shredder雅思写作要领.

2021年1月20日发(作者：brick)



第一讲


引发激烈讨论，热门话题，激烈争论，广泛关注









heated, hot, long-running, controversial, hotly-debated
a matter of (global )concern, (burning, pressing, thorny)issue, controversy, subject, focus, topic. be
put on the agenda
trigger, spark, arouse
intense, fierce, contentious/ debate, discussion, argument
arouse people’s wide concern/ / wide public concern/curiosity/attention,

make people worried

become public focus/ the focus of the society

more and more people---an increasing number of people
more and more useful---increasingly useful
人
---
事物

More and more people waste ---The growing rate of waste have people calling it an epidemic
a lot of ---a considerable number of/ massive/

different
people
have
different
ideas
towards
it----
people’s
ideas
towards
it
differ
from
one
to
another. .,





views on this issue vary greatly.
try to
—
attempt to, intend to
think
–
argue, claim , deem , insist
if
–
provided that, assuming that, supposing that


一

写作常用关键词句：


1
．








认为，断言：
think, believe, argue, hold, contend, state, claim, suppose, advocate,
assume, point out, point to, allege, assert




personally, as for me, as far as I am concerned, for my part
2
．








许多：
a large number of, a large amount
of, a considerable number of, a host of,
dozens of, scores of, the bulk of, a majority of
大部分的，
a minority of
小部分的

3
．








如今、目前：
in contemporary society, nowadays, at present, recently, currently, in
recent decades
4
．








越来越：
increasing, growing
5
．








重要，必要，肯定主导，关键，根本
,
意义重大：
important, necessary, essential,
vital, crucial, influential, overwhelming, primary, overriding, principal
，
fundamental, elementary,
cardinal, significant, indispensable, dominant, key, leading, prominent, decisive, major, gist, crux
关键，症结所在

6
．








关注、
重视、< br>强调、
优先考虑、
把
…
放首要位臵：
highlight, pay attention to, attract…,
raise…concern, arouse…

concern, call for…concern, attach importance to, give priority to, lay
emphasis/stress on
7
．








不予重视、
忽视、
低估、
次要：
downplay, overlook, ignore, neglect, underestimate,






secondary in importance
8
．








赞成、
支持：
applaud, favor, advocate, in favor of, be side with, in agreement with, go

for, vote, proponent
支持者

9
．








反对：
oppose, protest, frown
皱眉，
object to, go against, disagree with, opponent
反对者

10
．








一致意见：
consensus, it is universally acknowledged that…, it is generally accepted

11
．








有争议的问题、
热点问题、
棘手的问题、
关注的问题：
a controversial issue, a heated
topic, a burning problem, a thorny issue, a matter of concern, a subject of fierce debate
12
．








归因于，
源自于：
ascribe to, attribute to, result from, is associated with, arise from,
derive from, stem from, originate from (in), grow form, a source of
13
．








因为，由于：
by virtue of, in light of, due to, thanks to, owing to, because of, be
responsible for
14
．








导致、
造成：
contribute to, lead to, result in, bring about, create, give rise to, trigger,
ignite, cause, generate, promote, breed, induce
15
．








往往，表趋势：
tend to, be prone to, be inclined to, have a tendency to
16
．








可能：
may, perhaps, be likely to, possibly, it is very likely that…, it is predicted
that…
预测

17
．








发生，
出现，
产生：
take place, occur, arise, bring about, create, cause, emerge, turn
out, work out
18
．








常常：
often, frequently, more often than not
19
．








偶尔：
occasionally, sometimes, once in a while, on some occasions
20
．








有
…
影响：
exert …effects on, have an effect/ impact/ influence on

21
．








不管，尽管：
no matter…, regardless of, despite, in spite of

22
．








塑造、培养：
cultivate, develop, foster, mould, shape, build
23
．








增强：
promote, strengthen, enhance, intensify, magnify, amplify
24
．








接触到：
expose…to, have/ get access to

25
．








能给，能使，能让：
give, let, make, offer, promise, bring, provide, allow, render,
ensure, equip…with, furnish…with, encourage, enable sb. to do sth.


liberate/ free/ release sb.
from..
26
．








优点、优势：
pro, merit, strength, advantage, benefit, positive
27
．








缺点、
弱势：
con, fault, flaw, weakness, downside, drawback, disadvantage, negative
28
．








如果、假设：
imagine that, provided that, suppose that, on condition that
29
．








破坏、损害、有害：
destroy, damage, spoil, ruin, undermine, endanger, jeopardize,
impair, temper, do harm to , be detrimental to, be hazardous,

30
．








阻碍，妨碍：
hinder, hamper, block, keep…from, obstacle to, barrier to,

31
．








构成潜在威胁
/
危害：
pose potential threat/ danger/ risk to
32
．








有益，有助于：
be beneficial/ instrumental/ helpful/ conducive/ favorable/ optimal,
facilitate
33
．








伴随：
along with, together with, be accompanied by
34
．








关于：
in terms of, with regards to, as to
35
．








呈现，
展现，
描述：
show, display, illustrate, exhibit, describe, depict, demonstrate,
unfold, point to the fact that…

36
．








不可否认：
there is no denying that…, it is an undeniable fact that…

37
．








毫无疑问：
it is no doubt that…, admittedly

38
．








普遍，流行，受欢迎：
prevalent, prevail, enjoy/ gain popularity
39
．








当谈到，谈及：
when it comes to…,


40
．








让我
/
我们想到：
it occurs to me/
us that…

41
．








目睹、见证：
The 20th century witnessed/ saw that…

42
．








明
显
,
突
出
的
(adj):
conspicuous/
striking
/prominent
/eminent/
noticeable/remarkable/ obvious/ apparent/ evident/ significant
43
．








很大地，
非常地
（表示程度）
：
significantly, considerably, surprisingly, greatly, highly,
hugely, largely, tremendously, enormously, overwhelmingly, remarkably, strikingly, substantially,
essentially, vastly, entirely, badly,

44
．








合理的，
可行的，
恰当的：
reasonable, rational, sensible, appropriate, proper, sound,
plausible
貌似合理的，

45
．








证明，证实：

confirm, prove, justify, verify,
46
．








反驳：
protest, refute
47
．








怀疑，质疑：
doubt, doubtful, suspect, be suspicious of, skeptic, be skeptical of
（这类词语还可参照我的阅读分类词汇）


二

Sentence and words
1.







rich
–

大部分是复合句
,
有分词结构
.
2.







high-level
–

定语从句
,
强调句
,
倒装句
,
虚拟语气

3.







词语可换 说法，即便是名词也可换说法。这样可使得文章的词语
rich
，多变化。

改写：大学旨在培养未来人才。

The university aims to cultivate talents for the future.
The university, as a school of higher education(
作插入语来解释
), aims to cultivate( build/ foster/
shape)
talents
(elites
精英
/
the
minds
思想指代有头脑的人
/
)
(who
are
furnished
with
professional skills)for the future.

改写：这种犯罪行为会危害社会
..
Such
(offense/
misconduct/
delinquency/
delinquent
behavior/criminal
behavior)
(damages/
undermines/ endangers/ is detrimental to) social community.


改写：这会严重影响学习
.

It will adversely/ severely affect our academic performance.


写出画线的同义词


政府应该采取措施来解决这个问题

The government should take measures to solve the complicated problem.

The
government
(Our
country
/
nation
/
The
department
concerned
/
The
administration
/
The
authorities) should take (adopt/ optimize) related (relevant / pertinent
相关的
/ corresponding
相应
的

/
effective
/
feasible
/
applicable/
timely)
measures
(campaign/
countermeasures
/
steps
/
actions) to solve (resolve/ address/ render/ adjust/ regulate/ ) the complicated (complex / thorny /
perplexing / vexing) problem (issue / matter).

4.
思维换说法


心理健康对于大学生来说很重要

Mental health is very important to college students.
让步加反说

(While
it
may
be
true
that
education
for knowledge
and
skills
is
the
key
of
college
education),
mental
health
education
is
(should
be/
can
be
/
deserves/
requires)
also
very
(greatly/
hugely/
significantly/
strikingly)
important//
(not
be
downplayed/
overlooked/
ignored/
underestimated/
not less important/ secondary in importance) to college students (the young people/ those who are
in pursuit of higher education).


让步，转折，加入插入语臵中

各种技术发明使我们的时间更少了。

(Once upon a time, technology, we thought, would make our lives easier), but instead of freeing us,
inventions eats further into our time.

5.
增加句子字数

(There is no denying fact that / It is an undeniable fact that / it is widely accepted that) the (only /
sole / major / primary / common) task of (university / young / our) students is to acquire (fully / as
abundant as possible) the (useful / professional / helpful / practical) knowledge and skills (that are
essential to their future career).

随着科技的发展，数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如

…

With the development of technology, digital products have been using widely. For example…

合并句子，名词替代动词，形容词或副词。

Developments/ Advancement/ Breakthroughs/ Innovations in technology (With the development
of
technology)
greatly
promote(
help/
facilitate/
contribute
to/
give
rise
to/
magnify/
amplify/
intensify)
the
use
of
digital
products
in
almost
all
areas
in
our
social
community,
with
(for
example) a wide range of products (objects/ devices/ gauges) like cell phones, digital cameras, and
teleconference facilities.

6.
以事物开头句子

互联网使我们很容易接触到全世界最新的资讯
.
The Internet enables us to have easy access to the latest information worldwide.
比较：我们可以上网获取信息。

We can use the Internet to get information.

练习：

人们可以坐车自由出行。

We can go out to travel freely.
比较：

汽车，在很大程度上，使人们可以自由出行。

The automobile, to a great extent, promises people high level of personal mobility/ free travel.




分析范文（网络资源）
。批判式取长补短，学改写

How to improve student's mental health


1
、

大学生的心理健康十分重要



2
、

因此，学校可以
......

3
、

我们自己应当
......


Students' mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.
Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of
life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains.


Obviously,
it
is
necessary
that
effective
actions
should
be
taken
to
prevent
problems.
Authorities
in
universities
play
a
critical
role
in
the
situation.
To
begin
with,
schools,
such
as
colleges
or
universities,
can
provide
chances
for
the
young
men
to
ease
their
attention.
What's
more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats.
Teaches
may
have
a
chance
to
find
them
in
advance. Besides,
specialists
in
this
field
are
to
be
required to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a
professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others. (
学
校
)


From
the
factors
mentioned
above,
we
may
safely
draw
the
conclusion
that
we
can
free
ourselves
from
mental
illness
by
taking
certain
precautions.
For
example,
if
you
have
pains
or
puzzles
in
mind,
finding
a
friend
to
express
these
is
a
good
way
to
release
pressure.
Certainly,
there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue.









































第二讲


学写开头

两三句话开头


不要落入提纲圈套，直接翻译中文

不要
with the development of…

不要

nowadays, more and more people…


明确作文话题的类别，常见的有：

智力教育类

科技类

环境类

文化传统类

社会经济类

道德权利犯罪类

心理情感类


就以上常见类别准备相应词汇。写开头时以该类别为引子下定义，再转折要讨论的问题。



随着科技的发展，数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如

…

With the development of technol
ogy, digital products have been using widely. For example…

合并句子，名词替代动词，形容词或副词。


Developments/ Advancement/ Breakthroughs/ Innovations in technology (With the development
of
technology)
greatly
promote(
help/
facilitate/
contribute
to/
give
rise
to/
magnify/
amplify/
intensify)
the
use
of
digital
products
in
almost
all
areas
in
our
social
community,
with
(for
example) a wide range of products (objects/ devices/ gauges) like cell phones, digital cameras, and
teleconference facilities.

方法：下定义
+
转折（引出话题）
+
点题
/
小总结

第一句：主谓宾结构

n
（事物
/
不用人）
+ v.+ n.
第二句：
However, …
（反说）
+
例子（ 分词句
/
定语从句
/
伴随的
with+
名词）

第三句：点题
/
小总结


大学生的心理健康十分重要


（教育话题）


Education is supposed to be associated with the teaching and learning of professional knowledge
and skills. However, mental health education should not be taken as secondary in importance for
the sound development of a young man, when we read news reports on some surprisingly extreme
cases of suicide, and even murder on campus. The young learners, while committing to study, are
faced with a fragile mental health problem.


现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日


（文化传统话题）

China
boasts
its
long
history
of
festival
culture
and
harbors
a
significantly
distinctive
customs.
Less
happily,
young
people
nowadays
tend
to
shift
their
focus
from
the
traditional
festivals
to
western
ones,
like
Christmas
and
V
alentine’s
Day
in
particular,
which
have
gained
increase
popularity
year after
year. The preservation of Chinese traditional festivals, thus, is
becoming a
national concern.

练习：目前盗版的现象比较严重

Words to help:
盗版：
piracy (n.)
盗版产品：
pirated products
知识产权：
intellectual property rights
侵犯版权：
infringe sb’s copyright; copyright infringement


Intellectual property rights is legally protected to the owners, but few people seems quite sure to
be
dedicated
to
the
idea
of
buying
copyright
products.
This
misconduct
leads
to
a
surprisingly
outbreak/
explosion/
epidemic
of
pirated
products,
ranging
from
hi-tech
devices,
such
as
cell
phone and computer software, to creative cultural products, CDs of movies and paper books and
the
like.
Copyright
infringement
thus
greatly
damages
the
order
of
market,
making
people
worried.

练习：阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要

Classic books preserve ‘a window’ into the essence of history, culture and philosophy./ preserve ‘a
platform’
for
people
to
talk with
the
great
minds
of
history,
culture
and
philosophy.
Unhappily,