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钟南山英语作文


【篇一：英语话题作文】


英语话题作文


话题
1
：家庭、朋友和周围的人

part 1: some tips


概述：人物介绍属于记叙文（
narration
）的写作范畴，写作时要 围
绕人物组织材料。所写短文中应包括人物
(who)
、时间
(when)< br>、地点
(where)
、主要事件
(what)
等内容。写作时，要做 到主题鲜明，内容
清楚，并注意结构的完整性。技巧点拨：

1.
仔细审题，确定主题。审题四确定：

1)
确定类型：人物介绍

2)
确定体裁
:
记叙文

3)
确定主体时态
:
一般现在时

4)
确定主体人称
:
第三人称

2
．合理安排短文的结构层次，组织好所提示内容表达的先后顺序。

3
．句子时态要在上下文中有相关性、连续性，要与表达内容一致。

4
．审题后要先列出简明扼要的提纲，其次写出草稿，经过修改之后，
再正式成文。


一、人物介绍的写作步骤：

1. age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth place

2. family background

3. education background

4. big events in his or her life (in order of time)

5. evaluation


二、人物介绍写作常用的词组及句子：

1. age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth place

1
）
age:

they might have needs and problems of their own.

2
）
birthday and birth place:


…was/ were born in …on…

eg. she was born in poland on nov.7,1867.

born in 1985, he is now an 24-year-old student.

3
）
sex marriage

1

eg. he is a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter.

he is 35, male and unmarried.

4
）
appearance

eg: she is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth
and long black hair.

he is thin, tall and wearing a pair of thick glasses.

5
）
height:

eg. he is 1.76 meters tall.

he is 176 centimeters tall.

he is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.

6
）
health:

eg. well looked after, the children look healthy.


he is not so strong, but (he’s) in good health.

2. family background


…was/ were born in/into a poor/ rich family


his/her family was so poor that…

his/ her father was very strict
with him…

the son of a poor family

when he was a small boy/ young

as a child/ as a boy of 15

during his/ her childhood


spend his childhood in…

live a happy/ hard life

eg. abraham lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in
kentucky on february 12,1809. born into a poor clerk’s family,
charles dickens had little schooling.

3. education background


be admitted to …college


graduate from…department of …university


when at college, he majored in…


receive a doctor’s degree

go abroad for further studies

eg. he started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.

he went to study in beijing university in 1984 and 4 years later
he graduated (from that university).

we learned many courses, such as english,maths and so on.


he got his bachelor’s (master’s, doctor’s) degree in
mathematics in april 1998...


4. big events in one’s life


be interested in… /be fond of…


work hard at…


serve as…

devote his lifetime/himse
lf to…


concentrate himself to…


do research about/ into…


make up one’s mind to do sth.

do sth with great determination and perseverance

2

be strict in sth.


have a …way of doing sth


try one’s best to do sth.

encourage sb to do

fight for, give up one
’s life for sb/sth


win a prize/the first prize in …competition


receive/obtain/win the nobel prize for…


be good at… do well in…


be crazy about…enjoy …


make rapid progress in …


set a new world record of …

equal the world record

win(won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal


be selected to/ become a member of…

study / train hard

go through hardship

overcome many difficulties

have a gift/ talent for language, etc

eg. his favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis.

in his spare time, he likes reading and enjoying traveling.


he’s good at spoken english and even better at using
computers.

5. evaluation


one of the best/ most important …


set a good example for…

a model teacher/worker

be respected by everyone


speak/ think highly of…

be honored as (an excellent athlete)

his hard work brought him great success

he is the pride of china.

his heroic story spread all over the city


make great contributions to…

consistency/perseverance is the key to success.

be famous/known as be regarded as


become a world champion at …championships

remember sb forever

a new chapter of history has been turned

lei feng has been praised for his communist spirit.

an inspiring leader

6.
描写人物外貌和性格特征

good-lookingfunny- lookingstrong-looking ugly-looking
ordinary- looking white-haired blue-eyed warm- heartedkind-
heartedabsent-mindedbad-tempered near-sightedfar-sighted a
strong will tall shortbeautiful prettylovely naughtysmartwise
cleverbrightdiligentintelligent hard workinglazyhealthy

3

humorous charming attractivetalkative
confidentindependentpatient

be in conditionbe out of condition finewell


三、语法、句法高分
tips

1.a.
概况：尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺


译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一

b.
外貌
,
性格：巧用
with
做定语


译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发

c.
教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词
,
使文章精炼

1
）
for further studies.

2
）
degree.

d.
生平
:
尽量用倒装
,
非限定定语从句等，润色文章

1
）
2
）
e
．评估：注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组

1
）
2
）四、样本写作


姓名：刘翔出生年月：
1983
年
7
月
13
日


性别；男

出生地：上海

身高：
1.89
米


教练：孙海平

偶像：
jordon
专项：
110
栏

成就：
2006
年
7
月
12
日在瑞士洛桑以
1 2
秒
88
破世界记录


爱好：听音乐，打游戏，看书


自评：为人诚恳，随和，自信


瑞士洛桑
: lausanne, switzerland


写作指导：

1.
组织材料，写出句子

1)
为人诚恳
,
随和
,
自信乐观的男孩刘翔
,
出 生在
1983
年
7
月
13
日
上海
.

liuxiang, an honest, easy-going and confident man, was born
on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai.

2)
他的偶像是
jordon,
爱好是听音乐
,
看打游戏及看书
.

he has an idol of jordon and likes listening to music, playing
games and reading books.

3)
拥有身高
1.89
米的他擅长
110
米栏
.

with the height of 1.89 metres, he is good at 110 metres
hurdles .

4)
在他的教练孙海平的帮助下他取得了很多傲人的成绩
.

under the training of sun haiping, he has gained many
wonderful achievements.

5)
他２００６年７月１２日他在瑞士洛桑以１２秒８８破世界记录．


he broke the record by 12’88 on july 12th, 2006 in lausanne,
switzerland.

2.
扩句成文，构成篇章


①
liu xiang, an honest, easy-going and confident man, was
born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai.

4

②
he has an idol of jordon and likes listening to music, playing
games and reading books.
③
with the height of 1.89 meters, he
is good at 110 meters hurdles .
④
under the training of his
coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements.
⑤
he has
gained many wonderful achievements and one of
achievements is that he broke the record by 12’88 on july 12th,
2006 in lausanne, switzerland.

3.
检查润色
3)
是否用
5
个句子

1)
时态是否正确
4)
是否漏掉必要信息

2)
人称是否一致
5)
是否语句连贯

liu xiang,, an honest, easy- going confident and optimistic
man, was born on july 13th, 1983 in shanghai. he has an idol of
jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading
books. with the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters
hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has gained
many wonderful achievements. for example, he broke the asian
record with the time 13’12 in 2002, and two years later, he won
the championship again in 12’91 in athen which ties the world
record. most excitingly, he broke t
he record by 12’88 on july
12th, 2006 in lausanne, switzerland.

part 2: have a try


一

翻译下列句子

1.
姚老师是我们的英语老师，他今年
41
岁，瘦高个，带深度眼镜。

2.
黄老师是我们的英语老师，她
1970
年来到我们学校，已经当了
30
多年的英语老师。

3.
达
.
芬奇
(leonardo
da
vinci)
是
16
世纪意大利著名画家，科学家。

4.
他是一位天才，

把科学知识和艺术想象结合起来。

5.
《蒙娜丽莎》是一幅享有盛誉的肖像画杰作。它是达
.
芬奇的代表
作。

6.
帕瓦罗蒂
(pavarotti)
被誉为
“
高音
c(the high c’s)
之王
”
，为古典
音乐和歌剧的普及做出了杰出贡献。

7.
赵普从小家境贫寒，初中毕业后入伍。

8.
他
24
岁下岗，开一家小服装店谋生。

9.
安南（
annan
）先生出生于
1938
年
4
月
8
日，加纳（
ghana
）。
他在加纳、美国和瑞士上顶尖的大学，获得经济学和管理 学的硕士
学位。

10.
安南（
annan
）先生为 建立一个更有组织、更和平的世界所做
出的工作得到大家的承认。

5

【篇二：英语话题作文】



英语话题作文


话题
1
：家庭、朋友和周围的人

part 1: some tips


概述：人物介绍属于记叙文（
narration
）的 写作范畴，写作时要围
绕人物组织材料。所写短文中应包括人物
(who)
、时间(when)
、地点
(where)
、主要事件
(what)
等 内容。写作时，要做到主题鲜明，内容
清楚，并注意结构的完整性。技巧点拨：

1.
仔细审题，确定主题。审题四确定：

1)
确定类型：人物介绍

2)
确定体裁
:
记叙文

3)
确定主体时态
:
一般现在时

4)
确定主体人称
:
第三人称

2
．合理安排短文的结构层次，组织好所提示内容表达的先后顺序。

3
．句子时态要在上下文中有相关性、连续性，要与表达内容一致。

4
．审题后要先列出简明扼要的提纲，其次写出草稿，经过修改之后，
再正式成文。


一、人物介绍的写作步骤：

1. age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth place

2. family background

3. education background

4. big events in his or her life (in order of time)

5. evaluation


二、人物介绍写作常用的词组及句子：

1. age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth place

1
）
age:

they might have needs and problems of their own.

2
）
birthday and birth place:


…was/ were born in …on…

eg. she was born in poland on nov.7,1867.

born in 1985, he is now an 24-year-old student.

3
）
sex marriage

1

eg. he is a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter.

he is 35, male and unmarried.

4
）
appearance

eg: she is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth
and long black hair.

he is thin, tall and wearing a pair of thick glasses.

5
）
height:

eg. he is 1.76 meters tall.

he is 176 centimeters tall.

he is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.

6
）
health:

eg. well looked after, the children look healthy.


he is not so strong, but (he’s) in good health.

2. family background


…was/ were born in/into a poor/ rich family


his/her family was so poor that…

his/ her father was very strict
with him…

the son of a poor family

when he was a small boy/ young

as a child/ as a boy of 15

during his/ her childhood


spend his childhood in…

live a happy/ hard life

eg. abraham lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in
kentucky on february 1
2,1809. born into a poor clerk’s family,
charles dickens had little schooling.

3. education background


be admitted to …college


graduate from…department of …university


when at college, he majored in…


receive a doctor’s degree

go abroad for further studies

eg. he started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.

he went to study in beijing university in 1984 and 4 years later
he graduated (from that university).

we learned many courses, such as english,maths and so on.


he got his bachelor’s (master’s, doctor’s) degree in
mathematics in april 1998...


4. big events in one’s life


be interested in… /be fond of…


work hard at…


serve as…


devote his lifetime/himself to…


concentrate himself to…


do research about/ into…


make up one’s mind to do sth.

do sth with great determination and perseverance

2

be strict in sth.


have a …way of doing sth


try one’s best to do sth.

encourage sb to do


fight for, give up one’s life for sb/sth


win a prize/the first prize in …compet
ition


receive/obtain/win the nobel prize for…


be good at… do well in…


be crazy about…enjoy …


make rapid progress in …


set a new world record of …

equal the world record