粗犷-
Abstracts
Abstract 1
加强
A
演化规律研究 ,
特别是定量评价其与
B
之间的关系对
A
的勘探
具有重要意 义。
1.
Enhancing
studies
of
evolution
laws
of
A,
especially
quantitatively
evaluating
the
relationship
between
A
and
B
have
significant meanings for prospecting of A.
存在问题:主语是单数还是复数
注意动词名词化的使用
“特别是”
…
.especially/(Br.)specially/
particularly/
in particular/notably
都可
以。
2.
It
is
significant
for
exploring
to
strengthen
on
the
research
of the evolution rules o A, especially of the quantitative
evaluation between A and B.
3. The research on strengthening A evolution rule
【直接跟名
词】
, especially on quantitatively evaluating A related with
B is very significant for A exploration.
采集鄂尔多斯盆地的
A
,通过物理模拟实验模拟
A
演化,利用
C法获
得相关数据,结合
…
结果,确定
A
演化规律及其与
B
的关系。
1.
The
evolution
of
A
sampled
from
the
Ordos
Basin
was
studied[sampled
修
饰
不
清
]
by
physical
simulation.
Combining
the
relevant
data
obtained
by
Method
C
with
the
……
results, we confirmed the evolution laws of A and
the relationship between A and B.
2.
Through
collecting
A
from
Ordos
Basin,
simulating
the
evolution
rules
of
A
by
physics
simulation,
applying
Method
C
to
obtain
relevant
data
and
combining
the
results
of
……
we
can
determine
the
evolution
laws
of
A
and
the
relationship
with B. [
方法论部分和结果部分混杂,句子比较长
]
3.
First
of
all,
collecting
A
in
Ordos
Basins;
second,
simulating A evolution by physical simulation experiment;
third
obtaining
correlation
data
by
method
C;
fourth,
combing
…
results
to
determine
A
evolution
rule
and
relation
with B.
【句子不完整】
结果表明
D
先增加后减小,
E
随着模拟实验温度的增加呈现先减小后
增大。
Problem translation 1.
1.
【
需要
加
The
】
Results
show
【
indicate
也可以
】
that
responding
to
the
simulating
temperature,
D
originally
increase
followed
by
decreasing,
whereas
E
originally
decrease
followed by increasing.
问题
1
“
responding to
…”
词组 的修饰关系;
2.
先
…
后
…
需要简单
表达
first and then
2. The results indicate that D increase[
单三
] firstly
【与
first
区别】
and then decrease[
单三
], and E shows an opposite
tendency
with
the
increase
of
experimental
temperature
【
wrong
expression
】
.
3.
It
【指代什么?】
indicates
that
D changed from
increase
to
decrease, E ranged from decrease from increase
【意义重复】
with the increase of simulation
【上下文中这个可省,但冠词不
可省】
experiment temperature.
XRD分析显示
F
控制
G
。
H
的增加为
I
提供储集空间。
XRD analysis shows [demonstrates] that F [
结果一般不用
can]
control
【现在时还是过去时?】
G and increasing of H provide
【与主语数的一致性】
reservoir spaces for I
Abstract 2
对
A
的研究是当前
B
学科探索的热门。【以下翻译都是直译、啰嗦】
1.
Currently, studying on A is the focus of the exploration of
subject B.
2.
The study of A is a hot exploring area in subject B.
3.
The
research
on
A
is
a
hot
topic
in
exploration
of
B
subject.
系统地分析
A
的结构和演化特征对深入认识
C
的分布规律具有重要的
意义。
1.
Systematic analysis of the structure and evolution
characteristics of A have significant meaning for deep
understanding the distribution of C.
2.
Systematic
analysis
of
A
’
s
structure
and
evolution
rules
is
significant in deeply understanding C
’
s distribution laws.
3.
Systematically
analyze
structure
and
evolution
character
of
A is important for deeply knowing C distribution. [
错句
]
通过
D的解释、
E
的分析以及
F
的分析
[
可以看出这是研究方 法
],
研究
了
A
的结构、特征和演化历史
,
发现 了明显的
G
特点。
1. According to interpretation of D, analysis of E and F, we
studied the structure, characteristics and evolution history
【不要同义重复】
of
A
and
discovered
obvious
G
characteristi cs
【重点内容应该独立成句,
因为前面是研究内容,
后面是结果发现】
.
2. Based on the interpretation of D and [the
不能省
]analysis
of
E
and
F
,
A
’
s
structure,
and
evolution
rules
have
been
studied
and G characteristics is found.
提出了
H
的概念
,
并认为
I
和
J
是互相影响、互相叠加、互相干扰的。
这在一定程度上丰富了对
B
学科的 认识。
1.
In addition, we proposed the conception[
与
concept
的区别
]
of
H
together
with
【冠词】
viewpoint
that
I
and
J
are
interactional, inter- superposed and interferential
【
选词】
, which enrich
the understanding on
【用
of
】
subject B.
【重要内容要独立成句】
2.
Proposing
【
dangling modifier
】
the concept of D, I and J
are interacting, overlapping and interfere
【
problem in
parallelism
】
with each other which enriches the
understanding of B to some degree.
【重要内容要独立成句】
3.
其它问题摘抄
1.
下面这句存在的问题:
parallelism, dangling modifier, use
of article
“
the
”
By analyzing combinations of passage systems at different
phases and relations between oil distribution and passage
system, control factor of passage system ? hydrocarbon
accumulation are cleared.
2.
【】
Tectonic position plays an important controlling
【避
免同义重复】
role to
【介词不当】
the effective reservoir
distribution.
3. With the increase of grain-size, porosity and permeability
is becoming significantly better. [
主语与动词的数的一致性
]
Abstracts
Abstract 1
加强
A
演化规律研究,
特别是定量评价其与
B
之间的关系对
A
的勘探
具有重要意义。
1.
Enhancing
studies
of
evolution
laws
of
A,
especially
quantitatively
evaluating
the
relationship
between
A
and
B
have
significant meanings for prospecting of A.
存在问题:主语是单数还是复数
注意动词名词化的使用
“特别是”
…
.especially/(Br.)specially/
particularly/
in particular/notably
都可
以。
2.
It
is
significant
for
exploring
to
strengthen
on
the
research
of the evolution rules o A, especially of the quantitative
evaluation between A and B.
3. The research on strengthening A evolution rule
【直接跟名
词】
, especially on quantitatively evaluating A related with
B is very significant for A exploration.
采集鄂尔多斯盆地的
A
,通过物理模拟实验模拟
A
演化,利用
C法获
得相关数据,结合
…
结果,确定
A
演化规律及其与
B
的关系。
4.
The
evolution
of
A
sampled
from
the
Ordos
Basin
was
studied[sampled
修
饰
不
清
]
by
physical
simulation.
Combining
the
relevant
data
obtained
by
Method
C
with
the
……
results, we confirmed the evolution laws of A and
the relationship between A and B.
5.
Through
collecting
A
from
Ordos
Basin,
simulating
the
evolution
rules
of
A
by
physics
simulation,
applying
Method
C
to
obtain
relevant
data
and
combining
the
results
of
……
we
can
determine
the
evolution
laws
of
A
and
the
relationship
with B. [
方法论部分和结果部分混杂,句子比较长
]
6.
First
of
all,
collecting
A
in
Ordos
Basins;
second,
simulating A evolution by physical simulation experiment;
third
obtaining
correlation
data
by
method
C;
fourth,
combing
…
results
to
determine
A
evolution
rule
and
relation
with B.
【句子不完整】
结果表明
D
先增加后减小,
E
随着模拟实验温度的增加呈现先减小后
增大。
Problem translation 1.
1.
【
需要
加
The
】
Results
show
【
indicate
也可以
】
that
responding
to
the
simulating
temperature,
D
originally
increase
followed
by
decreasing,
whereas
E
originally
decrease
followed by increasing.
问题
1
“
responding to
…”
词组 的修饰关系;
2.
先
…
后
…
需要简单
表达
first and then
2. The results indicate that D increase[
单三
] firstly
【与
first
区别】
and then decrease[
单三
], and E shows an opposite
tendency
with
the
increase
of
experimental
temperature
【
wrong
expression
】
.
3.
It
【指代什么?】
indicates
that D changed from
increase
to
decrease, E ranged from decrease from increase
【意义重复】
with the increase of simulation
【上下文中这个可省,但冠词不
可省】
experiment temperature.
XRD分析显示
F
控制
G
。
H
的增加为
I
提供储集空间。
XRD analysis shows [demonstrates] that F [
结果一般不用
can]
control
【现在时还是过去时?】
G and increasing of H provide
【与主语数的一致性】
reservoir spaces for I
Abstract 2
对
A
的研究是当前
B
学科探索的热门。【以下翻译都是直译、啰嗦】
4.
Currently, studying on A is the focus of the exploration of
subject B.
5.
The study of A is a hot exploring area in subject B.
6.
The
research
on
A
is
a
hot
topic
in
exploration
of
B
subject.
系统地分析
A
的结构和演化特征对深入认识
C
的分布规律具有重要的
意义。
4.
Systematic analysis of the structure and evolution
characteristics of A have significant meaning for deep
understanding the distribution of C.
5.
Systematic
analysis
of
A
’
s
structure
and
evolution
rules
is
significant in deeply understanding C
’
s distribution laws.
6.
Systematically
analyze
structure
and
evolution
character
of
A is important for deeply knowing C distribution. [
错句
]
通过
D的解释、
E
的分析以及
F
的分析
[
可以看出这是研究方 法
],
研究
了
A
的结构、特征和演化历史
,
发现 了明显的
G
特点。
1. According to interpretation of D, analysis of E and F, we
studied the structure, characteristics and evolution history
【不要同义重复】
of
A
and
discovered
obvious
G
characteristi cs
【重点内容应该独立成句,
因为前面是研究内容,
后面是结果发现】
.
2. Based on the interpretation of D and [the
不能省
]analysis
of
E
and
F
,
A
’
s
structure,
and
evolution
rules
have
been
studied
and G characteristics is found.
提出了
H
的概念
,
并认为
I
和
J
是互相影响、互相叠加、互相干扰的。
这在一定程度上丰富了对
B
学科的 认识。
4.
In addition, we proposed the conception[
与
concept
的区别
]
of
H
together
with
【冠词】
viewpoint
that
I
and
J
are
interactional, inter- superposed and interferential
【
选词】
, which enrich
the understanding on
【用
of
】
subject B.
【重要内容要独立成句】
5.
Proposing
【
dangling modifier
】
the concept of D, I and J
are interacting, overlapping and interfere
【
problem in
parallelism
】
with each other which enriches the
understanding of B to some degree.
【重要内容要独立成句】
6.
其它问题摘抄
1.
下面这句存在的问题:
parallelism, dangling modifier, use
of article
“
the
”
By analyzing combinations of passage systems at different
phases and relations between oil distribution and passage
system, control factor of passage system ? hydrocarbon
accumulation are cleared.
2.
【】
Tectonic position plays an important controlling
【避
免同义重复】
role to
【介词不当】
the effective reservoir
distribution.
3. With the increase of grain-size, porosity and permeability
is becoming significantly better. [
主语与动词的数的一致性
]
Abstracts
Abstract 1
加强
A
演化规律研究,
特别是定量评价其与
B
之间的关系对
A
的勘探
具有重要意义。
1.
Enhancing
studies
of
evolution
laws
of
A,
especially
quantitatively
evaluating
the
relationship
between
A
and
B
have
significant meanings for prospecting of A.
存在问题:主语是单数还是复数
注意动词名词化的使用
“特别是”
…
.especially/(Br.)specially/
particularly/
in particular/notably
都可
以。
2.
It
is
significant
for
exploring
to
strengthen
on
the
research
of the evolution rules o A, especially of the quantitative
evaluation between A and B.
3. The research on strengthening A evolution rule
【直接跟名
词】
, especially on quantitatively evaluating A related with
B is very significant for A exploration.
采集鄂尔多斯盆地的
A
,通过物理模拟实验模拟
A
演化,利用
C法获
得相关数据,结合
…
结果,确定
A
演化规律及其与
B
的关系。
7.
The
evolution
of
A
sampled
from
the
Ordos
Basin
was
studied[sampled
修
饰
不
清
]
by
physical
simulation.
Combining
the
relevant
data
obtained
by
Method
C
with
the
……
results, we confirmed the evolution laws of A and
the relationship between A and B.
8.
Through
collecting
A
from
Ordos
Basin,
simulating
the
evolution
rules
of
A
by
physics
simulation,
applying
Method
C
to
obtain
relevant
data
and
combining
the
results
of
……
we
can
determine
the
evolution
laws
of
A
and
the
relationship
with B. [
方法论部分和结果部分混杂,句子比较长
]
9.
First
of
all,
collecting
A
in
Ordos
Basins;
second,
simulating A evolution by physical simulation experiment;
third
obtaining
correlation
data
by
method
C;
fourth,
combing
…
results
to
determine
A
evolution
rule
and
relation
with B.
【句子不完整】
结果表明
D
先增加后减小,
E
随着模拟实验温度的增加呈现先减小后
增大。
Problem translation 1.
1.
【
需要
加
The
】
Results
show
【
indicate
也可以
】
that
responding
to
the
simulating
temperature,
D
originally
increase
followed
by
decreasing,
whereas
E
originally
decrease
followed by increasing.
问题
1
“
responding to
…”
词组 的修饰关系;
2.
先
…
后
…
需要简单
表达
first and then
2. The results indicate that D increase[
单三
] firstly
【与
first
区别】
and then decrease[
单三
], and E shows an opposite
tendency
with
the
increase
of
experimental
temperature
【
wrong
expression
】
.
3.
It
【指代什么?】
indicates
that D changed from
increase
to
decrease, E ranged from decrease from increase
【意义重复】
with the increase of simulation
【上下文中这个可省,但冠词不
可省】
experiment temperature.
XRD分析显示
F
控制
G
。
H
的增加为
I
提供储集空间。
XRD analysis shows [demonstrates] that F [
结果一般不用
can]
control
【现在时还是过去时?】
G and increasing of H provide
【与主语数的一致性】
reservoir spaces for I
Abstract 2
对
A
的研究是当前
B
学科探索的热门。【以下翻译都是直译、啰嗦】
7.
Currently, studying on A is the focus of the exploration of
subject B.
8.
The study of A is a hot exploring area in subject B.
9.
The
research
on
A
is
a
hot
topic
in
exploration
of
B
subject.
系统地分析
A
的结构和演化特征对深入认识
C
的分布规律具有重要的
意义。
7.
Systematic analysis of the structure and evolution
characteristics of A have significant meaning for deep
understanding the distribution of C.
8.
Systematic
analysis
of
A
’
s
structure
and
evolution
rules
is
significant in deeply understanding C
’
s distribution laws.
9.
Systematically
analyze
structure
and
evolution
character
of
A is important for deeply knowing C distribution. [
错句
]
通过
D的解释、
E
的分析以及
F
的分析
[
可以看出这是研究方 法
],
研究
了
A
的结构、特征和演化历史
,
发现 了明显的
G
特点。
1. According to interpretation of D, analysis of E and F, we
studied the structure, characteristics and evolution history
【不要同义重复】
of
A
and
discovered
obvious
G
characteristi cs
【重点内容应该独立成句,
因为前面是研究内容,
后面是结果发现】
.
2. Based on the interpretation of D and [the
不能省
]analysis
of
E
and
F
,
A
’
s
structure,
and
evolution
rules
have
been
studied
and G characteristics is found.
提出了
H
的概念
,
并认为
I
和
J
是互相影响、互相叠加、互相干扰的。
这在一定程度上丰富了对
B
学科的 认识。
7.
In addition, we proposed the conception[
与
concept
的区别
]
of
H
together
with
【冠词】
viewpoint
that
I
and
J
are
interactional, inter- superposed and interferential
【
选词】
, which enrich
the understanding on
【用
of
】
subject B.
【重要内容要独立成句】
8.
Proposing
【
dangling modifier
】
the concept of D, I and J
are interacting, overlapping and interfere
【
problem in
parallelism
】
with each other which enriches the
understanding of B to some degree.
【重要内容要独立成句】
9.
其它问题摘抄
1.
下面这句存在的问题:
parallelism, dangling modifier, use
of article
“
the
”
By analyzing combinations of passage systems at different
phases and relations between oil distribution and passage
system, control factor of passage system ? hydrocarbon
accumulation are cleared.
2.
【】
Tectonic position plays an important controlling
【避
免同义重复】
role to
【介词不当】
the effective reservoir
distribution.
3. With the increase of grain-size, porosity and permeability
is becoming significantly better. [
主语与动词的数的一致性
]
Abstracts
Abstract 1
加强
A
演化规律研究,
特别是定量评价其与
B
之间的关系对
A
的勘探
具有重要意义。
1.
Enhancing
studies
of
evolution
laws
of
A,
especially
quantitatively
evaluating
the
relationship
between
A
and
B
have
significant meanings for prospecting of A.
存在问题:主语是单数还是复数
注意动词名词化的使用
“特别是”
…
.especially/(Br.)specially/
particularly/
in particular/notably
都可
以。
2.
It
is
significant
for
exploring
to
strengthen
on
the
research
of the evolution rules o A, especially of the quantitative
evaluation between A and B.
3. The research on strengthening A evolution rule
【直接跟名
词】
, especially on quantitatively evaluating A related with
B is very significant for A exploration.
采集鄂尔多斯盆地的
A
,通过物理模拟实验模拟
A
演化,利用
C法获
得相关数据,结合
…
结果,确定
A
演化规律及其与
B
的关系。
10.
T
he
evolution
of
A
sampled
from
the
Ordos
Basin
was
studied[sampled
修
饰
不
清
]
by
physical
simulation.
Combining
the
relevant
data
obtained
by
Method
C
with
the
……
results, we confirmed the evolution laws of A and
the relationship between A and B.
11.
T
hrough
collecting
A
from
Ordos
Basin,
simulating
the
evolution
rules
of
A
by
physics
simulation,
applying
Method
C
to
obtain
relevant
data
and
combining
the
results
of
……
we
can
determine
the
evolution
laws
of
A
and
the
relationship
with B. [
方法论部分和结果部分混杂,句子比较长
]
12.
F
irst
of
all,
collecting
A
in
Ordos
Basins;
second,
simulating A evolution by physical simulation experiment;
third
obtaining
correlation
data
by
method
C;
fourth,
combing
…
results
to
determine
A
evolution
rule
and
relation
with B.
【句子不完整】
结果表明
D
先增加后减小,
E
随着模拟实验温度的增加呈现先减小后
增大。
Problem translation 1.
1.
【
需要
加
The
】
Results
show
【
indicate
也可以
】
that
responding
to
the
simulating
temperature,
D
originally
increase
followed
by
decreasing,
whereas
E
originally
decrease
followed by increasing.
问题
1
“
responding to
…”
词组 的修饰关系;
2.
先
…
后
…
需要简单
表达
first and then
2. The results indicate that D increase[
单三
] firstly
【与
first
区别】
and then decrease[
单三
], and E shows an opposite
tendency
with
the
increase
of
experimental
temperature
【
wrong
expression
】
.
3.
It
【指代什么?】
indicates
that
D changed from
increase
to
decrease, E ranged from decrease from increase
【意义重复】
with the increase of simulation
【上下文中这个可省,但冠词不
可省】
experiment temperature.
XRD分析显示
F
控制
G
。
H
的增加为
I
提供储集空间。
XRD analysis shows [demonstrates] that F [
结果一般不用
can]
control
【现在时还是过去时?】
G and increasing of H provide
【与主语数的一致性】
reservoir spaces for I
Abstract 2
对
A
的研究是当前
B
学科探索的热门。【以下翻译都是直译、啰嗦】
10.
Currently,
studying
on
A
is
the
focus
of
the
exploration
of subject B.
11.
12.
The study of A is a hot exploring area in subject B.
The research on A is a hot topic in exploration of B
subject.
系统地分析
A< br>的结构和演化特征对深入认识
C
的分布规律具有重要的
意义。
atic analysis of the structure and evolution
characteristics of A have significant meaning for deep
understanding the distribution of C.
atic
analysis
of
A
’
s
structure
and
evolution
rules
is
significant in deeply understanding C
’
s distribution laws.
atically
analyze
structure
and
evolution
character
of
A is important for deeply knowing C distribution. [
错句
]
通过
D
的解释、
E
的分析以及
F
的分析
[
可以看出这是研究方法
],
研究
了
A
的结构、特征和演化历史< br>,
发现了明显的
G
特点。
1. According to interpretation of D, analysis of E and F, we
studied the structure, characteristics and evolution history
【不要同义重复】
of
A
and
discovered
obvious
G
characteristi cs
【重点内容应该独立成句,
因为前面是研究内容,
后面是结果发现】
.
2. Based on the interpretation of D and [the
不能省
]analysis
of
E
and
F
,
A
’
s
structure,
and
evolution
rules
have
been
studied
and G characteristics is found.
提出了
H
的概念
,
并认为
I
和
J
是互相影响、互相叠加、互相干扰的。
这在一定程度上丰富了对
B
学科的 认识。
10.
In addition, we proposed the conception[
与
concept
的区
别
]
of
H
together
with
【冠词】
viewpoint
that
I
and
J
are interactional, inter-superposed and interferential
【选词】
, which
enrich the understanding on
【用
of
】
subject B.
【重要内容要独立
成句】
11.
Proposing
【
dangling
modifier
】
the
concept
of
D,
I
and
J are interacting, overlapping and interfere
【
problem in
parallelism
】
with each other which enriches the
understanding of B to some degree.
【重要内容要独立成句】
12.
其它问题摘抄
1.
下面这句存在的问题:
parallelism, dangling modifier, use
of article
“
the
”
By analyzing combinations of passage systems at different
phases and relations between oil distribution and passage
system, control factor of passage system ? hydrocarbon
accumulation are cleared.
2.
【】
Tectonic position plays an important controlling
【避
免同义重复】
role to
【介词不当】
the effective reservoir
distribution.
3. With the increase of grain-size, porosity and permeability
is becoming significantly better. [
主语与动词的数的一致性
]
Abstracts
Abstract 1
加强
A
演化规律研究,
特别是定量评价其与
B
之间的关系对
A
的勘探
具有重要意义。
1.
Enhancing
studies
of
evolution
laws
of
A,
especially
quantitatively
evaluating
the
relationship
between
A
and
B
have
significant meanings for prospecting of A.
存在问题:主语是单数还是复数
注意动词名词化的使用
“特别是”
…
.especially/(Br.)specially/
particularly/
in particular/notably
都可
以。
2.
It
is
significant
for
exploring
to
strengthen
on
the
research
of the evolution rules o A, especially of the quantitative
evaluation between A and B.
3. The research on strengthening A evolution rule
【直接跟名
词】
, especially on quantitatively evaluating A related with
B is very significant for A exploration.
采集鄂尔多斯盆地的
A
,通过物理模拟实验模拟
A
演化,利用
C法获
得相关数据,结合
…
结果,确定
A
演化规律及其与
B
的关系。
13.
T
he
evolution
of
A
sampled
from
the
Ordos
Basin
was
studied[sampled
修
饰
不
清
]
by
physical
simulation.
Combining
the
relevant
data
obtained
by
Method
C
with
the
……
results, we confirmed the evolution laws of A and
the relationship between A and B.
14.
T
hrough
collecting
A
from
Ordos
Basin,
simulating
the
evolution
rules
of
A
by
physics
simulation,
applying
Method
C
to
obtain
relevant
data
and
combining
the
results
of
……
we
can
determine
the
evolution
laws
of
A
and
the
relationship
with B. [
方法论部分和结果部分混杂,句子比较长
]
15.
F
irst
of
all,
collecting
A
in
Ordos
Basins;
second,
simulating A evolution by physical simulation experiment;
third
obtaining
correlation
data
by
method
C;
fourth,
combing
…
results
to
determine
A
evolution
rule
and
relation
with B.
【句子不完整】
结果表明
D
先增加后减小,
E
随着模拟实验温度的增加呈现先减小后
增大。
Problem translation 1.
1.
【
需要
加
The
】
Results
show
【
indicate
也可以
】
that
responding
to
the
simulating
temperature,
D
originally
increase
followed
by
decreasing,
whereas
E
originally
decrease
followed by increasing.
问题
1
“
responding to
…”
词组 的修饰关系;
2.
先
…
后
…
需要简单
表达
first and then
2. The results indicate that D increase[
单三
] firstly
【与
first
区别】
and then decrease[
单三
], and E shows an opposite
tendency
with
the
increase
of
experimental
temperature
【
wrong
expression
】
.
3.
It
【指代什么?】
indicates
that D changed from
increase
to
decrease, E ranged from decrease from increase
【意义重复】
with the increase of simulation
【上下文中这个可省,但冠词不
可省】
experiment temperature.
XRD分析显示
F
控制
G
。
H
的增加为
I
提供储集空间。
XRD analysis shows [demonstrates] that F [
结果一般不用
can]
control
【现在时还是过去时?】
G and increasing of H provide
【与主语数的一致性】
reservoir spaces for I
Abstract 2
对
A
的研究是当前
B
学科探索的热门。【以下翻译都是直译、啰嗦】
13.
Currently,
studying
on
A
is
the
focus
of
the
exploration
of subject B.
14.
15.
The study of A is a hot exploring area in subject B.
The research on A is a hot topic in exploration of B
subject.
系统地分析
A< br>的结构和演化特征对深入认识
C
的分布规律具有重要的
意义。
atic analysis of the structure and evolution
characteristics of A have significant meaning for deep
understanding the distribution of C.
atic
analysis
of
A
’
s
structure
and
evolution
rules
is
significant in deeply understanding C
’
s distribution laws.
atically
analyze
structure
and
evolution
character
of
A is important for deeply knowing C distribution. [
错句
]
通过
D
的解释、
E
的分析以及
F
的分析
[
可以看出这是研究方法
],
研究
了
A
的结构、特征和演化历史< br>,
发现了明显的
G
特点。
1. According to interpretation of D, analysis of E and F, we
studied the structure, characteristics and evolution history
【不要同义重复】
of
A
and
discovered
obvious
G
characteristi cs
【重点内容应该独立成句,
因为前面是研究内容,
后面是结果发现】
.
2. Based on the interpretation of D and [the
不能省
]analysis
of
E
and
F
,
A
’
s
structure,
and
evolution
rules
have
been
studied
and G characteristics is found.
提出了
H
的概念
,
并认为
I
和
J
是互相影响、互相叠加、互相干扰的。
这在一定程度上丰富了对
B
学科的 认识。
13.
In addition, we proposed the conception[
与
concept
的区
别
]
of
H
together
with
【冠词】
viewpoint
that
I
and
J
are interactional, inter-superposed and interferential
【选词】
, which
enrich the understanding on
【用
of
】
subject B.
【重要内容要独立
成句】
14.
Proposing
【
dangling
modifier
】
the
concept
of
D,
I
and
J are interacting, overlapping and interfere
【
problem in
parallelism
】
with each other which enriches the
understanding of B to some degree.
【重要内容要独立成句】
15.
其它问题摘抄
1.
下面这句存在的问题:
parallelism, dangling modifier, use
of article
“
the
”
By analyzing combinations of passage systems at different
phases and relations between oil distribution and passage
system, control factor of passage system ? hydrocarbon
accumulation are cleared.
2.
【】
Tectonic position plays an important controlling
【避
免同义重复】
role to
【介词不当】
the effective reservoir
distribution.
3. With the increase of grain-size, porosity and permeability
is becoming significantly better. [
主语与动词的数的一致性
]
Abstracts
Abstract 1
加强
A
演化规律研究,
特别是定量评价其与
B
之间的关系对
A
的勘探
具有重要意义。
1.
Enhancing
studies
of
evolution
laws
of
A,
especially
quantitatively
evaluating
the
relationship
between
A
and
B
have
significant meanings for prospecting of A.
存在问题:主语是单数还是复数
注意动词名词化的使用
“特别是”
…
.especially/(Br.)specially/
particularly/
in particular/notably
都可
以。
2.
It
is
significant
for
exploring
to
strengthen
on
the
research
of the evolution rules o A, especially of the quantitative
evaluation between A and B.
3. The research on strengthening A evolution rule
【直接跟名
词】
, especially on quantitatively evaluating A related with
B is very significant for A exploration.
采集鄂尔多斯盆地的
A
,通过物理模拟实验模拟
A
演化,利用
C法获
得相关数据,结合
…
结果,确定
A
演化规律及其与
B
的关系。
16.
T
he
evolution
of
A
sampled
from
the
Ordos
Basin
was
studied[sampled
修
饰
不
清
]
by
physical
simulation.
Combining
the
relevant
data
obtained
by
Method
C
with
the
……
results, we confirmed the evolution laws of A and
the relationship between A and B.
17.
T
hrough
collecting
A
from
Ordos
Basin,
simulating
the
evolution
rules
of
A
by
physics
simulation,
applying
Method
C
to
obtain
relevant
data
and
combining
the
results
of
……
we
can
determine
the
evolution
laws
of
A
and
the
relationship
with B. [
方法论部分和结果部分混杂,句子比较长
]
18.
F
irst
of
all,
collecting
A
in
Ordos
Basins;
second,
simulating A evolution by physical simulation experiment;
third
obtaining
correlation
data
by
method
C;
fourth,
combing
…
results
to
determine
A
evolution
rule
and
relation
with B.
【句子不完整】
结果表明
D
先增加后减小,
E
随着模拟实验温度的增加呈现先减小后
增大。
Problem translation 1.
1.
【
需要
加
The
】
Results
show
【
indicate
也可以
】
that
responding
to
the
simulating
temperature,
D
originally
increase
followed
by
decreasing,
whereas
E
originally
decrease
followed by increasing.
问题
1
“
responding to
…”
词组 的修饰关系;
2.
先
…
后
…
需要简单
表达
first and then
2. The results indicate that D increase[
单三
] firstly
【与
first
区别】
and then decrease[
单三
], and E shows an opposite
tendency
with
the
increase
of
experimental
temperature
【
wrong
expression
】
.
3.
It
【指代什么?】
indicates
that D changed from
increase
to
decrease, E ranged from decrease from increase
【意义重复】
with the increase of simulation
【上下文中这个可省,但冠词不
可省】
experiment temperature.
XRD分析显示
F
控制
G
。
H
的增加为
I
提供储集空间。
XRD analysis shows [demonstrates] that F [
结果一般不用
can]
control
【现在时还是过去时?】
G and increasing of H provide
【与主语数的一致性】
reservoir spaces for I
Abstract 2
对
A
的研究是当前
B
学科探索的热门。【以下翻译都是直译、啰嗦】
16.
Currently,
studying
on
A
is
the
focus
of
the
exploration
of subject B.
17.
18.
The study of A is a hot exploring area in subject B.
The research on A is a hot topic in exploration of B
subject.
系统地分析
A< br>的结构和演化特征对深入认识
C
的分布规律具有重要的
意义。
atic analysis of the structure and evolution
characteristics of A have significant meaning for deep
understanding the distribution of C.
atic
analysis
of
A
’
s
structure
and
evolution
rules
is
significant in deeply understanding C
’
s distribution laws.
atically
analyze
structure
and
evolution
character
of
A is important for deeply knowing C distribution. [
错句
]
通过
D
的解释、
E
的分析以及
F
的分析
[
可以看出这是研究方法
],
研究
了
A
的结构、特征和演化历史< br>,
发现了明显的
G
特点。
1. According to interpretation of D, analysis of E and F, we
studied the structure, characteristics and evolution history
【不要同义重复】
of
A
and
discovered
obvious
G
characteristi cs
【重点内容应该独立成句,
因为前面是研究内容,
后面是结果发现】
.
2. Based on the interpretation of D and [the
不能省
]analysis
of
E
and
F
,
A
’
s
structure,
and
evolution
rules
have
been
studied
and G characteristics is found.
提出了
H
的概念
,
并认为
I
和
J
是互相影响、互相叠加、互相干扰的。
这在一定程度上丰富了对
B
学科的 认识。
16.
In addition, we proposed the conception[
与
concept
的区
别
]
of
H
together
with
【冠词】
viewpoint
that
I
and
J
are interactional, inter-superposed and interferential
【选词】
, which
enrich the understanding on
【用
of
】
subject B.
【重要内容要独立
成句】
17.
Proposing
【
dangling
modifier
】
the
concept
of
D,
I
and
J are interacting, overlapping and interfere
【
problem in
parallelism
】
with each other which enriches the
understanding of B to some degree.
【重要内容要独立成句】
18.
其它问题摘抄
1.
下面这句存在的问题:
parallelism, dangling modifier, use
of article
“
the
”
By analyzing combinations of passage systems at different
phases and relations between oil distribution and passage
system, control factor of passage system ? hydrocarbon
accumulation are cleared.
2.
【】
Tectonic position plays an important controlling
【避
免同义重复】
role to
【介词不当】
the effective reservoir
distribution.
3. With the increase of grain-size, porosity and permeability
is becoming significantly better. [
主语与动词的数的一致性
]
Abstracts
Abstract 1
加强
A
演化规律研究,
特别是定量评价其与
B
之间的关系对
A
的勘探
具有重要意义。
1.
Enhancing
studies
of
evolution
laws
of
A,
especially
quantitatively
evaluating
the
relationship
between
A
and
B
have
significant meanings for prospecting of A.
存在问题:主语是单数还是复数
注意动词名词化的使用
“特别是”
…
.especially/(Br.)specially/
particularly/
in particular/notably
都可
以。
2.
It
is
significant
for
exploring
to
strengthen
on
the
research
of the evolution rules o A, especially of the quantitative
evaluation between A and B.
3. The research on strengthening A evolution rule
【直接跟名
词】
, especially on quantitatively evaluating A related with
B is very significant for A exploration.
采集鄂尔多斯盆地的
A
,通过物理模拟实验模拟
A
演化,利用
C法获
得相关数据,结合
…
结果,确定
A
演化规律及其与
B
的关系。
19.
T
he
evolution
of
A
sampled
from
the
Ordos
Basin
was
studied[sampled
修
饰
不
清
]
by
physical
simulation.
Combining
the
relevant
data
obtained
by
Method
C
with
the
……
results, we confirmed the evolution laws of A and
the relationship between A and B.
20.
T
hrough
collecting
A
from
Ordos
Basin,
simulating
the
evolution
rules
of
A
by
physics
simulation,
applying
Method
C
to
obtain
relevant
data
and
combining
the
results
of
……
we
can
determine
the
evolution
laws
of
A
and
the
relationship
with B. [
方法论部分和结果部分混杂,句子比较长
]
21.
F
irst
of
all,
collecting
A
in
Ordos
Basins;
second,
simulating A evolution by physical simulation experiment;
third
obtaining
correlation
data
by
method
C;
fourth,
combing
…
results
to
determine
A
evolution
rule
and
relation
with B.
【句子不完整】
结果表明
D
先增加后减小,
E
随着模拟实验温度的增加呈现先减小后
增大。
Problem translation 1.
1.
【
需要
加
The
】
Results
show
【
indicate
也可以
】
that
responding
to
the
simulating
temperature,
D
originally
increase
followed
by
decreasing,
whereas
E
originally
decrease
followed by increasing.
问题
1
“
responding to
…”
词组 的修饰关系;
2.
先
…
后
…
需要简单
表达
first and then
2. The results indicate that D increase[
单三
] firstly
【与
first
区别】
and then decrease[
单三
], and E shows an opposite
tendency
with
the
increase
of
experimental
temperature
【
wrong
expression
】
.
3.
It
【指代什么?】
indicates
that
D changed from
increase
to
decrease, E ranged from decrease from increase
【意义重复】
with the increase of simulation
【上下文中这个可省,但冠词不
可省】
experiment temperature.
XRD分析显示
F
控制
G
。
H
的增加为
I
提供储集空间。
XRD analysis shows [demonstrates] that F [
结果一般不用
can]
control
【现在时还是过去时?】
G and increasing of H provide
【与主语数的一致性】
reservoir spaces for I
Abstract 2
对
A
的研究是当前
B
学科探索的热门。【以下翻译都是直译、啰嗦】
19.
Currently,
studying
on
A
is
the
focus
of
the
exploration
of subject B.
20.
21.
The study of A is a hot exploring area in subject B.
The research on A is a hot topic in exploration of B
subject.
系统地分析
A< br>的结构和演化特征对深入认识
C
的分布规律具有重要的
意义。
atic analysis of the structure and evolution
characteristics of A have significant meaning for deep
understanding the distribution of C.
atic
analysis
of
A
’
s
structure
and
evolution
rules
is
significant in deeply understanding C
’
s distribution laws.
atically
analyze
structure
and
evolution
character
of
A is important for deeply knowing C distribution. [
错句
]
通过
D
的解释、
E
的分析以及
F
的分析
[
可以看出这是研究方法
],
研究
了
A
的结构、特征和演化历史< br>,
发现了明显的
G
特点。
1. According to interpretation of D, analysis of E and F, we
studied the structure, characteristics and evolution history
【不要同义重复】
of
A
and
discovered
obvious
G
characteristi cs
【重点内容应该独立成句,
因为前面是研究内容,
后面是结果发现】
.
2. Based on the interpretation of D and [the
不能省
]analysis
of
E
and
F
,
A
’
s
structure,
and
evolution
rules
have
been
studied
and G characteristics is found.
提出了
H
的概念
,
并认为
I
和
J
是互相影响、互相叠加、互相干扰的。
这在一定程度上丰富了对
B
学科的 认识。
19.
In addition, we proposed the conception[
与
concept
的区
别
]
of
H
together
with
【冠词】
viewpoint
that
I
and
J
are interactional, inter-superposed and interferential
【选词】
, which
enrich the understanding on
【用
of
】
subject B.
【重要内容要独立
成句】
20.
Proposing
【
dangling
modifier
】
the
concept
of
D,
I
and
J are interacting, overlapping and interfere
【
problem in
parallelism
】
with each other which enriches the
understanding of B to some degree.
【重要内容要独立成句】
21.
其它问题摘抄
1.
下面这句存在的问题:
parallelism, dangling modifier, use
of article
“
the
”
By analyzing combinations of passage systems at different
phases and relations between oil distribution and passage
system, control factor of passage system ? hydrocarbon
accumulation are cleared.
2.
【】
Tectonic position plays an important controlling
【避
免同义重复】
role to
【介词不当】
the effective reservoir
distribution.
3. With the increase of grain-size, porosity and permeability
is becoming significantly better. [
主语与动词的数的一致性
]
Abstracts
Abstract 1
加强
A
演化规律研究,
特别是定量评价其与
B
之间的关系对
A
的勘探
具有重要意义。
1.
Enhancing
studies
of
evolution
laws
of
A,
especially
quantitatively
evaluating
the
relationship
between
A
and
B
have
significant meanings for prospecting of A.
存在问题:主语是单数还是复数
注意动词名词化的使用
“特别是”
…
.especially/(Br.)specially/
particularly/
in particular/notably
都可
以。
2.
It
is
significant
for
exploring
to
strengthen
on
the
research
of the evolution rules o A, especially of the quantitative
evaluation between A and B.
3. The research on strengthening A evolution rule
【直接跟名
词】
, especially on quantitatively evaluating A related with
B is very significant for A exploration.
采集鄂尔多斯盆地的
A
,通过物理模拟实验模拟
A
演化,利用
C法获
得相关数据,结合
…
结果,确定
A
演化规律及其与
B
的关系。
22.
T
he
evolution
of
A
sampled
from
the
Ordos
Basin
was
studied[sampled
修
饰
不
清
]
by
physical
simulation.
Combining
the
relevant
data
obtained
by
Method
C
with
the
……
results, we confirmed the evolution laws of A and
the relationship between A and B.
23.
T
hrough
collecting
A
from
Ordos
Basin,
simulating
the
evolution
rules
of
A
by
physics
simulation,
applying
Method
C
to
obtain
relevant
data
and
combining
the
results
of
……
we
can
determine
the
evolution
laws
of
A
and
the
relationship
with B. [
方法论部分和结果部分混杂,句子比较长
]
24.
F
irst
of
all,
collecting
A
in
Ordos
Basins;
second,
simulating A evolution by physical simulation experiment;
third
obtaining
correlation
data
by
method
C;
fourth,
combing
…
results
to
determine
A
evolution
rule
and
relation
with B.
【句子不完整】
结果表明
D
先增加后减小,
E
随着模拟实验温度的增加呈现先减小后
增大。
Problem translation 1.
1.
【
需要
加
The
】
Results
show
【
indicate
也可以
】
that
responding
to
the
simulating
temperature,
D
originally
increase
followed
by
decreasing,
whereas
E
originally
decrease
followed by increasing.
问题
1
“
responding to
…”
词组 的修饰关系;
2.
先
…
后
…
需要简单
表达
first and then
2. The results indicate that D increase[
单三
] firstly
【与
first
区别】
and then decrease[
单三
], and E shows an opposite
tendency
with
the
increase
of
experimental
temperature
【
wrong
expression
】
.
3.
It
【指代什么?】
indicates
that D changed from
increase
to
decrease, E ranged from decrease from increase
【意义重复】
with the increase of simulation
【上下文中这个可省,但冠词不
可省】
experiment temperature.
XRD分析显示
F
控制
G
。
H
的增加为
I
提供储集空间。
XRD analysis shows [demonstrates] that F [
结果一般不用
can]
control
【现在时还是过去时?】
G and increasing of H provide
【与主语数的一致性】
reservoir spaces for I
Abstract 2
对
A
的研究是当前
B
学科探索的热门。【以下翻译都是直译、啰嗦】
22.
Currently,
studying
on
A
is
the
focus
of
the
exploration
of subject B.
23.
24.
The study of A is a hot exploring area in subject B.
The research on A is a hot topic in exploration of B
subject.
系统地分析
A< br>的结构和演化特征对深入认识
C
的分布规律具有重要的
意义。
atic analysis of the structure and evolution
characteristics of A have significant meaning for deep
understanding the distribution of C.
atic
analysis
of
A
’
s
structure
and
evolution
rules
is
significant in deeply understanding C
’
s distribution laws.
atically
analyze
structure
and
evolution
character
of
A is important for deeply knowing C distribution. [
错句
]
通过
D
的解释、
E
的分析以及
F
的分析
[
可以看出这是研究方法
],
研究
了
A
的结构、特征和演化历史< br>,
发现了明显的
G
特点。
1. According to interpretation of D, analysis of E and F, we
studied the structure, characteristics and evolution history
【不要同义重复】
of
A
and
discovered
obvious
G
characteristi cs
【重点内容应该独立成句,
因为前面是研究内容,
后面是结果发现】
.
2. Based on the interpretation of D and [the
不能省
]analysis
of
E
and
F
,
A
’
s
structure,
and
evolution
rules
have
been
studied
and G characteristics is found.
提出了
H
的概念
,
并认为
I
和
J
是互相影响、互相叠加、互相干扰的。
这在一定程度上丰富了对
B
学科的 认识。
22.
In addition, we proposed the conception[
与
concept
的区
别
]
of
H
together
with
【冠词】
viewpoint
that
I
and
J
are interactional, inter-superposed and interferential
【选词】
, which
enrich the understanding on
【用
of
】
subject B.
【重要内容要独立
成句】
23.
Proposing
【
dangling
modifier
】
the
concept
of
D,
I
and
J are interacting, overlapping and interfere
【
problem in
parallelism
】
with each other which enriches the
understanding of B to some degree.
【重要内容要独立成句】
24.
其它问题摘抄
1.
下面这句存在的问题:
parallelism, dangling modifier, use
of article
“
the
”
By analyzing combinations of passage systems at different
phases and relations between oil distribution and passage
system, control factor of passage system ? hydrocarbon
accumulation are cleared.
2.
【】
Tectonic position plays an important controlling
【避
免同义重复】
role to
【介词不当】
the effective reservoir
distribution.
3. With the increase of grain-size, porosity and permeability
is becoming significantly better. [
主语与动词的数的一致性
]
Abstracts
Abstract 1
加强
A
演化规律研究,
特别是定量评价其与
B
之间的关系对
A
的勘探
具有重要意义。
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