lrcp花作文之温室花朵英语作文

2021年1月21日发(作者：练习的英文)
温室花朵英语作文


【篇一：英语作文模版】


英语作文模版


考研结束，对金翅来说是不平凡的一年。这里对英语的作 文说一说
我的感悟，可能不是最适合你的，但希望你能从中有所收获。各位
看官请上


座，且听金翅一一道来个中玄机。


在我看来英语的作文，有点 像古代的那种八股文，每一段写的东西
都很模式化的，都很固定。有的同学说了，我都不知道怎么写。写
完
as is vividly
就不知道写什么了，憋半天憋出一个
i be lieve
，后
边又没词了。相信你看完我这篇文章之后，会有
“
文思如尿崩 ，谁与
我争锋
”
的


赶脚。话糙理不糙，闲言少叙，咱们直入主题
~~


英语大作文 一共分为三种。积极类，比如文化融合，合作，点一盏
心灯等等，都可以用积极类的模板。另一种是消极 类的，比如
11
的
环境污染，温室花朵，过量捕鱼这是一类。还有一类就是中性类，< br>自信啊，


网络利与弊啊，这类的。


但是这三 种模板的三段谋篇布局是一样一样的。描述图片
+
解释图片
+
我们该怎么办。 有时候他会让你举一个人物的例子，这就更简单了，
都是提前准备好的。别着急，后面都会说到，先说说 这第一段。


第一段的话，
80%
的作文书，第一句准是
as vividly+
你看到图中的

东西，都用烂了的，咱们不用，咱们的宗旨就是与众 不同。第一句
怎么写，咱们先不说，先说第二句。第二句一般会写，这个东西对
我们的生


活产生深远的影响。


例子，
1
、正如图 片中生动形象的描画了一个文化火锅，里边有莎士
比亚、佛
bulabula~~
（后 半句用非限定性定语从句，这个待会讲）。

2
、文化对人们的生活产生了深远的影响。所以金翅给出的第一段第
2


句（一、
2
用此表示，下同）的表达方法。

multi- culture does exert such a profound effect on our life that
it revolutionizes the way of people’s living and thinking.
多元文
化的确对我们的生活产 生了深刻的影响，这种影响使我们生活和思
考的方式发生了变革。大家想一想，是不是把多元文化替换成 ，网
络、环境问题、合作、自信都很通顺呢，而且用
does
强调动词
exert
，让人眼前一亮。这样咱们的一、
2
就完事了。现在说一、
1
，
先上模板。
as is subtly revealed in the portrayal
，
there is a hot-
pot
，
which involves shakespeare and buddha.
这句话的亮点在
于非限定性定语从句，把两句话合二为一。有同学说了，这不还 是
as
系列的么？这就需要变通啊，句子是死的人是活的呀。咱们的策
略是把第一句< br>
和第二句调换一下位置，别让老师一看


就是
as
，吐都吐死了。


综上所述第一段前两句是：


一、
1
：
multi-culture does exert such a profound effect on our
life that it revolutionizes the way of p
eople’s living and thinking.
一、
2 as is subtly revealed in the portrayal
，
there is a hot-pot
，
which involves

shakespeare and buddha.
多元文化对 我们的生活产生了深刻的影
响，这种影响使我们生活和思考的方式发生了变革。正如这幅图片
所 描绘的，这里有一个火锅，它包括莎士比亚和佛。是不是感觉
“
正
如
”
用的有承上启下的作用呢？是不是很传神呢？
11
年的环境作文中，
金翅用的


此法，从最后结果来看，分数还是灰常让我满意的。


第一 段第三句就很简单了，一般一张
pp
下边会有一句话或者一个
注释，咱来个中译英就行 了，前边要加上修饰的模板。一、
3
：
and
below the cartoon
，
there is a topic which says
：
the cultural
hotpot is both delicious and nutritious.
要是没有配文字怎么办呢？
咱也有办法 。用一个感叹句搞定，
what a meaningful hotpot
！有
人说 就一个感叹句四个词，后边会不会凑不齐字数呢？前边不是说
过了么，文思如尿崩，思如泉涌，不必担心 字数。额，最好还是担
心一下，字数别写不下了。当时
11
考场上写到最后一段，结果 还剩
三行，无奈最后一段草草收尾的。


第一段的三句话，咱们就都介绍完了。


第二段一般是要介绍这个
pp
的深远意义或者产生的原因，写三条。


第二段一共五句话，第一句说这个主题很有意义，
2~4
句阐述意义
或者


解释原因，第五句一个总结搞定。模板来啦，看官注意啦
~~
二、
1
：
the thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common
phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the positive
influence of cultural blending.(
用了一个同位语从句
,
要是消极类的
就用

negative)

二、
2~
二、
4
分别写三条理由意义，可以用
first and foremost
，
what is more
，
last but not least
来连接，也可以不用，这个看个
人习惯。我不太习惯用连接词，原因有二。 一是显得很生硬，二是
这三条理由的句式本来就很复杂，再加上
first and foremost
显得句
式灰常的混


乱。这个还是看个人习惯。


又有同学会说了，这个理由和意义，我们没话 说。这也是我这个帖
子最精华的所在，就是传说中华丽丽的万能积极理由，万能消极理
由。是金 翅从备考四级，六级，考研的过程中，精选又精选的万能
句子，所谓万能理由，就是能自圆其说就行，在 四六级和考研中屡
试不爽。闲话


少叙，直接上句子。


万能积极理由
(10
条
)
：

1
、
*** can broaden our horizon ,enlarge our scope of
knowledge and eich our spiritual civi lization.
（
***
拓宽我们的视
野，扩大我们的知识面，丰富我们 的精神文明。积极类的王牌理由，
适合很多题材，网络，文化，读书，而且用到了罕有的修辞
— —
排
比。气势磅礴，大开大合，


老师眼前一亮）

2
、
*** provides us with convenience.(
最万能的理由，凡是有优
点的，


都能给我们提供方便，你就想吧，是不是？
)

3
、
*** meet such kind of need in physical and psychological
aspects.


（满足我们的身心健康，短小精悍）

4
、
of all the ingredients of success,*** seems to be the first
within our control.
（在成功的所有元素中，
***
看 似是我们最能把我
的。是个意志

品质类的话题，自信，合作都可以拿来直接用，而且相当的华丽）

5
、
*** win the appreciation of the public.
（
***
赢得了公众的共识，
有


重要的用处，后边说。）

6
、
*** is a kind of lubricant for interpersonal relationships.
（
***
是一种人际关系的催化剂。网络、多元文化，爱心，适合很多
题材。）

7
、
stimulate one’s interest and tap one’s potential.(
刺激我们的
兴趣，


激发我们的潜能
)

8
、
nothing,except***,can play a more indispensable role in the
cultivation of one’s personality.
（华丽的句式多变，凑字数的佳句
啊）

9
、
*** is an essential element of success.
（没词时救场用的）

10
、
*** is the immortal theme of harmonious development.
（没词时


救场用的）


万能消极理由
(4
条
)
：

1
、
the goal of achieving a harmonious society may fall
through under the negative influence of ***.
（超万能，所有的消
极的东西，不论是环境污染，网络问 题，温室花朵，过分捕鱼，交
通拥挤，都会引起社会的不和谐，或许仅仅是在某一小方面。考研
作文么，沾边就对，不要太计


较细节，老师也没时间细想，放心的用吧。）

2
、
*** bring great loss to both the individual and the whole
society.


（
***
对个人和社会带来损失）

3
、
*** kill a great mass of time.
（浪费大量的时间）

4
、
it is an epitome of the disharmonious relation between the
society

【篇二：刘烁阳英语作文笔记】


the past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that a
variety of promises have been arising from all walks of life .
regrettably, quite a lot of promises are sheer nonsense, just as
the hen in the given cartoon commits herself to lay eggs which
are round without any angles and corners and have shells, egg
whites and yolks.

odds and funny as they sound, such false promises can be
seen and heard everywhere in our country. perform their tasks
effectively and fairly without taking any bribes; out products of
good quality; cprovide genuine commodities and polite and
enthusiastic services. can you find anything new and
substantial other than their obligations, duties and jobs in
these so called promises? i guess your answer will be negative.
as a matter of fact, their intention to make such commitments
is nothing but to put on civilized outer clothing to please or
deceive the public.

i dare say that your society is suffering corruption and cheat
which are causing damage to society both materially and
morally. but the hen and her like should know that by
dishonest words no one can survive the intense competition
under market economy system. they should remember the old
saying, “honesty is the best policy”.

here is an interesting cartoon: with her head held high, maybe
singing, a hen stands proudly in the cartoon of the picture with
a notice in hand. it says: “firstly, i promise that the eggs i lay
are absolutely round without any square corners. secondly,
they all have shells and cores.” it’s so ridiculous that we can’t
help laughing. but after that there must be something left.

recently, many promises have come up in many walks of life,
especially the service departments. they promise you that they
will provide you with warm smile service and good products. at
first you are moved nearly to thank them. but if you think twice,
you may wonder if those should be their duties. it goes without
saying that factories should produce goods of quality,
department stores should serve customers politely, buses
should arrive on time, and so forth, because all of these are
their responsibilities. but why should they promise what are
their due jobs? one reason may be that they want to correct
their past mistakes under the planned economic system.
another is that they intend to improve their images and please
the customers.

in my opinion, trying to be better is worth welcoming, but
making empty promises is unacceptable. if factories, stores
and administrations do their jobs well rather than talk
nonsense, our society will be more prosperous.

as far as i am concerned, i believe that this phenomenon is
not a good thing, but with the reform and open door policy
being carried out, and with the development of our national
economy, these problems will be solved step by step. i am
sure my opinion is sound and well-grounded it will only be a
matter of time before the problem becomes things of the past.
解决问题的万能结尾句。

the past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that a
variety of promises have been arising from all walks of life .

the situation being so serious, it is high time that we took
effective measures to ……

it is important/ necessary/ urgent +that +(should)+do


我们必须制订（
work
out
）一些法律法规（
laws
and
regulations
）
来解决这个问题。

it is imperative that laws and regulations should be worked
out to …… it will only be a matter of time before the problem
becomes things of the past.


万能开头句

there has been a heated discussion about a picture in the
newspaper. ? cartoon, photograph, drawing magazine,
journal

? in no country other than china, it has been said, is the
problem of more serious.

the past several years have witnessed a phenomenon that a
variety

of promises have been arising from all walks of life .

the past decade a huge development the reform and open
door policy being carried out, problems at the same time, with
在过去十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的
发展 ，但同时带来了一些问题，而下面的问题是最严重的。

as is shown in the picture

? shown, depicted, drawn

? picture, cartoon, drawing, photograph


? clearly, vividly, ridiculously, interestingly…

?
开始真正描写图画
:

? ,
周围有
?
可以使用倒装

?
主语与前文一致
,
可使用非限定性定语从句或者现在分词
?
介词作
伴随结构

as is shown in the cartoon, in the darkness happily stands a
candle. it spreads brightness around
爱心灯

as is shown in the cartoon, in the darkness happily stands a
candle, spreading brightness around itself.