females专四写作模板

2021年1月20日发(作者：detectives)
写作模式（批驳分析类）
What Attitude Should We Take to Sth. 1.
社会上对某事物的错误观
念




2.
分析批驳其错误所在



3.
给出如何看待该事物的建议

1) With the arrival / birth of …, sth. is becoming more and more … in our life. 2) Hit / Affected
with
this
trend,
some
/
many
people
come
to
believe
/
contend
that ...(
错误观念
)
3)
But
their
viewpoint / belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.(
作者的立场
))

4) It is true that sth. is a key ingredient in one’s …(
让步法分析
) 5) On any scale of …, in fact, there
is almost nothing heavier than sth.. 6) If we see sth. in its
true colors, however, it is nothing but…
(
批驳分析
I) 7) ... (
进一步阐述
)) 8) And moreover, laying any undue stress on sth. may lead one
to …, as can be easily seen in the cases of …(
批驳分析
II))

9) Therefore, it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards sth. 10
) On the one hand, …

(
正确看法
I) 11) On the other, ... (
正确看法
II) 12) In summary, sth. means …but not … to our life.
(
结论句
)

What Attitude Should We Take to Money
1) With the arrival of market-based economy, money is becoming more and more important in our
life. 2) Hit with this trend, many people come to believe that money is above everything else in their
life. 3) But their belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.

4) It is true that money is a key
ingredient in one’s struggle towards happiness, without whi
ch, for example, there would be no way
to
go
to
college
or
form
a
family.
5)
On
any
scale
of
one’s
daily
worry,
in
fact,
there
is
almost
nothing
heavier
than
money.
6)
If
we
see
it
in
its
true
colors,
however,
money
is
nothing
but
a
means to an end. 7) Money can buy us food, but not appetite; medicine, but not health; diplomas,
but not knowledge; and days of joy, but not the whole life of happiness.

8) And moreover, laying
any undue stress on money may lead one to stop at nothing in making it, ascan be easily seen in the
cases
of
most
corrupt
officials.

9)
Therefore,
it
is
necessary
to
take
a
correct
attitude
towards
money.

10) On the one hand, money is vital to our daily life, in which case, it is wise of you to
spend
not
where
you
may
save.
11)
On
the
other
hand,
money
is
something
to
be
plowed
into
something
more
important,
so
it
is
better
to
spare
not
where
you
must
spend.
12)
In
summary,
money means something but not everything to our life.
Note: Spend not where you may save; spare not where you must spend. ---Ray.
可以节省时，不要浪费；必须花费时，不要吝啬。

---
雷。

Effects
of
Sth.
On
Sb.
/
Sth.
Else

1.
分析某事物的正面效应

2.
分析某事物的负面效应





3.
给出怎样对待该事物的建议



写作模式（分析建议类）

1)
As
is
known
to
all,
sth.
does
bring
a
lot
of
benefits
to
sb.
/
sth.
else.
2)
First,
it
can
greatly
strengthen …, thereby changing …for the better.(
正面分析
I) 3) Besides, it can make /render sb. /
sth. else better able to… (
正面分析
II) 4) And best of all, it can help sb.…(
正面分析
III)






5
）
But all the above does not mean / follow that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects
sth. brings about. 6
）

If…, as a succession of scientific studies reveals / implies / suggests,

there
are more chances that… (
负面分析
I) 7) In addition, the more ..., the worse... (
负面分析
II) 8) And
worst of all,

… (
负面分析
III)






9)
Therefore,
a
scientific
approach
must
be
adopted
to
the
problem
of
sth.
10)
On
the
one
hand, …(
建议
I) 11) On the other hand, ... (
建议
II) 12) In summary, sth. can do sb. / sth. else good
or harm, all depending on … (
结论句
)

The Effects of Exercise on Our Health




1.
As
is
known
to
all,
exercise
does
bring
a
lot
of
benefits
to
our
health.
2)
First,
it
can
greatly
strengthen our hearts, lungs, bones and muscles, thereby changing our whole health for the better. 3)
Besides,, it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on around us. 4) And best of
all,, it can help us breed optimism toward our tough life.

5) But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects exercise
brings about.. 6) If you are normally inactive and then, contrary to your usual habit, start a program
of
undue
exercise,
as
a
succession
of
scientific
studies
reveals,,
there
are
more
chances
that
you
have yourself injured. 7) In addition,, the more exercise those on a fat-reducing diet take, the more
loss of iron they will suffer and the worse their health will get.

8) And worst of all, continual as
well as excessive exercise can result in sudden death.






9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of exercise.

10) On the
one hand, our physical exercise must be based on both progressiveness and regularity. 11) On the
other hand, we must go in for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of
our own. 12) In summary, exercise can do us good or harm, all depending on how we make use of
it.

How
to
Do
Something


1.
某一事物的现状



2.
分析该事物的重要性
(
或危害性／社会意
义等
) 3.
怎样对待该事物


1) Much to our distress / delight / surprise, these years have seen the popularity / worsening / much
improvement / a widespread neglect of sth. (
议论的主题
) in

our society. 2) According to a recent
/ official report / survey / opinion poll, ...(
佐证陈述
) 3) If this current is allowed to run its course,
things are bound to
turn for the better /
worse.

(Para. 1)



4) The importance /
harmfulness /
significance of sth. to sb. / sth. else, (however), can be seen from the perspectives as follows. 5) In
the first place, …(
分析
I)6) In the second, ... (
分析
II) 7) And above all, …(
分析
III) 8) To sum up, ...
(
归纳总结
)




9) So the most pressing for us / basic problem now is how to… 10) In my opinion,
the first step should be focus
ed upon …(
建议
I) 11) Then, greater efforts must be made to ... (
建议
II) 12) In one word, where there is …, there is …(
结论句
) (Para. 3)

How to Conduct Patriotic Education Among the Youth of Today
1.
我国爱国主义教育的现状。
2.
分析爱国主义教育的重要意义。


3.
如何在青少年中开展
爱国主义教育？
1) Much to
our distress,
these years have seen a widespread neglect
of patriotic
education in our society. 2) According to some

official reports, many patriotic education centers
have been closed down or kept open to the public for other more profitable purposes while many of
our
national
heroes
have
given
way
to
today’s
pop
stars
in
youths’
minds.
3)
If
this
current
is
allowed
to
run
its
course,
I
am
afraid,
things
are
bound
to
turn
for
the worse,
with
less
and
less
sense
of
patriotism
left
in
the
youth.

4)
The
significance
of
patriotic
education
to
our
society,
however, can be seen from the perspectives as follows. 5) In the first place, the patriotic education
can make youth be more aware of the glorious history and culture of our nation, thus building up
their sens
e of pride as Chinese. 6) In the second, the patriotic education helps youth value today’s
hard-earned life so as to hold dearer their golden chances of enriching themselves with knowledge
in
peace.
7)
And
above
all,
the
patriotic
education
can
push
youth
to
draw
upon
more
of
their
capabilities in order to make tomorrow’s life better than today’s and leave behind themselves more
highlights
for
the
nation’s
culture.
8)
To
sum
up,
patriotic
education
is
a
key
ingredient
in
the
all-round
development
of
youth.



9)
So
the
most
pressing
for
us
now
is
how
to
effectively
inculcate patriotism in the youth of today. 10) In my opinion, the first step should be focused upon
giving
fuller
play
to
the
potentials
of
patriotic
education
centers
instead
of
running
them
for
the
purpose
of
making
money.
11)
Then,
greater
efforts
must
be
made
to
integrate
the
patriotic
education
into
the
curriculums
throughout
youth’s
education.
12)
In
one
word,
where
there
is
an
effective patriotic education of youth, there is a greater enhancement of national cohesiveness.

写作模式（理由陈述类）


1) Something
may be
many things to
many people. 2) Some may see it
as …while others
may
view it as …(
人们的看法举例
) 3) As far as I am concerned, however, I would prefer to value it
as … 4) My insight into sth.(My ou
tlook on sth. / My understanding of sth.) is bound up with three
major
factors.

5)
Primarily,
sth.
is
so
…that
…(
理由
I)
6)
…(
进一步阐述
)
7)
Secondly,
sth.
is
also … (
理由
II) 8) ... (
进一步阐述
) 9) And most of all, …(
理由
III) 10) …(
进一步阐述
)


11) I have (not) much freedom / option in this matter, but I have never found any other way of