piercing高中英语作文：冲刺阶段寻找你的写作绝招(实战五篇)

2021年1月21日发(作者：mento)

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英语作文：冲刺阶段寻找你的写作绝招（实战五篇）


高三下学期，写作如何进行？我个人的做法就是，把课标主题和教材单元话题结合并分类，< br>然后从近四年的模考卷中挑选适合的题目进行练习。我们要做的是：


1.< br>每个话题下的材料最好多样化，譬如：新闻、说明、记叙、议论。角度越多越好，不能单
一。

2.
努力总结每个角度的写作方法，形成个人的写作风格，譬如我一般用什么 思维拓展，造句
可有什么
“
程咬金三板斧
”
。


下面我来示范一下，希望对读者有启发，但愿考生能成功应对，这是我最大的心愿。


话题一：性格与品质


这个话题下的思维发散围绕：
六
“
力
”
：

智力
（
intelligence
）
、
能力
（
a bility
）
、
动力
（
motivation
）
、
潜力（
potential
）
、体力（
strength
）
、想象力（
imagination
）
。一个人的性格和品质都无非是以上六个方面的拓展，剩下要解决的就是找到相关的表达。


示范一：热情的重要性


请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇
150
词左右的文章。


The hardworking and never-give-up attitude of Malaysian badminton star Lee Chong Wei has won
many people’s hearts.


The 36-year-
old player is already a veteran of the badminton world. Despite this, he doesn’t want
to call it a day. At the moment, nose cancer is keeping him out of the game.

At a press conference earlier this month, Lee said that he hopes to return to badminton next year
and to compete in his fifth Olympic Games held in Tokyo in 2020. “It’s going to be tough to fight
for the gold medal, but I will try my very best because it’s always my dream,” he said.
Although
Lee is one of the world’s greatest players, he has never won a badminton world championship. So
if
health
permits,
he
will
continue
to
compete
because
he
wants
an
Olympic
gold.
Besides
his
great
determination,
his
other
drive
is
his
passion
for
th
e
sport.
“One
of
the
most
important
things in life to him is badminton,” Lee’s coach Misbun Sodik told the New Straits Times.





After two months of cancer treatment that caused eating and sleeping problems, recently Lee
began a little training.

【写作内容】


1.
用约
30
个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；




2.
综合上述信息，用约
120
个单词谈 一谈
“
热情对于一个人事业成功的重要性
”
及其理由。


一、如何写概况：


列要点：


1. The hardworking and never-give-
up attitude… has won many people’s hearts.


2. nose cancer

3. compete in his fifth Olympic Games

成句：


The 36-year-old badminton player, Lee Chong Wei, is admired by many people. With his passion
for badminton, he is still determined to compete for an Olympic gold medal despite nose cancer.

技能说明：


1.
学会转换：
win one’s hearts
相当于
be admired by

2.
对主干增 添方式和让步状语在励志类文章是常见的，
一般有：
with/by
结构和
d espite
结构。


二、如何写正文：


思维风暴：


1.
克服困难
--
》

strong-minded, efforts, overcome difficulties --
》
（逆向）
otherwise, lose heart

2.
成功动力
--
》

motivation, success --
》

(
因果
) potential, ability

3.
创造环境
--
》

friendly environment --
》
（因果）
efficiency, health

成文：


Definitely,
passion
is
an
essential
factor
to
the
career we
are
devoted
to. Without
passion,
we
tend
to
easily
lose
heart
when
faced
with
challenges
or
failures.
However,
if
equipped
with
enthusiasm
about
our
pursuit,
we
will
become
more
strong- minded,
sparing
no
effort
to
overcome whatever gets in the way. In addition, our passion motivates us to try any means to
success
with
determination,
which
surely
will
help
to
explore
our
potentials
and
increase
our
abilities.
Besides,
one’s
passion
is
believed
to
be
contagious.
It
contributes
to
a
more
friendly
working environment, thus promoting our efficiency and improving our health condition.



Since being passionate paves way for our career, we should take our interest seriously when we


choose jobs.(119 wds)

闪光词汇：


definitely
肯定地


an essential factor
一个重要的因素


tend to
往往


be faced with
面临


be equipped with
具备


pursuit
追求


strong- minded
意志坚强的


spare no effort
努力


whatever gets in the way
困难


motivate sb to
激发某人做某事


explore our potentials
开发潜力


increase our abilities
提高能力


contagious
传染的


contribute to
导致


promote our efficiency
提高效率


improve our health condition
改善健康状况


pave way for
为
……
铺平道路


take … seriously
认真对待



举一反三题一：珍惜当下


请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇
150
词左右的文章。




Have
you
ever
thought
life
would
be
better
anywhere
other
than
where
you
are
right
now?
Maybe some of you
r thoughts go something like this: Life will be better once I’m out of debt. I
can’t
wait
until
I’m
retired
because
then
I
can
do
what
I
want
when
I
want.
If
only
I
lived
somewhere
warm
I
could
exercise
all
year
round
and
I
would
be
so
fit.
If
I
could
just
lose
10
pounds I know I would feel better.

Truth is some of your problems may go away once you have met all of your “if only” and “better
when’s”, but it won’t make the perfect life that fairy tales are made of. New problems will arise
and
you’ll
likely
find
yourself
wishing
for
this
“perfect”
life
to
be
different
still.
We
can
only
imagine that the grass will be greener on the other side because it’s only when we live it do we
actually see it for what it really is.

Whatever ideal you have in mind about an alternate lifestyle, location, financial situation etc ...
rest assured that each one will be met with its own unique set of problems.

So what can you do about this? Choose to be content with what you already have.

It’s great to dream big. But those d
reams should not cloud the greatness you have in front of you
right now. Consider the truth in the grass being the greenest right under your feet.

【写作内容】


1.
用约
30
个单词写出上文概要；


2.
用约
120
个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：



（
1
）结合自己的经历，谈谈你对珍惜当下这一话题的理解；



（
2
）对如何珍惜当下提出你的建议。


一、如何写概况：


列要点：


1. So what can you do about this? Choose to be content with what you already have.

2. Whatever ideal you have in mind about … its own unique set of problems.


成句：


It
is
common
for
people
to
expect
a
different
life,
which
they
believe
is
perfect.
In
fact,
they
should live their current life faithfully and cherish what they have possessed.



技能说明：


议论文的文章要学会把握其中的总结段


二、如何写正文：


思维风暴：


1.
所有的例子遵循：
困难——
成功模式，
即：
我困难
（
pressure, escape from reality, frustrations
）
、
我改变（
grasp the present
）
、我成功（
motivation
）
。


2.
建议：


充分利用时间：
make use of every minute

感恩：
grateful

成文：


The same is true of me. Faced with great pressure from exams, I once dreamed of escaping from
reality.
However,
repeated
frustrations
reminded
me
that
my
dissatisfaction
with
current
situation is the root cause of unhappiness. Later, my efforts were put in grasping the present and
letting go the past. It became a source of motivation for me to fulfill my potential.

Therefore, my suggestions are as follows. First, since happiness is not about getting all we want,
but about enjoying all we have, we should make every minute count to trade for something of
value. Additionally, be grateful for our life with all its lessons and blessings. Only when we cherish
everything and everyone we encounter today can we live our life happily.
（
124wds
）


闪光词汇：


The same is true of…
某人也是如此。


with great pressure from
来自
……
的压力


dream of
梦想


escape from reality
逃离现实


my dissatisfaction with
我对
……
的不满


the root cause of……
的根本原因


put efforts in…
努力做




let go
放手


a source of motivation
动力的来源


fulfill my potential
完成我的目标


as follows
如下


make every minute count
珍惜分分秒秒


trade for
交换；换取


something of value
有价值的东西


additionally
另外


be grateful for
对
……
感恩


blessings
祝福


encounter
遇见





举一反三题二：提高国民素质



A
netizen
wrote
on
Weibo
on
Sept
11
regarding
a
couple’s
shame
ful
behavior
of
carving
their
names on a 300-year-old vat at the Palace Museum and called for the museum to report the case
to the police.



The
post
caused
a
heated
discussion
online.
Some
criticized
the
offending
behavior,
saying,
“I
don’t
want
to
visit

the
Palace
Museum
only
to
find
relics
being
carved
by
immoral
tourists.”
Others
said
it
is
common
that
ancient
relics
in
Palace
Museum
are
being
damaged
and
laws
should be introduced.

Apart from random carvings, the Palace Museum has
met several cases of shameful behaviors
this
year.
In
March
open-air
relics
were
trampled(
踩踏
)
and
in
May
unclothed
models
were
photographed riding on ancient relics in the museum’s courtyard.


Similar
incidents
take
place
every year.
In 2013,
a visitor
named
Liang
Qiqi
cut “L
iang
Qiqi
has
come here” on a vat in the tourist attraction, causing a mass internet hunting. Worse still, in 2013,


a Chinese boy carved his name on a stone sculpture at an ancient temple in Egypt and produced
widespread reaction worldwide.



【写作内容】


1.
用约
30
个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；


2.
结合上述信息，简要分析这种行为的不良影响；


3.
从社会和 个人两方面谈谈如何提升国民素质
(
不少于两点
)
。


一、如何写概况：


列要点：


1. A netizen wrote on Weibo on Sept 11 … called for the museum to report the case to the police.


2. The post caused a heated discussion online. Some criticized…


成句：


The passage presents some news about Chinese tourists’ uncivilized actions in scenic spots. They
show
disrespect
for
and
even
do
damage
to
cultural
relics.
Such
offending
behaviors
have
triggered
（引发）
strong criticism and accusation
（谴责）
.

技能说明：

1.
记住新闻类的标准模式：
新闻
+
评价
（包含事件的后果其他 人的反馈）
。
本材料的事件就是：
tourists’ uncivilized actions in scenic spots
，结果就是：
do damage to cultural relics
，评价就是：
criticism
。


2.
由于本材料涉及到很多事件，所以不必提具体事件，泛指不文明现象即可。


二、如何写正文：


思维风暴：


谈影响要学会一分为二：


1.
对建筑物而言：破坏文物（
damage relics
）


2.
对个人和社会而言：破坏国家形象（
spoil image
）