alltime中考作文之中考英语作文多少字

2021年1月19日发(作者：伤痕累累怎么读)
中考英语作文多少字


【篇一：中考英语作文评分标准】


中考英语作文对很多考生来说是感到头痛的，有正确的写作方法，
能够帮助考生把作 文写好，并且得到较高分数。写好英语作文要注
意十字原则：


“
结构
+
要点
+
逻辑
+
语法
+
亮点
!”

1
结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作
阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼
?
因为这种结构十分清晰。
“
观点
——
要
点
——
总结
”
让人一

目了然。三段式 的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，
不超过
2
句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段 直接说
xq is
extremely strong.
观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分
2-3
点说为
什么他强壮。
1.
每天吃
10
顿饭，
he has ten meals everyday!
详举
吃的是什么。
2.
每天运动
2
小时，
he does exercise 2 hours a day!
详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二 段的论证，可以得出结论。
但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建
议 等。如，
how strong and robust xq is! i hope to be him one
day!

2
要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字， 翻译
!
因为中考英语写
作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的 再
好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，
要做到全，围绕中心。< br>

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，
转折的 ，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了
first, second, third, finally
等还可以使用高级点的，如
first of all(
首先
)
，
in addition, whats
more, moreover(
都是另外的意思
)
，
in a word, all in all(
表示总结
的
)
。转折：
but, yet, howeve r
等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意
这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个思路

3
语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能
说是不好，但 是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

4
亮点：当我们将前八个字都做 得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二
等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老

师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都
是结构清晰的 三段式，要点都很全都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法
错误，但是
a
篇只用了
beautiful,good-looking,b
篇却用到了
attractive
，
charming
，
catching
等，我坚信正常人都会给
b
篇高
分

的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最< br>有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习
惯。只要把这十个字都文。

评分标准

1.
内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给
12-15
分
;

2.
内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给
9-
1 1
分
;

3.
内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较 规范，给
5-8
分
;

4.
只写出个别要点，语法错误 较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可
读或不知所云，给
0-3
分

【篇二：
2016
中考英语作文题目大全】


2016
年中考英语作文题目大全


一、

学术文化篇

1.
沉迷手机


题目：李华沉迷 于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你
打算怎么帮他呢
?
请用下面所给的提 示词写一篇不少于
80
字的短文。
字迹工整，语言流畅。


提示词：
give up concentrate on be (become)interested in


★

范文
li hua spent too much time playing computer games
and he fell behind others. as a good friend of his, i must do
something to help him.

firs
tly, i think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well.
he should spend most of his time on his study instead of
computer games. secondly, i must tell him that playing
computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for
his eyes. so he must give it up. i can play more sports with him
after school. maybe he will become more interested in sports
than computer games. and then ill ask him to concentrate
more on his study. of course, i will try my best to help him with
all his subjects. i think i can do it in many fun ways and let him
find much fun in studying. at the same time, ill ask both his
parents and our teachers to help him, too. if i try these, im sure
he will make great progress soon.

2.
怎样学好英语


世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学
好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年 的学习经历你一定积累了许
多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。


要求：
1.
词数：
80
—
100
词< br>(
开头已给出，不计入总词数
)

2.
字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。


★

范文
how to learn english well

english is important and useful to us. how can we learn it well?
here are my , we should often listen to the
tapes, english songs and programs. watching english movies
is also helpful to us. second, we should speak english in class
as muc
h as possible. don’t be afraid of making mistakes. the
more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. wed better
join the english club and practice with others. third, we can
read more english newspapers and magazines. it’s good for us.
at last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.

in a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading
and writing, we will learn english well.


二、

素质教育篇

3.
健康生活


许多学习生活中 的烦恼都会使人产生压力
,
为了更好地发现及解决同
学们中存在的心理压力问题
,
你们班特意开展了一次以
less pressure,
better lif e
为主题的英语演讲比赛
,
请你准备发言稿
,
谈谈你的一些缓
解压力的好办法
,
与同学分享
,
内容包括
:

(1)
同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么
;

(2)
我的压力是什么
;

(3)
我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。


注意
:
文中不得出现真 实的姓名和校名。词数
80~100
。


★

范文
less pressure, better life

hello, boys and girls!


pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. students in
our class are under too much

pressure. some students can’t get on well with their
classmates, while others may worry about their exams.


i’m always under pressure, too. my parents want me to be the
top student in class. so they send me to all kinds of after-
classes at weekends. last monday evening, i had a talk with my
mother. i told her i was not lazy. i really felt tired. i needed time
to relax. my mother agreed with me at last. so i think a
conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.


that’s all. thank y
ou!

4.
学做好人好事


今年是学习雷锋五十周年纪念日，雷锋同志说过：“
我要把有限的生
命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。
”


请写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于
80
字的作文。


在作文中，简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情，为什么向雷锋叔叔学习
以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的 。


★

范文
leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to
others selflessly. he devoted all this life into his beloved career
as well. i, myself, was totally shocked by his character.

such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to
low. everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes
instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “learn from leifeng,
our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more
smiling faces rather than conflict.

to help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is
to consist doing it. take myself as an example. i am the
representative of math, to collect homework is my daily task,
however, i would turn them to the right page for shorten the
time for teachers when correcting them.

i strongly propose that we shall see a better world if each of
us treat leifeng as our model and copy his spirit.


三、

现代生活篇

5.
怎样减压并保持健康的生活习惯


健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是 非常重要的。你认为健康的生
活习惯应当是怎样的呢
?
请根据下面的信息提示
,
写一篇短文
,
首句已
给出。


信息提示：健康 饮食
;
早睡早起
,
不熬夜
;
参加运动
,
强 身健体。


要求
:
根据信息提示
,
把握要点,
适当发挥
,
不逐字翻译。字数在
80
词
左右。


★

范文
i think healthy habits are very important for us.

all of us want to be healthy. first, we should get enough sleep
during the night. we can go to bed early and get up early.
staying up late is bad for our health. second, we must have the
right kinds of food. we should eat more fruit and vegetables
and less meat. we should drink a lot of water. we should have
healthy eating habits. third, we should do more exercise to
build up our bodies. finally, we should wash hands before
meals and brush our teeth
twice a day. if we don’t feel well, we
should go to see the doctor at once.

6.
毕业感想


初中生活马上就要结束了
,
三年的初中生 活一定给你留下了很多挥之
不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、
人 物、事情经过和事后你的感想
(
请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真
实姓名
)< br>。


提示词语
: three years, memories, one of, one day, think,
happy/ sorry


★

范文
how time flies! i have studied in my school for three
years. and i will graduate

from middle school in a month. i am eager to share my
happiness and sadness with you. i had so many memories in
three years’ life. one of them impressed me very much. i still
remember, when i began to learn english, i found it too difficult.
no matter how hard i tried, i still couldn’t do well in it and
almost gave it up. as soon as my english teacher found my
problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn english
well. since
then, she has kept helping me. little by little, i’ve
become interested in english and i’m good at it. i think i am so
lucky to become one of her students. i’ve learned a lot from
her. i will try to help others when they are in trouble. i think it is
a happy thing to help others.


四、

社会经济篇

7.
低碳生活

及绘声绘色用水


现在全世界都在倡导
“
低碳生活
”(low
-carbon lif e)
，即：降低二氧化
碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对
我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包
括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建 议。


提示词语：
be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a
difference, environment, suggest, reuse


★

范文
low-carbon life is good for everyone. to help with the
environment, i always walk or ride a bike to school instead of
taking a car. besides, i will try to use things that can be
recycled and i never forget to turn off the lights when i leave
the classroom. i think it’s my duty to live a low
-carbon life. and
even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the
environment. so i suggest we should reuse books as long as
possible. and we’d better not spend much money on expensive
clothes. if everyone does something for the environment, i
believe the earth will be a better place.

8.
节约用水


水是生 命之源。随着水资源的短缺，节约用水是我们每个人的责任，
请以此为话题写一篇不少于
80< br>字的短文。


★

范文

as we know, water is very important to man, we can’t
live without water. the amount of water which is suitable to
drink is less and less. but some people don’t care about it.
they waste a lot of water in their daily life. even worse, they
pour dirty water into rivers. they throw rubbish into rivers, too.
many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. something must
be done to stop the pollution. and i think it’s a great shame to
waste while millions are in great need of water. i think what we
can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible
as we can. for example, we must turn off the tap immediately
after we use it. we can use a basin to wash our hands and
faces. it’s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family
members to join me! only in this way can we live happily. if we
don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tea
r-drop of us.
i believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big
difference.


五、

人生哲理篇

9.
幸福

幸福是什么
?
幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的
赞许的目光， 幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是
??
请以
my happiness
为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。


要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确
,
字迹工整，
80-100
词。


★

范文
happiness is important in our life. in fact, happiness is
always around you if you put your heart into it.

i will never forget one thing. once, i had a bad mark at a math
test. i was shy and afraid to meet my parents. but when i got
back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to
me: “it doesn’t matter, my child. remember we’ll be always
beside you when you need help. we believe you can be better
next time. never give up!” i was moved and made up my mind
to work harder and harder.

i feel happy. whenever i a
m in trouble, i can feel my parents’
love. i want to be a good child for my parents.

10.
感恩


对父母心存感恩，因为他们给予我生命，让我健康成长
;
对老师心存
感恩，因为他们给了我教诲，让我抛却愚昧
;
对朋友心存感恩 ，因为
他们给了我友爱
;
对社会心存感恩，因为社会给了我智慧和力量。自
从 国家实施义务教育以来，书本免费，食宿免费，而且还有贫困助
学金等。面对这些，我们应该心存感恩， 感谢祖国对我们的厚望和
期盼。让我们永远记住：感谢父母、感谢老师、感谢朋友、感谢全
社会
!
请以
“
感恩
”
为话题写一篇
80
—100
字的作文。


★

范文
what should we thank?

the thankful great universe provides the environment of
existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything
in keeping with us existence of space, bring storm to let us
accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for.
the thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the
merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feeling of the
human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of
the human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of
the human life! the thankful teacher works with diligence and
without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability,
and put on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us. the
thankful classmate and friend grow up with us and let us no
longer stand alone in the itinerary of life. the thankful our
country provides us with free books, dormitory and food.
whenever it is, we should keep a thankful heart towards
everything existed. only thus, can we become a useful man.


六、

环境保护篇

11.
保护环境

6
月
5
日
( june 5)
是世界环境保护日
,
我们周围的环境变得越来越糟
糕
,
污染越来越严重。环境问题影响着人们的工作
,
学习
,
生活等
,< br>而我
们的工作
,
生活
,
生产等又使环境污染越来越严重
......
如何保护我们的
环境
?
请以
“ how to protect/save our environment/world? ”
为题
写一篇短文。


提示
:
存在问题
:1.
水污染越来越严重
;2.
砍伐森林严重
;3.
大气污染严
重
;4.
白色垃圾等。

要求：如何改善
/
保护环境
?
至少
:3--- 4
个方面
,
80
字左右的。