利。因此，对于各命 题单位

而言，这几种形式都应该依据整卷难度
的分布情况加以合理配备使用，以免过 难或过易。

十六、（
2009.
浙江卷）

5
月

1
日，高二（

3
）班的学生志愿者

Li Yue
和

Zhang Hua
去阳光敬老院（

Sunshine Nursing
Home
开展志愿者活动（送水果
?
打扫
?
聊天等）。假如 你是校英语报的记者，请按下

列要点用英语写一
则

100-120
个词的新闻报道。

1.
时间
?
地点
?
任务
.
活动；

2.
老人们的反应；

3.
简短评论。

注意：报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不记词数）

。

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
s5
【参考范文】

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine
Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly
welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started
working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard
chatting with the elderly people.
When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.
They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their
own lives.
By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

注意事项表达出来；然后再写

5
和

3
要点，这样逻辑清晰表达合理。


【解析】

本文仍属于提纲式半开放性体裁的作文，选材贴近学生实际，有利于考生的正常发挥，

考生只要按照所给要点的思路来写即可。

【专家简评】

09
浙江卷的话题和

07
湖北卷相似，又是志愿者，又是敬老，了无新意。但这并不就说

明该卷乏善
可陈。

若从以考生为本的角度看，

该卷第一次出现在题中直接给出汉语拼音人名，

而不是汉语人名，
这也算是 一个首创。目的只有一个：避免考生出错。其实，遮掩在汉语拼

音中的人名也让人看不出这个
人名究竟是汉语中的哪几个字，因为对于外国人而言，字母人

名只是一个符号，他们是无法想象汉字人
名所携带着的鲜活感和亲切感的。

浙江卷前几年基本上是选择疑问句式的标题作文。例如：

“
Film or book, which do you prefer?
”

06
）
,
请你围绕

“
Howdo you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both
English and Chinese?

这个问题…（
07
）
,
“
Working Individually or
Working in a Team
”（

08
）。

09
年不在题中给出标题，却在文中直接给出标题，不知何意？

不知这
个对于检 测考生的实际能力有何帮助？另外，虽然说的是新闻报道，但实际上是一个

典型的叙事性质的
短文写作。

08
年仅北京考了一篇叙事性质的写作。

09
年，除了北京继续考

了叙事外，浙江也出现了
叙事性质的文体要求。对于浙江考生而言，其写作难度应该远远低
于前五年的写作要求了，应该是福。

十七、（

2009.
重庆卷）

国外某网站举办新一轮网上讨论活动，正面向全球中学生征集话题。假
设你是新华中学

的学生李华，经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件，向其推荐话
题。
内容包括：

自我简介

写信目录

话题：我们应该感恩（

thankful
）

推荐的理由

预祝活动成功

1.
2.
3.
4.
词数

100
左右

邮件格式已为你给出

邮件中不能出现本人真实信息

请在答题卡上作答

【参考范文】

Dear,
I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School. I often visit your website.
I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the
middle school students. As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly. It is
that we should be thankful. Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.
Weshould be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world; we should be
thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our
friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand. So I can say we live in a
grateful world. I hope that the activity will be a great success.
【解析】

这是一篇命题巧妙地书写体半开发性提纲式作文。话题树有教育意义，符合中学实际引

导学生思考问题。在写作中应注意如下几点：

1.
2.
3.

紧紧围绕话题“我们应该感恩” 。

但自我简介、

写信目录

、推荐的理由

、预祝活动成功都是围绕话题展开。

注意分清段落层次，上下文的过渡。


【专家简评】

从写作文体要求看，重庆卷

04
年要求写记叙文，

05
年则改成议论文，近四年基本上是

陈说性质
的文体。就话题而言，近四年都与外事活动或外语学习相关。不过，

09
年的话题是

涉外的话题征集，
有些特点。六年来，三次短文 写作，三次邮件
(
其中两次电子邮件
)
。李华

同学出现

3
次
(
06
，
07
，
09
)
。总的说来，重庆卷一直比较谨慎，命题基本上没有超出全国卷

I
的范式。

十八、
(
2009.
上海卷
)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below
in Chinese.
某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺
(
gardening
)
，烹饪
(
cooking
)
,
防身术
(
self-defence
)
，护理
(
nursing
)
。假如你是王跃华
(
不可以用自己的真实姓名
)
，

写一封申请信，报
名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：

你感兴趣的课程

你期望从这门课程中学到什么

为什么想学这些内容

【参考范文】

Dear leader
，

I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains
many courses
，

such as gardening
、

cooking
、

self-defence
、

nursing and so on
。

I want to
register to attend a course bout gardening
，

because I have liked flowers
、

grasses etc since I was a
little child
。

I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature
。

For one
thing
，

I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help meto major in the
gardening after attending college
。

Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so
as to study it more easily when I enter the university
。

What's more
，

I can realize the bitterness of
the gardeners to treasure the plants much more
。

For another
，

after graduation from
college I will devote mylife to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful
state and make manymore foreigners come to visit our country
。

Yours
，

Wang yue hua
【解析】

本文是书信格式，报名参加其中一门课程的学习，属于半开放式作文。学生在写作时应

注意如下几点：

1.
2.
3.
4.
先谈自己感兴趣的学科，从四科中选取自己最有把握和有话可说学科，这是写作的关

键，过渡要
再写自己希望学到什么，要把握实用性。

然后谈出想学这些内容的原因，结合现实，理由合情合理。

在写作过程中可以尝试句型的复杂化，适度增加情节

【专家简评】

上海卷的一贯特点有以下几条：题干短，话题一般与学习或学校生活相关，写作形式
主

要是议论性质，间或插以混合性质，给考生的思维空间大。还有一点，从不给出范文。

09
年

的

Guided Writing
属于混合性质：陈说

+
议论。话题涉外，且与教育教学课程相关，是很好

的话题。但对
于上海考生而言，材料的提供是否过于丰富了些？！参看一下惜墨如金的历年

上海卷，你就会 发现上海
卷习惯于提供简练的题干信息，以利于考生的发挥。这次算是一个

异数了。

【总评】

2009
年高考英语全国卷地方卷共

19
套，短文写作共

20
篇（上海卷和广东卷各

2
篇，宁

?
海卷共
享全国卷

I
的短文写作题）

。综观

2009
年高考英语短文写作试题，我们发现最重要的

一个特点就是
关于地方或传统特色话题，也就是母语文化输出类话题增多（

5
篇），以前只是

在某个年份、某个卷种

自然；


中有这种话题的点缀，现在看来已经蔚成风气。这说明各卷种的命题

者们已经认识到 了母语文化输出的
重要性、紧迫性和现实性，这是最令人感到欣慰的。相信

对你有用 ！珍惜吧！值得拥有！相信对你有
用！珍惜吧！值得拥有！相信对你有用！珍惜吧！

值得拥有！相信对你有用！珍惜吧！值得拥有！相信
对你有用！珍惜吧！值得拥有！相信对

你有用！珍惜吧！值得拥有！

2010
年高考英语作文真题题目及范文

江西卷

英语中“
please.
” “
thank you
” “
sorry
”等礼貌用语具有增进友谊，改善关系、

化解矛
盾等神奇的力量，因而被称为“
magic words
”。请

“
Magic Power of Polite Words
” 为题写一篇
100
词左右的英语作文。体裁不限（叙述文、议论文、说明文
..............
）

【参考范文】

Magic Power of Polite Words
We use magic words in our daily life without realizing it . These magic words ,
for instance
“
please
” “
thank you
“ “
sorry
”
, can add luster to our life .
Magic words can help build friendship . They make you polite and easier to get
along with , thus strengthen the relationship between you and others .
Once you offend someone else , you can as well use these words . A word such as
“
sorry
”
will make him less annoyed .
Try using polite words every now and then . Once you do , you will never find yourself drained of
energy for life . You use polite words , in return , these words will provide you with magic power .
安徽卷

假如你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，

征文的内容要求你在电视、

手机

(cell)
和网络
三考中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“
Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web?
为题，写一篇
英语短文。

【范文】

We are now living in an intonation age, in which TV, cells and the Webare widely used. It seems that
many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.
However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut
off the internet. I could do without TV because few shows my fancy, and there are too many commercial
programs on TV are also available.
As for cells and the Web. they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to keep in touch with my
friends and family. And almost all information can be gathered on the Internet..
你校学生会需招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问，请你以短文形式写一则招聘启事。内容

主要包括：

1)
母语是英语，

汉语流利者优先

2)
解答用语学习问题，

协助组织英语活动

3)
每周

4
小时，报酬面议

4)
联系人：李华
(
Tel:
)
【参考范文】

English Advisor Wanted
The Students
'
Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English
Study Advisor next term . The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice
their oral English , answering their questions , and helping organize activities such as singing English
songs , English evenings , or lectures on interesting topics .
The applicant should be a native speaker of English . Fluency in Chinese is preferred . The advisor is
expected to work 4 hours per week .


If you are interested , please call Li Hua at for an interview . Payment for the service will be
discussed during the interview .
Students
'
Union
Yucai High School
山东卷

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友

但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：

1.
表示歉意；

2.
解释原因；

3.
另约时间。

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,
I am indeed very sorry that I can
'
t go to Beijing with you next week , which
Tom
约好下周末去北京旅游，

I have promised .I feel sorry for about it and want you to know what happened .
Just now ,my cousin , Li Qiong , who left home to Australia for his further study last year , informed
me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his
family . You know , we haven
for nearly a year .
I sincerely hope you can accept myapologies and understand me. I would appreciate your allow ing
me to make ano ther date to show you around Beiji ng .Once aga in
,

sorry for any inconvenience caused .
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
陕西卷

假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们

的英
文老师是来自这所中学的

给
Sue
写封电子邮件。

写作要点：

1.
3.
对她表达感谢之意

; 2.
介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情

;

希望了解她的近况。

【参考范文】

Dear Sure,
I
'
m Li Hua, one of your students in China . It
'
s almost a month since you left
us . Weall miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us whenwe were together .
We are busy as usual . We had an English speech contest the other day . I won the first prize ! This
again reminds me of all your kind help . Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill
behind the school ? Yesterday , we went there and watered them . The tree you planted yourself is
growing well , and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood . Will you come back to see Sue
Wood ?
How is everything with you lately ? Wehope to know more about you and your American students .
Hope to keep in close touch .
All the best
Li Hua
四川卷

假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备

一
篇英文发言稿。


'
t seen each other
I
m
Sue Wood
不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求


1.
过去对成年的向往；

2.
现在的感受和认识；

3.
将来的目标及措施。

参考词汇：责任

responsibility
【参考范文】

Good morning , everyone !
The topic of my speech today is
“
Tho ughts on becoming a grown-up .
”
As a child , I always
hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever
I liked . Now I
'
m a grown-up , but I find things do not
go as I expected . Although I can enjoy more freedom , at the same time I realized that being a grown-
up not only means this , but also more responsibilities . I hope to do more for my parents and society in
the future to make my life more meaningful . To reach the goal , I must first try my best to pass the
college entrance examination and enter a good university .
Thank you for your listening .
浙江卷

最近，李越被评为你们班的“每周之星” 。请你根据她的事迹（在上周六下午，不顾天气

的炎
热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服装）

，用英语为班级板报写一篇

100
—
120
个词的短文。

你的文章应包括下列要点：

1.
李越的事迹及其对同学的影响；

2.
你的评论。

参考词汇：

singing
contest
歌咏比赛

costume
服装

【参考范文】

Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of
“
Star Student of the Week
”
for what she
did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday , Li Yue went downtown and walked from one
store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest . While the rest of us
were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms , she spent the whole afternoon searching
and selecting . Finally , she found the right clothes . Deeply moved by her efforts , we tried our best and
won the first prize in the contest .
Li Yue is always warm- hearted and cares a lot about the class . Besides , she often devotes her
spare time to helping others . She deserves the honor and we should learn from her .
重庆卷

假设你是李华，于

2010
年

6
月

3
日搭乘国外某航空公司航班
(
flight number BA793
)
回国后，

发现遗失了一个行李箱
(
suitcase
)
。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，

请他们帮

你寻找。

信件要
点包括

:
陈述写信原因，

简要描述该行李，

说明其重要性，

期待回复并表示感

谢。

【参考范文】

Dear Sir/Madam ,
I
'
m Li Hua . I took the flight BA793 on June 3, 2010 . But when I came to my home , I found I lost a
suitcase . I amwriting to you to request you to help me find it back .
My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip . There is a label on the handle
my name and address on it . It is really important for me , because I had put all my important
documents in it, including my ID card , passport and so on . Besides , it is what my father sent to me on
my birthday .
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply .
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】

(2 )


with

Dear Sir/Madam ,
I am very sorry to say that I left my suitcase in flight number BA793 on 3 rd , June , so I am writing
this letter to ask you for help .The lost suitcase is a red one with a long handle . It is of great importance
to me . In it are some valuable books and my credit cards . I will be very grateful if anyone of you
contact me by telephone immediately after seeing it . My telephone number is 133456 . There is
nothing more gratifying to me than your reply .
I am looking forward to your reply .
Yours truly,
Li Hua
天津卷

假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学

为学
生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：

? 对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生及社会的益处等）

?个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）

?你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）

参考词汇：晨曦希望小学

Chenxi Hope School
【参考范文】

Dear Sir or Madam,
I
'
mLi Hua from Class One , Senior Two . I
'
mwriting to apply for the opportunity to help the
students in Chenxi Hope School with their English . Thus they can improve their English during the
summer vacation . Meanwhile , I can learn how to get along with the students and benefit the whole
school .
I
'
m kind , easy-going and always ready to help others . I wash clothes and make beds by myself to
develop independence . English is my favorite subject and I
‘
ve won several prizes in English
contests . So I think that I
'
m qualified for the position .
I plan to communicate with the students first to know what they need . Besides , I
'
ll try to get them
more interested in English by telling stories , singing songs , playing games and so on .
I
'
d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
江苏卷

假设你应邀参加学校组织的

“英语学习师生座谈会” ，请你根据下表所提示的信息，

用英

语写
一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

自己英语学习的情况

1.
英语学习的目的
2.
英语学习的 方法
3.
课外自学的途径

.
...........
.
对学校英语教学的建议

（请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议）

。【参考范文】

Dear teachers and schoolmates,1t
'
s a great pleasure for meto be here today and share my
experience of learning English with you . I'm interested in English , and hope to be an interpreter in the
future . Naturally it
'
s very important for me to learn English well . As everybody knows vocabulary is
an important part of language , just like bricks in a building . I usually memorize twenty new words a day
and put them to use whenever possible . After class
．

I often listen to English programs on TV and on
the radio . Besides , I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now , I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school . Firstly , we


should be given more opportunities to use what we
'
ve learned
in order to have a better grasp of it . Secondly ,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting
books and magazines and give us more free time to read them . Finally
，

1 suggest we have more
English activities
，
such as English contests and festivals .
Thank you for listening .
湖南卷

假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部，开展了为期两个月的活动。现在，你将代表

俱
乐部在课堂上进行经验交流，请写一篇英语发言稿，主要内容如下：

1
．简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动

2
．谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。




【参考范文】

Boys and girls
，

Today I
'
ll talk about our English club .Our English club was set up two months ago . Now we have
members of 25 . We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon . So far we have conducted a variety of
activities on English learning , such as watching English films , including a Christmas party and getting
together with foreign students . Last week we held an English story-telling competition .We required that
the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes .Every member
took an active part in the activity . Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges . At last Li
Bing won the first place . Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways . Not only did it
improve their spoken English , but also it brought them much fun .They hope many such activities can
be held .
That
'
s all . Thank you .
湖北卷

请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。

The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us
get through difficult situations and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear
down walls.
注意：①无须写标题；

【参考范文】

( 1 )

I still remember how serious I was on my first day in the new school three years ago, when I found it
difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class . The teacher spoke English throughout the class ,
which was totally different from the lessons I had taken before.
In the morning class the next day , the English teacher came to me while I was reading the text aloud
as other students . After listening to me for a while , she gave me a big smile and said she liked my
voice very much . The smile shone on the whole day and the following days . A week later , I
volunteered to take charge of English study in my class.
Thanks to the comforting smile in myfirst morning class , I began to be confident .
【参考范文】

(2 )
No body language can be more attractive/ fascinating than smiling. Not only can a beautiful smile
make ourselves happy, but also it enables others to feel delighted. Sometimes when a smile is so
powerful that it gives people suffering from disasters great courage.
A little boy named Lang Zheng, for instance, impressed and encouraged a great many people when
a serious earthquake happened in Wenchuan/ overtook Wenchuan. Right after he was rescued by the
soldiers from the ruins, he saluted and smiled to them. His smile was like sunshine which warmed
people who were in sadness.
It is safe/ no exaggeration to say that without smile our life would be colorless and difficult. It is
suggested that we smile as much as possible.
全国

I
卷

假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛

希望附近某大学的外籍教师

Smith
女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写
一封信。

注意：词数

100
左右。

【参考范文】

Dear Ms. Smith,
I'm Li Hua , the chair of the Students
'
Union of Yucca Middle School , which
is close to your university . I'm writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest which

②内容只需涉及一个方面；

③词数为
100
左右。

(speech contest),

will be held in our school on June 15 . It will start at 2
：

00 pm and last for about three hours . Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic
and Nature
you have any questions .
I am looking forward to your reply .
With best wishes,
Li Hua
福建卷

假设你是李华，

福建省某中学高中学生，

今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为

“
WATERFOR
LIFE
”的交流活动。请你以代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。

【参考范文】

Ladies and gentlemen, Good morning. I
'
mLi Hua from Fujian, China. It
'
s mygreat honor to be
here to say something about global water shortage and ways of dealing with it. As we know, the global
water shortage is becoming increasing severe
due to global warming, environmental pollution
Therefore, it
'
s a high time we did something about it.
Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use. Secondly, new
methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into
fresh water. Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law. Last but not least, it
'
s everyone
responsibility to make
good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.
In conclusion, people around the world
should be aware of the real situaiton of
water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically.
That
'
s all. Thank you.
高考英语作文范文

47
篇

I.
看图作文类

1.
今年寒假，

你参加了社会实践活动，

去某旅行社当业余导游。

请根据该旅行社提供的

数据和你
的所见所闻，用英语写一篇短文，作为寒假作业交给你的英语老师。

Number of people in City X travelling
abroad in 1996, 2001 and 2006
要求：

1.
简析表格，说明产生这种现象的原因；

2.
结合漫画，谈谈境外旅游出现的问

题；

3.
4.
针对所出现的问题阐述你自己的看法（至少两点）

；

词数

120
左右；

5.
参考词汇：吐痰

spit v.
and the ever- increasing population.
mainly
When people
'
s life is getting better and better, more and more people choose to spend their
holidays abroad. The year 2006 sees a sharp increase in the number of overseas travelers compared
with the year 2001, when the number was already much larger than that of the year 1996. It
'
s a good
thing that Chinese tourism is developing very fast. However, reports about people
'
s bad manners
flood in. Someare even asked if all Chinese spit and litter everywhere. The poor behavior has done
great harm to the image of China, which is really shameful.
China has long been regarded as a country with good manners. Everybody should keep some do
'
s and don
'
ts in their mind to guide their behavior in public, home and abroad. Win respect for yourself
and our country!


2.
根据以下图画，

写一篇英语短文，

描述今昔通讯方式的变化，

以及这些变化给人们生

活带
'
s life.
来的影响。

注意：

1
．词数：

100
左右

2
．生词：通讯：

communicate
互联网：

the Internet

Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people
In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public
telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile can communicate with each other almost at
any place and at any time. What
'
s more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables
them to send and receive e-mails whenever they these changes, people
'
s pace of life has been
quickened and people
'
s work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from
each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different countries.
In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.
3.
受某英文报的委托，

你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。

请根据以下信息，

用英
调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种

调查范围：湖北省
的

10
所中学

调查对象：高中生

调查人数：

1200
调查方式：访谈

调查结果：（见下图）

Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students
Recently a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students.
In this survey, one thousand senior middle school students from ten schools in Hubei Province were
interviewed. They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English
articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.
The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read news most.
Twenty-six percent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the
students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of
students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer reading articles
about learning methods.
4.
目前，全区上下都在大力开展城乡清洁工程的活动。为了响应政府的号召，

3
月

25
日，星期
语为该报写一篇

100
词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。

天，你们班参加了一次校外环境卫生清洁活动。请根据图画所提供的信息，用英语

写一篇日记，并谈谈
你的看法。

（为方便排版，图见下页）

注意：

1.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯、完整；

2.
词数：

100
左右。

Sunday, March 25 Fine
Today our class went out to do some cleaning. We gathered at the school gate and started out early
in the morning. Somecollected the rubbish in the park, some cleared the old posters off the walls, and
others swept the street. Wehoped to make our city more beautiful with our own hands. At the same time
some of us went to the public places, where there were a lot of people. We kept on telling people not to
destroy the beauty of nature so that we can have a cleaner world.
In my opinion, such activities are necessary and instructive because some people are unaware of the
importance of protecting the environment at present.
5.
根据图画写一篇短文，叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。

①

妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩；②儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理。

要求：

1
．不仅要表述出图中的内容，还要发表自己的感想；

2
．字数：

100
字左右；

3
．开头已给出。

One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He wanted to help the girl up,
but his mother stopped him and said,
it was you who knocked her down.

“
Don
'
t do that, otherwise others will think
”
A few days later, the mother was shocked to see