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The Count of
Monte
Cristo

thoughts given
by sherlock
holmes and
the
duke’s son.


written in the first chapter of the book pride and
prejudice is an extraordinary sentence of which even a
person
who
has
had
only
a
brief
look
upon
the
book
will
not
fail
to
receive
a
deep
impression-it
is
a
truth
universally
acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good
fortune must be in want of a wife. in terms of sherlock
holmes,
we’d
better alter
the
sentence into
“
it
is
a
fact
universally
accepted
by
readers
throughout
the
world
that
an
excellent
book
in
possession
of
our
famous
detective
sherlock
holmes is
undoubtedly
a masterpiece
of
all
times.
”

perhaps
this
is
one
of
the
most
obvious
explanations
for
the
unrivaled
popularity
of
“
holmes
series
”
in
the
field
of
detective
stories.
overwhelmed
by
the recommendations provided by my friends, i decided to
take a look on this sherlock holmes and the duke’s
son originally published by oxford university press.


as a whole, this book is about a case concerning the
duke’s missing son. arthur, the duke’s son,
was found out in a certain morning to have disappeared,
accompanied with which was also the disappearance of the
german
teacher.
the
school
master
dr.
huxtable
then
turned
to
the
famous
detective
of
the
time
sherlock
holmes
for
help.
realizing
how
tough
and
important
the
case
is,
holmes
immediately
made
up
his
mind
to
accept
the
case
and
followed
dr. huxtable back to mackleton by train. having formed a
rough idea about the whole matter, holmes probed into the
case immediately and had a careful investigation of the
entire area shortly after the arrival, during the process
of
which
he
discovered
the
body
of
the
german
teacher
heidegger.
finally,
primarily
due
to
his
prominent
ability
as
a
detective,
he
managed
to
unravel
the
mystery
and
obtained the twelve thousand pounds promised by the duke.


having
once
started
reading
this
fiction,
i
was
completely immersed in the mysterious story presented by
the book. as the saying goes,
“
well begun, half done
”
.
at
the
beginning
of
the
story,
just
like
many
other
detective
stories,
the
author
gives
us
a
brief
description
of
the
condition
by
the
words
of
a
client.
however,
unlike
other
ones,
this
story
first
delineates
the
client’s
strange
behavior
at
length
to
indicate
the
severity
of
the
incident
in
order
to
attract
the
readers
to
continue
reading
it.
as
is
known
to
all,
vivid
depiction
is
essential
to
detective
stories
since
it
can
help
the
readers
understand
each
figure’s
characteristics
and
visualize
the
scenes,
thus
making
the
story
more
authentic
and
attractive.
therefore,
trying
to
present
a
“
real
world
”

to his readership, sir arthur conan doyle, author of the
original
“
holmes series
”
, has skillfully arranged the
plots
of
the
whole
story
from
the
perspective
of
dr.
watson,
a character not so specialized in discovering the truth
hidden behind the enigmatic happenings as holmes but so
loyal
to
sherlock
homes
as
a
friend
that
he
always
accompanies
holmes
wherever
he
goes.
in
this
way,
he
elaborately
depicted
every
scene
and
character
in
the
book,
apart
from
the
special
start,
the
ending
of
the
whole
story,
being
dramatic
but
reasonable,
is
certainly
an
outstanding
one. after all, except the author himself, who knows that
the duke’s seemingly ordinary secretary is in fact
the duke’s bastard? in addition, who knows that the
duke actually has already been acquainted with the whole
thing
before
holmes solves
this
complicated problem? yet,
surprising as it is, this ending seems so natural that it
fits
all
the
plots
of
the
story
perfectly
well.
while
enjoying
this
wonderful
story,
i
could
do
nothing
but
admire
the
wonderful
design
of
this
masterpiece
as
well
as
the
author’s
gorgeous
writing
skill.
closing
my
eyes,
i can
even
“
see
”
the story
happening just like
watching
a film. not until then did i understand why the japanese
cartoon
film
detective
conan
used
this
“
conan
”
as
the
name
of its hero.


as
far
as
i
am
concerned,
nothing
is
more
admirable
and
surprising in the hero sherlock homes than his profound
knowledge which has certainly assisted him a lot when he
was
studying
the
case.
take
the
bicycle
tyres
for
instance,
holmes actually is capable of recognizing 42 different
varieties of bicycle tyres. what’s more, according
to his other stories, holmes has studied different kinds
of newspapers, cigarettes, people’s footprints and
other special things as well. therefore, he seems to have
the
mastery
of
anything
relevant
to
the
cases
he
deals
with.
except
for
his
illimitable
knowledge,
holmes
also
specializes
in
arranging
the
facts
in
order
and
then
finding the fact leading him to a great discovery or even
the
truth
itself.
from
his
speaking
“
every
mystery
has
an
answer
”
,
we
can
readily
shape
the
impression
of
a
man
with
great
intelligence
and
inflexible
will.
in
this
case,
after
getting
rid of unrelated
facts,
sherlock
homes eventually
grasped the clue and discovered the amazing fact.
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标题：



the most common
habits from more
than 200
english
papers written by graduate chinese engineering students


原文链接如下：
（不能保证是原始出处）



时间：



xx
以后



阅读时间：



xx.9.27


摘要：



*
提出了几种最常见的中式英语习惯它们是从 超过两百份中
国学生写的英文论文中观察得来的。
文中解释了这些习惯并且在
大部分情 况下给出了从实际论文中出现的例子以及正确的用法。
我们试图去解释如何去改正和避免这些错误。一些情况下我们还
解释了为什么这些习惯会出现。
*
可以成为一个单独的科技论文
编写指南尤其是当很难寻找一个母语为英语的编辑时。



大意



section 1


a an the


冠词后面将跟随一个名词并且任何冠词与名词之间的修饰
词都用来修饰这个名词
(a
big
blue
bicycle
/
the
first
award)
。
a
和
an
是不定冠词
the
是定冠词。单数形式的不可数名词以及
指代一个可数事务的普通名词它们每次都 需要一些限定词
（
determiner
）
。



它们的使用方法如下图所示：



incorrect
figure 2 shows
the
distribution of
relative
velocity on surface of main


and splitter blades.15


correct figure 2 shows the distribution of relative
velocity on the surface of the


main and splitter blades.15


分析上面的例子
surface
是一个单数、
可数、
没有限定词的
特定的单词因此要用
the
修饰。而
blades
是一个复数、可数、
没有特殊限定词、并且特定的单词因此也要用
the
修饰。



very long sentence


太长的句子不利于读者理解应 该尽量分为多个句子。
对于一
些参数的陈列尽量使用列表或者整齐的子句。






prefacing the main idea of a sentence by stating the
purpose


location or reason first


在句子的前面陈 述目的、
位置、
原因等而不是陈述句子的主
要含义。这样减弱了句子的主旨混淆了读者 的理解。



incorrect
for
the
application
in
automobile
interiors
this paper studies the nesting


optimization problem in leather manufacturing. 5


correct this paper studies the nesting optimization
problem in leather manufacturing


for application in automobile interiors.


tendency
of
placing
phrases
which
indicate
time
at
the
beginning of


a sentence


倾向于把表示时间的短语放在句首。这样是不自然的。



incorrect
when
u
is
taken
as
the
control
parameter
the
bds for
δ
=0.0 0.001 0.005


are shown in fig. 8.


correct figure 8 shows the bds for
δ
=0.0 0.001 and
0.005 when u is taken as the


control parameter.


place the most important subject at the beginning of
the sentence for


emphasis


将最重要的主题放在句首以示重视。这样的理解是错误的。



incorrect based on the triangulation structure built
from unorganized points or a cad


model the extended stl format is described in this
section.4


correct the extended stl format is described in this
section based on the triangulation


structure
built
from
unorganized
points
or
a
cad
model.


“
which/ that
”



‘
respectively
’
and
‘
respective
’



1.
respectively
is
misplaced
in
the
sentence;
it
is
put
before the nouns to which it refers.


incorrect
equations
2
～
6
can
be
respectively
linearized as:
……
(equations given)
…
13


correct
equations
2
～
6
can
be
linearized
as:
…
…
(equations given)
…
respectively.


incorrect
the
weights
of
the
two
experts
are
respectively 0.600 and 0.400.19


correct the weights of the two experts are 0.600 and
0.400 respectively.


2. respectively is inserted to express that there is
a certain order in which something was


done. however the order is already implied elsewhere
in the sentence or does not need


to
be
expressed
because
it
does
not
add
value
to
meaning
of the sentence.


incorrect if both the core technology score and core
quality score of a bottleneck process


are
respectively
below
certain
scores
then
we
refer
to
strategy 1 otherwise if


either is respectively above a certain score then we
refer to strategy 2.


similarly if the core technology and core quality are
respectively above a


certain
score
then
we
refer
to
strategy
3
otherwise
if
either is respectively


below a certain score then we refer to strategy 4.19


correct if both the core technology score and core
quality score of a bottleneck process


are below certain scores then we refer to strategy 1
otherwise if either is


above a certain score then we refer to strategy 2.