英汉对照Section Ⅶ Reading for Writing——有关旅行计划的电子邮件

2021年1月20日发(作者：olive)
Section
Ⅶ

Reading for Writing
——
有关旅行计划的电子
邮件

本单元的写作任务是 读理查德给小李介绍旅行计划的电子邮件后，给朋友写一封
介绍旅行计划的电子邮件。

Ⅰ
.Pre
-
writing

(
Ⅰ
)
Learning to write after the model

Dear Xiao Li
，

My time here in
China is
going
well.I love my
new school
and
the
October holiday
，
my parents and I are planning to go to X
i’a
n to see the Terracotta
Army.
I’v
e heard that it is an amazing sight
，
and I ca
n’t
wait to me the story of
the Terracotta Army is almost unbelievable.I
t’s
amazing that there are more than 8
，
000
statues
，
and no one in modern times knew about them until the 1970s.
W
e’r
e
also
planning
to
visit
several
other
places
in
X
i’a

dad
and
I
are
both
looking
forward
to
going
to
the
Shaanxi
History
Museum
，
because
my
dad
loves
history and I have heard that this museum is known as a
“Chinese treasure house”
！
W
e’r
e also going to the X
i’a
n City Wall and a few other famous sights.
W
e’r
e
taking
the
train
，
leaving
the
day
before
the
October
holiday
begins.W
e’r
e
arriving at 9
：
30 am and will start sightseeing right away
，
so I hope we sleep well on
the train!
I guess tha
t’s
all for now
！
I’l
l write again soon and send photos
！
Do you have any plans
for the coming holiday
？
Hope to hear from you soon.
Your friend
，

Richard

(
Ⅱ
)
Preparation for writing
—
Words and phrases
①
take

advantage

of



利用





②
as

follows




如下

③
take

a

tour

游览


④
set

out/off

出发

⑤
a

seven-day

trip

七日游


⑥
enjoy

the

scenery

欣赏风景

⑦
leave

for

动身去某地


⑧
together

with

和……一起

⑨
around

the

corner

即将来临


⑩
take

a

bus

乘公共汽车

Ⅱ
.While
-
writing

假设你是王明，寒假即 将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的好友李华写
一封
e-mail,
分享你的出行计划。

要点：
1.
元月
21
日下午
2
点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预订酒店，
休息一晚。

2.
第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。

3.
第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。


4.
元月
24
日乘坐高铁返回。

注意：
1.
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.
词数
100
左右。

参考词汇：
high speed railway
高铁

book
预订

Disneyland
迪士尼乐园

recreation
facilities
游乐设施

souvenir
纪念品

Shanghai Science and Technology Museum
上
海科技馆

Oriental Pearl Tower
东方明珠

Step 1

List the outline of the passage.

Paragraph 1
：
I

will

have

a

four-day

trip

to

Shanghai

with

my

family.
Paragraph 2
：
What

we

shall

do

every

day

while

in

Shanghai.
Paragraph 3
：
How

about

the

plan

for

your

winter

holiday?
Step 2

List the words
，
phrases and sentences.

and phrases
①
book
v
t
.




预订





②
check

in





登记

③
in

advance

提前


④
at

the

same

time

同时

⑤
a

four-day

trip

四天的旅行

ces
①随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。
(as)
As

the

winter

holiday

is

coming
，
I

will

have

a

four-day

trip

to

Shanghai

with

my

family.
②到达上海后，我 们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网上预订，这样我们
才有足够的精力去参观上海。
(s o that)
Upon

arriving

in

Shanghai
，
we

will

check

in

the

hotel

for

a

good

rest

first,

which

will

be

booked

online

in

advance
，
so

that

we

can

have

enough

energy

to

visit

Shanghai.
③下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏到上海的全景。
(from which)
We

will

climb

the

Oriental

Pearl

Tower

in

the

afternoon
，
from

which

we

will

enjoy

the

whole

view

of

Shanghai.
Step 3

Draft the article by using the following words.

as
，
so that
，
besides
，
from which

Dear Li Hua
，

How is everything going?
As
the winter holiday is coming
，
I will have a four-day trip
to Shanghai with my is my plan.
We are leaving Liling for Shanghai by the high speed railway at around 2
：
00
arriving in Shanghai
，
we will check in the hotel for a good rest first
，
which will be booked online in advance
，
so that
we can have enough energy to visit
the second day
，
we are going to the Disneyland to experience all kinds of
recreation facilities
，
and buy some souvenirs at the same the third day
，
we will
visit Shanghai Science and Technology Museum in the morning.
Besides
，
we will climb
the Oriental Pearl Tower in the afternoon
，
from which
we will enjoy the whole view of
Jan.24th
，
we will take the high speed railway back to Liling.
How about the plan for your winter holiday? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours
，

Wang Ming
Ⅲ
.Post
-
writing
—
polishing the passage
Exchange
your
passage
with
your
partner
，
and
pay
attention
to
the
following
points.