chilli2018初三一模上海各区范文

2021年1月20日发(作者：contests)
2017-2018
初三一模考作文汇编

专题一：图画类

One
静安区

94. In 60-100 words, write a story based on the pictures below.
（展开合理想象，看图 写一篇
60-100
个词的有趣的短文故事，标点符号不占格）


The following words and phrases are for reference only.
（以下单词和短语仅供参考）


hours of studying



take a break



a pair of skates

【分析】本篇作文题材是漫画类作文，根据题目要求，展开想象，描述这四幅图，因此文章
体裁应为记 叙文，
需注意时间地点人物的介绍，
以及整篇文章所使用的时态应为一般过去
时。文章 重心应放在第三第四副图上，要做到详略得当。

【参考答案】





One
Sunday
afternoon,
Tom
stayed
home,
preparing
for
the
coming
exam.
After
several
hours
’

study,
he
was
tired
and
determined
to
take
a
break.
So
he
took
out
a
pair
of
skates,
enjoying going skating on country roads. Suddenly a little cat rushed out from the side scared
Tom a lot, but time was too short for Tom to stop. As a result, Tom fell down and the little cat
was hurt. Seeing this little cat, Tom hurried to send it to the hospital nearby. Luckily, the little
cat wasn
’
t hurt badly. After treatment, Tom took it home and took good care of it. They became
good friends and lived a happy life.

Two
杨浦区

VII. Writing(
作文
)(
共
20
分
)
60-120 words, write a story to go along with the given pictures.(
根据所给图片
,
合理发挥
想象< br>,
用
60-120
个词写一个故事
)
(
注意
:
短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息
,
否则不予评分。
)
The following words and expressions are for reference(
以下词语仅供参考
)
theft, handbag, bench, run away, walking stick, trip, arrest

94.
参考文章：

On a cloudy morning, a theft happened on a little boy when he was shopping with a basket. The
thieve
took
the
handbag
out
of
the
basket
quietly.
It
was
too
late
when
the
boy
reacted
to
this
behaviour because the thieve ran away as fast as he could. He just only asked for help. An old man
heard the voice and realized what happened immediately, he used his walking stick to prevent the
robber
from
escaping,
luckily
it
worked.
The
thieve
was
trapped
by
the
walking
stick
and
fell
down. The policeman came here quickly and arrested him. The old man gave back the handbag to
the boy and told the boy he could be careful when he came out alone. The boy showed his great
thanks to the brave man.

专题二：憧憬，愿望类

One
虹口区
/
松江区

VII. Writing(
作文
) (
共
20
分
)
94.
Write
at
least
60
words
on
the
topic
“I’m
looking
forward
to …
in
2018”
(
以
“2018
，我期
待
……”
为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格
) 每个人对生活都有憧憬和期待，
2018
年你的期待是什么？请说说你的理由。

（注意：短
文中不得出现任何人名、校名及
其
他相关信息，否则不予评分。
）

．
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．
．
．．．．． ．．．．．．．
参考范文

As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
the
most
thing
I
look
forward
to
is
to
enter
my
own
ideal
key
high
school.
When I am in my ideal high school, I can learn more about study and more about the society out
of class instead of just concentrating on book knowledge. If I am admitted to a boarding school, I
will also have a chance to live in the dormitory with my classmates, which will enable me to learn
to cooperate with others and learn to be more independent and more mature.
Two
奉贤区

VII. Writing (
作文
): (
共
20
分
)

Write at least 60 words on the topic “Imagine 2020”
（以
“
畅想

2020
年
”
为题，写一篇不
少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

未来已来 ，请发挥你的想象力，畅想
2020
年你的生活中会有哪些令人欣喜的变化。


(
注意：短文中不得出现任何人名。校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
)
The following is for reference only (
以下表达仅供参考
)

enjoy
be more convenient

not...any longer
范文

imagination 2020
I have imagined a lot about lives in 2020. I want to summarize my imagination in two parts.
The
first
part
is
high
speed.
In
2020,
we
will
have
quicker
transportation
means.
It’ll
only
take us a few hours to go anywhere around the world. The second part is convenience. Due to the
rapid development of artificial intelligence, most of the work can be done by computers or even
robots. We just need to give some simple instructions to finish complicated tasks.
I believe my life in 2020 will be more interesting and wonderful.



专题三：观点类

One
普陀区

at least 60 words on the topic
【以
“
我对有偿做家务的看法
”
为题
,
写一篇不少于
60
词的短文
,
标点符号不占格】

提示< br>:
一些家长为奖励
,
你怎么看这件事
?
可以了鼓励孩子参与家 务活
,
便给么结合自身的

经历阐述观点和理
t
予孩子一定的报酬作为孩子承担家务的由。


(
注意
:
短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息
,
否则不予评分。
)
参考范文

My opinion on getting pay for doing housework

It has been on hot discussion whether children should get pay for doing housework. As far as
I
am
concerned,
getting
pay
for
doing
housework
is
reasonable
and
beneficial
to
children’s
growth.

As the only child in my family, I am always encouraged to do various kinds of housework,
such as washing clothes and mopping the floor. In return, my parents give me pocket money as
rewards. Through this experience, not only do I become more diligent and hardworking, but also I
am able to afford what I want
to buy. In addition, as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains”, I
am fully aware of the value of labour and happiness in the process of doing housework.
In conclusion, I firmly support the view that it is essential for children to get pay for doing
housework, which contributes to our all-round development.

Two
宝山区


VII. Writing(
作文
)
（共
20
分）

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Are Piggy Good for Children”
（以
“
储蓄罐
对孩子有益吗？
”
为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符 号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a guide:
Do children still need piggy banks now?
What can children understand by saving money in the piggy bank?
(
注意，短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
)

参考范文：

Are piggy banks good for children?
Some people think that piggy banks are too old-fashioned for children to use, but I think they are a
great en cannot understand what saving is really all about, but by saving in piggy banks,
they can slowly understand en might not understand what 100 yuan means until they see a
lot of you have 100 yuan worth of coins, you can better understand the meaning of 100
becomes fun when you can see your money slowly build children, the piggy
bank is still best way to save money.
Three
黄浦区

VII. Writing
94.
In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic “Life is not always …”.


作为一名初三学生，你的学习生活紧张忙碌。要想取得好的 成绩，良好的心态很重要。
你是如何看待初三的学生生活，请谈谈你的体验或想法，分享自己的故事。< br>
范文：

How
time
flies!
I
have
studied
in
my
school
for
three
years.
And
I
will
graduate
from
middle school in several months. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so
many memories in three years’ life. On of them impressed me very much. I
still remember, when I
began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well
in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with
me
about
how
to
learn
English
wel
l.
Since
then,
she
has
kept
helping
me.
Little
by
little,
I’ve
become
interested
in
English
and
I’m
good
at
it.
I
think
I
am
so
lucky
to
become
one
of
her
students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it
is a
happy thing to help others.

专题四：书信类

One
青浦区

VII. Writing (
作文
): (
共
20
分
)