1433考研英语作文经典范文(社会热点)

2021年1月21日发(作者：occupying)


一、低碳和环保



高分范文



As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and
comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns
off
the
television
for
him,
blaming
the
boy
for
not
having
turned
off
the
television
again②。



This
phenomenon
can
easily
be
found
anywhere
in
our
daily
life.
Many
people
are
used to doing③

everything with the television on, not actually watching it at
all.
Such
a
habit
can
cause
waste
of
much
electricity
and
energy,
and
result
in
the
emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life”
—
to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our
environment
and
realize
sustainable
development.
According
to
statistics,
if
we
can
decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce
the amount of carbon emission by 4. 71 kilogram each month
。



To
serve
as
responsible
stewards
of
the
planet
④,
we
must
promote
and
popularize
a
low
carbon
life
among
the
public
from
every
detail
in
our
daily
life.
We
must
change
the
past
practice
of
sacrificing
long-term
environmental
health
for
short-term
rapid
economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and
low
carbon
economy.

All
these
effective
measures
can
help
us
to
reach
harmony
between
development of the society and health of the nature
。



佳作妙译



如上图生动地展示，
一个小男孩 正在沙发上舒适地睡觉，
电视还开着。
这时候妈妈走过
来帮他关了电视，责怪小男孩又 忘了关电视。



这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见。
很多人习惯 于做什么事情都开着电视，
实际上并不
看。
这种习惯会导致电力和能源的浪费，
这会导致碳排放。
这偏离了流行的“低碳生活”的
理念。低碳生活是指，减少碳，尤其是二氧 化碳的排放，以保护环境，实现可持续发展。根
据统计数据，如果我们每天把开电视的时间减少一小时， 则每个月可以减少
4.
17
千克的碳
排放量。



作为对地球负责任的管理者，
我们必须在公众中推广并普及低碳的生活方式，
从日常生
活中的每个细节开始。
我们必须要改变为了获得短期的快速经济发展，
牺牲 长期的环境健康
的做法，
转向发展绿色经济、
循环经济以及低碳经济。
所有这 些有效的措施可以帮助我们实
现社会发展和自然有序发展之间的和谐。



名师点评




①
is
sleeping
soundly: 熟睡，也可以表达为
A
boy
is
fast
asleep
。“soundly
and
comfortably”这类副词的加入，使得描述更生动活泼，而不是单调的主谓宾。



② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television
on,
when
his
mother
comes
and
turns
off
the
television
for
him,
blaming
the
boy
for
not having turned off the television again
。



该句主干结构是：
A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the
television
。



这个句型的含义是：一件事 情正在发生
(
正在睡觉
)
，突然发生了另一件事
(
妈妈来关 电
视
)
。



“with the television on”：
with
引导的伴随结构，即
A boy is sleeping, while
the
television is on.
也可以写成伴随状语
A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off
the television
。



“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，这句是妈
妈关电视的伴随动作，一边关电视，一边责怪孩子忘记关电视。



图画描述这句，
写得越精彩越好，
这句是先入为主的句子，也是阅卷老师重点看的句子。



③ are used to doing: 习惯于做某事，使用短语表达，地道准确。



④ to serve as respon
sible stewards of the planet:这是
2005
年真题阅读中的原
句，的文章里面的句型，引用的标准到位。



一般而言，环保类话题，都可以用这句话，引出第三段的个人评论。



历年真题是一座巨大的宝库，我们一定要充分利用，举一反三。



二、网络的利和弊



思路拓展



所有利弊型的文章，
均可按照本范文提供的思路进行论述。例如，
城市化的利和弊。大
学扩招的利和弊等。



高分范文



Just
as
what
is
shown
in
the
picture,
a
girl
is
asking
a
question
online.
Answers
from
different
netizens
differ
so
greatly
that
the
girl
is
very
confused
about
whom
she should follow①. It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask
questions online when confronting a dilemma
。




The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. On the
one hand, the Internet has provided
us with great convenience. For example, we can
get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard
commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so
on. On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②,
it
can
be
difficult
to
tell
good
information
from
bad③.
For
example,
teenagers
and
adolescents
may
mistake
the
bad
information
online
as
good,
the
result
of
which
can
be
rather
devastating.
Some
dirty
information
on
the
net
may
exert
negative
impacts
on people
。



In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage
of
Internet
to
enhance
our
efficiency
and
save
our
time.
On
the
other
hand,
effective
steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even
wrong data online so as not to be misguided. Only in this way can the net better
serve for our life, study and work④。



佳作妙译



如图 所示，
图片中一个女孩正在网上问一个问题，
来自于网友的答案差异太大了，
以至于女孩很困惑到底该听谁的。
很明显，
人们面临困境的时候上网提问的现象已经成为一种时
尚。



这幅图所隐含的意义可以阐释如下。
一方面，< br>因特网为我们提供了很大便利。
例如，通
过百度等搜索引擎键入一些命令、
点击 几下鼠标，
我们就可以获得几乎各个领域的知识。
另
一方面，
由于因特网上有 海量的信息，
很难区分好的信息和坏的信息。
例如青少年可能会把
错误的信息误认为是 正确的，
其结果是非常具有毁灭性的。
网上的一些不健康信息也可能会
给人们带来负面 影响。



总之，一方面，充分利用因特网来提高效率，节约时间，这很重 要。另一方面，应该采
取有效的措施教育人们去排除网上不合适的甚至错误的数据，
以免被误导 。
只有这样，
网络
才能更好地为我们的生活、学习和工作服务。



名师点评



② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 这是
2004
年真题
阅读第一篇中的句型。



③

it can be difficult to tell good information from bad:
这是
2003
年真题
阅读第 一篇中的句型。可见，充分了解真题阅读，对于提高写作的帮助作用也很大。



④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work：
倒装句。




倒装句的写法
(
部分倒装
)
：



原句：
The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way
。



only
放在句首，把情态动词
can
和主语交换一下 位置就写成了倒装句。


三、醉酒驾车和安全意识、社会责任



实际上，
本文的内容和行文思路，
不仅仅适用于醉酒驾车，
还适用 于所有关于安全事故
和社会责任的图片话题。



例如，
火灾、漏油事故、施工事故、
违反交规等等一系列和安全或社会责任感相关的话
题，都可以参考 此文。



高分范文



What
a
scary
and
sensational
scene
it
is!
In
the
drawing,
the
driver,
as
drunken
as a
fiddler①, is driving fast on the road,
with
a large bottle
of beer on the top
of his car. What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming
implications for each member of the country
。



The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both
awareness of security and social responsibility. For one thing, consciousness of
safety should be one of our top priorities. Life is one-way journey: you cannot
experience
it
twice.
So
life
is
to
be
respected
and
awed②.
It
is
cruel
to
and
inhumane
to spell the end of any life,
with a careless driving under the influence (DUI)③.
For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear
social responsibility. We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom
we love and who love us. It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or
lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into
deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。



In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the
authority
to
punish
drunk
drivers
severely
such
as
suspending
their
driving
licenses
or
even
putting
them
into
jail.
Besides,
the
mass
media,
such
as
TV,
radio
and
website,
should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility
to reduce the rate of car accident
。



佳作妙译



这是一幅多么可怕的触目惊心的场景啊！
在 这幅图中，
烂醉如泥的司机正在马路上飞速
行驶，
车上还顶着一大瓶啤酒。
这 幅图所传达的意义，对我们国家的每一位成员，
都具有现
实和警醒的意义。




这幅栩栩如生的图画的深刻意义可以从安全意识和社会责任感两个角度阐释。一方 面，
安全意识应该是我首要重视的问题。
生命是一次单程旅行：
你不能经历两次生命。
所以我们
应该敬重生命、
敬畏生命。
由于醉酒驾车的疏忽而宣告任何一条生命 的结束是残忍的、
不人
道的。
另一方面，作为这个社会负责任的一员，我们每个人都应 该去承担社会责任。我们不
仅仅是为了自己活着，
我们也为那些我们所爱的和爱我们的人活着。
无论是声称司机的、
还
是受害者的生命不重要，
都是不负责任的。
因 为这会给他们的家人和亲戚带来巨大的悲痛和
沉重的生活负担。



简言之，
官方应该制定立法措施严厉地惩罚醉酒驾车的司机，
例如吊销驾照或进行监禁。立法措施势在必行。
此外，电视、收音机、
网站等大众传媒应该共同努力来提高公民的安全
意识和责任感，以降低交通事故的发生率。



名师点评



① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一个游荡者。 实际上是一个比喻，相当于汉语中
的烂醉如泥。用语非常形象生动，一个酩酊大醉的司机形象跃然纸上！



② Life is one
-way journey: you cannot experience it twice
：非常富有哲理性，
语言优美、地道。
respected and awed:
敬重和敬畏，语言简洁、有力、到位。



③ DUI: 醉酒驾车，也可以写成：
drunk driving
。



④ leaving…:动词的
ing
形式作伴随状语。句型经典。


五、节约资源



关于节约能源的话题，都可以按照这个行文思路和语言模式进行展开。



高分范文



Water
used
to
be
mistaken
to
be
an
unlimited
and
renewable
resource.
Actually,
water resource is very limited and precious. It is fortunate that now the public
is
starting
to
pay
attention①.
Just
as
is
depicted
in
the
picture,
just
like
saving
money,
the lovely and
smiling piggy
bank
is collecting
every drop of water falling
from the water tap
。



However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence
and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can
still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②. For example, water taps are
frequently
left
on
by
careless
users.
Someone
even
assumes
that
they
have
the
right
to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others.
In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③. Water resource
is indispensable④

not only in our daily life but also in the industry and

agriculture.
And
water
is
the
wealth
of
the
whole
mankind,
and
it
is
hard
to
imagine
w
hat the world would be like⑤

when there is no more water
。



Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥

this
emergency, further measures still need to be taken. On the macro level, the whole
world
should
make
a
joint
effort
to
fight
against
waste
of
water.
On
the
micro
level,
publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water
on
TV
and
other
media,
should
be
conducted.
To
store
water
means
to
store
happiness
and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring
。



佳作妙译



水资源一度被误认为是一种无限的可再生资源，实际 上，水资源是非常有限且宝贵的。
有幸的是现在公众开始关注这一问题了。
如图所示，
一只可爱的快乐小猪存钱罐积攒着水龙
头里流出的每一滴水，就像存钱一样。



然而，
水资源短缺问题仍然威胁着全人类的生存和发展。
浪费水的现象在日 常生活中仍
然随处可见。
例如，
经常有粗心大意者忘记关水龙头。
更有甚者认 为自己缴了水费就有权浪
费，
和他人无关。
事实上，
水资源不仅在生活中必不 可少，
在工农业生产中也是不可或缺的。
水资源是全人类共同的财富，很难想象当没有水的时候 世界会是什么样子。



虽然越来越多的人已经认识到了这种紧迫性，但是仍然要采取进一步的措施。
从宏观层
面上讲，全世界应该共同努力反对浪费水。从微观 层面上讲，
要进行广泛的宣传活动。
比如
在电视台播出关于如何节水的节目。
节约用水就是存储幸福，
只有节约用水才能为子孙后代
存储更好的生活。



名师点评



① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 来自于
2005
年阅读真题，原句是这样的：
Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay
attention
。



历年真题是一座巨大的宝库，广大考生一定要学会充分利用这宝贵的资源！



② 第二段开头，用了一个转折词，也就是“起承转合”中的所谓的“转”，把这篇作
文改造成了一篇社会问题型作文，也就是大家最擅长写的作文。



③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒装句，
表语提前，句子倒装。



倒装句写法：



第一步：写正常原句：
Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it
。