乖戾的高中英语 读后续写真题解读+自主练习

2021年1月21日发(作者：平均)


2017
年
11
月浙江卷读后续写真题分析

Passage 12

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

A Vacation with My Mother
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusement, all because of my
mother
—
loving, sweet, yet absent- minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I
was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to
spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day
of our trip approached, David, my eight- year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of
our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived,
and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely
drove off. We bravely drove off
again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse
and traveler’s checks
Mom had forgotten.
David
and
I
were
always
a
little
nervous
when
using
gas
station
bathroom
if
Mom
was
driving while Dad
slept: “You stand outside the door and play look
out (
放哨
) while I go, and I’ll
stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey,
where
are
the
kids?”
“What?!
Oh,
Gosh…
I
thought
they
were
being
awfully
quiet.”
We
were
never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren
’t about to take any chance.

On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in
vain
for
some
time,
Mom
suddenly
got
a
great
idea:
Why
didn’t
we
find
a
house
with
a
likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our
great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections (
反对
). If a
strange
family
showed
up
on
her
front
doorstep,
Mom
would
have
been
delighted.
She
thinks
everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
续写要求：

1.

所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右；

2.

至少使用
5
个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.

续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。



Paragraph 1:
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
























































































































































































Paragraph 2:
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.






































































































































































































【思路点拨】

1.

文本细解读，确定续写结局

本文是记叙文，
讲述了作者一家人
（我，
David,
和父母）< br>的一次有趣的家庭旅行故事。
父母决定开车带“我”和弟弟
David
回家探望 各自的父母，同时欣赏沿途美景。因为母亲做
事总是漫不经心，又爱忘事，沿途出现许多有趣的故事，< br>比如落下钱包必须得重返家中，或
是担心母亲把他们弟兄俩落在加油站的洗手间等等。

续写部分是文章的结尾，
其中一段应该延续文章之前的风格，
记叙旅行途中的趣事，< br>而
另外一段应为对整个旅途的总结。

2.

段首句解读，确定续写方向

续写第一段首句写道
“第二天我们记起我们带着 的崭新帐篷”
，第二段首句写道“我们
开车穿越了好几个州，
沿途饱览了各种各样的美 丽景色”
，
由此可知第一段内容应着重描写
与帐篷相关的旅途故事，
可设想：
一家人决定在野外露营，
然而却发现健忘的妈妈又出现了
状况，
然后一家人又 多了个笑料故事。
续写第二段内容可以设计为对这次旅行的总结和感悟。

3.

划线词解读，规划续写细节

1)

分类划线词

人物
——
Dad
，
Mom
，
David
事物
——
tent
，
trip
，
camping
，
trouble
情感
——
absent- minded
，
forgetful
，
nice
2)

构思具体情节

第一段情节：决定去野外露营
→
找到合适的露营（< br>camping
）地点，爸爸（
Dad
）停车，
妈妈（
Mom
）被美丽的景色惊呆
→
搭起帐篷（
tent
）后发现健忘的（
forgetful
）妈妈忘记带
枕头了；第二段情节：看过的美景令我们着迷
→< br>领这趟旅行（
trip
）真正难忘的是那些意外
的小麻烦（
troub le
）
→
旅行真正的意义在于适应和包容。