临场发挥坚强作文之有关坚强意志的英语作文

2021年1月21日发(作者：transcendental)
有关坚强意志的英语作文


【篇一：大学英语四级作文范文
2011.12
范文】


本次四级作文探讨的是最近的一个热点话题一
——
意志力与成功的
关系。随着社会竞争 越来越激烈，青年面对的困难也越来越多。
“
放
弃还是坚持
”
成为我 们不得不面对的一个选择。按照四级作文的要求，
考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题。有点考生不 知道应该如
何展开描述
“
什么是成功
”
，其实描述就可以举例，举身 边的例子。
“
成功
”
不是抽象的，是具体的，你可以说
“
想 成为科学家
”“
百万富
翁
”
，想成为
“
超级巨星< br>”
。甚至于《失恋
33
天》的王小仙能忘记劈
腿的前男友，这也是一种 成功。所以，描述一定要具体，否则就写
不下去了。


第二段考生可以从< br>“
坚强的意志的重要性
”
这个角度展开。例如，成
功的路上肯定会遇到 困难，而克服困难需要坚强的意志。《鸿门宴》
看了吗？刘邦从几千人马干掉项羽几十万人马，最后取得 成功，这
里面就需要坚强的意志。看着自己心爱的女人天天和别人在一起，
没有坚强的意志，刘 邦童鞋能扛住吗？不可能。这可不是一般人能
做到的，不信你试试看，
hold
不住的 。


第三点考生可以下个结论。再次强调坚强意志对于成功的必要性。
和文 章开头
“
首尾呼应
”
。


整篇作文只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文分数会不错。


【标准版】
nothing succeeds without a strong will

nothing runs smoothly in our life. to achieve things
successfully, a strong will is essential. life is like a marathon.
many people can’t get to the terminal. this is not because they
are lack of vitality but because their will of success is not
strong enough.

to take quitting smoking as an example, some regard it as a
piece of cake. they make up their minds to quit it in the
morning, but in the evening they feel that the smell of
cigarettes is tempting. their throats are sore, their mouths are
thirsty, and their hands are shaking. after the painful mental
struggle, they tell themselves that “one cigarette is enough.
just take one, and the next day i will quit it.” by doing this, they
surrender to their weak will. in the end, they have quitted
smoking “a hundred times”, but in no time they succeed.

just like quitting smoking, nothing succeeds without a strong
will. to be successful in one’s life, a strong will means that you
know where you go and you will persist on the road you
choose. undoubtedly success belongs to those who overcome
their weak will and who hang in there until the last minute.


【文章点评】

本文属于话题类作文，只看题目
“nothing succeeds without a
strong will”
考生会觉得比较抽象，难以下手。细看题目说明中给出
了提 示，要求考生结合戒烟屡次不成功的幽默引语对该话题进行分
析阐述。


总 体来说，这是一篇
“
中等偏上
”
的考生作文。本文先点题指出
“坚强
意志
”
的重要性；


第二段从反面举例阐述——
具体描写了意志不坚定者的心理活动，
阐述为什么会戒烟失败；最后从戒烟延伸到生活 中的其他事情，并
复述坚强意志的内涵，点题收尾。


总体上来看，文章思 路清晰，采用了生动的比喻和形象的心理描写，
语言流畅，用语地道。但一些重复表达（如第二段和第三 段中的
weak will
）显得单调，可用
shaky ones, weak- willed persons
，
the strong- willed
等灵活表达。在备考中，多积累不同表达，相信
会写出更生动的文章。


在论述上，叙述略显罗嗦。第二段心理描写过多，虽然流畅生动，
但却使这篇考场作 文超过了规定字数，反而成为失分点，这一点要
引以为戒。


【高分版】
nothing succeeds without a strong will

as we have read from above, quitting-smoking seems easy,
but in reality it is rarely achieved. there is something provoking
and interesting in this paradox, just because sword does not
wear the stone as dripping water does.

the ability to do something over and over again in a short time
may imply its easiness, but in a long run, a lifetime maybe,
things turn out to be quite the opposite. also, as is often the
case, one may have obtained all the tools and opportunities to
achieve something, but in the end they still fail due to the will
shortage.

so how could we avoid the dilemma? here is the prime
condition of success: will and perseverance. concentrate you
energy, thought and mind exclusively on the

business in which you are engaged, hang on in there and be
patient, for,
。
as emerson put it, no one can cheat you out of
your ultimate success but yourself.


【文章点评】


本次四级作文探 讨的话题是成功与毅力之间的关系，话题不算新，
一般考生对此都比较熟悉，所以对考生来说难度不大。 写好这篇作
文，需要抓住两点，一是紧跟题目要求，即对上述幽默性的话语做
出评论，二是在评 论的基础上要亮出自己的观点。


范文开头第一句即一针见血地对上述幽默性话语做 出总结性概括，
即戒烟看似简单实则很难，随后指出该话语本质上是一个悖论，并
且以一个“
水滴石穿
”
的俗语来指出困难所在，这句也是本文的一个
亮点，体现作 者在西方俗语方面丰富的知识储备。


第二段作者则进一步深入分析该话语，指出做 某事在短期看来很容
易，长期来看，恰恰相反，人们做事的结果也因此总是失败，原因
则在最后 一句点出：缺乏毅力。


第三段作者进一步给出了自己的观点，告诉大家如何避免陷 入这种
两难境地：首要条件即需要坚强的意志和长期的坚持。最后再以艾
默生的一句名言
“
没人能够骗你远离你最终的成功，除非你自己承认
失败
”
来总结全文，切 中主题，铿锵有力。

it is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or
achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. one
of the most typical examples is that in present-day society, a
growing number of people give up or fail to quit smoking just
because of their poor willpower during the process.

a variety of factors may account for this phenomenon as
follows. for one thing, no one can deny the fact that
persistence is the key point in accomplishing one’s task. it is
of importance for people to stick to their original aim. a great
number of dragsters would stop smoking a couple of days
after they have made their determination, but only a few of
them may succeed in the end. for another, the people who
cannot quit smoking may easily be affected by his
circumstance and surroundings. in that case, people tend to
fail to resist various temptations around them.

from what has been discussed above, we may safely come to
the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and
strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in
the future.

【篇二：英语作文】



写

作

1
．信函


主要由以下六部分组成：信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结束语、
签名。结


束语的第一个词的开头字母要大写，末尾用逗号。一般用：
yours
truly, yours

faithfully, yours sincerely
等等；上级和长者的信一般可用：
yours respectfully,

yours obediently, yours gratefully, yours appreciatively, your
obedient servant,
等


等。附：英语信函的开头与结尾高频参考用语：


开头用语：


● i feel very worried as i have not heard from you for a long
time.


好久没有你的消息了，我很着急


● your letter was duly arrived.
我如期收到了你的来信。


结尾语：


● with kind regards to you and your family.
向你以及你的家人致
意或问好


● thank you very much for your kind
favor.
非常感谢你的帮忙。


● pleasure give my compliments to john.
请向约翰表达我对他的
致意

1
）商务信函


一般可分为建立业务关系、询价信与报价信、投诉与索赔等。


①希望建立业务关系的信函

如：

april 9th, 2010

dear smith,

we are glad to know your company through the introduction of
johnson co.,

guangzhou.

we wish to buy quality tea cups, coffee cups and saucers of
different shapes. if

you can supply these items, please mail us some samples
together with your price-list.

we await your early reply.

yours faithfully,

peter

chief buyer

参考译文：


史密斯先生，


我们非常高兴通过驻广州的约翰逊公司了解到贵公司。


我们有意购买造型各异的优质茶杯、咖啡杯和咖啡托。如果贵公司
能提供上


述商品，敬请向我方邮寄一些样品以及价格单。


恭候佳音。


采购部主任


皮特

2010.4.9


对希望建立业务关系的回函


皮特先生，


非常高兴收到贵公司四月九日有关购买的来函。
0


谨遵要求奉上样品和价格单。


如欲订货，请寄电子邮件或传真为盼。


出口部主任


史密斯

2010.4.12

april 12, 2010

dear peter,

thank you for your letter of april 9th. we are very glad to
establish the business

relationship with you.

in compliance with your request, we are sending the
demanded samples as well

as the price-list.

should you wish to place an order, please email or fax us.

yours truly,

smith

chief seller


建立业务关系信函中的高频句子：

● we’ve come to know your name and address from the
commercial counselor’s office of the chinese embassy in new
york.


我们从中国驻纽约大使馆的商务参赞处得知你们的名字和地址。


● by the courtesy of mr. brown, we are given to understand
the name and address of your firm.
承蒙布朗先生的介绍，我们得
知贵公司的名称和地址。


● we are willing to enter into business relations with your firm.


我们愿意与贵公司建立业务关系。


● our mutual understanding and cooperation will cer
tainly
result in important business.
我们之间的相互了解与合作必将促成
今后重要的生意。


● we now avail ourselves of this opportunity to write to you
with a view to entering into business relations with you.


现在我们借此机会致函贵公司，希望和贵公司建立业务关系。


● your desire to establish business relations coincides with
ours.


你方想同我方建立业务关系的愿望与我方是一致的。


● we specialize in the export of leather products and would
like to trade with you in this line.


鉴于我方专营皮革产品出口业务，我方愿与贵方在这方面开展贸易。


● we have been in this line of b
usiness for more than twenty
years.


我们经营这类商品已有二十多年的历史了。


● in order to acquaint you with the products we handle, we
take pleasure in sending you by air our latest catalogue for
your reference.


为了使 贵方对我方经营的纺织品有所了解，特航寄我方最新目录
,
供
参考。

②询价信


询价信是一方对另一方的商品或服务感兴趣，希望能与其达成贸 易
的信函，因此，写信时一定要明确地将此意图表达出来。如
:

mar.8th, 2009 dear sirs,

we learn from lincoln ltd. that you are a leading exporter of
metal container in your country. we have great interest in
importing your goods.

will you please give us detailed information of cif prices,
discounts, and terms of payment.

we hope this will be a good start for a long and profitable
business relation.

yours truly,

john

chief buyer
参考译文：