nba是什么意思托福独立写作满分作文

2021年1月20日发(作者：埋怨)
Question: Do you agree or disagree with the statement: People benefit more from
traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign coutries.

All
of
us
can
see
that
the
world
now
is
becoming
a
whole
unity
with
the
rapid
development
,
and
at

the
same
time
people’s
living
standard
is
aslo
ramped
ling
is
no
longer
a
luxury
imagination
in
people’s
mind
,
but
a
new
question emeges that how could people get the most benefits from travelling ? If it
is up to me to decide with , I will choose the travelling to foreign countries.

The diversity of the culture would
be of great benefit to
us .Our vision would
be
expanded
by
the
communication
with
exotic
people,
who
live
in
quiet
different
surroundings from ours and have various ideas maybe we never get. Last year I
travelled to Thailand and I was attracted and astonished by its amazing and unique
culture. Different countries have their own various this case , a more
direct and vivid impression of the whole world will appear in our own world .What
the real world we live in looks like on earth?How different the perspectives of the
people
from
another
country
from
ours?Travelling
provides
us
with
an
good
opportunity to get closer to these questions.I even make friends with some of the
local boys. And from that , we have more possibilities to regard the world in a wider
and more sophisticated way.

From
another
perspective
to
say,
the
good
aspect
of
travelling
abroad
can
be
sensed
in

the
world
is
filled
with
chances
and
challenges,businessmen
could
find
more
ways
to
go
when
they
are
put
in
a
cosmopolitan
marketing

by
facing
the
whole
world
,
will
a
businessman have the occation to be introduced to a world economic
as we all know,it is essential for a merchant to keep pace with the whole word as
well as to get a clear picture of the current international these factors
lead
to
people’s
travelling
to
foreign
countries.
Take
my
experience
as
an
example .The company I work in usually assigns us to another continent such as
America
or
Canada
to
do
marketing

field
work
could
provide
more
convincing
ideas
of
what
customers
really
desires
s
of
a
shaper
mind,a more inspring insight, could get more access to the consumers’ nee
ds and
fit the current financial society.

However,
w
e
still
can’t
disavow
the
advantages
of
travelling
in
our
own
g more about our homeland and
listening to native clients’ voices
are still vital projects . But in my point of view, in order to achieve a new reality, why
not
us
give
ourselves
a
more
spacious
stage?
Out
of
our
homeland
is
another
fantastic and alluring world that is beyond our imagination.

iBT
新托福
30
分满分作文赏析



很多新托福考试的考友总是在感叹，
这个世界上能拿到的好作文
实在是太少了，
其实很多时候不是这些作文少，
而是很多考友没
有努力去发掘这些作文。
这不是太傻 论坛就有考友分享了自己的
满分作文。无老师第一时间转过来，推荐给各位考友！

拿这些满分作文都该做些什么呢？

1
看整篇结构，
要看一看这些 作文的结构是怎么展开的。
要仔细
的读一下，这些作文每一段的写作目的，到底是支持还是反对 ，
以及哪几段支持，哪几段反对。

2
看段落结构，
要仔细分析在 一段之中，
每一句话所起到的作用。
到底是主题句，还是例证。

3
看句型多样性，要仔细想想这些作文每一句话说话的分寸。

4
比对自己的 写法。
看每一句话的时候，
脑中都要思考，
这句话
中文是什么意思，
如果是我自己来写，
我会怎么写！
并且在下一
篇自己的作文中替换为这些用法。

5
用词多样性和准确性。

6
如果有需要的话，
再背一下是最好的了，
没有输入就没有输出
吗！

比如：
In this case, computer as a representative of modern
technology plays a negative role in learning information.
这句话，我们自己很有可能写的就是，
In this case, computer
that is a equipment of modern technology have a bad
effect in learning information.
这里 的差距就很十分明显了！
因此，
当给你美的东西，
还要有一
双发现美的眼睛！

2011-8-2
Independent Writing
：
Does modern technology help
students learn more information and learn it more
quickly?
Marvelous
as it looks at first sight, modern technology
does not help students learn information at a greater
speed and with higher efficiency in most cases; or it could
work towards the opposite direction which led students to
lose their initiative to learn and explore.
First of all, one property of modern technology is latently
harmful to any learning mind
–
it distracts. One thing we
feel about when we are searching for information online is
that the internet, as an outstanding example of modern
technology and even regarded as the innovator of
education, provides us with not only relevant results to
make use of, but also external links to click. More than
once I turned on my computer to check school library for
resources, but ended up watching Youtube videos. In this
case, computer as a representative of modern technology
plays a negative role in learning information. We do
acquire more information with the convenient tool, yet
most of them are irrelevant and in the end procrastinating
would lower our learning.
Also, students would easily become disoriented in the
huge sea of information. Although modern technology
could equip us with easy access to information, the huge
amount of resources would actually leave us
discombobulated
. Therefore, it is only we possess
information more quickly rather than we learn it more
quickly. An illustrating example is my experience with a
HK digital library which stores almost all the books I
desire. At first I enjoyed downloading them from the
database, however, one month later I ended up with
hundreds of books stored in my hardware yet none of
them finished or ever clicked.
Furthermore, modern technology gives students an
illusion that information and real knowledge is easy to
learn
–
just by clicking mouse or watching videos. But in
fact this forms only the first step towards useful
information and effective learning, as learning of any kind
requires full concentration and interactive thinking, which
are almost absent in the pocess of popular e-learning
experience.
To summarize, modern technology does not help students
learn more information and learn it more quickly, though it
does make access to information and resources much
more easily. The popular e-learning still lacks the
concentration, depth, and interaction that are the hallmark
of traditional ways of educating and learning.
2011-8-10
TPO Independent writing
：
我们生活的时代比父辈们年轻时生
活的时代更好还是更坏？

It seems that people always have a desire to compare: am
I prettier
than others? Are we living in a better age? Or,
as the question goes, is our life easier and more enjoyable
than it was several decades ago? I would say no, as I have
witnessed the struggle and paradox of our generation.
First of all, we are now living in an age of revolution with
no previous human experience that could be referred to.
Living in such a fast-changing world would not be easy
and comfortable at all; with everything keeps changing,
everyone has to move fast in order to catch up with the
majority. However, people were much more stable and
care-free when our grandparents were children; they did
not have to learn a second language in order to get a
better job, or read a lot in order to get informed. Yet in our
age, these are supposed to be the responsibility of young
people.
Another discomfort of our age is that we are experiencing
interpersonal alienation. With the development of
communication technology, people in fact become
alienated with friends and relatives since they could be so
easily accessed via phone or email. Too often we feel that
few of our friends are true friends, without the traditional
feeling of mutual affection which could only be created by
longtime apart. But several decades ago, people treasured
their friends and maintained relatively close interpersonal
relations, which is much more enjoyable than the
estrangements we are experiencing.
The last factor that has made our age so uncomfortable is
the abusive use of technology. Although it brings much
convenience, it essentially changes human
–
we are no
longer the master of tools, but instead the slaves of
devices. We rush to metro station in order to catch an
early train, sit in front of radioactive computers all day
long in order to get our work done, and stay in
air-conditioned rooms all summer without experiencing
the natural changes outside thick cement walls. Several
decades ago, people could still live closer to nature and
make rational use of modern technology, which to me is
the essence of human living experience.
However, the comparison between different times is itself
ridiculous. The criteria could not be easily determined,
and opinions are highly personal. Anyway, we have a
longer life span, more advanced medical facilities, and
easier traffic than our grandparent when they were
children, and we should treasure the present experience.
Imagination of the past might only be nostalgia
–
if I ask
my grandparents the same question, they might as well
say that our life is much better than the past generations.
Who knows? As long as the world is still peaceful, life at
any time would not become too difficult to handle.
2011/8/14
Independent writing:Most advertisements make products
much better than they really are.
I strongly agree to the statement that most advertisements
makes the products presented much better than they
really are, and points below supports my idea.
An essential reason concerns the nature of advertising
–

advertisers, in most cases, would only make products
seem better than they really are, not the other way around.
Since the ultimate
aim of advertising is to persuade
people into buying something, and people would natually
be attracted by something that is desirable rather than
repellent, advertisements are certainly made to display a
more attractive image of products. Therefore, customers
would first be gravated towards the virtual product that is
somewhat dishonestly pictured by advertisers, then
desire to own it, and eventually purchase it. In this way,
the desire of consumers is satisfied, the purpose of
production achieved, and the advertising process
completed.
But the norm that a “good” product is advertised as a
“better” one is often challenged or even reversed –
that is,
unscrupulous businessmen make use of advertising to
sell inferior products, which raises a moral question. For
example, my mother was once attracted by a commercial
of a encyclopedia which was claimed to be the one and
only complete version of several ancient Chinese
documents. She rushed to the shop and bought this
“limited version” at a eye
-popping price, and regarded it
as one of the most precious things in our house. However,
a few months later she found the same version was sold in