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2021年1月21日发(作者：呵)
志愿者工作英语作文
_
高中英语作文


志愿者工作英语作文






作文一：
Volunteer work is necessary





郭昕硕






河北省衡水市衡水中学高三
3
班






There is no doubt that volunteer work in China has been brought into focus throughout the
world. We presented so much last year, which indeed gave the world a big surprise. Our spirits,
our
merits,
everything
we
showed
during
the
grand
gathering
and
the
disaster
proved
that
volunteer work is necessary.





As far as I am concerned. The work of helping others without payment can be of great benefit
for individuals. Apart from the experience, the progress we make during the process is enough.
Time permitting, we can take more responsibility outside the school and gain the pleasure.





Everyone
builds
our
society.
With
the
economical
development,
we
are
no
longer
worry
about our essential needs in our life. Therefore, tospare more time and to give others a helping
hand can just be the right choice. Only by this means can we get to know each other better and
make contributions to our society.





Moreover, it is certain that there are still so many
developing countries all over the world.
From Ethiopia to DPRK, too many people are in badly demand of help. Our gerosity and warth
means a lot. Furthermore, organization of all kinds about volunteer work will surely accelerate the
process.





Taking the above-mentioned factors into consideration. Raising our owareness and be helpful
can definitely be so necessary. The connection between us must be permanent with our efforts of
volunteer work. Therefore volunteer work is not only a political world, but a lively work related to
you and me. So it stands to reason that volunteer work is necessary.





专家建议：






建议作者多阅读整篇的英语文章，增强自己的
“
篇章 感
”,
因为在该篇文章中存在的问题
主要是段落见缺乏紧密联系，
所以造成各 段之间的孤立感的形成，
建议作者以后写作时注意
段落间的合理过渡。






专家点评：






整体结构很好，尤其第一段开门见山的明确了文章的主题，给读者非常好的第一印 象。
唯一不足的是第三段与上文的衔接很生硬，
并且没有段落主题句，
会影响文章整体 的逻辑感。
另外，
有个别句子出现表意不明的现象，
单词拼写也存在问题，
所 以希望以后写作时注意细
节。






作文二：
Volunteer work: an unique lesson





刁文卿






辽宁省大连市大连市第十二中学高二
9
班






With the rapid development of techndogy
（
technology
）

and communication in our society,
the
sense
of
competitiveness
and
cooperation
filled
our
mind
steadily.
At
the
same
time,
the
owarness
（
awareness
）

of helping others in people’s mind also became stronger and stronger. This
situation
led to the start of a new “job”―volunteer.






We
just
found
from
the
passage
that
the
increasing
number
of
the
vdunteer
（
volunteer
）

touched
all
the
people
home
and
abroad.
And
I
argue
the
point
that
volunteer
work
plays
an
integral part in our daily life especially for the youth in China.





First and foremest
（
foremost
）
，

nowadays, parents can only have one child and he or she may
be given the best care of the other members in the family. As a consequence, the only clild
（
child
）

may become selfish and self-centered unconciously
（
unconsciously
）
。






The volunteer work, as a special lessons can help the youngster put the other people’s feeling
before theirs and ask for their opinion before taking actions.() Second volunreer
（
volunteer
）

work
is not only a training of do others a favour but a process of improving your cooperation ability as
well.





Last but not least, volunteer work is an unique lesson that we cant
（
cannot
）

get in our school.
Former leader Jiangzemin said: the main goal in education is making students more creative and
helping them reach their full potential. And in my poirt
（
point
）

view, it is volunteer work which
can help them reach their full potential but not our school lessons. This kind of pratical practise
can make us know more about what is going on in our society and in the world, for instance, the
May 12 earthquake in wenchuan and the wonderful 2008 Beijing Olympic Game and so on.





All the evidence discussed in the above awalysis the points to my conclusion that volunteer
work is an unique lesson for our teenagers as it make us know more. do more and think more. And
I
believe
that
the
accumulation
of
volunteer
will
rising
rapily
and
it
will
lead
our
country
to
a
brighter future.





专家建议：






写完作文后，
自己通读一遍，
这样会减少些不必要的拼写和语法错误，
建议多学过的词
组造句，这样表达会更丰富，也可以多 看些优秀范文。