婷婷姐姐雅思写作7分官方评分标准解析

2021年1月20日发(作者：王家楫)
Some
experts
believe
that
it
is
better
for
children
to
begin
learning
a
foreign
language
at
primary
school
rather
than
secondary school.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?




Foreign
languages
have
increasingly
gained
popularity
among
students these years, given that the world is shrinking and each
country now has a more frequent contact with the outside world.
Many
people
[c1]


argue
that
children
should
begin
learning
a
foreign language at elementary school, instead of waiting until
[c2]
they enter secondary school. There are several reasons for
this.


Firstly, despite the fact that parents do not want to put too much
pressure on their children, they also do not want them to lose at
the starting line. This means, if the kids start to learn a foreign
language early, their parents are relieved from the thought that
their kids will have to catch up later on, which is true to some
extent.


On the other hand, it is scientifically proved that children tend to
learn a language faster before the age of 12. As far as I know,
my friends who started to learn English when they were six or
seven
now
have
a
much
more
satisfactory
English
level
than
those
who
started
at12
or
13.
So
it
is
wise
to
have
foreign
language course in primary school curriculum.

Additionally,
learning
a
foreign
language
at
an
earlier
age
can
lay
children
a
solid
foundation
for
future

than
just
learning
a
language
itself,
children
learn
a
lot
more
about
the
learning
methods.
As
a
result,
when
they
enter
secondary
school,
they
can
explore
more
languages
and
enrich
their
knowledge by extensive readings.


The only disadvantage of learning a foreign language at primary
school
might
be
one
more
course
and
pressure.
However,primary
schools
can
introduce
advanced
teaching
methods to tackle this problem,such as playing games and role
play,
and
ensure
that
children
can
enjoy
the
language
learning
process.


In
conclusion,
the
advantages
of
learning
foreign
languages
at
primary
school
rather
than
secondary
school
outweigh
the
disadvantages.

注释：

[c1]people
和
expert
是有区别的，注意看题目指的是哪类人


[c2]til

Total: (6.5+6.5+7+7.5)/4=7
分


Task response 6.5
分


1. address all parts of the task 7
分


首先列举的
adv antages
，然后提出
disadvantage
，紧接着驳
斥了这个< br>disadvantage
。
这一步证明了你都懂题目不仅是要
让列举利弊还要 做出比较


2. present a clear position throughout theresponse. 7
分

主体赞成利大于弊，并在说弊的时候有力的反驳了

，最后
一段明确提出自己的立场。


3. main ideas may be unclear 6
分